Well I'm not sure if it was flame or what but they didn't like my story it seems.

Review:

Your story seems copied from tons of other Sessomaru and Kagome

romances ' Inu Yasha betrays her, Kagome is in a yokai form, Sessomaru saves

her, and they fall in love!' I am sorry to say your chapters are too

short, the charcters are out of charcter and you use terms of today not

fuedal Japan. Like ok, mom , and dad. They would of used Alright,

Mother,and Father. Not to mention Rin always adds a sama after Sessomaru's

name. Although yuor story lacks somthing of what I look for I believe you

are not an experianced authour yet.So maybe this is one of your first

stories. Keep working in them and you'll be good in no time!rnrn ~*

I will not release her fanfiction name to you all because lord knows what would happen. But she seems to think my story is too common but that person doesn't know how uncommon it will turn out. The way my story is going to go I have read one like it yet. I hope I don't get anymore like this. **sniff sniff tear tear** lol. ~brittany~