Recap!!!
I love my poems to death but I know they may be confusing so here's a little recap for youse guyse.
"One Warrior
One Maid
One Mage
One Friend
One Betrayer
One Prize
One Battle
One Victor
One Heart
Find one in the place without time
The heart that withers with no grime
The entrance, the exit, the barrier, the mask
The same to all but rests on their task
It is not your decision to choose or be chosen
Face destiny with friends, fate interwoven
Time will tell
Fate will fall
Hearts will swell
Acts reveal all"
-Warrior- Mickey -Maid- Daisy -Mage- Donald -Friend- Goofy -Betrayer- Vide (the bad guy) -Prize- Minnie -Battle- ummmm it was a battle guys -Heart- MMDDG (Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Daisy, Goofy) -Victor- was to imply that since they all are of one heart they all won. Singular.
Find one in the place without time (Kingdom Hearts)
The heart that withers with no grime (Mickey found no algae on the heart-shaped pool in the garden) The entrance, the exit, the barrier, the mask (Mickey enters, they all exit, Daisy, Donald, and Goofy couldn't get
through and it was therefore a barrier, and it the world's heart and in doing so became a mask) The same to all but rests on their task (depends on their task what the pool will become to them)
Time will tell (wait)
Fate will fall (destiny)
Hearts will swell (when their hearts became one)
Acts reveal all" (it's your choices that reveal you, I'm kinda referring to Thistle)
Poem 2
"Weapon, Heart
One and the same (means that the keyblade and other weapons are embodiments of wielder's heart
Find them apart
Then only a bane (bane = annoyance)
Use the key to find the prize (Keyblade and Minnie)
The girl waits (Minnie)
In darkness lies (Her heart is trapped)
Tested and failed (Vide "tested" everyone in the garden, that was The Cold)
Tested and passed
Boost your defense
For strength you lacked
Fateful ties (Thistle's tie to Vide)
Broken, lies (It had a purpose but isn't important anymore)
Darkness bides (bides = waits)
But fate decides" (Fluff)
All right now that we've got that cleared up- your questions:
Scene in chapter 4 when they are "tested" Like I said, this was not heartless, it was Vide using his "inner eye" a cruel little power that I gave him.
Chapter 8 amethyst is purple, you guys caught that right?
Okay I guess I didn't do a good job explaining the Vide-Thistle thing. When Thistle's world was destroyed and she was transported the Traverse Town, Vide decided to use her as a pawn. She was so depressed that she began giving into the darkness that Vide was forcefully infusing into her being with his "inner eye." Then Dandin shows up because his world was destroyed and Thistle falls in love. Her heart begins to strengthen and Vide has trouble controlling her.
That's why she struggled when he tried to make her stop Mickey getting to Minnie. When the heartless attack, that was Vide's doing because he wants the friends to come to him and he thinks that Minnie is trying to reach Mickey and give him a message so of course he has to stop that. Dandin is mortally injured and when Thistle realizes this she instinctively kisses him and tries to tell his that she loves him before he dies.
She finds his heart and pours her own heart into it therefore saving him. Thistle passes out and her heart is weakened beyond repair. Vide takes advantage of this and captures her heart, turning her into a half-heartless and imprisoning the remaining essence of her inside her own heart.
Dandin tries to find the imprisoned Thistle because the essence she gave him began to glow when he was fighting demon-Thistle. He kisses her and the real Thistle breaks through her prison with the power of LOVE!!! Dandin's heart restores some of Thistle and then Thistle's heart that was being held captive by Vide is returned to her when he is killed because it rushes to the small glimmer of her being that Dandin forced into demon- Thistle.
At the end of the game, Kairi returns to Destiny Islands so I went off that and made Dandin and Thistle return to Traverse Town because I couldn't bear to split them up. That's why they aren't there when MMDDG are back in the garden.
Hey do you guys want a sequel? A Dandin and Thistle or MMDDG or both? Maybe I could make a Dandin, Thistle, and Sora? Or maybe a prequel to KH, like an adventure on Destiny Islands? Or maybe just a Kairi? I want to make another KH fic but would like to know what my loyal reviewers want!
Thanks to
-KiwiPixie- for reviewing every chapter except three -Sara1664- for constant support and criticism -Ud the Imp- for continually reminding me that my chapters are too short, and for criticism -Trifox- for ummm, lots of reviews? -Neko-chan- for compliments, I love compliments -Alasse Cerebrindal- for being my first reviewer -Mikari- for teaching me how to say squid in Japanese -Lauren T/ Susan B- for giving criticism inside and outside of school and egging me to finish chapters
Please tell me what to write and I will write.
