Hey!
I am so pleased with this feedback so let me thank my reviewers:
Angel1411,Molly, and SurfKristianC, and as for Me who wondered if thing really happened that fast, keep in mind that Vince was positive he would never see that girl again if we would've let her go. Ya know??? Well back to the story.
@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@
Clothes littered the floor of Stella's master bedroom. She had finally decided upon some Jus D'Orange jeans, and a cute white revealing shirt she had bought this morning at Forever 21. She was in the process of deciding shoes and a handbag when the doorbell rang. 'Relax, Effie will answer it' she thought to herself. Downstairs Effie opened the door to a quite handsome Vince who was wearing a pair of khaki cargo pants and a black shirt. "Hi" Effie greeted shyly, "Come in". Vince entered a beautifully furnished living room and stood by the door. Effie's eyes scanned him, almost like she was approving her mother's date. Her eyes stop and stayed fixated on a bouquet of red roses that Vince had in his hand. Her eyes lit up. "Are those for my mommy?" she asked, her voice seemed much more outgoing and less shy then it had been when she had opened the door. "Yea they are" Vince told the little girl. Upstairs Stella had decided on her Manolo strappies and her tan Prada purse. She appied minimal makeup and began to walk down the spiral staircase. Vince looked up, he was positive she was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. "Eff are you ready. Effie nodded and put on a pair of Adida's that were by the fireplace. "Well then let's go" said Vince. Stella locked the door, and walked towards Vince's high performance tricked out Maxima. Effie climbed into the back seat, and Stella sat up front.
"So who is this babysitter?" Stella asked, trying to keep herself from drooling over Vince. "My best friend since third grade's sister AND his girlfriend" Vince said trying to keep his eyes on the road and off of the hella hott girl next to him. "Ok" They arrived at a white tow story house. Vince unlocked the door and they walked in. A young pretty girl came out of a room. Her long black hair tied back and her tanned skin looking silkier than ever. "Hi I am Mia" the young woman said. " I'm Stella and this is Effie" she said pushing foward the little girl. "Effie listen to Mia and if anything happens you call my cell ok?" she quizzed the little girl. "OK.Bye Mommy" she whispered and kissed her mom.
Soon enough Vince and Stella were alone in the car. "Why did you leave Greece?" Vince asked genuinely curious. "I needed a change, I hated it there everyone thought of me as the little skank who got knocked up at 18, and I moved here because I've always wanted to live in L.A." Stella answered. "Hmm..interesting.. How bout Effie, what did the stork get lost and leave her on the wrong porch" Vince asked. Stella chucked, "Nah, I was 15 and an idiot, a big idiot, but I guess we must learn from our mistakes" she sighed. They had arrived at Cha,Cha,Cha. He fessed up about his accident, and she told him all the details of Effie's bastard of a father. They remained talking at the restaurant for 5 hours, they were truly intruiged by each othe and seemed to enjoy each others company. When the restaurant closed, they drove aimlessly around the city in the car simply stalling time so they could talk. Finally, at 3:30 Stella yawned and advised Vince they'd better be getting home. They drove to the Toretto house and Vince carried Effie into the car. Once they got to Stella's house, Vince carried Effie to her bedroom and walked back down the stairs back to the entrance.
"We could go out back and talk ya know" Stella joked, "I'll call you tomorrow". "Can we see each other tomorrow?" Vince asked. "I'm taking Effie to the park and registrating her at school"Stella said with a hint of disappointment. "I'll call you, I have your number on caller ID" he said sadly. They looked at each other and their lips met and for those 10 seconds it was pure heaven. All of a sudden lightning struck and it was pouring the wind howled and banged against the windows. They pulled apart from their kiss. "I don't think you can go home" Stella whispered with a smile. They went upstairs to her bedroom and Stella fell asleep inmediately while Vince stayed up and realized how good things were right now. He closed his eyes and slipped off to a deep slumber.
Vince rolled over where was he, the events of last night flooded back to him. Between him and Stella now layed Effie and Bruiser who must've snuck in during the night. Vince had always pictured himself a bachelor for life, but there he was with a beautiful witty woman, and her daughter and dog. And for nearly a couple second Vince pretended Effie was his daughter. In that moment he wanted to protect the little girl. He wanted to be her father, the father she had never had.
@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@
I really need reviews! My email address is still MissPink@ExCiTe.CoM please leave me a lil message. Also read my other fic So Fast, So Furious!
