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CHAP 4. my inmortal
Last time we saw inuyasha, he and kagome save their life from naraku, the biggest (disclaimer: I don't own that word, but he deserves it) In the world.
Kagome: -oh, inuyasha, I'm happy we are ok. why do you look so sad?
Inuyasha: i'm ok
Kagome: you are not, you are thinking about kikyo, right?-
*before she finished her line, inuyasha was gone to take a walk*
inuyasha: -poor kikyo, she didn't deserved that *kikyo appears*
kikyo: I knew you'd look for me here (they were in 'their tree')
inuyasha: no, kikyo, I didn't came to look for you, I was just sad because you are in pain. why can you go away and be happy.
Kikyo: do you really think I wanna stay. it's just that. *starts singing with her eyes about to cry*
Kikyo: "I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
Inuyasha: And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone"
*kikyo looks at him saying 'you just don't understand' with her eyes*
kikyo: "These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me.
*kikyo tries to kiss inuyasha but he push her away*
inuyasha: "You used to captivate me
By your resonating life
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Kikyo: Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
but now I just don't feel
There's just too much that time cannot bring back
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me.
Inuyasha: I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But now you're so
Far from me.."
Kikyo: -I see. you prefer that copy of mine, don't you?
Inuyasha: that's so unfair of you, her name is kagome, and you are so different. I'll always love you, but we have to move on
Kikyo: you know I can't, you know that time is frozen for me forever and I never will rest if you don't go with me
Inuyasha: *good bye-kisses her* sorry, I'm really sorry, I wish you be happy or at least not this bad, but there's nothing I can do.-
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While all this thing was going on, naraku was watching it with kanna's mirror.
Naraku: -oh kikyo.. now that inuyasha told you he chose another, you are alone and looking for revenge. that attitude looks good on you. this is the perfect moment for me to make you mine... what I'm I saying? Make her mine?..... stupid onigumo and stupid onigumo's heart. I'll kill kikyo, this way her memory won't bother me anymore and onigumo will die for sadness. *evil laugh*. but I don't know why I just can't kill her..*grabs a sword and tries to cut the spider on his back. then it grows again*. I hate onigumo. but.. *talking like he was possessed* I don't hate kikyo!-
END CHAP 4.
Well, next time the song will be haunted. I think if you know the song, you kinda have the idea of the next chap.. Thank for the reviews you have sent, I know they are few, but they make me want to keep writing. bye
CHAP 4. my inmortal
Last time we saw inuyasha, he and kagome save their life from naraku, the biggest (disclaimer: I don't own that word, but he deserves it) In the world.
Kagome: -oh, inuyasha, I'm happy we are ok. why do you look so sad?
Inuyasha: i'm ok
Kagome: you are not, you are thinking about kikyo, right?-
*before she finished her line, inuyasha was gone to take a walk*
inuyasha: -poor kikyo, she didn't deserved that *kikyo appears*
kikyo: I knew you'd look for me here (they were in 'their tree')
inuyasha: no, kikyo, I didn't came to look for you, I was just sad because you are in pain. why can you go away and be happy.
Kikyo: do you really think I wanna stay. it's just that. *starts singing with her eyes about to cry*
Kikyo: "I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
Inuyasha: And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone"
*kikyo looks at him saying 'you just don't understand' with her eyes*
kikyo: "These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me.
*kikyo tries to kiss inuyasha but he push her away*
inuyasha: "You used to captivate me
By your resonating life
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Kikyo: Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
but now I just don't feel
There's just too much that time cannot bring back
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me.
Inuyasha: I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But now you're so
Far from me.."
Kikyo: -I see. you prefer that copy of mine, don't you?
Inuyasha: that's so unfair of you, her name is kagome, and you are so different. I'll always love you, but we have to move on
Kikyo: you know I can't, you know that time is frozen for me forever and I never will rest if you don't go with me
Inuyasha: *good bye-kisses her* sorry, I'm really sorry, I wish you be happy or at least not this bad, but there's nothing I can do.-
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While all this thing was going on, naraku was watching it with kanna's mirror.
Naraku: -oh kikyo.. now that inuyasha told you he chose another, you are alone and looking for revenge. that attitude looks good on you. this is the perfect moment for me to make you mine... what I'm I saying? Make her mine?..... stupid onigumo and stupid onigumo's heart. I'll kill kikyo, this way her memory won't bother me anymore and onigumo will die for sadness. *evil laugh*. but I don't know why I just can't kill her..*grabs a sword and tries to cut the spider on his back. then it grows again*. I hate onigumo. but.. *talking like he was possessed* I don't hate kikyo!-
END CHAP 4.
Well, next time the song will be haunted. I think if you know the song, you kinda have the idea of the next chap.. Thank for the reviews you have sent, I know they are few, but they make me want to keep writing. bye