Dear: Ladies and gentlemen
Welcome to my first story of the summer. This story was written a long time ago, I just yesterday made some changes and put it up on the Internet.
I know my grammar and the phasing of my words are bad but please, review my story.
I delicate this story to seven of my greatest friends:
Norma= grandma
Irene= evil lady
Milisha= kitty
Dimitria- dodo
Wei= we we
Ashely= ashy (smiles evilly) *** ON JULY 7 IS MY GRANDA'S (Norma's) BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!! She's turning 92 (just kidding) Even if she is deaf/blind/forgetful I love her On July 7 and even if she is mean and don't act like a grandam I love her anyway. I hope you like it. *************** ~~~~~ Congratulations Grandma for finally after so many years, Completed high school.
Also Congratulations Ashy on completing high school!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Give a big cheer. Throw a big party. (Clear throat) anyway i haven't written a long time so go easy. oh this story is a D/G but not in the first few pages. i promise. R/R PLEASE!!!!!!
Welcome to my first story of the summer. This story was written a long time ago, I just yesterday made some changes and put it up on the Internet.
I know my grammar and the phasing of my words are bad but please, review my story.
I delicate this story to seven of my greatest friends:
Norma= grandma
Irene= evil lady
Milisha= kitty
Dimitria- dodo
Wei= we we
Ashely= ashy (smiles evilly) *** ON JULY 7 IS MY GRANDA'S (Norma's) BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!! She's turning 92 (just kidding) Even if she is deaf/blind/forgetful I love her On July 7 and even if she is mean and don't act like a grandam I love her anyway. I hope you like it. *************** ~~~~~ Congratulations Grandma for finally after so many years, Completed high school.
Also Congratulations Ashy on completing high school!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Give a big cheer. Throw a big party. (Clear throat) anyway i haven't written a long time so go easy. oh this story is a D/G but not in the first few pages. i promise. R/R PLEASE!!!!!!