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Chapter 4
Gordo sat in his seat on the plane to L.A.. Earlier that day he found out the address of the new paper the story was originally sent to and when he arrived he would go there and try to see if he could find out who the women who sent the story in was or if he could get her address. But for now he might as well read the rest of the story.
(I'm not starting where he left off reading, I writing the story from begging to end)
"MY STORY
What is it like to have known you true love your whole life? To be able to grow up with them and be kids together. Some might think it paradise, but I think otherwise. For I have know my true love my whole life, some things I wouldn't change for the world others, I wish I could. Let me tell you my story about my love for on and how a mistake I made cost me to lose him and change my life forever.
Let me start from the beginning; when were just kids, my love and I. I remember playing at the park; playing on the swings feeling, the wind blowing our hair and the sun bring warmth to our faces. Chasing each other all over every square inch of the park. I remember one time while playing I tripped over a tree root and fell to the ground. He ran to me and helped me up. And as I started to cry he stared kicking the tree for hurting me. I laughed and he gave me a big hug. I kissed his cheek and we vowed then to best friends forever. But as we got older things got more complicated than playing at the park. We started to grow up. We faced many problems but we always managed to get though them; together. He was always there for me. When I was sad, worried, nervous, he was always there to tell me everything would be okay that he'd always be there for me to talk to or just there for a shoulder to lean on. He was the best friend and sweetest guy ever and back then that's all I thought about it. Back then I had been blind to my feelings for him yet they were still there. Back then it wasn't complicated and we just concentrated on having as much fun as possible; and we did. All of my best memories are with him. Him. He was so; amazing. Like no person I have ever known. He never followed the crowd and he was constantly telling me not pretend to be someone I wasn't just so others would like me. He said he likes me, for me. He had this way of always bringing a smile to my face even if I was having the worst day possible he would make me smile and make me forget about everything else. He was so full of knowledge, wit, charm, he was so wonderful in everyway and of course he was cute as hell. And I started feeling like this every time I was around him. As high school started my feelings for him really started to show. I started finding his name doodled all over my notebooks, I got nervous around him, blushing, tugging at my hair, smiling intensely at him, I found myself staring at him gazing into his eyes. When I realized there wasn't a single moment where I wasn't thinking about him I was scared. Scared of being in love with my best friend. I decided that I had to get over him so I hid my feelings behind boyfriends and silly crushes. I never got over him though but I couldn't let out the truth and tell him how I really felt. I didn't want to take the chance and risk us breaking up and getting hurt. And soon that mistake cost me. You see there are many moments in our life and each one of them comes with choices some not so important others just the opposite. There were many moments with us to. Many moment where I could have listened to my heart and something could have triggered and might have lead to a relationship with the two of us but I was always to scared and nothing happened. But we all are faced with that one moment too. That one moment where it is now or never a moment that might never return. That moment came for us. We could have been together and lived happily ever after just liked I'd always dreamed. But I lost that moment. He told me that HE loved ME. Really loved me. I told him I loved him too. I loved him, he loved me everything was perfect; but I was still scared. I didn't want to take the chance and risk something going wrong and ending up with me never speaking to him again. So even after I told him I loved him I also told him no. I told him that I couldn't let this happen that we could never be more than friends. I hoped that we might still have a chance at friendship. I knew I hurt him and I hated to see him hurt but after that we couldn't be friends it was too much after all had happed. We got in an argument and things went all wrong. And somehow I knew it was my fault we stopped talking and stopped being friends the thing I had feared from the beginning. We were both stubborn and just said we didn't care if we saw the other ever again. I don't know about him but I lied. I haven't seen him in almost 8 years. I lived in regret and pain, so many moments I wish I could change that one moment that changed my life. I lost my one chance at true love because I didn't listen to my heart. Now I've started taking chances again and it's helped me though life and I don't regret any more knowing that my heart is right. There are times when you should listen to your heart and times you should let you head do the thinking. You will always know which one's right but will you listen to the right one? Sometimes I wonder about that moment and think what if? What if I said yes? What if I thought............why not?
Signed,
Anonymous"
"Wow" thought David as finished reading "Talk about Day ja vu" (AN:I have no idea how to spell that I don't know French but you know what I mean.....right?) He shook his head "Lizzie why can't you just get out of my head?"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~So how'd ya like it?? huh? PLEASE tell me I tool me forever to write this chapter I think I wrote it like 50 other times each one different ahh!! It was so frustrating! I wasn't sure what I wanted to include and what I didn't. Anyway I finally got it right so please r/r that would be SOO great of you!! 'nyways I was kinda nervous about this chapter to please tell me what you thought of it and review tell me your ideas in what I need to improve and what you like about it, I know it's pointless L/Gness but hey you know you love it! Well that's all for now until later!
