THE IRVING HALL CRISIS!

Azure's POV

Medda is so nice, how come she wasn't Jack first choice in the movie? Of course we slept in different rooms, you have to remember that this is a Disney movie and everything is ALWAYS PG, it's weird, you can't swear, I mean, you LITERALLY can't swear! It's pretty funny too, earlier this morning I tripped and said "shucks" instead of shit, it seems that the only swear words you can say are "hell" and "ass" and sometimes "damn" but that can be changed to "darn" if you use it too many times.

This is one of the best days in my life! Even though nothing happened between Jack and I yet. We were so close last night. We shared a song and danced together. There's always a kiss after every love song! What do have to do to get him in my arms?

We were both helping Medda and her workers clean up for the rally. During this, I got a chance to wonder around and look for an escape that Jack can use tonight during the fiasco. I hopped on the stage and then suddenly I saw something...

The Manhattan Newies soon arrived to help along with Brooklyn down to Trenton. Irving Hall was getting packed… then David came and let me tell you, he didn't look happy, in fact he looked pissed off!

"Jack, you and I need to talk!"

"Well can it wait? I'm kind of busy right now" Jack said back

"No it can't!" David said sternly. Jack rolled his eyes and went outside with David. A few minutes later I heard yelling and then a slam of a door. Jack stormed back in.

"What was that about" I asked, hoping it wasn't me.

"Oh nothing, David can be a stubborn jackass sometimes. Just ignore him, he's a little stressed" he said as if he knew him for years instead of days.

"Hello boys!" Sarah said as she walked in with Les. We all turned. Oh my…! Sarah wasn't wearing the little bow peep outfit, this time she was wearing a rather revealing dress making the newsies' jaws drop, including Jack's! What the hell? This is definitely not suppose to happen!

"Holy…!" Race exclaimed

"Nice dress!" Skittery said not taking his eyes of her……dress

"What do you think, Jack?" Sarah asked turning towards Jack.

That bitch! Or should I say slut!

"It's…fine, I guess" Jack said, looking away from her.

"And what about you AZURE, do YOU like my dress?" She then asked me giving an evil look. If this wasn't a Disney movie, I would so……

"I don't know…where's the rest of it?" I said calmly back with my fists clenched holding the anger, smiling, giving her the same look she gave me.

"Hey Azure I want to show you something" She said as she pulled me away from Sarah

"What?" I asked her

"Good you're away from her, I was afraid you two might have a little hissy fight"

"Do you think I'd win" I asked looking towards Sarah.

"Hell yeah, that girl can't hit for sh…shucks? What the..."

"Don't you know? You can't swear" I pointed out

"I don't believe you"

"Fine, try saying any four letter word and you'll see"

She smiled by the challenge.

"Fu…Fudge" then her smirk turned into a face of shock "Holy cow! You're right" again she meant to say "shit" but came out "cow"

"Yeah, unfortunately, we're going to have to talk like Robin for a while"(You know how Robin from the old Batman series talked)

"There's also another reason I want to talk to you. I'm a little nervous" This is the first time I've seen Loud Mouth this way, she's never nervous.

"About what? Tonight?"

"Yeah, aren't you? I just have this feeling like something bad is going to happen, you know?"

"Well of course something bad is going to happen, this is the turning point in the story" I said

"Yeah I know, but I feel that something else is going to happen. Something unexpected. Which brings me to another thing, are you going to save Jack?"

"Of course, why?"

"Well maybe you shouldn't save Jack"

"Why not?"

"Well say that you do save him? What happens then? This isn't real life, this is a movie, a movie with a planned story and if you save Jack, you'll mess up the whole movie"

"Like you're in position to say that"

"Maybe I'm not, but you know I'm right. I admit what I did to get to Spot was wrong, I know better now."

"I don't want to be like Sarah. I don't want to ditch him like she did. I'm not that kind of girl"

"He'll understand, Azure"

"But I wouldn't" I then said

We went into the gathering crowd to listen to Jack and Spot speech. I wasn't really paying attention. I was busy thinking about how Jack and I can escape. I found a hidden back door behind the curtains, I'm just hoping it wouldn't be surrounded by the bulls soon to come.

"Why aren't you cheering!" exclaimed Loud Mouth who's voice is almost lost by the amount of cheering at the end of Spot's rants. "even Sarah's cheering" It was those words that made scream to the top of my lungs.

"Go Jack!"

"I say that what you say is what I say." Spot said as he spit and shook Jack's hand, the argument/speech was almost over.

"And whatever Spot says I say!" Loud Mouth added innocently

The curtains open and Medda enters. The cheering gets louder. And my ears hurt even more. Jack jumps off the stage and walks over to me.

"Your speech was great, very inspiring!" I complemented him, little did I know that Sarah was behind me.

