Hi people!! Even though no one seems to like this fic, except 2 VERY NICE
PEOPLE, I'm gonna write the next chapter. Actually, I've written the whole
story already, I'm just deciding whether I should change it or add more.
^_^;; I really HATE doing the disclaimer, so I brought Kuwabara here to do
it!
Kuwabara: fire goddess doesn't own anything!
Me: that's not true! I own my socks!! I also own Nina. ( ever notice that in all my fics the main female character's name begins with N?) that's your clue to go read my other fics!!
Kuwabara: can I go now?
Me: yes you can. *give him a cookie* this is for helping me ^^
Kuwabara: ^^ oo0o0o0hh!! Cookie!
Chapter 2
" Here we are!" Nina said happily as they arrived at the hotel. " wow" they responded. " this place is huge!" Kuwabara exclaimed. " c'mon, I'll show you around" Nina said. " over there is the lounge, that room is the dining room, that path leads to the pool, and that building is my own private dojo"
" your dojo? You fight?" Kurama asked her. " yeah, I have been ever since I was young" she replied.
" that's impressive" Hiei muttered to no one in particular.
" judging by your katana, you guys fight to" Nina said eyeing Hiei's sword. " after I show you your rooms, how bout you and me spar, Hiei?"
Hiei snorted. " why should I waste my time? Your probably not even that good"
Nina frowned slightly, bit it quickly turned into a sly smile. " your just afraid to fight me, cause you know I'll win!" Hiei glared at her. " I'm not afraid of you!"
" yeah, sure your not" she said sarcastically. Hiei was starting to get angry. " fine! I'll spar with you, but I will not be held responsible for whatever damage I may do"
Nina smiled sweetly at Hiei, causing him to feel a slight pain in his chest. ' what's that all about?' he asked himself. ' what a weird feeling. I wonder what it means?'
So Nina walked them to their rooms. " you guys are lucky, we only have 4 rooms left! 3 of the rooms are for two people, and the last one is a single. I hope that's not a problem?" she asked her new friends. " nope! Me and Keiko will take this one" Yusuke said grabbing her hand. Keiko quickly snatched her hand back. " Yusuke!" she said blushing slightly. " oh come on Keiko! You Know you wanna!" Yusuke said slyly, his eyebrows raising up and down. Keiko sighed, defeated. " oh, ok" Keiko walked into their room, closely followed by Yusuke, who was giving the thumbs up sign to Kuwabara and Kurama.
As soon as the door shut they heard a loud CRASH. " Yusuke you baka!!!" Keiko screamed angrily. Outside their room, Nina, Boton, Kurama, Kuwabara, Hiei, and Yukina sweatdropped.
" he'll never learn.." Kurama muttered to Kuwabara who nodded.
" ooooookkaay! Me and Yukina will take this one!" Boton said pushing Yukina towards the door. Kuwabara looked disappointed t see her go, but he quickly snapped out of it.
" I guess that means your bunking with me Kurama!" he said slapping Kurama hard on the back. " I guess so" he muttered, trying to keep his balance. " that means Hiei gets the single. Is that ok with you Hiei?" Nina turned to ask the boy, but he was gone.
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" I wonder if the boys are already at the dojo?" Yukina wondered out loud. Yukina, Boton, Keiko, and Nina were in Nina's garden waking towards the dojo. " you know how they are!" Keiko laughed. " there probably already tying to cut each others heads off!"
" Nina?" Boton asked. " yeah?" " are you sure you wanna fight Hiei?" Nina stared at her friend. "yeah, why?" Boton looked very uneasy. " well, it's just that. Hiei is really good with his sword. And I have a feeling that when he said he wouldn't be responsible for whatever damage he may inflict on you, he was being serious. You could get severely hurt!"
Nina frowned and looked away. "you don't think I can beat him do you?" Boton looked to Keiko for help. "we think you can do it, it's just, you made Hiei really mad! And when Hiei's mad. people die!" Nina sweatdropped. " riiiight. Don't worry! I can take care of my self"
As the girls walked into the dojo, thy could already hear the sound of clashing swords. Hiei and Kuwabara were in a fierce battle. Hiei was running around Kuwabara faster and faster, trying to confuse him suddenly Kuwabara looked up and noticed Yukina watching him, smiling encouragingly. He instantly turned red. "Yukina!" he shouted, waving his hands like an idiot. "I'll be over in second my darling!" it's a pity the came in at that moment. When Kuwabara noticed Yukina, that gave Hiei just enough time to trip Kuwabara, and make him fall flat on his face.
" I win!" Hiei said in a victorious voice, but no one was around to here him. Kuwabara had already run over to Yukina.
" oh Yukina!" Kuwabara whined in a squeaky voice. " I'm sorry I didn't win! I was distracted by your beauty!" Yukina giggled. " aw, Kuwabara! That's so sweet!" " give me a break" Hiei muttered to him self.
