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Chapter 5
Misconceptions
I thought maybe she had discovered that I wasn't worth her time. It changed the second she slapped him hard across the face.
"You piece of fuck!" I heard her mutter angrily. Now I was really confused.
I was missing something, I reckon. There was no chance that she would kiss him, anymore. Potter loved her. He couldn't love her. I love her and she loves me. I won't let him ruin it for me like he did before.
"I waited around for you for the whole time I was in Hogwarts. Watched you date and fail miserably, I might add, with Cho Chang. Watched you screw around with Parvati Patil, Lavender Brown, and nearly everyone you set your eyes on.
"I put up with you ignoring me, and choosing time to spend with whoever was your girlfriend for that week during seventh year.
"I was your best friend for seven years and you blew me off. I remember when Viktor and I broke up during seventh year. I was devastated and crying my eyes out. No matter how much Ron hated Viktor, he still was there for me. He was a true friend, while most of the time I was just a person you go to if no one else was available.
"You really are a piece of work Harry. Now that I have someone I love. Someone I care for. Someone that is there for me to talk to, that I know will care. Now you are here. You are too late." She grabbed my arms tightly around her stomach.
"I was always there." Potter mumbled. I saw Weasley shift uncomfortably between his friend and my love.
"You weren't Harry. I was crying in my dormitory for three days, even Draco came in to check if I was alright, and he way my worst enemy. No. You didn't notice." I remember.
I got worried after not seeing her. I brought her all of her homework, and even sat and comforted her for a couple of minutes. I did however tell her if she told anyone I would deny it and torture her.
"I will admit, mate, you weren't always there for her." Weasley told Potter. Potter glared at him, then at me. I simply bent down and kissed Hermione.
"Get off of her, Malfoy!" I heard him yell at me. I simply kissed Hermione longer and more passionately. When I did stop, I smirked at him.
"He doesn't need to get off me. He can get 'on' me anytime he wants." I smiled at her and kept holding her tightly.
"Nasty. Malfoy you better be worth her time. Look, I'm sorry for pulling what I did when we were sixteen. I guess I was just jealous. I do regret it. If Hermione can see something good in you, then you can't be bad. Truce, mate?" I blinked at Weasley. I wasn't expecting it from him.
Hermione gave me a stern look and nodded. I let go of Hermione and shook his hand.
"I'm sorry too for all the names I called you. The truth was that I wanted what you had. Family. I mean for Hermione to put up with you for that long, you can't be all bad." I joked with him.
Hermione ran up to Weasley. No, Ron. To Ron and hugged him tightly. I watched Ron kiss her on the cheek. I looked back to Potter. He had turned red from being so angry.
"You can't be serious, Ron. He's put us through hell." I glared at Potter with disgust.
"He apologized. We were all just children, and with a family like his you can't expect him to turn out differently." Ron defended me. I suddenly felt a great amount of gratitude towards him.
"Harry, accept it or not, I don't care. Draco has been there for me more this year than you have in our seven years of friendship. I still love you, but as a friend." I held on to Hermione tightly again.
That was it then? Potter just stormed out mumbling to himself. It was quite a sight for me. Weasley on the other hand became another person to me.
I felt like we had been friends for years. I must admit that I know why Hermione spent so many years with him. He was quite nice. He was also no longer uptight about his money since he had become an Auror.
It did make me feel guilty about insulting him, even if I did have to if I wanted to not be exiled. I did lay off later on, and the lake scene made me feel a lot stronger now. I had done lots in order to make sure that there would be no repeat, even if it would be unlikely.
"If the Wasps win against the Vampyres, then I'll do anything." The Wasps had improved since my day in Hogwarts, but still no match for the Vampyres.
"You'd do anything?" Weasley got a glint in his eyes. I saw Hermione roll her eyes at the constant Quidditch talk. I don't know how anyone could not love Quidditch.
"And if the Wasps lose?" I asked him. I would make him run through the Great Hall with his underpants. Weasley was now quite handsome. Nothing on me, of course. I remember when I walked into the class. All the girls were staring at him longingly. I almost laughed.
"Same. Then it is settled. The match starts in next week. I'll be here to watch it on the Wizard's Sport's Network." He told me. I smirked at him and shook on it.
DREAM
A young maiden ran through a castle. She twisted and turned with the passageways until she arrives at a particular door.
"Danielle, they've come for her." She said bursting into the door. The man looked at her with surprise evident. He panicked and started to pace.
"Riddle?" He asked as the maiden frantically nodded, "You can't be serious. He does not know of our daughter. No one knows of our relationship."
