Yay.I got 4 whole reviews and none of dem were flames.tanx to all of u
espically surgedragon-I'm pro davis 2..besides tai hes my fav, then after
them is matt
matt ikazou-tanx for the tips.I'll put them in my next chap cuz I was
already nearly finished this chap when i read ur review and I'm 2 lazy to
write agin
Oricle--
Scrtshd--- kinda hard to say ur name.exactly wat I'm going four( not really
I don't have a plot I'm just writing this as I go along)
I don't really know how the schooling system is in japan or America or wherever so I'm doing this like it is done here..we get to school we have roll call/first period-4th then a break of like 20mins then we have 5th and 6th then lunch and then 7th and 8th I took long to load this one up cuz I needed more than one review.I had half of it finished when matt reviewed( on the 27th of oct) so if I missed anyone sorry, I'll mention u in the next chap
--Thoughts and Refelctions- part2
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The lunch bell rings, and I know I'm in shit.
My "friends" have been sending me glares all day. I've been ignoring the notes that have been sent my way and every time they try contact me in the halls from class to class I rush off and leave them behind.
But what can I say or do for this
I can't really hide from them this time. So I guess I'll have to do it, even if I avoid them now.I'll have to face them sometime. Better now than later right. Please.I'd really, really want to do this later.
I turn to leave the cafeteria.
"Davis, Davis over here!"
Damn! Why'd Ken have to have such good eyesight?
As I walk over to them and I see that, once again they brought the elder ones. Shit, this is gonna be difficult.
Come on Davis you can do this! What can they do to ya man? Nothing! That's what? Nothing.
I'm REALLY trying to psyche myself up.and it's REALLY not working.
Shit, this is gonna be difficult.
"Ya?" I'm so fucking glad that my voice sounds nonchalant even though I'm really quivering inside.
"What was up with you yesterday?" There's Yolie, never one to beat around the bush
"Umm.Ya about that, you see it like this I was ju-"
"You completely lost it! I mean we always knew you were screwed up but no need to make it common knowledge!" and once again Kari's input is more important than mine.
" Look, fuck you, Hikari, If you never wanted me to talk why did ya call me over" I nearly yelled, by now all the room's occupants were staring at us. " I don't have time for this shit." I mumbled the last bit as I turned about and walked away.
I heard footsteps behind me. I twirled around ready to throw all sorts of censored words, when I came face to fist with a.well a fist.
I grabbed the bridge of my nose and looked up to see Tai cradling an angry red hand. I never really expected Tai to punch me, Matt maybe, TK probably, Yolie most likely.I mean she's more man then woman. But Tai! What I do to piss him off.
"Sorry Davis, just don't ever swear at my sister again!" He was now rubbing his knuckles as if readying for another punch.
SHIT! Tai is the only one stupid enough to punch for a reason like that, damn over protective brother.
He's walking away and I'm standing hear holding my throbbing nose. I feel my feet moving but I don't know what I'm going to do. I'm charging at Tai chi's back and now I thinking I'm getting my drift. I stoop down low while running and
BAM!! Contact! That's how you tackle a person, punch me will he? Well there I showed him.
Now in normal circumstances I was a good fighter, but these weren't normal, Tai was a whole 2 years older than me, a whole lot stronger, faster, bigger and smart-well maybe not smarter.
Needless to say I got my ass kicked.badly
I'm now thinking how much I hurt as I walk home.even my hair hurts, probably when he was lifting me up by it. Home is a good place to be, good thing my parents are working late, good thing my sister doesn't care that I've been beat up badly.I don't really feel up to talking right now, my jaw hurts too much
As I enter my room and turn on my digital planner to see what stuff I have for tomorrow I see, in big bold digital writing, SHORT STORY OR POEM FOR FRIDAYS ORAL.
Shit, I've known about this for weeks but I don't have any idea what I'm gonna write about.
OWW!
Man Tai really messed me up, BAKA
I'm not really mad at him, I'm not really angry at any of them. Just tired, tired of all of them thinking I won't understand, that I wont even care. Tired that they think I'm not worth the effort.
I AM ANGRY AT THEM
Aren't they meant to be my friends, don't their crests do anything to the way they treat me.
It hurts.I hurt. I'm just they're way to vent out anger and frustration. They don't care about the pain I feel. So much pain
I know what I'm gonna write now.this oral is meant to be personall, not about what sport we like or what our favourite food is, but something deep and soulful
I know exactly what I'm going to write, I just need the courage.
***tbc**
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I sorry to matt, I wont be putting ur tips in my next chap cauz it's going to be on the oral davis writes. I've already written it so it should be fairly quick, though I need at least 2 more reviews (hint hint), someone reviewing twice is perfectly acceptable (I'm sad I know, but I need those reviews) Sorry it took awhile, but I only really write when I'm bored or in the mood and normally I have to much school,sport or tv ( to watch.