" hey Hiei! Are you ready to fight me?" Nina yelled over to him. " or are you tired from fighting Kuwabara?"
" hn. That idiot wasn't even a challenge. Now the real fight begins" Hiei smirked. Nina unsheathed her Katana, and stepped onto the fighting mat. She was wearing a red tank top, and blank pants that hung loose on her hips. Her hair was in a low pony tail.
" are you sure you wanna do this?" Hiei asked smirking. ' it would be a shame if I injured such a sexy body..woa! where the hell did that come from?! Well it's true, I guess. She looks good in that low cut tank top.ok stop staring at her. Still not stopping. Still not stopping! Oh, screw this! Lets fight already! Nina smiled at him. " of course I am! I'm no afraid of you!"
" fine. Don't say I didn't warn you!" with that last statement, Hiei jumped clear over her head. With incredible speed, Nina turned and met his blade. Hiei swung left and right, but Nina dodged all of hiss attacks with amazing skill.
In the audience, they were all dumbstruck. " go Nina!" Boton and Keiko cheered. " I had no idea girls could fight like that!" Yusuke said scratching his head. Boton and Keiko glared at him. "what do you mean you didn't know girls could fight like that?!" they asked. " all I'm saying is, girls usually aren't tough enough to fight. They usually are the ones being saved, or screaming in fear" Yusuke said crossing his arms.
" bad move Yusuke" Kurama muttered to him. The two looked very pissed at this comment. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?! HOW MANY TIME HAVE WE SMACKED YOU, OR HIT YOU OVER THE HEAD?! WE CAN SO FIGHT!" they screamed in his face.
Yusuke sweatdropped, and inched back a few steps. " stupid women.." He muttered. Boton, Keiko, and even Yukina slapped him upside the head. " OOOOWWW!!! Why'd you do that?" " we did it because it was uncalled for!" they screamed. " hey guys! Why don't we pay attention to the fight now?" Kuwabara suggested.
Hiei jumped, Nina jumped, and their swords met in mid air. Hiei was stronger, so he was able to push her blade to the side, causing Nina to loose her balance. But in one swift movement, she was able to regain it, and tripped Hiei instead. Hiei fell, but as he did, he swung his katana into hers, causing her to fall on top of him. They stared at each other, panting hard, their swords to far to reach.
" hey Nina?" Hiei said. "we gotta stop meeting like this" Nina looked into his crimson eyes, and laughed. She rolled off of him and they both started to laugh hysterically. As they were laughing. A lock of Nina's brown hair fell out of her pony tail. With out thinking, Hiei reached out and pulled it behind her ear. Nina smiled at him, causing Hiei to feel warmth through out his body. He grinned and blushed a little. They both burst out laughing again.
On the other side of the room, the group of friends were confused. " Hiei? Laughing? I don't think I've ever seen Hiei laugh before" Yusuke said, amazed at what he had just seen. " what did he whisper to her?" Boton asked curiously. " oh my God! Guys, look at the way he is staring at her! I think he likes her!"
" Hiei? Like a girl? A NINGEN girl?! Furana na!" shouted Kuwabara. While they were talking, Hiei and Nina had retrieved their swords and were walking towards them. " wow Hiei! I had no idea you were so good with a sword!" Nina was saying to him. Hiei smirked. " I hate to admit it, but your not half bad your self" Nina nudged him playfully. " oh Hiei" he nudged her back.
" Hiei and Nina sitting in a tree!!! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!!" Yusuke and Kuwabara were singing. Hiei turned a light shade of crimson. " shut up!" he shouted. " first comes love, than comes marriage, than comes Hiei with the baby carriage!!" Hiei unsheathed his katana and held it at Kuwabara's chin. " shut up or I'll rip your tongue out! He screamed angrily. " woa!!!! We were just joking! Now put that thing away before you poke someone's eye out!" Yusuke said, slowly pushing the blade away from Kuwabara head with the tip of his finger. " yeah, relax Hiei!" Nina said calmly, putting a hand on his shoulder. He shrugged her hand away and swiftly leapt out of one of the dojo's open windows.
" wow Nina! You were amazing! I cant believe I ever doubted your fighting skills!" Keiko said happily. ´I was so afraid for you, I'm glad you didn't get hurt!" Yukina sighed. " what did Hiei whisper to you when you guys were lying on the ground?!" Boton asked excitedly, pushing the two other girls out of her way. " nothing important" Nina sighed sadly, gazing out the open window.
Ok, that was the second chapter! Wasn't that one of the most corny things you ever read in your life?! This had a lot of Hiei oocness. Even though no one seems to like this fic, I will complete it because my conscience will drive me crazy if I don't!!! I hope you guys liked it. ^_____^
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!! See, I'm begging!!!!!! ^^;;
p.s. furana na means impossible, in case any one was wondering.
