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The train ride
Triniti Andrews sighed as she sat in a train compartment by herself. "Why for my last
year of school must I be transferred from Starstuck academe to such a big school? I will
not know anyone. Oh well I will make the best of it and try to find some new friends." As
Triniti pondered to herself the compartment door slid open but she didn't notice the
young man leaning against the door giving her the once over, which turned in to the twice
over.
~~**Blaise's POV**~~
"Holy shit! Who is this hot chick?" thought Blaise to himself as he look this babe over,
from head to toe then toe to head. Little feet in strappy sandals which were partly covered
by her dark blue jeans that covered her mile long legs to a flat, pale, stomach that looked
as creamy as the milky way to full round breasts that were covered by a little pink halter
top that read, " You've been a bad boy, go to my room!" above all of this there was the
face of a goddess, skin that looked as smooth and creamy as her stomach, pale flawless
complexion, full ruby red lips, a slender nose and the most amazing things were her eyes,
although not looking at Blaise he could still she the colour of them, a light purple around
the pupil and they got darker as they got to the outer edge of the iris they were the
deepest violet. Framing this goddess's face was long straight hair the colour of ebony.
"Like mine" whispered Blaise. "I whispered that too loudly," thought Blaise for the
goddess was then awakened from her daze, and her violet eyes bore straight into mine.
~~** Regular POV**~~
When Triniti heard the deep voice whisper softly it was enough to wake her. As she
turned and looked into the speaker's eyes she got lost in them. "Wow his eyes are so
blue!" Triniti thought. This young man she was looking over had to be at lest 6'3 with a
very nicely toned body that she could see through his white T-shirt and his low-rise black
army pants. His hair was the same black as Triniti's and this was really rare for her too
see. He had full lips and even white teeth, well at lest the teeth she could see through that
smirk were even. His nose had obliviously been broken but it made him all that much
more attractive to her. "Hello..." said Triniti a little uncertain of the young man before
her, "Hey," He said in that same deep voice that had awoken her.
"Can I help you with something?" She said in the deep purr that was her voice.
"Nope just admiring you." Blaise said in his cocky voice that most girls swooned over, he
was hoping it would work on the goddess, ... it didn't.
"Well, my name is Triniti Andrews, I just transferred from the small academe of
StarStruck, do you know that school?"
"A friend of mine used to go StarStruck, but he graduated from there two years ago, and
my name is Blaise Zabini."
And so the story begins!
The train ride
Triniti Andrews sighed as she sat in a train compartment by herself. "Why for my last
year of school must I be transferred from Starstuck academe to such a big school? I will
not know anyone. Oh well I will make the best of it and try to find some new friends." As
Triniti pondered to herself the compartment door slid open but she didn't notice the
young man leaning against the door giving her the once over, which turned in to the twice
over.
~~**Blaise's POV**~~
"Holy shit! Who is this hot chick?" thought Blaise to himself as he look this babe over,
from head to toe then toe to head. Little feet in strappy sandals which were partly covered
by her dark blue jeans that covered her mile long legs to a flat, pale, stomach that looked
as creamy as the milky way to full round breasts that were covered by a little pink halter
top that read, " You've been a bad boy, go to my room!" above all of this there was the
face of a goddess, skin that looked as smooth and creamy as her stomach, pale flawless
complexion, full ruby red lips, a slender nose and the most amazing things were her eyes,
although not looking at Blaise he could still she the colour of them, a light purple around
the pupil and they got darker as they got to the outer edge of the iris they were the
deepest violet. Framing this goddess's face was long straight hair the colour of ebony.
"Like mine" whispered Blaise. "I whispered that too loudly," thought Blaise for the
goddess was then awakened from her daze, and her violet eyes bore straight into mine.
~~** Regular POV**~~
When Triniti heard the deep voice whisper softly it was enough to wake her. As she
turned and looked into the speaker's eyes she got lost in them. "Wow his eyes are so
blue!" Triniti thought. This young man she was looking over had to be at lest 6'3 with a
very nicely toned body that she could see through his white T-shirt and his low-rise black
army pants. His hair was the same black as Triniti's and this was really rare for her too
see. He had full lips and even white teeth, well at lest the teeth she could see through that
smirk were even. His nose had obliviously been broken but it made him all that much
more attractive to her. "Hello..." said Triniti a little uncertain of the young man before
her, "Hey," He said in that same deep voice that had awoken her.
"Can I help you with something?" She said in the deep purr that was her voice.
"Nope just admiring you." Blaise said in his cocky voice that most girls swooned over, he
was hoping it would work on the goddess, ... it didn't.
"Well, my name is Triniti Andrews, I just transferred from the small academe of
StarStruck, do you know that school?"
"A friend of mine used to go StarStruck, but he graduated from there two years ago, and
my name is Blaise Zabini."
And so the story begins!