Ch. 1 Kagome's Lost Soul

Inu Yasha : Kagome. . .I think we both know that me and . . that is . . .it's complicated.

Inu Yasha is holding Kagome by the waist. The sun was setting, the air blew through Kagome's long black hair. She looked up at Inu Yasha as he looked down lovingly at her.

Kagome : Inu Yasha. . I know it's complicated, but can't we try to make it work?

Inu Yasha : . . .*looks at her nervously*. .looks like I have no choice, Kagome. . .

*Inu Yasha bends down to give Kagome a kiss and. . .* *Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep!- Kagome's hand searched for the button to stop the alarm. . .*

Kagome thinking : There it is, finally! peace and quiet. . .

!Suddenly!

-Inu Yasha barges in to Kagome's room and begins to ONCE AGAIN annoy her-

Inu Yasha : C'mon Kagome! Wake up already. . .people from your time sure do sleep alot. . .

*Kagome jumps out of bed and looks up at Inu Yasha*

Kagome : I don't know if you can do this at the Feudal Era, but in my time, guys don't barge in a ladies bedroom. . now. . .

*anime big face/shout*

Kagome : . . .GET OUT!!!!!!!!!!....

*She pushes Inu Yasha out the door*

Kagome : Go wait downstairs!!! And I WILL take my time. . .GO!

-Inu Yasha looks down being so embarassed that Kagome's entire family just saw Kagome get mad at him-

-Inu Yasha walks downstairs-

Kagome : (sweetly) Oh! And Inu Yasha. . .

-Inu Yasha looks at her wondering, when. . .-

Kagome : SIT! SIT! SIT!

-Inu Yasha falls on his butt sliding all the way to the first floor he walks out the backdoor and is now walking towards the well-
-He kicks the rocks he passes by while his hand inside his red kimono-

Inu Yasha : (thinking) Kagome thinks she's all that. . . (shouts) Well your NOT!!!!
*flash flash flash*

-Kagome and Inu Yasha are now going through the other side of the well. -The Feudal Era-

Kagome : (thinking) *Maybe I should apologize to him, he was after all getting me.*

Kagome : Inu Yasha. . .I'm sor-

-Kagome falls to the ground grabbing her waist.-

Inu Yasha : Kagome! What's the hold up?!?

-He realises that Kagome was sick, so he ran over to her and knelt beside her.-

Kagome : Auugggh!!! -screaming/moaning in pain-

-Some of her souls began to get out of her-

The Inu Yasha team -Sango, Miroku, and Shippou joins Inu Yasha.-

Shippou : What's wrong with Kagome?

-Everyone looks at Kagome-

-Inu Yasha : (still kneeling beside) Kagome, what is it?!?!?!

-Kagome faints and falls on Inu Yasha-

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Story by : Erika M. P. (not sure if she wan'ts to tell you her whole name)

So what did you think? This was my friend's first fanfic ever and I think it's great! Erika!!! It is a REQUIREMENT for you NOT to quit!!!!! YOU CAN'T QUIT!!! Giving up is easy! Everyone! Please review to motivate her!! NO flames aloud! If you flame I will kick your end! heheheh. Arigatou. ~Adi~