YUME NO KAKERA
Hello minna!! ::dodges tomatoes and everything else:: ;) EHEHE!!! I'll explain my absence okay? Just give me a minute to explain ::dodges a golf shoe:: ACK!! NO GOLF SHOES!! Those hurt!! Anyway...GOMEN NASAI!!! I know I haven't updated this fic for a long time because I had the writer's block...SO FORGIVE ME!!! ;__; I know that some people flamed me because...it's not that I didn't make Kikyou die in the first place ;) (HEHE neko enchantress), it's because I made Shirayuki kill Kikyou and yeah...stuff happened LOL!! I will show you the flames that the flamers sent. Here they are:
ginger
2002-09-13
1
Anonymous
No offence or anything, but this is a really LAME and STUPID fanfiction. In fact, it's one of the worst fic I've ever seen. And who's that pathetic bitchy Shirayuki character? Why won't she just go and mind her own business? What right does she have to SLAP my poor inuyasha?!?!
Seriously, this is one LOUSY fic... why don't you just stop writing?
girl_in_fumes
2002-09-03
5
Anonymous
Okay, just what the fucking hell are you writing about?! First Inuyasha and Kikyou were kissing each other, and then this bitchy idoitic little "Shirayuki" girl appeared out of nowhere and defend for Kagome! Get a life, will you? Like Kagome does not have ANYONE to defend her. You know what your problem is? Every single character in your story is a TOTAL FAILURE!
Kagome WILL NOT SLAP INUYASHA AND CALL KIKYOU A WENCH OR "A BALL OF MUD"!!!
SESSHOUMARU WILL NEVER FALL FOR SOME BITCHY DISGUSTING GIRL YOU CREATED!!!
INUYASHA WILL NEVER BE SO LOST IT AND HE WILL NEVER SAY HE HATE KAGOME ( i wish he would, but he will never)!!!
AND KIKYOU IS NEVER UNWANTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the worst fanfiction I've met in my entire life. Please do not write anymore and torture others' eyes.
Hai...so these people were the only two people who flamed me and yeah...causing me to stop writing for a while, wondering if I even put the story right!! CAN THEY EVEN READ!?! THIS WAS MY FIRST FIC FOR CHRIST'S SAKE!!! Anyway, I just want to tell you guys that I'm back and kicking with energy!! HEHE!! To make up for my absence, I will make this chap really, really, really, long...or try to LOL!! ^___^ enjoy!!
Inuyasha smirked, "It means that we have more time for ourselves." he said, as he pulled Kagome into his arms, and closed his mouth around hers. Kagome widened her eyes, but then loosened up to the kiss. A tongue battle broke out amongst the couple. Little did they know, that a pale blue-eyed someone was peeking at them through the bushes.
"I knew that you always loved him more than me, Kagome...I'll get you dog-turd...just you wait...then I'll claim what's rightfully mine..."
WIMPY WOLF'S REVENGE
Tears welded up in Kouga's eyes as he watched the loving couple kiss in the middle of a plain open field near a well. 'Kagome,' he thought, 'you have made a big mistake...it's me who really loves you, not some dog-turd...' he growled at the thought of his enemy who had taken his love away from him.
"I will take Kagome back...even if it means KILLING him..." Kouga smiled insanely at the thought of having the hanyou's head on a pike.
Kagome smiled against Inuyasha's warm lips, but something didn't feel right. Something felt out of place. She felt a sense of foreboding, telling that she and Inuyasha should go straight back to the village right away.
"Err...Inuyasha?" Kagome asked timidly, breaking off the passionate embrace, "I think that we should go back to the village now...I have a really bad sense that something's going to happen if we don't go...don't you feel it?"
Inuyasha stared at Kagome for a second before taking a deep sniff of fresh air. 'Hmm...' he thought, 'the air smells of Kagome...grass...trees...flowers...wolves...WOLVES?!?' Inuyasha's eyes bugged out at the smell of wolves.
"You're right, "he said solemnly, "let's go, I have a bad feeling about this too. Get on my back!!"
The dog demon bent down as Kagome jumped onto his back, both blushing slightly at the position they were in. Then Inuyasha ran with inhuman speed towards the village.
"Kagome, I smell wolves...a LOT of them!! Will you be able to get to the village by yourself? I'll fend him off, Kagome!! RUN!!" Inuyasha yelled, tossing Kagome off his back, as a pack of wolves were visible from over the hill.
"D-demo...Inuyasha...I can't leave y-," Kagome started, but was cut off by Inuyasha's words.
"-GO," he said, taking out tetsusaiga, "I can handle a bunch of wimpy wolves."
Kagome pursed her lips tightly and turned around, ready to sprint as soon as she heard the words "KAZE NO KIZU!!" come out from her lover's mouth. She ran like the wind until she saw what was ahead of her, and fell clumsily to the ground.
"KYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!" she screamed, as she felt the skin on her wrist being scraped away when she hit the cold hard ground.
