Magical
Sorry it took me so long to update but I had some serious writer's block and I couldnt think of anything, but rest assure, I am back and this chapter will be a good one. Promise. Please continue-
Lorelai's Point of View-
I'm lying here in this very uncomfortable hospital bed and all I hear is Luke screaming. I bolt up and open my eyes. The door is closed but you can hear him loud and clear.
"-Lorelai has been here for an hour and a half-" has it been that long? "-She's layin in there with a broken wrist and you're sitting out here, drinking your coffee.-"
"Mr. Danes, the patient-" a voice, that I'm assuming, was the doctor, started to say.
"Lorelai. She has a name." he interrupted.
"Lorelai, has been here for a while, I understand. But, there have been more... substantial emergencies. I'm sorry, but this is an emergeny room and people who are more ill or severly injured than others, even the ones here before them, get medical attention first. That's how it is. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have another patient to attend to." the voice said.
"Jerk." Luke muttered, while opening the door. "Oh, you're up."
"Yes, I am. Quite a show out there, Mr. Danes."
"I'm sorry. Did I wake you up?"
"Yeah, but that's fine. Had to get up sometime. So, what was that all about?"
"Nothing. I went outside to see if there was anyone to, ya know, help you and I saw this doctor. He was just sitting there, reading, drinkin his coffee and he could've been helping you. So, I snapped." he smiled, sheepishly.
"Awe, Luke. Calm down. I'll see someone eventually." I reassured him. He sat down and I hopped back up on the table.
"I know. How's the arm?"
"It's fine. Well, not fine in the actul sense of fine, but I think you understand." I said.
"Yeah, I get it. So, do you want me to get you some coffee?"
"No. Stay here with me. I hate being here by myself."
"Okay, I'll stay." he took my good hand.
"So, do you wanna play 'I Spy'?" I smiled.
Rory's Point of View-
"How many ambulances does that make?" I asked. My head was still in Jess' lap and he had one hand on my waist and the other was playing with my hair.
"I lost count at 6, so I'm not quite sure."
"Oh. I wonder what's taking mom and Luke so long." I sat up and looked around, bringing my head from Jess' lap. I hadn't moved for a good hour or so.
"I dont know. Do you wanna go find out?"
"Nah, we should stay here. Uh, Jess?" I asked.
"Yeah?"
"Mom, said. My mom said that if I had feelings for someone else and didn't wanna be with Dean anymore than that was okay."
"Oh." he paused and looked me straight in the eyes. "Well, do you?"
I took a deep breath and exhaled shakily. "Yes."
Jess didnt say anything. He sat back for a minute, possibly the longest minute of my life, and starred straight ahead. I dont think I've ever been more scared in all my life. I had always stayed safe and did my homework and listened to my mother. But I had just put myself out there and put my heart on the line. This was it; Rory Gilmore's defining moment. Does Jess wanna be with me or not?
"Okay." he finally said.
"O-okay? Okay what?" I asked, extremely confused.
"I dont know, we'll figure it out. Do you wanna be with Dean?" he asked.
"Not anymore."
"Well, you wanna be with someone else right?" he asked/
"Yes."
"And that someone else is me?" he asked, skepticlly.
"Yes. Now the question is do you wanna be with me?"
"That has never been the question. From the moment I walked into your room that day, that was when I wanted to be with you. Are you sure this is what you want?"
"Yes, why wouldn't it be?"
"Because. I wont call you everyday and come over and have dinner with your mom. I dont live by a scheduel, I'm not able to. I've never been dependent of someone else and no person has ever been dependent on me. I'm not sure I can give you what you need."
he said. This was the truth. He had laid himself out there, just like I did.
"I know. You certainly aren't Dean." he looked disgusted when I said his name. "But Dean wasn't what I needed and Dean wasn't what I wanted. He was nice and polite and respectful. But, he was dumber than dirt and possive and jealous, also. And look where that got him. All I want you to do is treat me well and respect my mom. That's it. The Jess I know now, is the Jess that I need in my life."
He smiled. "You need me. Someone needs me." he said, quietly.
"Yes, I need you. But I cant be with you til I've broken up with Dean. I want to and I'm going to, but we cant be together til it's official. Okay?"
"That's fine." he smiled and took my hand. We sat there quietly. I think we were both processing what had just happened.
"Thank you." he finally said.
"Why are you thanking me?" I asked.
"Because you've accepted me for me."
"No problem." I said and leaned my head on his shoulder and smiled.