"He has found out. He knows of the power this child possesses. He knows of how we have been brought into the other realm in order for her to receive the pendant." The prince brushed back his hair and looked down at the baby in her arms.
"Daniella, why couldn't you just be normal." He said taking hold of the baby in his lover's arms. "What a little witch you are. The last remaining of the royal wizard family in England." He tickled her.
"What now?" The maiden asked him urgently. The prince just shook his head. After a few moments he sighed.
"She will need to be protected. I will be known as the last of the royal Garnet line, and she will live with you, as a simple maiden. My Hilda, you must hurry. When they come, they will kill me. Take care my love." He ushered her out. She took a passageway out of the castle.
An hour later Danielle took out his wand , and prepared for the worst. He heard shrill laughter as the door burst open.
"Where is she?" Voldemort stood there amused. Danielle stood his ground his lips sealed.
"Answer him." Beside him stood a Deatheater that resembled Lucius Malfoy. Voldemort took out his wand and pointed it at him.
"Never speak unless I ask you to. Crucio!" The man shivered and fell to the ground in pain.
"Answer me. Where is my dear niece Daniella. I want her so I can simply teach her to grow up in the right line." Voldemort smirked at him.
"Your mother was a fool to marry a Muggle. If she hadn't maybe you wouldn't have come along, Cousin." Danielle baited not letting down his defenses, unfazed by the Deatheater before him.
"Never mention them, Cousin. Die or tell me," Danielle stood his ground, "so you choose to die like a man? Avada Kedavra." The green light hit Danielle as his limp body collapsed against the cold stone floor.
"So you must be the Hilda?" Voldemort asked her questioningly. She shook her head and looked confused. She furthered her cloak.
"I do not know of who you speak." She answered him cloaking up the baby Daniella. He looked slightly amused again. She shivered as she tried to look into his eyes.
"Give me the child." Before she could do anything he grabbed Daniella out of her hands. Hilda broke down on the ground crying.
"This necklace?" He taunted her trying to rip off the pendant around the baby's chest.
The pendant was a golden one with an emerald inside. Only the emerald flowed like water. It never stopped moving. On the baby it felt warm to give her courage, as soon as Voldemort grasped it, it stopped moving and imitated a great amount of heat so it was unbearable to touch.
Hilda took her chance and grabbed baby Daniella from his grasp. She apperated, leaving him there with a weak hand and a singed wand.
She soon appeared in a bathroom of a Muggle city where she transferred her clothing. She walked out into the orphanage.
"Yes, may I help you?" The woman asked her unaware of what happened seconds earlier.
"I would like to give this baby for adoption." She said handing over the child she held so preciously in her arms.
"Any particular reason? Does she have a name yet?" She asked taking a look at the child. Hilda looked around frantically.
"No reason. Take her. I have to go. This is a Muggle palace right?" She said handing over Daniella.
"Muggle? I'm afraid I don't understand. Is something wrong? Do I need to call the police madam?" The woman asked her worriedly.
"I'm fine. I need to go." With that she walked out into the Muggle streets.
"As soon as I finish my degree in dentistry, I'll keep you. You're a feisty one." The young woman held the baby tightly.
DREAM END
Hermione woke with a start. She looked around and saw herself in her bedroom. She immediately put on the quickest robe she could find. She looked at the clock. It was very early, classes didn't start for another seven or eight hours.
She rushed out ignoring the glance of the portrait. She walked down two flights of stairs until she was on the fifth floor.
"Unicorn Blood." She said stopping in front of a statue of a mermaid. She waved her hand, and sprang around to let her in.
She practically knocked down the door to his bedroom to get in.
It was too early in my opinion for anything. I was having the best dream about Hermione when someone walked in. I took my wand from the bedside table. I always kept it close by. You can never be too careful.
"Draco." Hermione's voice, I recognized. I moaned groggily as I got up in my Snitch boxers.
She told me about a dream. A dream that seamed too familiar to me. I don't remember when I had it or if it was exactly the same, but I remember the part in the castle. She seemed so upset.
"This can't be a dream." I voiced my opinion. It couldn't be. If more than two people have it, it's a vision, not a dream.
"You are saying you had this. This. This dream." I nodded to her as I pulled her into my bed. She looked at me worriedly.
"We can think it through tomorrow. How about some sleep. We have classes." Sleep was overtaking me, and I couldn't think too clearly. She sighed and got up.
She pulled off her robe to show her in a flimsy, see-through nightgown, and she wasn't wearing anything underneath. If I had not been so tired I would have had her right then.
I pulled her into my arms, and held her tightly, unaware of anything else that was going on around me.
