The Lost of the Revolution
Disclaimer: Don't own Rurouni Kenshin. It's so simple.
Okay... my story will be a little confusing because I just got a really good idea... I won't change the second chapter unless I can't get it to fit... I think the new idea is even more strange or even a little more funnier than before... remember, first impressions or thoughts may not be true
What you think in this story, may actually not be true...
I was not going to write this chapter so soon but an idea came to me...
Thank you my reviewers!
And to shannon chan... it's more complicated than that
To everyone: Happy Reading. My story isn't that good, and review please! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"ORO?!" Kenshin fell over in surprise.
"A daughter?" Kaoru said lightly.
"So I thought..." Kenshin and Kaoru spun around to see Tokio's wet face in the half-light of the glowing moon.
"I was right... I should have known from the beginning... I should have been convinced the first time..." Tokio wiped the tears from her smooth face.
"How did you..." Kaoru began.
"You guys actually are not that far from Tokyo.
"When did you know what?' Kaoru asked.
Tokio sighed as she motioned for them all to sit, "There is a story... it takes us back to the revolution..."
*Flashback*
Tokio shuffled her feet towards the garden where her father had told her she was meeting Saitou, her new husband. She bumped into Okita, Captain of the First Squad Shinsen Gumi.
"I congratulate you on your coming marriage. I am told she is the woman of your choice." Tokio said softly.
Okita beamed, "I am very happy... Saitou is not very pleased though..."
Tokio frowned, "Why?" Okita just shook his head and shuffled away quickly with the ever present smile on his face.
*interruption in flashback*
"So the rumors are true that Okita was to be married." Kenshin said coolly, "Arranged I was told; but he truly loved her."
Tokio nodded, "I heard the same."
"I did not hear that she loved him though..that I did not." Kenshin replied.
Tokio nodded again, "I heard the same." And continued her story.
*Flashback continued*
Tokio stopped behind a couple bushes, hearing three arguing voice. One was her husbands deep steel voice; the other two belonged to women.
"Give her a chance." Came a soft woman's voice, "Kondo has made a wise choice in choosing your wife." Her voice almost sounded like a child's.
Saitou sighed, "It's not easy to love..."
There was a snort as the other woman spoke in a chilly voice, "You don't have to love her..."
The soft voiced woman gasped, "And then what is the point in marrying her? Give her a chance... you're just afraid of getting soft and showing some weakness...Saitou, you'll discover your greatest weakness may turn into you're greatest strength." Tokio shook her head; what an innocent girl. Marrying for love? Only poets did that.
"Love is nothing... I see no point in this discussion at all. Saitou, for once just open up you're not heartless. I have to go..." The cold voice woman stormed away; footsteps pounding on the stone pathway leading to the house. Tokio pressed herself into the bushes more and the woman passed with not noticing Tokio.
Saitou sighed and turned to the woman, "What are you going do to now I am married?"
"Anything I like." Came the reply, "I don't need you to boss me around anymore."
"You're a fool. I know you will probably go do something crazy!"
"Why not? It could be something fun crazy." the woman's voice became almost innocent.
"YOU'LL get yourself KILLED! Then what would I do?"
"Whatever you like." The woman shrugged, "I have to go. Duty calls..."
"Will I see you again?"
"Probably not...actually...maybe...but I'll try not to come by."
"Why not?"
The woman sighed, "You're married now."
Saitou heaved a sigh. He hugged the woman, "I'll miss you."
"I'm sure you will... but do try and forget about me... it would be good for your marriage if you think of me all the time..." The woman hurried out in the opposite direction, towards the streets of Kyoto.
*End of Flashback*
"Did the woman ever come back?" Kaoru asked.
Tokio shook her head, "I never asked Saitou about her either...I figured she was gone..."
Kenshin's eyes narrowed as he stood up, "Someone's here.." Tokio looked around from her sitting position. Kaoru shifted backwards a little.
Tokio and Kaoru both screamed. Kenshin spun around to see figures dressed in all back. One had a bow pulled back tight with an arrow aimed at his heart. The click of the reverse blade coming out of the sheath was heard.
"Draw the sword and I slit the ladies thoarts." Came a voice. There was one person behind Tokio with a shining clean knife to Tokio's neck. Another person had done the same to Kaoru.
There were faint footsteps as a woman appeared. She had pale skin and sharp blue eyes. Her black hair fell to her shoulders, "So we did have night visitors...Good job on not being detected..."
"What do we do with them?" Asked the figure behind Kaoru. Kenshin guessed the person to probably be a woman, but was not sure as a bird cut the still air with a shrill cry.
"Bring them into the cells...We'll deal with them in the morning."
Kaoru and Tokio where dragged while Kenshin followed the black haired woman.
Kenshin woke up as the door to his cold cell was opened. The blue eyes woman glared at him, "No funny business...or we may kill the ladies with you."
"Where are they?" Kenshin demanded as the blue eyes woman drew a katana.
