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DISCLAIMER: I DON'T own Yu Yu Hakusho.
AUTHOR: Bame-Chan
NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR: Half my life I've been traveling the world with my mother. I never really enjoyed life much. But now that I'm staying in one permanent place, I will never let go. I'll never leave. I learned a lot of languages and what amused me was Nihongo. I learned basic words and their meanings. I tried them in this fic. Hope you enjoy it. I also apologize for the insubordinate grammars. I hope you understand. Send in reviews so I can improve the story. Love y'all!
PERSONAL RATING: 7/10
GOMEN!...if there are gram-errs & typos. DAIJOBU I'll fix it thou!
Ja Ne!
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TITLE: A WINTER'S TALE
CHAPTER II: Between Us
One last cry
Before I leave it all behind
I gotta put you out of my mind this time
Stop living a lie
I guess I'm down to my last cry
*~@~HIEI'S POV~@~*
The pool was hot & warm. It continuously drowned my body. It erased the loneliness, the blood and the pain.. 'but why do I still feel bad? I killed
a youkai without a single reason. It felt damn good. It contented me, it
pained me. It wasn't the killing or the youkai. It was something else. I was hiding. But why am I hiding? Who am I hiding from?' I stood up and took my clothes. I could feel my insides growl. I knew I was hungry but I didn't
mind it. The hunger could never erase my bemused emotion. The satisfied
hunger could never fix the broken me. I thought for a while. The uncanny stillness made me tremble. 'Maybe I should visit Yukina and her husband to
keep my mind occupied'.
He left Makai.
Without a single trace.
*~@~KURAMA'S POV~@~*
The blue sky was getting darker. The mist was getting thicker. Everything
looked sick and damaged. Maybe not everything. Maybe, just maybe it might be me. I guess I'm sick. Too sick. So sick. I just lost someone special and
it's all because of a stupid mistake. I could kill anyone right now.
It's been days since Hiei left. I searched Makai, but found no fire demon. I asked Koenma if he had seen him, he shook his head in despair. I searched high and low. I kept asking people all over ningenkai if they have seen the boy in the picture. The boy in the picture. My pockets were filled with so
many things. But the most important to me was the moment captured in a
portrait. A picture of 3 young boys eating beside the sandy beach. A blue
haired boy who smiled widely with determination sparkling in his eyes, a funny but fearless boy who clowns around and the one who caught my
attention, the mysterious boy eating watermelons with the annoyed look on
his face. The wind blew and a single tear trickled down my face. It froze
while the snow fell from the scurrying heavens. I wiped my damp face and
started walking until the wind blew hard. The picture I was holding
flew. "Iie!" I shouted. "Mate kudasai!" I ran after it. I remember now. I
passed by the appliance center and the weather man on tv said there would be an incoming blizzard. It flew fast, away from the empty streets into the
crowded vicinity. I followed it not willing to stop. 'I have to get it. I
was determined to. Because. Because. I need to.. or else.'
It fell in the icy sheets of snow on the other side of the road. 'Whew. It
stopped' I sighed in relief. But not relieved enough. I still have to get
it. A young woman was walking on the side walk when she stepped on the
little portrait. She removed her feet and took the picture that was lying
on the floor. As I reach the sidewalk, I asked for apology. "Hontouni
Gomennasai." I said. "Can I have the picture back?" I added. She didn't
reply. She kept staring at the picture holding it tightly. "Ano.. do you
know them?" She kept staring still and unmoving. It seems like she was hypnoticed by the picture. Maybe she knows Yusuke? Kuwabara? Or.. Hiei? Maybe, just maybe. "Ano, do you know the in the picture? The one eating the
watermelon? Have you se..." before I could even continue, she replied
abruptly. "Hai." My eyes widened. "Onegai shite mo iidesu ka?." She
asked. "Uh.. ii desu."I replied. "Can you tell me his name?" he said pointing at Hiei. Sparks of hope flickered in my eyes. I knew it. I'll find the little fire demon and maybe this girl might even help me. But why
do I have this strange feeling. I could feel my hands trembling with cold
sweat.