I was about to take away as many points as there were in the Slytherin's hour glass when the door burst open. I was cranky from sleep deprivation and lunch was only a period away. Whoever it was, was going to die soon. Until I saw her face.
"Draco, you can go on. I am just waiting for lunch." I smiled at her and tied my best to ignore the hushed whispers that were making their way around my seventh year Gryffindors and Slytherins.
As soon as the bell for class to end and lunch to begin rang I felt relief. That was until I saw that not one person even shifted from their seats.
"Class is dismissed." I said annoyed with these children. Hermione laughed slightly at me and walked over to me.
"I have a picnic. Are you coming?" She whispered to me. I grabbed her hand as a reply and walked out not caring what anyone thought anymore.
A week had passed and Hermione and I talked about the dream often. It was time for something that I need. I have stopped thinking about what people say about me. I don't care about anything but Hermione.
This ring will prove it. This beautiful platinum, emerald and diamond ring will make everyone know just how much I love Hermione.
"Hermione. I love you with all my heart, and deep down I always knew. I want you to be mine forever. I want everyone to know it. I want you to do me the honor of being my only. My wife. Do you accept?" I had planned this all out with a soft picnic in the forest with Unicorns.
As if on cue, a white unicorn came into the clearing. Hermione seemed to be crying. Of happiness, I hope.
"Of course I will." She continued to let tears flow out of her eyes as I myself felt that this would be considered the happiest moment of my life.
If only I had thought more of the blink of red I saw disappear. If only I had thought more of the dream. Nothing could prepare me for what would happen only a short time away. If only..
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IN THE MIDDLE OF NEXT CHAPTER:
"Linnex passes to Parkinson. Parkinson on her way, and what do we have here? Mr. Ronald Weasley walking onto the Quidditch field in boxers!" The announcer yelled through her wand. Everyone's attention turned to Ron in boxers with a snake on front.
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Chapter 5
Misconceptions
I thought maybe she had discovered that I wasn't worth her time. It changed the second she slapped him hard across the face.
"You piece of fuck!" I heard her mutter angrily. Now I was really confused.
I was missing something, I reckon. There was no chance that she would kiss him, anymore. Potter loved her. He couldn't love her. I love her and she loves me. I won't let him ruin it for me like he did before.
"I waited around for you for the whole time I was in Hogwarts. Watched you date and fail miserably, I might add, with Cho Chang. Watched you screw around with Parvati Patil, Lavender Brown, and nearly everyone you set your eyes on.
"I put up with you ignoring me, and choosing time to spend with whoever was your girlfriend for that week during seventh year.
"I was your best friend for seven years and you blew me off. I remember when Viktor and I broke up during seventh year. I was devastated and crying my eyes out. No matter how much Ron hated Viktor, he still was there for me. He was a true friend, while most of the time I was just a person you go to if no one else was available.
"You really are a piece of work Harry. Now that I have someone I love. Someone I care for. Someone that is there for me to talk to, that I know will care. Now you are here. You are too late." She grabbed my arms tightly around her stomach.
"I was always there." Potter mumbled. I saw Weasley shift uncomfortably between his friend and my love.
"You weren't Harry. I was crying in my dormitory for three days, even Draco came in to check if I was alright, and he way my worst enemy. No. You didn't notice." I remember.
I got worried after not seeing her. I brought her all of her homework, and even sat and comforted her for a couple of minutes. I did however tell her if she told anyone I would deny it and torture her.
"I will admit, mate, you weren't always there for her." Weasley told Potter. Potter glared at him, then at me. I simply bent down and kissed Hermione.
"Get off of her, Malfoy!" I heard him yell at me. I simply kissed Hermione longer and more passionately. When I did stop, I smirked at him.
"He doesn't need to get off me. He can get 'on' me anytime he wants." I smiled at her and kept holding her tightly.
"Nasty. Malfoy you better be worth her time. Look, I'm sorry for pulling what I did when we were sixteen. I guess I was just jealous. I do regret it. If Hermione can see something good in you, then you can't be bad. Truce, mate?" I blinked at Weasley. I wasn't expecting it from him.
Hermione gave me a stern look and nodded. I let go of Hermione and shook his hand.
"I'm sorry too for all the names I called you. The truth was that I wanted what you had. Family. I mean for Hermione to put up with you for that long, you can't be all bad." I joked with him.
Hermione ran up to Weasley. No, Ron. To Ron and hugged him tightly. I watched Ron kiss her on the cheek. I looked back to Potter. He had turned red from being so angry.
"You can't be serious, Ron. He's put us through hell." I glared at Potter with disgust.
