This is the first poem I have ever written about Inuyasha and Kagome
So any ideas on how to make it better are welcome and I would like reviews
too
Also my story I am at present writing will also be up soon along with
another poem.
Thank you and I hope you enjoy my poem.

A SURPRISE

Your golden eyes
Oh what a surprise
To learn that you are no goddess
Your beauty perfect
Your smell so sweet
Your skin unmarred
Oh what a surprise
How can you not be a goddess
Your loving affection
Your sweet perfection
Do you hear that sound
You make my heart pound
Oh what a surprise
You must be half a goddess
Your black hair blowing
Your lips are oh so perfect
A burning passion
Flowing through my heart
Oh what a surprise
But alas you are only human
What is this feeling
From where is it coming
Could this be love
Love for my dear
Kagome.