I could feel my heartbeat going wild. 'Am I nervous?' "Ano... He's
name is..Hiei." I replied gradually fighting the uneasy feeling. The
blizzard was starting to get stronger and the people around began going
home emptying the streets. "Onegai shite mo iidesu ka?" she said again
breaking
the stare. "Mochiron desu, demo." She grabbed my wrist and pulled
me. She started running and she was dragging me behind her. 'Where is she taking me?' "Mate! Wakarimasen." She let go of my wrist, looked at me as if
she
wants me to follow her and then she started running. I followed her
until we reached the park. She stopped on a vacant bench and sat down. I stopped and looked at her. We were breathing hard. Exhausted. "Please sit."
She said. I obeyed and sat down. There was an uneasy silence. The trees
swayed as the wind blew. The snow dropped from the paradise above gently.
Children were running throwing snowballs at each other enjoying every
single moment of their youth. The park was starting to empty when they
left.
"Watashi.." we said echoing at each other. "Go on." I whispered. She looked
at me. "Watashi no namae wa Enya desu." I turned to look at her. "O namae
wa nandesu ka?" she continued while looking at the snow covered sakura
tree. "Minamino Shuiichi. O ai deki te ureshii desu." I didn't sound glad when I said that. I know. It's because.. I had the strange feeling again. I
could feel my hands trembling with cold sweat. I could feel my heartbeat going wild. 'Am I nervous?' "Sou, wakari masita...Like I said, I know him."
She continued
Everything stopped.
The time moved slowly.
Everything was covered with fog.
Everyone was living a lie.
*~@~HIEI'S POV~@~*
'I finally reached it.' I looked at a little wooden house. It
looked warm and cozy. Just like what I need, a warm and cozy place. The only warm and cozy place I know is far away from here. Far away and I'm too
afraid to look for it. It was the Kitsune's heart. And it is distant. I
looked at the closed window from the tree. Yukina was cooking supper. Kuwabara was playing with the kids. They look happy. Enjoying their selves
like everybody else does.
'Wait, I'm Jaganshi Hiei. I can satisfy myself. I can be happy too. Satisfy myself my way. I can do anything I desire. And the only thing to do that is to kill that ningen. Kill her. Everything is a fault.. Her fault'. Some one came out of the house. I went to another tree branch slowly and hid myself.
It was Kuwabara. He must've felt my ki. I watched him look around
searching...
searching for me. "Koibito! Supper's ready." Yukina called. "Hai!" he replied. He looked around again, entered the house then closed the door.
Bloodshed.
Revenge.
No one will stop me, no matter what.
*~@~KURAMA'S POV~@~*
"Three days ago, I was walking in the mall. I wanted to buy a new guitar
because my old guitar was broken. While walking I saw him.. I saw Rio and
...he was with another girl. He was cheating. I was aware of that. But I was not ready to accept it. I ran in the middle of the Parade heading home. Not only was my guitar broken, but also my heart...I didn't want anyone to see me shed tears. I couldn't. I tried to forget. I tried hard." Enya said starting to cry. I could see her porcelain tears shatter as it slowly fell from her naked eyes. I took my red handkerchief and gave it to her. 'Why is
she telling me this? What's this got to do with Hiei?' "I ran out of the
crowd until I reached the bus. I rode it and went
to the empty streets. Someone was following me. I had visions that
it was Rio following me maybe he wanted to ask for apology. I was scared.
What if it's not him? I ran and reached home safely. Mom and dad was fighting again so I ran into my room. And I saw someone." She paused for a
while and sighed.
"He had the most beautiful crimson eyes that matched the
moonlight." Her lips parted. She smiled and closed her eyes. "He was the
most beautiful creature I've ever seen. And... and I couldn't believe he
was right there." Enya took the picture out of her pocket and touched Hiei's face. My eyes become a large. 'Iie..' "I embraced him." She went on. "He was warm. And I.." "Yamete." I screamed. I had gone hysterical. I stood
up and shouted at her.