"He apologized. We were all just children, and with a family like his you can't expect him to turn out differently." Ron defended me. I suddenly felt a great amount of gratitude towards him.
"Harry, accept it or not, I don't care. Draco has been there for me more this year than you have in our seven years of friendship. I still love you, but as a friend." I held on to Hermione tightly again.
That was it then? Potter just stormed out mumbling to himself. It was quite a sight for me. Weasley on the other hand became another person to me.
I felt like we had been friends for years. I must admit that I know why Hermione spent so many years with him. He was quite nice. He was also no longer uptight about his money since he had become an Auror.
It did make me feel guilty about insulting him, even if I did have to if I wanted to not be exiled. I did lay off later on, and the lake scene made me feel a lot stronger now. I had done lots in order to make sure that there would be no repeat, even if it would be unlikely.
"If the Wasps win against the Vampyres, then I'll do anything." The Wasps had improved since my day in Hogwarts, but still no match for the Vampyres.
"You'd do anything?" Weasley got a glint in his eyes. I saw Hermione roll her eyes at the constant Quidditch talk. I don't know how anyone could not love Quidditch.
"And if the Wasps lose?" I asked him. I would make him run through the Great Hall with his underpants. Weasley was now quite handsome. Nothing on me, of course. I remember when I walked into the class. All the girls were staring at him longingly. I almost laughed.
"Same. Then it is settled. The match starts in next week. I'll be here to watch it on the Wizard's Sport's Network." He told me. I smirked at him and shook on it.
DREAM
A young maiden ran through a castle. She twisted and turned with the passageways until she arrives at a particular door.
"Danielle, they've come for her." She said bursting into the door. The man looked at her with surprise evident. He panicked and started to pace.
"Riddle?" He asked as the maiden frantically nodded, "You can't be serious. He does not know of our daughter. No one knows of our relationship."
"He has found out. He knows of the power this child possesses. He knows of how we have been brought into the other realm in order for her to receive the pendant." The prince brushed back his hair and looked down at the baby in her arms.
"Daniella, why couldn't you just be normal." He said taking hold of the baby in his lover's arms. "What a little witch you are. The last remaining of the royal wizard family in England." He tickled her.
"What now?" The maiden asked him urgently. The prince just shook his head. After a few moments he sighed.
"She will need to be protected. I will be known as the last of the royal Garnet line, and she will live with you, as a simple maiden. My Hilda, you must hurry. When they come, they will kill me. Take care my love." He ushered her out. She took a passageway out of the castle.
An hour later Danielle took out his wand , and prepared for the worst. He heard shrill laughter as the door burst open.
"Where is she?" Voldemort stood there amused. Danielle stood his ground his lips sealed.
"Answer him." Beside him stood a Deatheater that resembled Lucius Malfoy. Voldemort took out his wand and pointed it at him.
"Never speak unless I ask you to. Crucio!" The man shivered and fell to the ground in pain.
"Answer me. Where is my dear niece Daniella. I want her so I can simply teach her to grow up in the right line." Voldemort smirked at him.
"Your mother was a fool to marry a Muggle. If she hadn't maybe you wouldn't have come along, Cousin." Danielle baited not letting down his defenses, unfazed by the Deatheater before him.
"Never mention them, Cousin. Die or tell me," Danielle stood his ground, "so you choose to die like a man? Avada Kedavra." The green light hit Danielle as his limp body collapsed against the cold stone floor.
"So you must be the Hilda?" Voldemort asked her questioningly. She shook her head and looked confused. She furthered her cloak.
"I do not know of who you speak." She answered him cloaking up the baby Daniella. He looked slightly amused again. She shivered as she tried to look into his eyes.
"Give me the child." Before she could do anything he grabbed Daniella out of her hands. Hilda broke down on the ground crying.
"This necklace?" He taunted her trying to rip off the pendant around the baby's chest.
The pendant was a golden one with an emerald inside. Only the emerald flowed like water. It never stopped moving. On the baby it felt warm to give her courage, as soon as Voldemort grasped it, it stopped moving and imitated a great amount of heat so it was unbearable to touch.
Hilda took her chance and grabbed baby Daniella from his grasp. She apperated, leaving him there with a weak hand and a singed wand.
She soon appeared in a bathroom of a Muggle city where she transferred her clothing. She walked out into the orphanage.
"Yes, may I help you?" The woman asked her unaware of what happened seconds earlier.
"I would like to give this baby for adoption." She said handing over the child she held so preciously in her arms.
"Any particular reason? Does she have a name yet?" She asked taking a look at the child. Hilda looked around frantically.
"No reason. Take her. I have to go. This is a Muggle palace right?" She said handing over Daniella.