Lola~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~Hey I'm back with an update hope you like it, it's longer than my usual so anyway here it is
Lola~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 4
Gordo sat in his seat on the plane to L.A.. Earlier that day he found out the address of the new paper the story was originally sent to and when he arrived he would go there and try to see if he could find out who the women who sent the story in was or if he could get her address. But for now he might as well read the rest of the story.
(I'm not starting where he left off reading, I writing the story from begging to end)
"MY STORY
What is it like to have known you true love your whole life? To be able to grow up with them and be kids together. Some might think it paradise, but I think otherwise. For I have know my true love my whole life, some things I wouldn't change for the world others, I wish I could. Let me tell you my story about my love for on and how a mistake I made cost me to lose him and change my life forever.
Let me start from the beginning; when were just kids, my love and I. I remember playing at the park; playing on the swings feeling, the wind blowing our hair and the sun bring warmth to our faces. Chasing each other all over every square inch of the park. I remember one time while playing I tripped over a tree root and fell to the ground. He ran to me and helped me up. And as I started to cry he stared kicking the tree for hurting me. I laughed and he gave me a big hug. I kissed his cheek and we vowed then to best friends forever. But as we got older things got more complicated than playing at the park. We started to grow up. We faced many problems but we always managed to get though them; together. He was always there for me. When I was sad, worried, nervous, he was always there to tell me everything would be okay that he'd always be there for me to talk to or just there for a shoulder to lean on. He was the best friend and sweetest guy ever and back then that's all I thought about it. Back then I had been blind to my feelings for him yet they were still there. Back then it wasn't complicated and we just concentrated on having as much fun as possible; and we did. All of my best memories are with him. Him. He was so; amazing. Like no person I have ever known. He never followed the crowd and he was constantly telling me not pretend to be someone I wasn't just so others would like me. He said he likes me, for me. He had this way of always bringing a smile to my face even if I was having the worst day possible he would make me smile and make me forget about everything else. He was so full of knowledge, wit, charm, he was so wonderful in everyway and of course he was cute as hell. And I started feeling like this every time I was around him. As high school started my feelings for him really started to show. I started finding his name doodled all over my notebooks, I got nervous around him, blushing, tugging at my hair, smiling intensely at him, I found myself staring at him gazing into his eyes. When I realized there wasn't a single moment where I wasn't thinking about him I was scared. Scared of being in love with my best friend. I decided that I had to get over him so I hid my feelings behind boyfriends and silly crushes. I never got over him though but I couldn't let out the truth and tell him how I really felt. I didn't want to take the chance and risk us breaking up and getting hurt. And soon that mistake cost me. You see there are many moments in our life and each one of them comes with choices some not so important others just the opposite. There were many moments with us to. Many moment where I could have listened to my heart and something could have triggered and might have lead to a relationship with the two of us but I was always to scared and nothing happened. But we all are faced with that one moment too. That one moment where it is now or never a moment that might never return. That moment came for us. We could have been together and lived happily ever after just liked I'd always dreamed. But I lost that moment. He told me that HE loved ME. Really loved me. I told him I loved him too. I loved him, he loved me everything was perfect; but I was still scared. I didn't want to take the chance and risk something going wrong and ending up with me never speaking to him again. So even after I told him I loved him I also told him no. I told him that I couldn't let this happen that we could never be more than friends. I hoped that we might still have a chance at friendship. I knew I hurt him and I hated to see him hurt but after that we couldn't be friends it was too much after all had happed. We got in an argument and things went all wrong. And somehow I knew it was my fault we stopped talking and stopped being friends the thing I had feared from the beginning. We were both stubborn and just said we didn't care if we saw the other ever again. I don't know about him but I lied. I haven't seen him in almost 8 years. I lived in regret and pain, so many moments I wish I could change that one moment that changed my life. I lost my one chance at true love because I didn't listen to my heart. Now I've started taking chances again and it's helped me though life and I don't regret any more knowing that my heart is right. There are times when you should listen to your heart and times you should let you head do the thinking. You will always know which one's right but will you listen to the right one? Sometimes I wonder about that moment and think what if? What if I said yes? What if I thought............why not?
Signed,
Anonymous"
"Wow" thought David as finished reading "Talk about Day ja vu" (AN:I have no idea how to spell that I don't know French but you know what I mean.....right?) He shook his head "Lizzie why can't you just get out of my head?"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~So how'd ya like it?? huh? PLEASE tell me I tool me forever to write this chapter I think I wrote it like 50 other times each one different ahh!! It was so frustrating! I wasn't sure what I wanted to include and what I didn't. Anyway I finally got it right so please r/r that would be SOO great of you!! 'nyways I was kinda nervous about this chapter to please tell me what you thought of it and review tell me your ideas in what I need to improve and what you like about it, I know it's pointless L/Gness but hey you know you love it! Well that's all for now until later!
Lola~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~Hey I'm back with an update hope you like it, it's longer than my usual so anyway here it is
Lola~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~