"Stop! What are you talking about?! Are you crazy? Don't say something about Hiei! Hiei would never do that to a complete stranger like
you!" I blurted out hastily. There was uneasy silence again. "Gomen nasai.." She said looking at me confused. There was a glint of light in her
eyes. Why? What was it? Was it guilt? Fear? Hatred? Or.. was it.. happiness? She started again "I've thought no one would attempt to do that
to me. Loved me and gave me everything. He gave me that love even thou I
don't know him." She looked at me. "He gave me everything that night." Tears began to form in my eyes. He gave everything to her that night? "No."
I whispered "He told me he loved me." "No.." I said loudly "He
hugged me and.." "No." I repeated "He kissed me.." It ended there. 'Hiei kissed him? Impossible! Hiei would do that to a complete stranger? He
would do that to a ningen like her? He would do that? Lies!.. this is a
lie!.. Why would I believe her? I don't even know her.' I took a step
backward. "He has this.. tattoo in his right arm. a black dragon.. and he
has this.."
Finally, I set off covering my ears running away. "Mate! Mate!
Where are you going?! Mate!"
"Please.. Please tell me!" she called to me. I stopped. I didn't know why but I stopped. 'Why?' Did I enjoy hearing the torturing words. She already
told me everything. I already know she's telling the truth. Did she enjoy
hurting me? I had to know, so I stopped. "Who are you to him?" she
continued.
Droplets of tears fell from my eyes. "I.. I was..I used to be. to belong.
to.. his.." I whispered to myself. "Mate! I need to know!" she called.
"Please! Onegai!,.Please, tell me!"
The shadows opened their arms widely.
I was lost in a jest.
Lost in the icy flames.
No where to be found.
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BASIC JAPANESE:
Mate kudasai/Mate- Wait
Gomen nasai/Hontouni Gomennasai- I'm Sorry
Onegai shite mo iidesu ka?- Can I ask a favor from you
ii desu- Ok
Mochiron desu-alright
Demo- But
Watashi no namae wa ____ desu- My name is _____.
O namae wa nandesu ka?- What is your name?
O ai deki te ureshii desu- It's nice to meet you
Sou- I see
Wakari masita- I understand
Onegai- Please
Yamete/Yabero/Yamero-Stop/Please Stop
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DISCLAIMER: I DON'T own Yu Yu Hakusho.
AUTHOR: Bame-Chan
NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR: Half my life I've been traveling the world with my mother. I never really enjoyed life much. But now that I'm staying in one permanent place, I will never let go. I'll never leave. I learned a lot of languages and what amused me was Nihongo. I learned basic words and their meanings. I tried them in this fic. Hope you enjoy it. I also apologize for the insubordinate grammars. I hope you understand. Send in reviews so I can improve the story. Love y'all!
PERSONAL RATING: 7/10
GOMEN!...if there are gram-errs & typos. DAIJOBU I'll fix it thou!
Ja Ne!
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TITLE: A WINTER'S TALE
CHAPTER II: Between Us
One last cry
Before I leave it all behind
I gotta put you out of my mind this time
Stop living a lie
I guess I'm down to my last cry
*~@~HIEI'S POV~@~*
The pool was hot & warm. It continuously drowned my body. It erased the loneliness, the blood and the pain.. 'but why do I still feel bad? I killed
a youkai without a single reason. It felt damn good. It contented me, it
pained me. It wasn't the killing or the youkai. It was something else. I was hiding. But why am I hiding? Who am I hiding from?' I stood up and took my clothes. I could feel my insides growl. I knew I was hungry but I didn't
mind it. The hunger could never erase my bemused emotion. The satisfied
hunger could never fix the broken me. I thought for a while. The uncanny stillness made me tremble. 'Maybe I should visit Yukina and her husband to
keep my mind occupied'.
He left Makai.
Without a single trace.
*~@~KURAMA'S POV~@~*
The blue sky was getting darker. The mist was getting thicker. Everything
looked sick and damaged. Maybe not everything. Maybe, just maybe it might be me. I guess I'm sick. Too sick. So sick. I just lost someone special and
it's all because of a stupid mistake. I could kill anyone right now.
