UPDATE
I'm SO glad to have gotten so many replies. I've had a lot of help from people here and on Arias Ink on how to fix up my story so that it will be easier to read and understand :)
I'd also like to officially thank Moon-Princess13 and Elizabeth on your responses to my editor request.
I've decided to have Moon-Princess13 be my editor since not only is she a great writer but she was also the frist one to reply.
Also everyone who reviewed, your SO great! I have a little more time to work on the story now that I have some of my school stuff out of the way. I should get it all done sometime soon, maybe a week from now? I have some notes just need to compile it into paragraph form. All right the next time I update I'll have a new chapter and probably the edited earlier chapters. I'll just add a update section to my author notes on what's going on and when to expect the next chapter k! Well I think that's everything. Take Care!
I'm SO glad to have gotten so many replies. I've had a lot of help from people here and on Arias Ink on how to fix up my story so that it will be easier to read and understand :)
I'd also like to officially thank Moon-Princess13 and Elizabeth on your responses to my editor request.
I've decided to have Moon-Princess13 be my editor since not only is she a great writer but she was also the frist one to reply.
Also everyone who reviewed, your SO great! I have a little more time to work on the story now that I have some of my school stuff out of the way. I should get it all done sometime soon, maybe a week from now? I have some notes just need to compile it into paragraph form. All right the next time I update I'll have a new chapter and probably the edited earlier chapters. I'll just add a update section to my author notes on what's going on and when to expect the next chapter k! Well I think that's everything. Take Care!