There it is people, Chapter 5. Love it or hate it plz review. And include any ideas you might have. Just to keep my options open, so I dont get that awful writer's block. thnx
love-
xxSkittlesxx
Sorry it took me so long to update but I had some serious writer's block and I couldnt think of anything, but rest assure, I am back and this chapter will be a good one. Promise. Please continue-
Lorelai's Point of View-
I'm lying here in this very uncomfortable hospital bed and all I hear is Luke screaming. I bolt up and open my eyes. The door is closed but you can hear him loud and clear.
"-Lorelai has been here for an hour and a half-" has it been that long? "-She's layin in there with a broken wrist and you're sitting out here, drinking your coffee.-"
"Mr. Danes, the patient-" a voice, that I'm assuming, was the doctor, started to say.
"Lorelai. She has a name." he interrupted.
"Lorelai, has been here for a while, I understand. But, there have been more... substantial emergencies. I'm sorry, but this is an emergeny room and people who are more ill or severly injured than others, even the ones here before them, get medical attention first. That's how it is. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have another patient to attend to." the voice said.
"Jerk." Luke muttered, while opening the door. "Oh, you're up."
"Yes, I am. Quite a show out there, Mr. Danes."
"I'm sorry. Did I wake you up?"
"Yeah, but that's fine. Had to get up sometime. So, what was that all about?"
"Nothing. I went outside to see if there was anyone to, ya know, help you and I saw this doctor. He was just sitting there, reading, drinkin his coffee and he could've been helping you. So, I snapped." he smiled, sheepishly.
"Awe, Luke. Calm down. I'll see someone eventually." I reassured him. He sat down and I hopped back up on the table.
"I know. How's the arm?"
"It's fine. Well, not fine in the actul sense of fine, but I think you understand." I said.
"Yeah, I get it. So, do you want me to get you some coffee?"
"No. Stay here with me. I hate being here by myself."
"Okay, I'll stay." he took my good hand.
"So, do you wanna play 'I Spy'?" I smiled.
Rory's Point of View-
"How many ambulances does that make?" I asked. My head was still in Jess' lap and he had one hand on my waist and the other was playing with my hair.
"I lost count at 6, so I'm not quite sure."
"Oh. I wonder what's taking mom and Luke so long." I sat up and looked around, bringing my head from Jess' lap. I hadn't moved for a good hour or so.
"I dont know. Do you wanna go find out?"
"Nah, we should stay here. Uh, Jess?" I asked.
"Yeah?"
"Mom, said. My mom said that if I had feelings for someone else and didn't wanna be with Dean anymore than that was okay."
"Oh." he paused and looked me straight in the eyes. "Well, do you?"
I took a deep breath and exhaled shakily. "Yes."
Jess didnt say anything. He sat back for a minute, possibly the longest minute of my life, and starred straight ahead. I dont think I've ever been more scared in all my life. I had always stayed safe and did my homework and listened to my mother. But I had just put myself out there and put my heart on the line. This was it; Rory Gilmore's defining moment. Does Jess wanna be with me or not?
"Okay." he finally said.
"O-okay? Okay what?" I asked, extremely confused.
"I dont know, we'll figure it out. Do you wanna be with Dean?" he asked.
"Not anymore."
"Well, you wanna be with someone else right?" he asked/
"Yes."
"And that someone else is me?" he asked, skepticlly.
"Yes. Now the question is do you wanna be with me?"
"That has never been the question. From the moment I walked into your room that day, that was when I wanted to be with you. Are you sure this is what you want?"
"Yes, why wouldn't it be?"
"Because. I wont call you everyday and come over and have dinner with your mom. I dont live by a scheduel, I'm not able to. I've never been dependent of someone else and no person has ever been dependent on me. I'm not sure I can give you what you need."
he said. This was the truth. He had laid himself out there, just like I did.
"I know. You certainly aren't Dean." he looked disgusted when I said his name. "But Dean wasn't what I needed and Dean wasn't what I wanted. He was nice and polite and respectful. But, he was dumber than dirt and possive and jealous, also. And look where that got him. All I want you to do is treat me well and respect my mom. That's it. The Jess I know now, is the Jess that I need in my life."
He smiled. "You need me. Someone needs me." he said, quietly.
"Yes, I need you. But I cant be with you til I've broken up with Dean. I want to and I'm going to, but we cant be together til it's official. Okay?"
"That's fine." he smiled and took my hand. We sat there quietly. I think we were both processing what had just happened.
"Thank you." he finally said.
"Why are you thanking me?" I asked.
"Because you've accepted me for me."
"No problem." I said and leaned my head on his shoulder and smiled.
There it is people, Chapter 5. Love it or hate it plz review. And include any ideas you might have. Just to keep my options open, so I dont get that awful writer's block. thnx
love-
xxSkittlesxx
