Thanks 4 the positive reviews I received on my opening!!! It really made my
day!!! (and for a change Im not bein sarcastic! lol)
I'm sorry I changed part of the chapter for all of you original fans but I was watching the movie and was thinking of some new stuff.
FYI: I don't own the characters except for the Burkes (a/n: I know it originally said Arbors but that was just a name error), but then again I don't own Louis Sachar or any of the movie actors... but it would be pretty cool if I did (lol. just kidding)
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Natasha was awakened by a bump on the road. It feels like we've been driving forever, she thought. Finally, they arrived at their destination and she stepped off the bus, took off her designer sunglasses, which revealed her light hazel-blue eyes, and looked around the place where I would be spending the next year and a half. The best was she could describe it was hell.
The land was totally barren except for lots of holes and the occasional person. She also saw three cabins, two trees with a hammock between them, and a bunch of tents. It was also unbearably hot, even though she was in a tube-top and a short skirt. She had lived her whole life in the Northeast, so the hottest weather she'd ever known was only the 90-degree heat they would get in summer. That seemed like nothing compared to the almost painful heat she was feeling right then. She watched people staring at her as she stepped off the bus. She assumed getting a new camper around here was very rare, which made a lot of sense. As she looked at all the "campers", it didn't take her long to notice something different about them. They were ALL BOYS! Her initial shock was then replaced by severe satisfaction. Maybe this won't be so bad after all, she thought, with a smile spreading across her face. As she walked toward the cabin she was being led into, there were many hollers and whistles. She smiled politely and added a little more shift to her walk. As much as she hated to admit it (well, publicly admit it) she was gorgeous. She was even named gorgeous by Teen Culture, one of the leading teen magazines in the country. With long brown hair, a curvy figure, which she was never afraid to show off, and a beautiful face, she was always said to be radiant. It was because of the mixture of fame and beauty that she had gotten out of many sticky situations.
She suddenly felt someone grab her by the arm, attempting to lead her inside. "What the f*** are you doin'?" she screamed. She suddenly threw a fit, kicking and screaming, the whole bit. She ended up kicking one of the guards in a "special place" and was picked up and thrown over the shoulder of the other guard. As she proceeded to kick and scream, all the boys watching were in hysterical laughter. She was eventually led into a building and thrown into a chair, because by then she had calmed down. She blew some stray hairs out of her eyes as an odd looking man entered the room. "My, aren't you the little spitfire," he said, spitting sunflower seeds on the ground. "My name is Mr. Sir." She giggled silently. "Mr. Sir?" While she was giggling, he got very close to her face. "And you will address me by that anytime you speak to me! You got it, lil' missy?" "Loud and clear, Mr. . Sir" she said, stilly trying to hold back laughter. "And let me just warn you. if you EVER start a commotion like that again, you'll be very, very sorry!" "Yea, whatever," she mumbled. He got very close to my face. "What did you say?" "I said 'Yes, Mr. Sir'!" "That's what I thought. Now. Natasha Burke." He kept looking at the paper, and then looking at me. "You're from New York. You wouldn't happen to be the daughter of William Arbor, the millionaire businessman and Senator, would you?" "Maybe." "Well, because you are who you are," he said, popping some sunflower seeds in his mouth, "don't be expecting any 'special treatment'. You got it?" "I wouldn't have it any other way," she said, a fake smile going across her face. She honestly didn't want "special treatment" anyway because she usually hated when people treated her differently just because of who she was. "You'll have to change in front of me. Just to prove you don't have anything on you," he said, a smile spreading across his face. Oh my God, she thought, This guy's is crazy! Then suddenly a voice came out of the doorway, "I think I'll take care of this, Mr. Sir." The voice came from a woman, middle-aged with red hair. Mr. Sir seemed to cower before her "Yes, Miss-Miss Warden. ma'am." he said, as he gathered his things and went for the door. She sat on the desk and rolled her eyes. "Men can be so stupid!" she said, looking around the room. Natasha smiled.
After that episode was over, Mr. Sir gave Natasha her "outfit" (if you actually want to call a tacky orange jumpsuit an outfit) and told her was going to be in tent D. As soon as Mr. Sir had given her the tent assignment, a slightly hippie-looking man, who was about her height came up to her. "You must be the new camper. I'm Mr. Pendanski. So you're in D-tent?" "Um. yeah. I am," Natasha answered "Great! I'll take you there. You're going to be staying with a great bunch of boys!" She smiled at his comment He made sure not to be to forceful when making her leave.
