Sorry to everyone who liked this story - I'm quitting. Thank you to 'I'm not broken' for pointing out everything that made no sense. I probably would have continued with nonsense if you hadn't told me; I have to agree with you, it made absolutely no sense. I might rewrite it, in fact I was going to, but I got out of the mood. If you readers want a rewrite, I will do it, happily, but if you don't that is fine with me because I have become more interested in writing fan-fics for other subjects. Like Wild ARMs 3, and soon Rurouni Kenshin. *bows her head* I am once again sorry, and please, please tell me if you want a rewrite.
~PianZoe
P.S. The rewrite's first chapter is when they meet Alana, then the second story goes straight to them as teenagers, and the plot goes from there. It will make much more sense then.
P.P.S. Oh, and to 'I'm not broken,' I hope if I do make the rewrite you'll read it and tell me if it's good.