It's been days since Hiei left. I searched Makai, but found no fire demon. I asked Koenma if he had seen him, he shook his head in despair. I searched high and low. I kept asking people all over ningenkai if they have seen the boy in the picture. The boy in the picture. My pockets were filled with so
many things. But the most important to me was the moment captured in a
portrait. A picture of 3 young boys eating beside the sandy beach. A blue
haired boy who smiled widely with determination sparkling in his eyes, a funny but fearless boy who clowns around and the one who caught my
attention, the mysterious boy eating watermelons with the annoyed look on
his face. The wind blew and a single tear trickled down my face. It froze
while the snow fell from the scurrying heavens. I wiped my damp face and
started walking until the wind blew hard. The picture I was holding
flew. "Iie!" I shouted. "Mate kudasai!" I ran after it. I remember now. I
passed by the appliance center and the weather man on tv said there would be an incoming blizzard. It flew fast, away from the empty streets into the
crowded vicinity. I followed it not willing to stop. 'I have to get it. I
was determined to. Because. Because. I need to.. or else.'
It fell in the icy sheets of snow on the other side of the road. 'Whew. It
stopped' I sighed in relief. But not relieved enough. I still have to get
it. A young woman was walking on the side walk when she stepped on the
little portrait. She removed her feet and took the picture that was lying
on the floor. As I reach the sidewalk, I asked for apology. "Hontouni
Gomennasai." I said. "Can I have the picture back?" I added. She didn't
reply. She kept staring at the picture holding it tightly. "Ano.. do you
know them?" She kept staring still and unmoving. It seems like she was hypnoticed by the picture. Maybe she knows Yusuke? Kuwabara? Or.. Hiei? Maybe, just maybe. "Ano, do you know the in the picture? The one eating the
watermelon? Have you se..." before I could even continue, she replied
abruptly. "Hai." My eyes widened. "Onegai shite mo iidesu ka?." She
asked. "Uh.. ii desu."I replied. "Can you tell me his name?" he said pointing at Hiei. Sparks of hope flickered in my eyes. I knew it. I'll find the little fire demon and maybe this girl might even help me. But why
do I have this strange feeling. I could feel my hands trembling with cold
sweat.
I could feel my heartbeat going wild. 'Am I nervous?' "Ano... He's
name is..Hiei." I replied gradually fighting the uneasy feeling. The
blizzard was starting to get stronger and the people around began going
home emptying the streets. "Onegai shite mo iidesu ka?" she said again
breaking
the stare. "Mochiron desu, demo." She grabbed my wrist and pulled
me. She started running and she was dragging me behind her. 'Where is she taking me?' "Mate! Wakarimasen." She let go of my wrist, looked at me as if
she
wants me to follow her and then she started running. I followed her
until we reached the park. She stopped on a vacant bench and sat down. I stopped and looked at her. We were breathing hard. Exhausted. "Please sit."
She said. I obeyed and sat down. There was an uneasy silence. The trees
swayed as the wind blew. The snow dropped from the paradise above gently.
Children were running throwing snowballs at each other enjoying every
single moment of their youth. The park was starting to empty when they
left.
"Watashi.." we said echoing at each other. "Go on." I whispered. She looked
at me. "Watashi no namae wa Enya desu." I turned to look at her. "O namae
wa nandesu ka?" she continued while looking at the snow covered sakura
tree. "Minamino Shuiichi. O ai deki te ureshii desu." I didn't sound glad when I said that. I know. It's because.. I had the strange feeling again. I
could feel my hands trembling with cold sweat. I could feel my heartbeat going wild. 'Am I nervous?' "Sou, wakari masita...Like I said, I know him."
She continued
Everything stopped.
The time moved slowly.
Everything was covered with fog.
Everyone was living a lie.
*~@~HIEI'S POV~@~*
'I finally reached it.' I looked at a little wooden house. It
looked warm and cozy. Just like what I need, a warm and cozy place. The only warm and cozy place I know is far away from here. Far away and I'm too
afraid to look for it. It was the Kitsune's heart. And it is distant. I
looked at the closed window from the tree. Yukina was cooking supper. Kuwabara was playing with the kids. They look happy. Enjoying their selves
like everybody else does.