As Mr. Pendanski & Natasha walked into "D-Tent" to find 8 boys all just staring at her. "These are going to be you're tent-mates. These boys are Rex, Alan, José, Theodore, Ricky, Stanley, and Zero. Boys this is." "Natasha. Natasha Bur-" she cut in. But the boy named "Rex" cut her off. He was good-looking black kid with thick, dirty glasses "No Mom. You got it all wrong". He pointed to all the boys in the order Mr. Pendanski introduced them. "I'm X-Ray. That's Squid, Magnet, Armpit, Zigzag, Caveman, and. um. Zero." As he sat down, he flashed a smile at her, which she returned. She realized she wasn't with the worst looking group ever.
"So Natasha, what did you do to get here?" asked "Zigzag". "The last serious thing I did was steal some clothes from a big department store. but this was more like the final straw. I had been hanging with bad crowds and doing all sorts of bad things." "That's it? You just stole from some stores?" asked Squid, in between chews on his toothpick. He was tall, white, and EXTREMELY hot. For the first time in my life I felt embarrassed to talk to a good-looking boy. "Well. um. like I said it was the final straw. I mean I had stolen from LOTS of stores before. I also have a record of arson, really crazy parties, fighting, underage drinking and smoking. all sorts of bad things." By the looks on all the boys' faces, they were a little shocked by her extensive criminal record, but then again, people were. "Armpit" broke the awkward silence by asking, "So, wait, you're the chick that made that whole scene today?" He was black and kind of overweight, still pretty cute though. Flattered by his question, her face flushed and she answered with a timid, "Yeah, that was me." "Damn, chica. You got skills!" said "Magnet", giving her a high-five. He was Spanish and also very tall and gorgeous. All the boys followed suit, with other word of agreement "So, is there anything to do around here?" Natasha asked Mr. Pendanski answered, "Oh, sure! Which one of you boys wants to show Natasha here the rec. room?" All the boys suddenly sprung up just so they could take her. They were practically tripping over each other just to get near her. She smirked as she thought that this might be an interesting year after all.
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My first chapter!!! Please r&r. it will be appreciated.
I'm sorry I changed part of the chapter for all of you original fans but I was watching the movie and was thinking of some new stuff.
FYI: I don't own the characters except for the Burkes (a/n: I know it originally said Arbors but that was just a name error), but then again I don't own Louis Sachar or any of the movie actors... but it would be pretty cool if I did (lol. just kidding)
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Natasha was awakened by a bump on the road. It feels like we've been driving forever, she thought. Finally, they arrived at their destination and she stepped off the bus, took off her designer sunglasses, which revealed her light hazel-blue eyes, and looked around the place where I would be spending the next year and a half. The best was she could describe it was hell.
The land was totally barren except for lots of holes and the occasional person. She also saw three cabins, two trees with a hammock between them, and a bunch of tents. It was also unbearably hot, even though she was in a tube-top and a short skirt. She had lived her whole life in the Northeast, so the hottest weather she'd ever known was only the 90-degree heat they would get in summer. That seemed like nothing compared to the almost painful heat she was feeling right then. She watched people staring at her as she stepped off the bus. She assumed getting a new camper around here was very rare, which made a lot of sense. As she looked at all the "campers", it didn't take her long to notice something different about them. They were ALL BOYS! Her initial shock was then replaced by severe satisfaction. Maybe this won't be so bad after all, she thought, with a smile spreading across her face. As she walked toward the cabin she was being led into, there were many hollers and whistles. She smiled politely and added a little more shift to her walk. As much as she hated to admit it (well, publicly admit it) she was gorgeous. She was even named gorgeous by Teen Culture, one of the leading teen magazines in the country. With long brown hair, a curvy figure, which she was never afraid to show off, and a beautiful face, she was always said to be radiant. It was because of the mixture of fame and beauty that she had gotten out of many sticky situations.
