Don't worry... I'll try to give Sesshoumaru his stoic-ness back, as Sama-
sama has so kindly pointed out. I like Sam-sama. She's great. She
understands that I prefer kind criticism to 'this is crap.' Though I
haven't been flamed for this one yet, you should have seen the essay I
wrote about abortion... Whoa! I got so many flames I was afraid my story
would spontaneously combust! I had to profusely thank the two people that
reviewed nicely. That's right. Two!
Now Maybe I'll get some nice happy reviews telling me how wonderful I am! ^_^
(That means you, Sam-sama!)
If you have minor suggestions that won't screw up the plot too much, I'd be glad to hear them. Right now, I'm just passing time until it gets all romanticy-like... I need silly fights for Anna and Inuyasha... btw, in case you haven't gotten it, he already likes her. That's what all the poetry was. I also need stuff for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to do... Rin is so easy to work with. She's like me only shorter. Lol. I need something to happen, I just don't know what... once enough time has passed, I can't pick up again all by myself! But help, please, until then!
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"Inuyasha?"
"What?"
"What is this?" Anna asked holding out the paper with the poems on it.
"That's mine!" Inuyasha shouted snatching the paper away from her.
"I just found it yesterday. I wasn't purposely invading your privacy. But now that I've found it, I can't help but wonder why you wrote those particular parts of those particular poems."
"Those were my favorites."
"Why?"
"I don't know. It's wishful thinking, I guess."
"What?"
Inuyasha clapped a hand over his mouth and ran off, leaving Anna stunned. That night, when he came back, he refused to say a word, no matter what Anna said or did. She couldn't coax a word out of him for a few days, and even when he did start talking to her again, the paper was never mentioned.
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"Sesshoumaru, is that really what you're going to do with Kagome?"
"Yes."
"Eeeeeeewwwwwwwww..."
"Stop that, Rin."
"Hai, Sesshoumaru-sama!"
"Go play with Jaken."
"But, Jaken doesn't like to play with me."
"Tell him that if he doesn't, I'll have to hurt him."
"Okay!"
Later, when Sesshoumaru went to see what it was they were doing, he learned that Rin's idea of playing with Jaken was running around in circles around him, him trying to follow, but getting dizzy and falling.
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~*TBC*~
See? Just killing time. Badly, I might add. This is becoming very forced and therefore, crappy. If you just give me one funny line, I could get an entire chapter out of it, if it's good.
K, I Luv You, Buh-Bye!
Jean ^_^
Now Maybe I'll get some nice happy reviews telling me how wonderful I am! ^_^
(That means you, Sam-sama!)
If you have minor suggestions that won't screw up the plot too much, I'd be glad to hear them. Right now, I'm just passing time until it gets all romanticy-like... I need silly fights for Anna and Inuyasha... btw, in case you haven't gotten it, he already likes her. That's what all the poetry was. I also need stuff for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to do... Rin is so easy to work with. She's like me only shorter. Lol. I need something to happen, I just don't know what... once enough time has passed, I can't pick up again all by myself! But help, please, until then!
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"Inuyasha?"
"What?"
"What is this?" Anna asked holding out the paper with the poems on it.
"That's mine!" Inuyasha shouted snatching the paper away from her.
"I just found it yesterday. I wasn't purposely invading your privacy. But now that I've found it, I can't help but wonder why you wrote those particular parts of those particular poems."
"Those were my favorites."
"Why?"
"I don't know. It's wishful thinking, I guess."
"What?"
Inuyasha clapped a hand over his mouth and ran off, leaving Anna stunned. That night, when he came back, he refused to say a word, no matter what Anna said or did. She couldn't coax a word out of him for a few days, and even when he did start talking to her again, the paper was never mentioned.
************************************
"Sesshoumaru, is that really what you're going to do with Kagome?"
"Yes."
"Eeeeeeewwwwwwwww..."
"Stop that, Rin."
"Hai, Sesshoumaru-sama!"
"Go play with Jaken."
"But, Jaken doesn't like to play with me."
"Tell him that if he doesn't, I'll have to hurt him."
"Okay!"
Later, when Sesshoumaru went to see what it was they were doing, he learned that Rin's idea of playing with Jaken was running around in circles around him, him trying to follow, but getting dizzy and falling.
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~*TBC*~
See? Just killing time. Badly, I might add. This is becoming very forced and therefore, crappy. If you just give me one funny line, I could get an entire chapter out of it, if it's good.
K, I Luv You, Buh-Bye!
Jean ^_^