Hi peoples!! This is my VERY FIRST fanfic so please don't be mean!!! I'm
new at this!!!!
Disclaimer: sadly, I do not own Yu Yu hakasho. . :: sniffle:: BUT.. In the future, I plan to make Hiei mine!!! Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! PLZ R/R!!
Story title: to be loved " means speaking" chapter: 1 ' means thinking'
" Hey Yusuke, give me some of your chips!" asked Kuwabara. " no way!" he replied, with a mouth full of potato chips. " these are mine!" "come on Yusuke! I'm hungry!" " would you two shut up about the stupid chips!!" Kieko screamed angrily. Kuwabara and Yusuke sweatdropped nervously. "you two are so childish sometimes!" Kurama and Hiei tried to stifle their laughing with the back of their hand, but failed miserably. " hey! What are you laughing at shorty!" Kuwabara yelled, pointing to Hiei. Hiei snorted. " I'm laughing at the fact that you were just told off by a girl, baka!" " why you little punk! When I get my hands on you I'm gonna-" " hn. I'd like to see you try, KuwaBAKA!" Boton, Yukina, and Keiko sighed. " we are NEVER gonna get out of this forest, at the rate we're going!" Boton mumbled, her head In her hands.
"Hey guys!" Kurama suddenly yelled. " theirs something in that tree!" Hiei looked up at the tree he was standing under to see the branches move. With a surprised yell, someone fell out of the tree and on top of him.
" Oh my! I'm so sorry! Did I hurt you!?" asked the girl, now sitting on Hiei's stomach. " I'm fine" he grunted. " my name is Nina. What's yours?" " I'm..." Hiei stopped. When Nina fell on him, he didn't really get a good look at her, because it was so sudden. But now he saw how cute she was. 'wow' Hiei thought. 'she's cute! Wait a minute..did I just say she was cute?! What wrong with me?! I HATE girls, especially ningens, so what makes this one ant different? Oh God! I'm staring at her! Why cant I take my eyes off her? Hn. Kurama's right. I AM getting soft.' Nina was short, like him. And she was wearing a purple tank top, and blue caprice. She had shoulder length light brow hair, and she had the most beautiful eyes. Her pretty violet eyes shone in the sunlight, and had a sortta transparent look in them. She had the kind of eyes that looked like they could stare straight through you and Into your soul.
" I'm sorry. I didn't hear you, what did you say your name was?" asked Nina. Hiei quickly cast his eyes down, embarresed that he had been staring at her. " Hiei. My name is Hiei" he answered, flushing a light shade of pink. Hiei stood up, and helped Nina to her feet. He continued to stare at the ground, AND he continued to blush. ( a/n: I LOOVE it when Hiei blushes!! ^_^) " hi! I'm Boton!" said Boton. " These are my friends Yusuke, Kuwabara, Keiko, Kurama, and Yukina" "hi!" they all chorused. " what were you doing in that tree?" Yukina asked, giggling. "oh!" said Nina embarresed, " I was just sitting up their and thinking!"
" how did you get all the way up there? That tree is huge!" Kuwabara exclaimed. " she FLEW to the top of the tree Kuwabara!" Yusuke said sarcastically. " how do you think she got up there, baka!" " you could of killed your self if Hiei wasn't standing there!" Keiko said. " yes, arigato for catching me Hiei!" Nina turned and smiled at him, he smirked back. " whatever" he rolled his eyes.
"so..what are you guys doing so far in the woods?" Nina asked Kurama politely. " well.actually, we're lost" he answered scratching the back of his head. Nina sweatdropped and fell over, anime style. " if we ever manage to find the nearest town, we gotta find a hotel" Yusuke added. " Hotel? My dad owns one! You can stay with us!" Nina said standing up. " and, since Hiei saved me.you guys can stay free of charge!" " that is very kind of you" Kurama said, bowing his head. " great! Can we go now? I'm getting hungry!" Yusuke said, rubbing his stomach. " HUNGRY!? How can you be hungry!? You just ate a whole bag of potato chips!!!!" Kuwabara screamed angrily. Nina giggled. " c'mon guys, this way!" she pointed towards a dirt path a few yards away." ARE YOU TELLING US THE PATH WAS RIGHT THERE THE WHOLE TIME!" they all screamed, except Hiei and Boton. They all turned to glare at Boton, who had a rather large sweatdrop. " heh heh heh, oopps? I guess I read the map wrong!" she handed the map to Kurama. " Boton, this is a map of Adventure land" they all fell over in disbelief.
After a few minutes of yelling at Boton, the group finally set off to find town, with their new friend Nina, leading the way. " why is Hiei so quiet?" Nina asked Boton and the other girls, who were walking a little ahead of the group. " Hiei? He is kinda distant from the rest of us, and he doesn't like to talk much." Unless he is yelling at Kuwabara" Yukina added. " Hiei is kinda cute!" giggled Nina. " cute!? That arrogant little brat is ANYTHING but cute" said Boton. " he is not good enough for such an attractive, smart, funny person as you" "oh" Nina said sadly, as she looked at the short spiky haired boy who was walking apart from the rest of the group.
YAY!!!!!! I finished the first chapter!!!!! ^_^ so what do you think? Good? Bad? PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you happen to find ant spelling errors in my fic plz e-mail me!!! I am also open to suggestions for my story!!
e-mails~~~ jplove@optonline.net and chibbifireyoukai@myway.com
Disclaimer: sadly, I do not own Yu Yu hakasho. . :: sniffle:: BUT.. In the future, I plan to make Hiei mine!!! Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! PLZ R/R!!