She suddenly felt someone grab her by the arm, attempting to lead her inside. "What the f*** are you doin'?" she screamed. She suddenly threw a fit, kicking and screaming, the whole bit. She ended up kicking one of the guards in a "special place" and was picked up and thrown over the shoulder of the other guard. As she proceeded to kick and scream, all the boys watching were in hysterical laughter. She was eventually led into a building and thrown into a chair, because by then she had calmed down. She blew some stray hairs out of her eyes as an odd looking man entered the room. "My, aren't you the little spitfire," he said, spitting sunflower seeds on the ground. "My name is Mr. Sir." She giggled silently. "Mr. Sir?" While she was giggling, he got very close to her face. "And you will address me by that anytime you speak to me! You got it, lil' missy?" "Loud and clear, Mr. . Sir" she said, stilly trying to hold back laughter. "And let me just warn you. if you EVER start a commotion like that again, you'll be very, very sorry!" "Yea, whatever," she mumbled. He got very close to my face. "What did you say?" "I said 'Yes, Mr. Sir'!" "That's what I thought. Now. Natasha Burke." He kept looking at the paper, and then looking at me. "You're from New York. You wouldn't happen to be the daughter of William Arbor, the millionaire businessman and Senator, would you?" "Maybe." "Well, because you are who you are," he said, popping some sunflower seeds in his mouth, "don't be expecting any 'special treatment'. You got it?" "I wouldn't have it any other way," she said, a fake smile going across her face. She honestly didn't want "special treatment" anyway because she usually hated when people treated her differently just because of who she was. "You'll have to change in front of me. Just to prove you don't have anything on you," he said, a smile spreading across his face. Oh my God, she thought, This guy's is crazy! Then suddenly a voice came out of the doorway, "I think I'll take care of this, Mr. Sir." The voice came from a woman, middle-aged with red hair. Mr. Sir seemed to cower before her "Yes, Miss-Miss Warden. ma'am." he said, as he gathered his things and went for the door. She sat on the desk and rolled her eyes. "Men can be so stupid!" she said, looking around the room. Natasha smiled.
After that episode was over, Mr. Sir gave Natasha her "outfit" (if you actually want to call a tacky orange jumpsuit an outfit) and told her was going to be in tent D. As soon as Mr. Sir had given her the tent assignment, a slightly hippie-looking man, who was about her height came up to her. "You must be the new camper. I'm Mr. Pendanski. So you're in D-tent?" "Um. yeah. I am," Natasha answered "Great! I'll take you there. You're going to be staying with a great bunch of boys!" She smiled at his comment He made sure not to be to forceful when making her leave.
As Mr. Pendanski & Natasha walked into "D-Tent" to find 8 boys all just staring at her. "These are going to be you're tent-mates. These boys are Rex, Alan, José, Theodore, Ricky, Stanley, and Zero. Boys this is." "Natasha. Natasha Bur-" she cut in. But the boy named "Rex" cut her off. He was good-looking black kid with thick, dirty glasses "No Mom. You got it all wrong". He pointed to all the boys in the order Mr. Pendanski introduced them. "I'm X-Ray. That's Squid, Magnet, Armpit, Zigzag, Caveman, and. um. Zero." As he sat down, he flashed a smile at her, which she returned. She realized she wasn't with the worst looking group ever.
"So Natasha, what did you do to get here?" asked "Zigzag". "The last serious thing I did was steal some clothes from a big department store. but this was more like the final straw. I had been hanging with bad crowds and doing all sorts of bad things." "That's it? You just stole from some stores?" asked Squid, in between chews on his toothpick. He was tall, white, and EXTREMELY hot. For the first time in my life I felt embarrassed to talk to a good-looking boy. "Well. um. like I said it was the final straw. I mean I had stolen from LOTS of stores before. I also have a record of arson, really crazy parties, fighting, underage drinking and smoking. all sorts of bad things." By the looks on all the boys' faces, they were a little shocked by her extensive criminal record, but then again, people were. "Armpit" broke the awkward silence by asking, "So, wait, you're the chick that made that whole scene today?" He was black and kind of overweight, still pretty cute though. Flattered by his question, her face flushed and she answered with a timid, "Yeah, that was me." "Damn, chica. You got skills!" said "Magnet", giving her a high-five. He was Spanish and also very tall and gorgeous. All the boys followed suit, with other word of agreement "So, is there anything to do around here?" Natasha asked Mr. Pendanski answered, "Oh, sure! Which one of you boys wants to show Natasha here the rec. room?" All the boys suddenly sprung up just so they could take her. They were practically tripping over each other just to get near her. She smirked as she thought that this might be an interesting year after all.
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My first chapter!!! Please r&r. it will be appreciated.