"Muggle? I'm afraid I don't understand. Is something wrong? Do I need to call the police madam?" The woman asked her worriedly.
"I'm fine. I need to go." With that she walked out into the Muggle streets.
"As soon as I finish my degree in dentistry, I'll keep you. You're a feisty one." The young woman held the baby tightly.
DREAM END
Hermione woke with a start. She looked around and saw herself in her bedroom. She immediately put on the quickest robe she could find. She looked at the clock. It was very early, classes didn't start for another seven or eight hours.
She rushed out ignoring the glance of the portrait. She walked down two flights of stairs until she was on the fifth floor.
"Unicorn Blood." She said stopping in front of a statue of a mermaid. She waved her hand, and sprang around to let her in.
She practically knocked down the door to his bedroom to get in.
It was too early in my opinion for anything. I was having the best dream about Hermione when someone walked in. I took my wand from the bedside table. I always kept it close by. You can never be too careful.
"Draco." Hermione's voice, I recognized. I moaned groggily as I got up in my Snitch boxers.
She told me about a dream. A dream that seamed too familiar to me. I don't remember when I had it or if it was exactly the same, but I remember the part in the castle. She seemed so upset.
"This can't be a dream." I voiced my opinion. It couldn't be. If more than two people have it, it's a vision, not a dream.
"You are saying you had this. This. This dream." I nodded to her as I pulled her into my bed. She looked at me worriedly.
"We can think it through tomorrow. How about some sleep. We have classes." Sleep was overtaking me, and I couldn't think too clearly. She sighed and got up.
She pulled off her robe to show her in a flimsy, see-through nightgown, and she wasn't wearing anything underneath. If I had not been so tired I would have had her right then.
I pulled her into my arms, and held her tightly, unaware of anything else that was going on around me.
I was about to take away as many points as there were in the Slytherin's hour glass when the door burst open. I was cranky from sleep deprivation and lunch was only a period away. Whoever it was, was going to die soon. Until I saw her face.
"Draco, you can go on. I am just waiting for lunch." I smiled at her and tied my best to ignore the hushed whispers that were making their way around my seventh year Gryffindors and Slytherins.
As soon as the bell for class to end and lunch to begin rang I felt relief. That was until I saw that not one person even shifted from their seats.
"Class is dismissed." I said annoyed with these children. Hermione laughed slightly at me and walked over to me.
"I have a picnic. Are you coming?" She whispered to me. I grabbed her hand as a reply and walked out not caring what anyone thought anymore.
A week had passed and Hermione and I talked about the dream often. It was time for something that I need. I have stopped thinking about what people say about me. I don't care about anything but Hermione.
This ring will prove it. This beautiful platinum, emerald and diamond ring will make everyone know just how much I love Hermione.
"Hermione. I love you with all my heart, and deep down I always knew. I want you to be mine forever. I want everyone to know it. I want you to do me the honor of being my only. My wife. Do you accept?" I had planned this all out with a soft picnic in the forest with Unicorns.
As if on cue, a white unicorn came into the clearing. Hermione seemed to be crying. Of happiness, I hope.
"Of course I will." She continued to let tears flow out of her eyes as I myself felt that this would be considered the happiest moment of my life.
If only I had thought more of the blink of red I saw disappear. If only I had thought more of the dream. Nothing could prepare me for what would happen only a short time away. If only..
A/N YEAH YEAH YEAH, BUT GUESS WHAT!?!?! A PREVIEW WILL MAKE U FEEL BETTER...
IN THE MIDDLE OF NEXT CHAPTER:
"Linnex passes to Parkinson. Parkinson on her way, and what do we have here? Mr. Ronald Weasley walking onto the Quidditch field in boxers!" The announcer yelled through her wand. Everyone's attention turned to Ron in boxers with a snake on front.
END PREVIEW
THE NEXT CHAPTER IS KIND OF FUNNY STUFF.... ITS FOR YALL TO ENJOY... I SITLL HAVE THREE CHAPTER WRITTEN SO AS LONG AS I GET POSTS I CAN POST THE BEGINNING OF THE PLOT ON SUNDAY BEFORE SCHOOL
PAY CLOSE ATTENTION TO DANIELLE AND HILDA... WHOEVER EMAILS ME WITH THEIR RIGHT ROLL CAN HAVE NE GUEST ROLL DOING ANYTHING THEY WANT IN CHAPTER 9 SINCE I HAVE NOT FINISHED IT.... DANIELLE AND HILDA HAVE AN IMPORT ROLL AND SO DOES DANIELLA.... NEWAY
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