Story title: to be loved " means speaking" chapter: 1 ' means thinking'
" Hey Yusuke, give me some of your chips!" asked Kuwabara. " no way!" he replied, with a mouth full of potato chips. " these are mine!" "come on Yusuke! I'm hungry!" " would you two shut up about the stupid chips!!" Kieko screamed angrily. Kuwabara and Yusuke sweatdropped nervously. "you two are so childish sometimes!" Kurama and Hiei tried to stifle their laughing with the back of their hand, but failed miserably. " hey! What are you laughing at shorty!" Kuwabara yelled, pointing to Hiei. Hiei snorted. " I'm laughing at the fact that you were just told off by a girl, baka!" " why you little punk! When I get my hands on you I'm gonna-" " hn. I'd like to see you try, KuwaBAKA!" Boton, Yukina, and Keiko sighed. " we are NEVER gonna get out of this forest, at the rate we're going!" Boton mumbled, her head In her hands.
"Hey guys!" Kurama suddenly yelled. " theirs something in that tree!" Hiei looked up at the tree he was standing under to see the branches move. With a surprised yell, someone fell out of the tree and on top of him.
" Oh my! I'm so sorry! Did I hurt you!?" asked the girl, now sitting on Hiei's stomach. " I'm fine" he grunted. " my name is Nina. What's yours?" " I'm..." Hiei stopped. When Nina fell on him, he didn't really get a good look at her, because it was so sudden. But now he saw how cute she was. 'wow' Hiei thought. 'she's cute! Wait a minute..did I just say she was cute?! What wrong with me?! I HATE girls, especially ningens, so what makes this one ant different? Oh God! I'm staring at her! Why cant I take my eyes off her? Hn. Kurama's right. I AM getting soft.' Nina was short, like him. And she was wearing a purple tank top, and blue caprice. She had shoulder length light brow hair, and she had the most beautiful eyes. Her pretty violet eyes shone in the sunlight, and had a sortta transparent look in them. She had the kind of eyes that looked like they could stare straight through you and Into your soul.
" I'm sorry. I didn't hear you, what did you say your name was?" asked Nina. Hiei quickly cast his eyes down, embarresed that he had been staring at her. " Hiei. My name is Hiei" he answered, flushing a light shade of pink. Hiei stood up, and helped Nina to her feet. He continued to stare at the ground, AND he continued to blush. ( a/n: I LOOVE it when Hiei blushes!! ^_^) " hi! I'm Boton!" said Boton. " These are my friends Yusuke, Kuwabara, Keiko, Kurama, and Yukina" "hi!" they all chorused. " what were you doing in that tree?" Yukina asked, giggling. "oh!" said Nina embarresed, " I was just sitting up their and thinking!"
" how did you get all the way up there? That tree is huge!" Kuwabara exclaimed. " she FLEW to the top of the tree Kuwabara!" Yusuke said sarcastically. " how do you think she got up there, baka!" " you could of killed your self if Hiei wasn't standing there!" Keiko said. " yes, arigato for catching me Hiei!" Nina turned and smiled at him, he smirked back. " whatever" he rolled his eyes.
"so..what are you guys doing so far in the woods?" Nina asked Kurama politely. " well.actually, we're lost" he answered scratching the back of his head. Nina sweatdropped and fell over, anime style. " if we ever manage to find the nearest town, we gotta find a hotel" Yusuke added. " Hotel? My dad owns one! You can stay with us!" Nina said standing up. " and, since Hiei saved me.you guys can stay free of charge!" " that is very kind of you" Kurama said, bowing his head. " great! Can we go now? I'm getting hungry!" Yusuke said, rubbing his stomach. " HUNGRY!? How can you be hungry!? You just ate a whole bag of potato chips!!!!" Kuwabara screamed angrily. Nina giggled. " c'mon guys, this way!" she pointed towards a dirt path a few yards away." ARE YOU TELLING US THE PATH WAS RIGHT THERE THE WHOLE TIME!" they all screamed, except Hiei and Boton. They all turned to glare at Boton, who had a rather large sweatdrop. " heh heh heh, oopps? I guess I read the map wrong!" she handed the map to Kurama. " Boton, this is a map of Adventure land" they all fell over in disbelief.
After a few minutes of yelling at Boton, the group finally set off to find town, with their new friend Nina, leading the way. " why is Hiei so quiet?" Nina asked Boton and the other girls, who were walking a little ahead of the group. " Hiei? He is kinda distant from the rest of us, and he doesn't like to talk much." Unless he is yelling at Kuwabara" Yukina added. " Hiei is kinda cute!" giggled Nina. " cute!? That arrogant little brat is ANYTHING but cute" said Boton. " he is not good enough for such an attractive, smart, funny person as you" "oh" Nina said sadly, as she looked at the short spiky haired boy who was walking apart from the rest of the group.
YAY!!!!!! I finished the first chapter!!!!! ^_^ so what do you think? Good? Bad? PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you happen to find ant spelling errors in my fic plz e-mail me!!! I am also open to suggestions for my story!!
e-mails~~~ jplove@optonline.net and chibbifireyoukai@myway.com