I love my poems to death but I know they may be confusing so here's a little recap for youse guyse.
"One Warrior
One Maid
One Mage
One Friend
One Betrayer
One Prize
One Battle
One Victor
One Heart
Find one in the place without time
The heart that withers with no grime
The entrance, the exit, the barrier, the mask
The same to all but rests on their task
It is not your decision to choose or be chosen
Face destiny with friends, fate interwoven
Time will tell
Fate will fall
Hearts will swell
Acts reveal all"
-Warrior- Mickey -Maid- Daisy -Mage- Donald -Friend- Goofy -Betrayer- Vide (the bad guy) -Prize- Minnie -Battle- ummmm it was a battle guys -Heart- MMDDG (Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Daisy, Goofy) -Victor- was to imply that since they all are of one heart they all won. Singular.
Find one in the place without time (Kingdom Hearts)
The heart that withers with no grime (Mickey found no algae on the heart-shaped pool in the garden) The entrance, the exit, the barrier, the mask (Mickey enters, they all exit, Daisy, Donald, and Goofy couldn't get
through and it was therefore a barrier, and it the world's heart and in doing so became a mask) The same to all but rests on their task (depends on their task what the pool will become to them)
Time will tell (wait)
Fate will fall (destiny)
Hearts will swell (when their hearts became one)
Acts reveal all" (it's your choices that reveal you, I'm kinda referring to Thistle)
Poem 2
"Weapon, Heart
One and the same (means that the keyblade and other weapons are embodiments of wielder's heart
Find them apart
Then only a bane (bane = annoyance)
Use the key to find the prize (Keyblade and Minnie)
The girl waits (Minnie)
In darkness lies (Her heart is trapped)
Tested and failed (Vide "tested" everyone in the garden, that was The Cold)
Tested and passed
Boost your defense
For strength you lacked
Fateful ties (Thistle's tie to Vide)
Broken, lies (It had a purpose but isn't important anymore)
Darkness bides (bides = waits)
But fate decides" (Fluff)
All right now that we've got that cleared up- your questions:
Scene in chapter 4 when they are "tested" Like I said, this was not heartless, it was Vide using his "inner eye" a cruel little power that I gave him.
Chapter 8 amethyst is purple, you guys caught that right?
Okay I guess I didn't do a good job explaining the Vide-Thistle thing. When Thistle's world was destroyed and she was transported the Traverse Town, Vide decided to use her as a pawn. She was so depressed that she began giving into the darkness that Vide was forcefully infusing into her being with his "inner eye." Then Dandin shows up because his world was destroyed and Thistle falls in love. Her heart begins to strengthen and Vide has trouble controlling her.
That's why she struggled when he tried to make her stop Mickey getting to Minnie. When the heartless attack, that was Vide's doing because he wants the friends to come to him and he thinks that Minnie is trying to reach Mickey and give him a message so of course he has to stop that. Dandin is mortally injured and when Thistle realizes this she instinctively kisses him and tries to tell his that she loves him before he dies.
She finds his heart and pours her own heart into it therefore saving him. Thistle passes out and her heart is weakened beyond repair. Vide takes advantage of this and captures her heart, turning her into a half-heartless and imprisoning the remaining essence of her inside her own heart.
Dandin tries to find the imprisoned Thistle because the essence she gave him began to glow when he was fighting demon-Thistle. He kisses her and the real Thistle breaks through her prison with the power of LOVE!!! Dandin's heart restores some of Thistle and then Thistle's heart that was being held captive by Vide is returned to her when he is killed because it rushes to the small glimmer of her being that Dandin forced into demon- Thistle.
At the end of the game, Kairi returns to Destiny Islands so I went off that and made Dandin and Thistle return to Traverse Town because I couldn't bear to split them up. That's why they aren't there when MMDDG are back in the garden.
Hey do you guys want a sequel? A Dandin and Thistle or MMDDG or both? Maybe I could make a Dandin, Thistle, and Sora? Or maybe a prequel to KH, like an adventure on Destiny Islands? Or maybe just a Kairi? I want to make another KH fic but would like to know what my loyal reviewers want!
Thanks to
-KiwiPixie- for reviewing every chapter except three -Sara1664- for constant support and criticism -Ud the Imp- for continually reminding me that my chapters are too short, and for criticism -Trifox- for ummm, lots of reviews? -Neko-chan- for compliments, I love compliments -Alasse Cerebrindal- for being my first reviewer -Mikari- for teaching me how to say squid in Japanese -Lauren T/ Susan B- for giving criticism inside and outside of school and egging me to finish chapters
Please tell me what to write and I will write.