"Yeah, but you weren't cheering, in fact you weren't even paying attention" She said smiling.

That little…

"I was too" That was all I can say back, great comeback, huh?

"Come on Jack" She pulled Jack away. It didn't bother me this time, because unlike her, Jack and I had a love song together. Beat that Sarah!

Jack was reluctantly sitting with Sarah and then he gets up just when they look like they were about to kiss. I thought he would go to Medda like in the movie…but he walks past Medda and to…me. The look on Sarah's face was priceless, she was extremely mad. We were dancing together to Medda signing. We were looking into each other's eyes.

"Jack!" Suddenly the was David standing there… Snyder!

"It's Snyder! Right there!"

Oh, no! The bulls were everywhere! I looked towards the escape I found earlier…then suddenly Jack takes my hand and pulled me through the scattered crowd.

"Jack where are you taking me"

"I have to get you out of here!" he answered

"Don't worry about me, I'm fine!" he doesn't listen and leads me to a back door, "Jack!"

"Go!"

"No I won't! Not without you!"

Then something happened, something totally unexpected, something I've been dreaming about since I can remember…Jack kissed me. This is unreal…this is…

He then pushes me out the door. I was too shocked and full of bliss to fight back…Jack kissed me

"Well aren't you happy, you finally got what you wanted" I turned to see Sarah and Les, they started walking and then they stopped "Well, are you coming?" Sarah asked

…I knew now what I had to do

Loud Mouth's POV

Where's Spot! I lost him in the crowd and confusion. I don't know what to do!

"Spot!" I yelled hoping he would here me somewhere and save me. I was looking around for him and then suddenly I saw someone…no…it couldn't be…there's no way…it can't be…Dot?

"Dot? No way! How!" I yelled.

"What did you think I would sit there and let you have all the fun!" She said laughing, walking towards me.

I backed away from her in denial... How?

"So tell me Loud Mouth, where Spot?"

"Somewhere where you'll never get him" I yelled as I ran from her.

I have to find Spot…before SHE does!

Jack's POV

I know I shouldn't of kissed Azure. David is going to kill me! But it's worth it!

I don't feel up to this. I have to go through the crowd, up the balcony, down the stairs, go outside, watch Blink get hit with a club, go back inside and almost get kicked by a horse, then up the stairs again only to get punched in the jaw for the millionth time. I'm sick of this!

…I then hear someone calling my name

"Jack! Over here!" It was Azure! She came back… for me

"Azure? What the hell are you doin' here? Go! It's not safe for you here!"

" Neither is it for you, now come on! I know a way to escape!"

…To be continued

Up next: Will Jack stay true to the movie? Or will he escape with Azure? And will Loud Mouth be able to stop Dot from getting to Spot?!

Tune in next time in…

Azure & Loud Mouth's Excellent Newsies Adventure!

AN: You guys must really hate me right now! Sorry, but you're going to have to wait till the next chapter! I know, I'm very cruel! Suspense's a bitch! Don't worry I won't leave you guys hanging for long! (She says while stretching her fingers in front of the keyboard)

Okay, I've getting a lot of emails concerning this question, "What does this story have to do with Bill & Ted movies?" Well it may not seem a whole bunch like it now but it will much later in the story and you'll see. We're not even halfway through the story yet! Even though the movie is! (Hint, hint)

I thought I'd do shout outs for once, so here it goes (sorry this is my first time doing them so be nice)

Loud Mouth: I know you're going to kill me after you read this chapter but I'm not going to tell what's going happen next to you and Spot, I keeping my mouth shut! Yeah Azure and Jack sung together, the reason I didn't have you and Spot sing together is because Spot's not really the singing type, he's too cool for that LOL! You asked me earlier on why David wants Jack to stay away from Azure, it not that he wants his sister to get the hot guy it's more of the other way around. Why do you David always wants Azure to be at his place all the time? Is it really because he wants her away from Jack? (I'm stopping there before I reveal more!)

Demon Blood: Thanks! And I really like your story and I'm glad you updated!

Shasanixie(I think I spelled it right): Your story is really good! Thanks for reviewing mine!

Pup: Well I'm glad you like it! Yeah I wanted to write this as sort of a parody but not really, a look into what would REALLY happen if two fanatics got the chance to be Mary Sue and how it doesn't go as they planned. I pretty much got the idea for this from Pleasantville and designed it after that, Loud Mouth is like Reese Witherspoon's character and Azure is Toby Maguire's character. I hope that made sense!

Tree: I happy you love it!

Raven: Yep, Spot did fall in love with Loud Mouth, it's about time Spot had a girlfriend in the movie, just hope that Dot doesn't mess it up! Thanks for your review!

Aguachica: Don't worry she will eventually!

Smartass, Mondie: Mush will need a girlfriend later on! Hint, hint!

Kaylee: Same with Race!

Thanks for reading!

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