"This way." With the blade tip at Kenshin neck, she walked Kenshin into a small courtyard beside the large house.
Tokio and Kaoru were seated on a stone bench. There were three women guarding them, each with katana's drawn.
*Note: Katana- Japanese sword, like the one Saitou uses*
Kenshin sat on a rock by the bench. The door of the house beside the courtyard opened.
The young girl bounded out to the blue eyes lady, "Awnt Wil!" She said happily.
The blue-eyed lady smiled, "Good girl Hitomi!"
One of the woman with a katana rolled her amber eyes, "Lil... has Gina been informed?"
Lil turned around with Hitomi in her arms, "Yes of course Ani."
"Informed about what?" The woman who had opened the door to Saitou walked in, "Oh... our nighttime visitors. Come Hitomi." The little girl ran into her mother's arms.
"Go to Anzu." Her mother instructed. The little girl nodded and skipped over to the young blue eyes brunette planting flowers in a distance.
The mother's eyes, which had been soft, turned cold as she gazed at the unexpected visitors, "Your names?"
Kenshin's eyes widened as he locked eyes with the woman, "You're.. you're.."
The woman gave a small smirk, "Who Mr. Himura?" Her silver eyes gave a twinkle of amusement. Saitou stepped out from the house beside with almost an identical smirk.
"You're the Shadow Falcon!" Kenshin gasped. Kenshin thought for a moment and then his eyes widened greatly, "You were the wife of the Captain of the First Division of the Shinsen Gumi, Okita Souji."
The two smirks froze.
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Okay...see...I changed the plot a little bit... and in the next chapter you'll find out who the Shadow Falcon is and her role in the revolution and how Kenshin knows her...oh... maybe I'll add in what her relationship with Saitou is and who that little cute girl is. It might be the chapter after the next one... I need to plan...
I'll give you a hint though, the little girl isn't Saitou's daughter... and she isn't Okita's either... it'll be more interesting if she wasn't...hey... her mom might not even be her real one...I don't have this part figured out really yet...kinda crazy huh? Keep you hanging up the truth is actually quite simple after everything is uncovered and reveal...
My mind has a million ideas and I don't know what to use...
The story seems for exciting than it really is... I think when I'm done with this story you all will be like "oh... that it? It's so simple." But right now it's confusing.. I like confusing pplz... makes me a bad writer though...cuz at the end you'll all hate me for writing a boring story..
But for now.. my story stands as so
Review please!
And I'll write more...
Disclaimer: Don't own Rurouni Kenshin. It's so simple.
Okay... my story will be a little confusing because I just got a really good idea... I won't change the second chapter unless I can't get it to fit... I think the new idea is even more strange or even a little more funnier than before... remember, first impressions or thoughts may not be true
What you think in this story, may actually not be true...
I was not going to write this chapter so soon but an idea came to me...
Thank you my reviewers!
And to shannon chan... it's more complicated than that
To everyone: Happy Reading. My story isn't that good, and review please! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"ORO?!" Kenshin fell over in surprise.
"A daughter?" Kaoru said lightly.
"So I thought..." Kenshin and Kaoru spun around to see Tokio's wet face in the half-light of the glowing moon.
"I was right... I should have known from the beginning... I should have been convinced the first time..." Tokio wiped the tears from her smooth face.
"How did you..." Kaoru began.
"You guys actually are not that far from Tokyo.
"When did you know what?' Kaoru asked.
Tokio sighed as she motioned for them all to sit, "There is a story... it takes us back to the revolution..."
*Flashback*
Tokio shuffled her feet towards the garden where her father had told her she was meeting Saitou, her new husband. She bumped into Okita, Captain of the First Squad Shinsen Gumi.
"I congratulate you on your coming marriage. I am told she is the woman of your choice." Tokio said softly.
Okita beamed, "I am very happy... Saitou is not very pleased though..."
Tokio frowned, "Why?" Okita just shook his head and shuffled away quickly with the ever present smile on his face.
*interruption in flashback*
"So the rumors are true that Okita was to be married." Kenshin said coolly, "Arranged I was told; but he truly loved her."
Tokio nodded, "I heard the same."
"I did not hear that she loved him though..that I did not." Kenshin replied.
Tokio nodded again, "I heard the same." And continued her story.
*Flashback continued*
Tokio stopped behind a couple bushes, hearing three arguing voice. One was her husbands deep steel voice; the other two belonged to women.
"Give her a chance." Came a soft woman's voice, "Kondo has made a wise choice in choosing your wife." Her voice almost sounded like a child's.
Saitou sighed, "It's not easy to love..."
There was a snort as the other woman spoke in a chilly voice, "You don't have to love her..."
The soft voiced woman gasped, "And then what is the point in marrying her? Give her a chance... you're just afraid of getting soft and showing some weakness...Saitou, you'll discover your greatest weakness may turn into you're greatest strength." Tokio shook her head; what an innocent girl. Marrying for love? Only poets did that.
