Thanks to my first review from Sara and her Pinkys, and Kimi and Tommy are the best couple :p
And because you were so nice about it I'll do as you ask and go into more detail on the robbery in this chapter. Oh and I still don't own the rugrats or all grown up
The hospital stay part 3 - The police
It wasn't long before Kimi woke up, but she decided to lay there for a while. She looked up at Tommy, he was still asleep "as usual" she thought to herself. She looked at her watch. It was nearly 6pm
"Hey, hey Tommy" she wisphered
"Wha, huh, oh Kimi what time is it?"
"Nearly 6 you want something to eat?"
"Yeah if you don't mind"
"Of course I don't, just as long as you don't get used to the idea of me doing this for you all the time"
"I know that's why I'm milking this opportunity for as much as I can get"
"In that case I may go home and leave you to get all your food yourself"
Before Tommy could say something back the doctor came in followed by 2 police officers.
"Err hi what are the police doing here doc?" Tommy said
At that Kimi turned round she didn't noticed anyone come in
"Oh sorry, I'll be back with some food in about 20 minutes ok sweetie?"
"See ya soon" Tommy said "So how can I help you guys?"
"Well Mr. Pickles. I'm Pc Carver and this is Pc Leach" said the first officer a large man about 6'2" "We have little infomation on the attack so we would like to get a statement off of you"
"Oh ok don't I need a lawyer or my parents present for that though?"
"Only if you wish to Mr. Pickles" said Pc Leach, a young women, obviously just starting a career with the police department.
"Ok then sure what do you need to know?"
"Well Mr. Pickles" said Carver "Can you start from the begining and tell us all you remember"
"Ok I'll try.It was a Friday night September 14th about 4pm I had just finished work at the 7-11 and was on my way home when i remembered it was mine and Kimi's anniversary in a few days"
"How many days Mr. Pickles"
"4, I know I left it a bit late, but i needed to make sure I had enough money for this watch she wanted"
"Kimi, was she the girls that was in here with you, right?"
"Of course who do you think I am?" Tommy was starting to get angry
"I'm sorry Mr. Pickles I didn't mean it that way, we just need to get all the facts, what's her name just in case we need more info"
"Kimi Wanatbe-Finster"
"Ok you had just finished work"
"I had just finished work and was heading home when I thought I should go get her present for her. So I turned my car round"
"You never said you were driving?"
"Its not that important is it?"
"I supose, but there was no car outside the jewelry shop when you were taken to hospital. Maybe they used it to get away in, in that case we may find them........a lot faster"
Tommy knew they added the last bit to reasure him
"They stole my car!!"
"They could have stolen your car Mr.Pickles it may just be in a compound could you give a discription of the car?"
"Red Ford Fiesta, just a cheap go around, it's actually a British car the stearings on the wrong side and everything"
"Well that will help us find it much easier" said Leach
"Back to the story please continue Mr. Pickles" said Carver
"Ok when I arrived at the jewelry store i locked up my car and headed in where I heard shouting, I still went in because Mr and Mrs Johnson were always arguing so I thought it was them. As the door opened I saw these 2 guys standing with a gun to Mr Johnsons head, are Mr and Mrs Johnson Ok?"
"They're fine Mr.Pickles. They just have mild shock"
"Good, good anyway I saw the 2 guys when I opened the door and they both turned round to look at me, the one without the gun was ordering me to get on the floor while the other pointed the gun towards me, I didn't know what to do with myself and just stood their he shouted again, but I still didn't move. Then I suddenly felt a blow to my chest and was knocked back against the door"
"Was that when you realised when you were shot?"
"Yes"
"How many times would you say you got shot?"
"Just the once, I looked down to my chest and saw blood pouring out of my chest I tried to push my hand against it as hard as I could to stop the bleeding. I looked back up to the guys and the one that didn't have the gun was shouting his head off at the other guy."
"What did they say?"
"I dunno, I must of been in shock because I didn't realise any pain or anything going on aound me a just fell to my knees and blacked out and woke up here"
"How long ago did you wake up here?"
"2 days ago"
"Have you had any visits from anyone you didn't know?"
"No just family nad friends. Why?"
"In cases such as this we do get a lot of people who feel guilty about what happened and visit the victim."
"Well as Tommy said just friends and family have been in" said the doctor who had been checking all the machines around the bed."
"Ok....Tommy could you describe the thiefs?"
"They were wearing masks over their heads gloves and were wearing black clothes all over but one had his sweatshirt tied up and had a tatoo on his lower arm"
"What did it look like?"
Well it was like flames, but black"
"Hmm that's unusual. Has anyone close spent time with you while you were in the coma who could possibly identify anyone who visited claiming to be a family member?"
"Well from what I've been told Kimi spent the whole time I've been in here with me. So she could help."
"Well Mr. Pickles that's all the questions I have for you for now, you've been very helpful. Thank you."
"My pleasure, I just hope you can get those guys and my car back"
"We'll do our best fr your car, but if they did steal it they may have destroyed it."
"Did anyone tell you you have good bedside manner Dave?" said Leach as they both left.
"Don't worry Tommy I'm sure they'll get it back" said the doctor
"Thanks doc, could you do me a favour?"
"Sure what is it?"
"Could you find were Kimi is with my food I am starving"
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Well theres chapter 4, hope this makes more sense for you Sara and her Pinkys. I'm starting to really enjoy writing this story but some reviews would be nice *hint hint*
For those enjoying the story don't worry I'm not quite finished yet, I still have Kimi's Interview with someone claiming to be Tommys uncle john *dun dun dun* the cardiotherapy, tommy getting home football tryouts and getting his car back and visiting the jewelry shop again so no worries.