Kuwabara: fire goddess doesn't own anything!
Me: that's not true! I own my socks!! I also own Nina. ( ever notice that in all my fics the main female character's name begins with N?) that's your clue to go read my other fics!!
Kuwabara: can I go now?
Me: yes you can. *give him a cookie* this is for helping me ^^
Kuwabara: ^^ oo0o0o0hh!! Cookie!
Chapter 2
" Here we are!" Nina said happily as they arrived at the hotel. " wow" they responded. " this place is huge!" Kuwabara exclaimed. " c'mon, I'll show you around" Nina said. " over there is the lounge, that room is the dining room, that path leads to the pool, and that building is my own private dojo"
" your dojo? You fight?" Kurama asked her. " yeah, I have been ever since I was young" she replied.
" that's impressive" Hiei muttered to no one in particular.
" judging by your katana, you guys fight to" Nina said eyeing Hiei's sword. " after I show you your rooms, how bout you and me spar, Hiei?"
Hiei snorted. " why should I waste my time? Your probably not even that good"
Nina frowned slightly, bit it quickly turned into a sly smile. " your just afraid to fight me, cause you know I'll win!" Hiei glared at her. " I'm not afraid of you!"
" yeah, sure your not" she said sarcastically. Hiei was starting to get angry. " fine! I'll spar with you, but I will not be held responsible for whatever damage I may do"
Nina smiled sweetly at Hiei, causing him to feel a slight pain in his chest. ' what's that all about?' he asked himself. ' what a weird feeling. I wonder what it means?'
So Nina walked them to their rooms. " you guys are lucky, we only have 4 rooms left! 3 of the rooms are for two people, and the last one is a single. I hope that's not a problem?" she asked her new friends. " nope! Me and Keiko will take this one" Yusuke said grabbing her hand. Keiko quickly snatched her hand back. " Yusuke!" she said blushing slightly. " oh come on Keiko! You Know you wanna!" Yusuke said slyly, his eyebrows raising up and down. Keiko sighed, defeated. " oh, ok" Keiko walked into their room, closely followed by Yusuke, who was giving the thumbs up sign to Kuwabara and Kurama.
As soon as the door shut they heard a loud CRASH. " Yusuke you baka!!!" Keiko screamed angrily. Outside their room, Nina, Boton, Kurama, Kuwabara, Hiei, and Yukina sweatdropped.
" he'll never learn.." Kurama muttered to Kuwabara who nodded.
" ooooookkaay! Me and Yukina will take this one!" Boton said pushing Yukina towards the door. Kuwabara looked disappointed t see her go, but he quickly snapped out of it.
" I guess that means your bunking with me Kurama!" he said slapping Kurama hard on the back. " I guess so" he muttered, trying to keep his balance. " that means Hiei gets the single. Is that ok with you Hiei?" Nina turned to ask the boy, but he was gone.
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" I wonder if the boys are already at the dojo?" Yukina wondered out loud. Yukina, Boton, Keiko, and Nina were in Nina's garden waking towards the dojo. " you know how they are!" Keiko laughed. " there probably already tying to cut each others heads off!"
" Nina?" Boton asked. " yeah?" " are you sure you wanna fight Hiei?" Nina stared at her friend. "yeah, why?" Boton looked very uneasy. " well, it's just that. Hiei is really good with his sword. And I have a feeling that when he said he wouldn't be responsible for whatever damage he may inflict on you, he was being serious. You could get severely hurt!"
Nina frowned and looked away. "you don't think I can beat him do you?" Boton looked to Keiko for help. "we think you can do it, it's just, you made Hiei really mad! And when Hiei's mad. people die!" Nina sweatdropped. " riiiight. Don't worry! I can take care of my self"
As the girls walked into the dojo, thy could already hear the sound of clashing swords. Hiei and Kuwabara were in a fierce battle. Hiei was running around Kuwabara faster and faster, trying to confuse him suddenly Kuwabara looked up and noticed Yukina watching him, smiling encouragingly. He instantly turned red. "Yukina!" he shouted, waving his hands like an idiot. "I'll be over in second my darling!" it's a pity the came in at that moment. When Kuwabara noticed Yukina, that gave Hiei just enough time to trip Kuwabara, and make him fall flat on his face.
" I win!" Hiei said in a victorious voice, but no one was around to here him. Kuwabara had already run over to Yukina.
" oh Yukina!" Kuwabara whined in a squeaky voice. " I'm sorry I didn't win! I was distracted by your beauty!" Yukina giggled. " aw, Kuwabara! That's so sweet!" " give me a break" Hiei muttered to him self.