"Love is nothing... I see no point in this discussion at all. Saitou, for once just open up you're not heartless. I have to go..." The cold voice woman stormed away; footsteps pounding on the stone pathway leading to the house. Tokio pressed herself into the bushes more and the woman passed with not noticing Tokio.
Saitou sighed and turned to the woman, "What are you going do to now I am married?"
"Anything I like." Came the reply, "I don't need you to boss me around anymore."
"You're a fool. I know you will probably go do something crazy!"
"Why not? It could be something fun crazy." the woman's voice became almost innocent.
"YOU'LL get yourself KILLED! Then what would I do?"
"Whatever you like." The woman shrugged, "I have to go. Duty calls..."
"Will I see you again?"
"Probably not...actually...maybe...but I'll try not to come by."
"Why not?"
The woman sighed, "You're married now."
Saitou heaved a sigh. He hugged the woman, "I'll miss you."
"I'm sure you will... but do try and forget about me... it would be good for your marriage if you think of me all the time..." The woman hurried out in the opposite direction, towards the streets of Kyoto.
*End of Flashback*
"Did the woman ever come back?" Kaoru asked.
Tokio shook her head, "I never asked Saitou about her either...I figured she was gone..."
Kenshin's eyes narrowed as he stood up, "Someone's here.." Tokio looked around from her sitting position. Kaoru shifted backwards a little.
Tokio and Kaoru both screamed. Kenshin spun around to see figures dressed in all back. One had a bow pulled back tight with an arrow aimed at his heart. The click of the reverse blade coming out of the sheath was heard.
"Draw the sword and I slit the ladies thoarts." Came a voice. There was one person behind Tokio with a shining clean knife to Tokio's neck. Another person had done the same to Kaoru.
There were faint footsteps as a woman appeared. She had pale skin and sharp blue eyes. Her black hair fell to her shoulders, "So we did have night visitors...Good job on not being detected..."
"What do we do with them?" Asked the figure behind Kaoru. Kenshin guessed the person to probably be a woman, but was not sure as a bird cut the still air with a shrill cry.
"Bring them into the cells...We'll deal with them in the morning."
Kaoru and Tokio where dragged while Kenshin followed the black haired woman.
Kenshin woke up as the door to his cold cell was opened. The blue eyes woman glared at him, "No funny business...or we may kill the ladies with you."
"Where are they?" Kenshin demanded as the blue eyes woman drew a katana.
"This way." With the blade tip at Kenshin neck, she walked Kenshin into a small courtyard beside the large house.
Tokio and Kaoru were seated on a stone bench. There were three women guarding them, each with katana's drawn.
*Note: Katana- Japanese sword, like the one Saitou uses*
Kenshin sat on a rock by the bench. The door of the house beside the courtyard opened.
The young girl bounded out to the blue eyes lady, "Awnt Wil!" She said happily.
The blue-eyed lady smiled, "Good girl Hitomi!"
One of the woman with a katana rolled her amber eyes, "Lil... has Gina been informed?"
Lil turned around with Hitomi in her arms, "Yes of course Ani."
"Informed about what?" The woman who had opened the door to Saitou walked in, "Oh... our nighttime visitors. Come Hitomi." The little girl ran into her mother's arms.
"Go to Anzu." Her mother instructed. The little girl nodded and skipped over to the young blue eyes brunette planting flowers in a distance.
The mother's eyes, which had been soft, turned cold as she gazed at the unexpected visitors, "Your names?"
Kenshin's eyes widened as he locked eyes with the woman, "You're.. you're.."
The woman gave a small smirk, "Who Mr. Himura?" Her silver eyes gave a twinkle of amusement. Saitou stepped out from the house beside with almost an identical smirk.
"You're the Shadow Falcon!" Kenshin gasped. Kenshin thought for a moment and then his eyes widened greatly, "You were the wife of the Captain of the First Division of the Shinsen Gumi, Okita Souji."
The two smirks froze.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay...see...I changed the plot a little bit... and in the next chapter you'll find out who the Shadow Falcon is and her role in the revolution and how Kenshin knows her...oh... maybe I'll add in what her relationship with Saitou is and who that little cute girl is. It might be the chapter after the next one... I need to plan...
I'll give you a hint though, the little girl isn't Saitou's daughter... and she isn't Okita's either... it'll be more interesting if she wasn't...hey... her mom might not even be her real one...I don't have this part figured out really yet...kinda crazy huh? Keep you hanging up the truth is actually quite simple after everything is uncovered and reveal...
My mind has a million ideas and I don't know what to use...
The story seems for exciting than it really is... I think when I'm done with this story you all will be like "oh... that it? It's so simple." But right now it's confusing.. I like confusing pplz... makes me a bad writer though...cuz at the end you'll all hate me for writing a boring story..
But for now.. my story stands as so
Review please!
And I'll write more...