And because you were so nice about it I'll do as you ask and go into more detail on the robbery in this chapter. Oh and I still don't own the rugrats or all grown up
The hospital stay part 3 - The police
It wasn't long before Kimi woke up, but she decided to lay there for a while. She looked up at Tommy, he was still asleep "as usual" she thought to herself. She looked at her watch. It was nearly 6pm
"Hey, hey Tommy" she wisphered
"Wha, huh, oh Kimi what time is it?"
"Nearly 6 you want something to eat?"
"Yeah if you don't mind"
"Of course I don't, just as long as you don't get used to the idea of me doing this for you all the time"
"I know that's why I'm milking this opportunity for as much as I can get"
"In that case I may go home and leave you to get all your food yourself"
Before Tommy could say something back the doctor came in followed by 2 police officers.
"Err hi what are the police doing here doc?" Tommy said
At that Kimi turned round she didn't noticed anyone come in
"Oh sorry, I'll be back with some food in about 20 minutes ok sweetie?"
"See ya soon" Tommy said "So how can I help you guys?"
"Well Mr. Pickles. I'm Pc Carver and this is Pc Leach" said the first officer a large man about 6'2" "We have little infomation on the attack so we would like to get a statement off of you"
"Oh ok don't I need a lawyer or my parents present for that though?"
"Only if you wish to Mr. Pickles" said Pc Leach, a young women, obviously just starting a career with the police department.
"Ok then sure what do you need to know?"
"Well Mr. Pickles" said Carver "Can you start from the begining and tell us all you remember"
"Ok I'll try.It was a Friday night September 14th about 4pm I had just finished work at the 7-11 and was on my way home when i remembered it was mine and Kimi's anniversary in a few days"
"How many days Mr. Pickles"
"4, I know I left it a bit late, but i needed to make sure I had enough money for this watch she wanted"
"Kimi, was she the girls that was in here with you, right?"
"Of course who do you think I am?" Tommy was starting to get angry
"I'm sorry Mr. Pickles I didn't mean it that way, we just need to get all the facts, what's her name just in case we need more info"
"Kimi Wanatbe-Finster"
"Ok you had just finished work"
"I had just finished work and was heading home when I thought I should go get her present for her. So I turned my car round"
"You never said you were driving?"
"Its not that important is it?"
"I supose, but there was no car outside the jewelry shop when you were taken to hospital. Maybe they used it to get away in, in that case we may find them........a lot faster"
Tommy knew they added the last bit to reasure him
"They stole my car!!"
"They could have stolen your car Mr.Pickles it may just be in a compound could you give a discription of the car?"
"Red Ford Fiesta, just a cheap go around, it's actually a British car the stearings on the wrong side and everything"
"Well that will help us find it much easier" said Leach
"Back to the story please continue Mr. Pickles" said Carver
"Ok when I arrived at the jewelry store i locked up my car and headed in where I heard shouting, I still went in because Mr and Mrs Johnson were always arguing so I thought it was them. As the door opened I saw these 2 guys standing with a gun to Mr Johnsons head, are Mr and Mrs Johnson Ok?"
"They're fine Mr.Pickles. They just have mild shock"
"Good, good anyway I saw the 2 guys when I opened the door and they both turned round to look at me, the one without the gun was ordering me to get on the floor while the other pointed the gun towards me, I didn't know what to do with myself and just stood their he shouted again, but I still didn't move. Then I suddenly felt a blow to my chest and was knocked back against the door"
"Was that when you realised when you were shot?"
"Yes"
"How many times would you say you got shot?"
"Just the once, I looked down to my chest and saw blood pouring out of my chest I tried to push my hand against it as hard as I could to stop the bleeding. I looked back up to the guys and the one that didn't have the gun was shouting his head off at the other guy."
"What did they say?"
"I dunno, I must of been in shock because I didn't realise any pain or anything going on aound me a just fell to my knees and blacked out and woke up here"
"How long ago did you wake up here?"
"2 days ago"
"Have you had any visits from anyone you didn't know?"
"No just family nad friends. Why?"
"In cases such as this we do get a lot of people who feel guilty about what happened and visit the victim."
"Well as Tommy said just friends and family have been in" said the doctor who had been checking all the machines around the bed."
"Ok....Tommy could you describe the thiefs?"
"They were wearing masks over their heads gloves and were wearing black clothes all over but one had his sweatshirt tied up and had a tatoo on his lower arm"
"What did it look like?"
Well it was like flames, but black"
"Hmm that's unusual. Has anyone close spent time with you while you were in the coma who could possibly identify anyone who visited claiming to be a family member?"
"Well from what I've been told Kimi spent the whole time I've been in here with me. So she could help."
"Well Mr. Pickles that's all the questions I have for you for now, you've been very helpful. Thank you."
"My pleasure, I just hope you can get those guys and my car back"
"We'll do our best fr your car, but if they did steal it they may have destroyed it."
"Did anyone tell you you have good bedside manner Dave?" said Leach as they both left.
"Don't worry Tommy I'm sure they'll get it back" said the doctor
"Thanks doc, could you do me a favour?"
"Sure what is it?"
"Could you find were Kimi is with my food I am starving"
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Well theres chapter 4, hope this makes more sense for you Sara and her Pinkys. I'm starting to really enjoy writing this story but some reviews would be nice *hint hint*
For those enjoying the story don't worry I'm not quite finished yet, I still have Kimi's Interview with someone claiming to be Tommys uncle john *dun dun dun* the cardiotherapy, tommy getting home football tryouts and getting his car back and visiting the jewelry shop again so no worries.