Hello there reviewers. Although I only have 3 reviews for this story, I have some things to say. First off, thank you so much to the two who decided to post anonymously. It was about time something made me laugh. Thanks for the comic relief. Now, onto my comments.
JadeNeko-Juroku
Thanks. But then again, why would you say something bad about it? ^_^
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ZLP
Yes, the one who so graciously gave me the laughing fit. I understand that in order for me to write a successful GW story, I would need to watch the series. But alas, I don't like anime and therefore, it was my intention to make the characters as transparent as I could. Thank you for telling me it's one of the worst fics you've ever read. You don't know how much that means to me. Aww, you're so sweet. Oh, and another thing, I don't read much on Fanfiction.net either. In fact, I barely come to this site. Why you may ask? Well, that's because of such boring fics that are mostly Harry Potter or freakin' anime. And then there's the anonymous reviewers like you.
By the way, I won't WASTE (remember, spelling WASTE like waist is wrong. It made me think of clothing. Tsk tsk) my time writing anymore.
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mike
Yes, the anonymous who actually gave me a real name of some sort that sounds like it's from earth and not some unknown planet. But then again, it may not even be your real name. Okay, first off, ZLP made it clear to me that it is boring. And like I said before, I'm aware. I intended for it to be. Oooh, and a whole new level of being boring! Please, give me some time to celebrate this. If you knew me, you would know I am a boring person. Too bad for you, you had to read the story to find that out. It's okay, because you wasted time, not me.
And also, it is a story about kidnapping and revenge, but a boring one, remember? So I don't want to see you complaining anymore. Besides, no one let's me get past the freakin' beginning of the story. Maybe you should have read my first version. It was much more exciting, I assure you. And they're not at a garden party. They're in a lab. I don't know if you maybe misunderstood my oh-so easy-to-interpret writing, but I'm pretty sure I mentioned the word laboratory more than once. Maybe you need to get out some more, because it seems to me that you have your mind set on the great outdoors.
I'm also glad you spent some time to think of ways to improve my story. I'm also happy that you thought of none. Just shows that there's another boring person who isn't creative. We're so much alike. I wrote this piece of shit story and even I could think of ways to fix it. But alas, I won't for the sake of being boring.
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So thank you Big Three. I'm very happy to know that I have the ability to spell correctly and even identify the right word I'm trying to think of. I'm also excited that I can bore people, and that I'm more creative than some, who actually spend their time thinking of how to help me. You two anonymous souls are so sweet. You're going to make me cry now...well, not really. By the way, why did you review anonymously? Do you even write? This reminds me why I usually don't accept anonymous reviews. Such silly children.
And just to make you dance for joy, I will not be writing anymore. Besides, I think the first three chapters are boring enough to help all of your insomniatic problems. Get some sleep and stop trying to pick up on young girls.
JadeNeko-Juroku
Thanks. But then again, why would you say something bad about it? ^_^
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ZLP
Yes, the one who so graciously gave me the laughing fit. I understand that in order for me to write a successful GW story, I would need to watch the series. But alas, I don't like anime and therefore, it was my intention to make the characters as transparent as I could. Thank you for telling me it's one of the worst fics you've ever read. You don't know how much that means to me. Aww, you're so sweet. Oh, and another thing, I don't read much on Fanfiction.net either. In fact, I barely come to this site. Why you may ask? Well, that's because of such boring fics that are mostly Harry Potter or freakin' anime. And then there's the anonymous reviewers like you.
By the way, I won't WASTE (remember, spelling WASTE like waist is wrong. It made me think of clothing. Tsk tsk) my time writing anymore.
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mike
Yes, the anonymous who actually gave me a real name of some sort that sounds like it's from earth and not some unknown planet. But then again, it may not even be your real name. Okay, first off, ZLP made it clear to me that it is boring. And like I said before, I'm aware. I intended for it to be. Oooh, and a whole new level of being boring! Please, give me some time to celebrate this. If you knew me, you would know I am a boring person. Too bad for you, you had to read the story to find that out. It's okay, because you wasted time, not me.
And also, it is a story about kidnapping and revenge, but a boring one, remember? So I don't want to see you complaining anymore. Besides, no one let's me get past the freakin' beginning of the story. Maybe you should have read my first version. It was much more exciting, I assure you. And they're not at a garden party. They're in a lab. I don't know if you maybe misunderstood my oh-so easy-to-interpret writing, but I'm pretty sure I mentioned the word laboratory more than once. Maybe you need to get out some more, because it seems to me that you have your mind set on the great outdoors.
I'm also glad you spent some time to think of ways to improve my story. I'm also happy that you thought of none. Just shows that there's another boring person who isn't creative. We're so much alike. I wrote this piece of shit story and even I could think of ways to fix it. But alas, I won't for the sake of being boring.
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So thank you Big Three. I'm very happy to know that I have the ability to spell correctly and even identify the right word I'm trying to think of. I'm also excited that I can bore people, and that I'm more creative than some, who actually spend their time thinking of how to help me. You two anonymous souls are so sweet. You're going to make me cry now...well, not really. By the way, why did you review anonymously? Do you even write? This reminds me why I usually don't accept anonymous reviews. Such silly children.
And just to make you dance for joy, I will not be writing anymore. Besides, I think the first three chapters are boring enough to help all of your insomniatic problems. Get some sleep and stop trying to pick up on young girls.