Anyway plz review..weather u loved it hated it or is currently tryin to rmove it from ur memory
kusuwa
I don't really know how the schooling system is in japan or America or wherever so I'm doing this like it is done here..we get to school we have roll call/first period-4th then a break of like 20mins then we have 5th and 6th then lunch and then 7th and 8th I took long to load this one up cuz I needed more than one review.I had half of it finished when matt reviewed( on the 27th of oct) so if I missed anyone sorry, I'll mention u in the next chap
--Thoughts and Refelctions- part2
------------------------------------------xXx------------------------------- -----------------------------
The lunch bell rings, and I know I'm in shit.
My "friends" have been sending me glares all day. I've been ignoring the notes that have been sent my way and every time they try contact me in the halls from class to class I rush off and leave them behind.
But what can I say or do for this
I can't really hide from them this time. So I guess I'll have to do it, even if I avoid them now.I'll have to face them sometime. Better now than later right. Please.I'd really, really want to do this later.
I turn to leave the cafeteria.
"Davis, Davis over here!"
Damn! Why'd Ken have to have such good eyesight?
As I walk over to them and I see that, once again they brought the elder ones. Shit, this is gonna be difficult.
Come on Davis you can do this! What can they do to ya man? Nothing! That's what? Nothing.
I'm REALLY trying to psyche myself up.and it's REALLY not working.
Shit, this is gonna be difficult.
"Ya?" I'm so fucking glad that my voice sounds nonchalant even though I'm really quivering inside.
"What was up with you yesterday?" There's Yolie, never one to beat around the bush
"Umm.Ya about that, you see it like this I was ju-"
"You completely lost it! I mean we always knew you were screwed up but no need to make it common knowledge!" and once again Kari's input is more important than mine.
" Look, fuck you, Hikari, If you never wanted me to talk why did ya call me over" I nearly yelled, by now all the room's occupants were staring at us. " I don't have time for this shit." I mumbled the last bit as I turned about and walked away.
I heard footsteps behind me. I twirled around ready to throw all sorts of censored words, when I came face to fist with a.well a fist.
I grabbed the bridge of my nose and looked up to see Tai cradling an angry red hand. I never really expected Tai to punch me, Matt maybe, TK probably, Yolie most likely.I mean she's more man then woman. But Tai! What I do to piss him off.
"Sorry Davis, just don't ever swear at my sister again!" He was now rubbing his knuckles as if readying for another punch.
SHIT! Tai is the only one stupid enough to punch for a reason like that, damn over protective brother.
He's walking away and I'm standing hear holding my throbbing nose. I feel my feet moving but I don't know what I'm going to do. I'm charging at Tai chi's back and now I thinking I'm getting my drift. I stoop down low while running and
BAM!! Contact! That's how you tackle a person, punch me will he? Well there I showed him.
Now in normal circumstances I was a good fighter, but these weren't normal, Tai was a whole 2 years older than me, a whole lot stronger, faster, bigger and smart-well maybe not smarter.
Needless to say I got my ass kicked.badly
I'm now thinking how much I hurt as I walk home.even my hair hurts, probably when he was lifting me up by it. Home is a good place to be, good thing my parents are working late, good thing my sister doesn't care that I've been beat up badly.I don't really feel up to talking right now, my jaw hurts too much
As I enter my room and turn on my digital planner to see what stuff I have for tomorrow I see, in big bold digital writing, SHORT STORY OR POEM FOR FRIDAYS ORAL.
Shit, I've known about this for weeks but I don't have any idea what I'm gonna write about.
OWW!
Man Tai really messed me up, BAKA
I'm not really mad at him, I'm not really angry at any of them. Just tired, tired of all of them thinking I won't understand, that I wont even care. Tired that they think I'm not worth the effort.
I AM ANGRY AT THEM
Aren't they meant to be my friends, don't their crests do anything to the way they treat me.
It hurts.I hurt. I'm just they're way to vent out anger and frustration. They don't care about the pain I feel. So much pain
I know what I'm gonna write now.this oral is meant to be personall, not about what sport we like or what our favourite food is, but something deep and soulful
I know exactly what I'm going to write, I just need the courage.
***tbc**
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I sorry to matt, I wont be putting ur tips in my next chap cauz it's going to be on the oral davis writes. I've already written it so it should be fairly quick, though I need at least 2 more reviews (hint hint), someone reviewing twice is perfectly acceptable (I'm sad I know, but I need those reviews) Sorry it took awhile, but I only really write when I'm bored or in the mood and normally I have to much school,sport or tv ( to watch.
Anyway plz review..weather u loved it hated it or is currently tryin to rmove it from ur memory
kusuwa