i've got the 2nd chapter written for my fic..i'd say it's pretty good. dunno. you tell me. Shadow's Life chap. 2 Oh yeah. I like this. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Shadow's P.O.V A human. A HUMAN. Why was a HUMAN in MY forest?! I looked up at him, baring my teeth and growling softly. If he stayed here long enough he might hear me talk. That's right, I can talk. Immortals can do almost anything. Now all I need to do is learn how to breathe underwater. The human looked at the bird, then at me, then my wings. Yeah, I have blood red dragon wings. I could sense his fear and curiousity. He looked like he was around his teens...hmf. I didn't really care, I was still thinking about why he was still in my forest, and why I haven't killed him yet. "Good dog..." 'DOG?! DID I LOOK LIKE A WEAK LITTLE DOG TO HIM?!' I must have. He reached down to pet me. I was too stunned to attack him at that moment. I snapped out of it and bit his hand. Hard. He yelped in suprise and pain, but still stood there. I stood up. I couldn't take it anymore, yet I remained calm. Or tried to. "Why are you here? Humans aren't welcome here." He must've not cared if I talked to him because he didn't seem suprised. Suddenly I sensed a darker prescence...I saw a golden ring forming. 'No way...' I thought. This kid...he...couldn't...have..it.... "....Give that ring to me." I ordered him. "Hmph. You're just a mere wolf. No, you're just a mere dog." He sneered. I sware he was some form of devil. That did it. I finally snapped and charged. I must've been too fast or something because I easily knocked him a good six ft. away from where he was. That was the least I could do. I could knock a human a couple hundred ft. away from where they were. "..and you're just a weak spirit who thinks he's strong,using the powers from the Ring." I grinned, knowing I could easily kill him. I lunged for him, but he turned back into a lighter prescence. I barely dodged him, only managing a scrape on his left arm. "Who are you?" I asked him, standing my ground. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oooooo, cliffy. I love those. Anyone have a guess who this guy is? Anyone? *smirks* R/R pwease. I'm goin' for...10 reviews before I continue.