KiSSeS
I am so pleased with this feedback so let me thank my reviewers:
Angel1411,Molly, and SurfKristianC, and as for Me who wondered if thing really happened that fast, keep in mind that Vince was positive he would never see that girl again if we would've let her go. Ya know??? Well back to the story.
@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@
Clothes littered the floor of Stella's master bedroom. She had finally decided upon some Jus D'Orange jeans, and a cute white revealing shirt she had bought this morning at Forever 21. She was in the process of deciding shoes and a handbag when the doorbell rang. 'Relax, Effie will answer it' she thought to herself. Downstairs Effie opened the door to a quite handsome Vince who was wearing a pair of khaki cargo pants and a black shirt. "Hi" Effie greeted shyly, "Come in". Vince entered a beautifully furnished living room and stood by the door. Effie's eyes scanned him, almost like she was approving her mother's date. Her eyes stop and stayed fixated on a bouquet of red roses that Vince had in his hand. Her eyes lit up. "Are those for my mommy?" she asked, her voice seemed much more outgoing and less shy then it had been when she had opened the door. "Yea they are" Vince told the little girl. Upstairs Stella had decided on her Manolo strappies and her tan Prada purse. She appied minimal makeup and began to walk down the spiral staircase. Vince looked up, he was positive she was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. "Eff are you ready. Effie nodded and put on a pair of Adida's that were by the fireplace. "Well then let's go" said Vince. Stella locked the door, and walked towards Vince's high performance tricked out Maxima. Effie climbed into the back seat, and Stella sat up front.
"So who is this babysitter?" Stella asked, trying to keep herself from drooling over Vince. "My best friend since third grade's sister AND his girlfriend" Vince said trying to keep his eyes on the road and off of the hella hott girl next to him. "Ok" They arrived at a white tow story house. Vince unlocked the door and they walked in. A young pretty girl came out of a room. Her long black hair tied back and her tanned skin looking silkier than ever. "Hi I am Mia" the young woman said. " I'm Stella and this is Effie" she said pushing foward the little girl. "Effie listen to Mia and if anything happens you call my cell ok?" she quizzed the little girl. "OK.Bye Mommy" she whispered and kissed her mom.
Soon enough Vince and Stella were alone in the car. "Why did you leave Greece?" Vince asked genuinely curious. "I needed a change, I hated it there everyone thought of me as the little skank who got knocked up at 18, and I moved here because I've always wanted to live in L.A." Stella answered. "Hmm..interesting.. How bout Effie, what did the stork get lost and leave her on the wrong porch" Vince asked. Stella chucked, "Nah, I was 15 and an idiot, a big idiot, but I guess we must learn from our mistakes" she sighed. They had arrived at Cha,Cha,Cha. He fessed up about his accident, and she told him all the details of Effie's bastard of a father. They remained talking at the restaurant for 5 hours, they were truly intruiged by each othe and seemed to enjoy each others company. When the restaurant closed, they drove aimlessly around the city in the car simply stalling time so they could talk. Finally, at 3:30 Stella yawned and advised Vince they'd better be getting home. They drove to the Toretto house and Vince carried Effie into the car. Once they got to Stella's house, Vince carried Effie to her bedroom and walked back down the stairs back to the entrance.
"We could go out back and talk ya know" Stella joked, "I'll call you tomorrow". "Can we see each other tomorrow?" Vince asked. "I'm taking Effie to the park and registrating her at school"Stella said with a hint of disappointment. "I'll call you, I have your number on caller ID" he said sadly. They looked at each other and their lips met and for those 10 seconds it was pure heaven. All of a sudden lightning struck and it was pouring the wind howled and banged against the windows. They pulled apart from their kiss. "I don't think you can go home" Stella whispered with a smile. They went upstairs to her bedroom and Stella fell asleep inmediately while Vince stayed up and realized how good things were right now. He closed his eyes and slipped off to a deep slumber.
Vince rolled over where was he, the events of last night flooded back to him. Between him and Stella now layed Effie and Bruiser who must've snuck in during the night. Vince had always pictured himself a bachelor for life, but there he was with a beautiful witty woman, and her daughter and dog. And for nearly a couple second Vince pretended Effie was his daughter. In that moment he wanted to protect the little girl. He wanted to be her father, the father she had never had.
@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@
I really need reviews! My email address is still MissPink@ExCiTe.CoM please leave me a lil message. Also read my other fic So Fast, So Furious!
KiSSeS