" hey Hiei! Are you ready to fight me?" Nina yelled over to him. " or are you tired from fighting Kuwabara?"
" hn. That idiot wasn't even a challenge. Now the real fight begins" Hiei smirked. Nina unsheathed her Katana, and stepped onto the fighting mat. She was wearing a red tank top, and blank pants that hung loose on her hips. Her hair was in a low pony tail.
" are you sure you wanna do this?" Hiei asked smirking. ' it would be a shame if I injured such a sexy body..woa! where the hell did that come from?! Well it's true, I guess. She looks good in that low cut tank top.ok stop staring at her. Still not stopping. Still not stopping! Oh, screw this! Lets fight already! Nina smiled at him. " of course I am! I'm no afraid of you!"
" fine. Don't say I didn't warn you!" with that last statement, Hiei jumped clear over her head. With incredible speed, Nina turned and met his blade. Hiei swung left and right, but Nina dodged all of hiss attacks with amazing skill.
In the audience, they were all dumbstruck. " go Nina!" Boton and Keiko cheered. " I had no idea girls could fight like that!" Yusuke said scratching his head. Boton and Keiko glared at him. "what do you mean you didn't know girls could fight like that?!" they asked. " all I'm saying is, girls usually aren't tough enough to fight. They usually are the ones being saved, or screaming in fear" Yusuke said crossing his arms.
" bad move Yusuke" Kurama muttered to him. The two looked very pissed at this comment. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?! HOW MANY TIME HAVE WE SMACKED YOU, OR HIT YOU OVER THE HEAD?! WE CAN SO FIGHT!" they screamed in his face.
Yusuke sweatdropped, and inched back a few steps. " stupid women.." He muttered. Boton, Keiko, and even Yukina slapped him upside the head. " OOOOWWW!!! Why'd you do that?" " we did it because it was uncalled for!" they screamed. " hey guys! Why don't we pay attention to the fight now?" Kuwabara suggested.
Hiei jumped, Nina jumped, and their swords met in mid air. Hiei was stronger, so he was able to push her blade to the side, causing Nina to loose her balance. But in one swift movement, she was able to regain it, and tripped Hiei instead. Hiei fell, but as he did, he swung his katana into hers, causing her to fall on top of him. They stared at each other, panting hard, their swords to far to reach.
" hey Nina?" Hiei said. "we gotta stop meeting like this" Nina looked into his crimson eyes, and laughed. She rolled off of him and they both started to laugh hysterically. As they were laughing. A lock of Nina's brown hair fell out of her pony tail. With out thinking, Hiei reached out and pulled it behind her ear. Nina smiled at him, causing Hiei to feel warmth through out his body. He grinned and blushed a little. They both burst out laughing again.
On the other side of the room, the group of friends were confused. " Hiei? Laughing? I don't think I've ever seen Hiei laugh before" Yusuke said, amazed at what he had just seen. " what did he whisper to her?" Boton asked curiously. " oh my God! Guys, look at the way he is staring at her! I think he likes her!"
" Hiei? Like a girl? A NINGEN girl?! Furana na!" shouted Kuwabara. While they were talking, Hiei and Nina had retrieved their swords and were walking towards them. " wow Hiei! I had no idea you were so good with a sword!" Nina was saying to him. Hiei smirked. " I hate to admit it, but your not half bad your self" Nina nudged him playfully. " oh Hiei" he nudged her back.
" Hiei and Nina sitting in a tree!!! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!!" Yusuke and Kuwabara were singing. Hiei turned a light shade of crimson. " shut up!" he shouted. " first comes love, than comes marriage, than comes Hiei with the baby carriage!!" Hiei unsheathed his katana and held it at Kuwabara's chin. " shut up or I'll rip your tongue out! He screamed angrily. " woa!!!! We were just joking! Now put that thing away before you poke someone's eye out!" Yusuke said, slowly pushing the blade away from Kuwabara head with the tip of his finger. " yeah, relax Hiei!" Nina said calmly, putting a hand on his shoulder. He shrugged her hand away and swiftly leapt out of one of the dojo's open windows.
" wow Nina! You were amazing! I cant believe I ever doubted your fighting skills!" Keiko said happily. ´I was so afraid for you, I'm glad you didn't get hurt!" Yukina sighed. " what did Hiei whisper to you when you guys were lying on the ground?!" Boton asked excitedly, pushing the two other girls out of her way. " nothing important" Nina sighed sadly, gazing out the open window.
Ok, that was the second chapter! Wasn't that one of the most corny things you ever read in your life?! This had a lot of Hiei oocness. Even though no one seems to like this fic, I will complete it because my conscience will drive me crazy if I don't!!! I hope you guys liked it. ^_____^
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!! See, I'm begging!!!!!! ^^;;
p.s. furana na means impossible, in case any one was wondering.