'Wait, I'm Jaganshi Hiei. I can satisfy myself. I can be happy too. Satisfy myself my way. I can do anything I desire. And the only thing to do that is to kill that ningen. Kill her. Everything is a fault.. Her fault'. Some one came out of the house. I went to another tree branch slowly and hid myself.
It was Kuwabara. He must've felt my ki. I watched him look around
searching...
searching for me. "Koibito! Supper's ready." Yukina called. "Hai!" he replied. He looked around again, entered the house then closed the door.
Bloodshed.
Revenge.
No one will stop me, no matter what.
*~@~KURAMA'S POV~@~*
"Three days ago, I was walking in the mall. I wanted to buy a new guitar
because my old guitar was broken. While walking I saw him.. I saw Rio and
...he was with another girl. He was cheating. I was aware of that. But I was not ready to accept it. I ran in the middle of the Parade heading home. Not only was my guitar broken, but also my heart...I didn't want anyone to see me shed tears. I couldn't. I tried to forget. I tried hard." Enya said starting to cry. I could see her porcelain tears shatter as it slowly fell from her naked eyes. I took my red handkerchief and gave it to her. 'Why is
she telling me this? What's this got to do with Hiei?' "I ran out of the
crowd until I reached the bus. I rode it and went
to the empty streets. Someone was following me. I had visions that
it was Rio following me maybe he wanted to ask for apology. I was scared.
What if it's not him? I ran and reached home safely. Mom and dad was fighting again so I ran into my room. And I saw someone." She paused for a
while and sighed.
"He had the most beautiful crimson eyes that matched the
moonlight." Her lips parted. She smiled and closed her eyes. "He was the
most beautiful creature I've ever seen. And... and I couldn't believe he
was right there." Enya took the picture out of her pocket and touched Hiei's face. My eyes become a large. 'Iie..' "I embraced him." She went on. "He was warm. And I.." "Yamete." I screamed. I had gone hysterical. I stood
up and shouted at her.
"Stop! What are you talking about?! Are you crazy? Don't say something about Hiei! Hiei would never do that to a complete stranger like
you!" I blurted out hastily. There was uneasy silence again. "Gomen nasai.." She said looking at me confused. There was a glint of light in her
eyes. Why? What was it? Was it guilt? Fear? Hatred? Or.. was it.. happiness? She started again "I've thought no one would attempt to do that
to me. Loved me and gave me everything. He gave me that love even thou I
don't know him." She looked at me. "He gave me everything that night." Tears began to form in my eyes. He gave everything to her that night? "No."
I whispered "He told me he loved me." "No.." I said loudly "He
hugged me and.." "No." I repeated "He kissed me.." It ended there. 'Hiei kissed him? Impossible! Hiei would do that to a complete stranger? He
would do that to a ningen like her? He would do that? Lies!.. this is a
lie!.. Why would I believe her? I don't even know her.' I took a step
backward. "He has this.. tattoo in his right arm. a black dragon.. and he
has this.."
Finally, I set off covering my ears running away. "Mate! Mate!
Where are you going?! Mate!"
"Please.. Please tell me!" she called to me. I stopped. I didn't know why but I stopped. 'Why?' Did I enjoy hearing the torturing words. She already
told me everything. I already know she's telling the truth. Did she enjoy
hurting me? I had to know, so I stopped. "Who are you to him?" she
continued.
Droplets of tears fell from my eyes. "I.. I was..I used to be. to belong.
to.. his.." I whispered to myself. "Mate! I need to know!" she called.
"Please! Onegai!,.Please, tell me!"
The shadows opened their arms widely.
I was lost in a jest.
Lost in the icy flames.
No where to be found.
*~@~*TO BE CONTINUED*~@~*
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BASIC JAPANESE:
Mate kudasai/Mate- Wait
Gomen nasai/Hontouni Gomennasai- I'm Sorry
Onegai shite mo iidesu ka?- Can I ask a favor from you
ii desu- Ok
Mochiron desu-alright
Demo- But
Watashi no namae wa ____ desu- My name is _____.
O namae wa nandesu ka?- What is your name?
O ai deki te ureshii desu- It's nice to meet you
Sou- I see
Wakari masita- I understand
Onegai- Please
Yamete/Yabero/Yamero-Stop/Please Stop
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