"Kagome..." Kouga smiled lustfully, "it's good to see my woman again..." he grinned and pounced onto Kagome, trapping her between his legs.
"KYAAA!! Kouga-kun!! Let me go!! LET ME GO!!!" she yelled, twisting around trying to break free from his grasp.
"Kagome..." he whispered huskily, "I want you..." and with that, he closed his mouth around Kagome's as his rough hands stroke her soft cheek.
Kagome's eyes widened with terror as Kouga advanced on her. Her tiny fists beat upon his chest like raindrops splattering against the ground, but Kouga did not feel a thing. He forced his tongue into her mouth and thrashed it against hers violently. 'Inuyasha...' she thought as tears streamed down her face, 'help me...'
* * *
"DIE!!! YOU IDIOT WOLVES!!" Inuyasha yelled as he sliced through them with his mighty sword.
Something didn't feel right though...the wolves were actually letting Inuyasha hit them and knock them away. It felt like as if it was a diversion to keep him busy from...
"KAGOME!!" he shouted, and froze as he heard her scream, "I'M COMING!! HANG ON!!" he yelled, as he turned around, knocking away more wolves.
He ran faster than he did before, not stopping once to look back. His anger boiled up inside him as he skidded to a stop in front of the horror-filled scene. Kouga was on top of Kagome, half naked, trying to undress her as well. Kagome was throwing up a fit, flailing her arms and legs everywhere, trying her hardest to get Kouga off her.
"BASTARD!!" Inuyasha yelled, rushing forward as he whack Kouga on the face with his sword, "STAY AWAY FROM HER!!!"
Kouga was thrown off away from Kagome when he felt the sword hit smack his face. A bruise immediately appeared on the side of his face, as he felt his own blood dripping out from his cheek. Kagome scrambled up and ran behind Inuyasha, shaking with fear.
"Kagome," he said, putting an arm around her, "go to Miroku and Sango at once...and stay there...I can kill this piece of shit..." he glared at Kouga, who glared back.
"But, I can't leave you here-," Kagome started again.
"-JUST GO." Inuyasha said, fixing his eyes on the target in front of him.
Kagome nodded once, before scampering away like a rabbit.
"Heh. Dog-turd...always has to go after what he wants, eh? Just like a dog! HAHAHA!!" Kouga laughed heartlessly.
Inuyasha growled and gripped tetsusaiga tightly, "at least I know that Kagome loves me more than she'll ever love you..."
"SHUDDUP!!" Kouga snapped, baring his fangs at Inuyasha, "at least I didn't love some dirt bag! I get that if that scum was still here, Kagome would ever so willingly be seeking comfort in my BED!!" he seethed.
"SHUDDUP WIMPY WOLF!!" Inuyasha turned red at the thought of Kagome and Kouga in a passionate position and shuddered.
Kouga smirked at Inuyasha's reaction, "well, are you going to let me kill you or not?"
"Heh, why won't you just run home with your tail between your legs, wimpy wolf!!" Inuyasha snarled., brandishing tetsusaiga in front of his face, "or would you prefer to have me kill you?"
"We'll see about that..." Kouga said calmly, before jumping high up in the air, preparing to kick Inuyasha a kick in the head to clear his mind.
Inuyasha jumped away and Kouga's foot smashed into the ground, leaving nothing but a huge hole.
"Keh, getting a bit careless now, eh wimpy wolf?" Inuyasha smirked as he slugged Kouga in the face with his free hand as they passed each other.
Inuyasha laughed at Kouga, but what he didn't expect was that Kouga immediately turned around after Inuyasha's assault and smashed his foot into his face. Inuyasha dropped his sword and clutched at his face in agony. He was sure that one of his teeth had fallen out.
"Heh. Who's getting a bit careless now, Dog-turd? Me or you?" Kouga sneered at the hanyou, kicking him in the gut, "well, it just looks like that I would have to finish you off with that ruddy sword of yours...imagine that...killed by your own sword..."
Kouga smiled evilly and wrenched Inuyasha's sword away from his hands, but was met by a burning sensation that flooded through his hands.
"AGH!!" he yelled, clutching his hand, as he dropped the sword immediately.
Inuyasha smirked as he saw the red blisters forming on Kouga's hand. He picked up his sword and brought it down swishing over his head.
"KAZE NO KIZU!!!"
A large gust of wind could be felt, but then after a moment all was well again.
"You put up too much fuss, wimpy wolf. Rest in peace." Inuyasha said solemnly, and gave a respectful nod to the spot where Kouga once stood, nothing but dust.
* * *
"INUYASHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!" Kagome screamed with happiness, running towards the dog demon.
"Kagome!!" Inuyasha called happily, opening his arms to envelope her in a big hug.
Kagome ran into them eagerly, hugging her friend and lover tightly.
"I love you..." Inuyasha whispered quietly to her.
Kagome responded by hugging him tighter, "I love you too..."
Both were surrounded with love and high hopes for the future, promising to never let go.
ME: YUP!! That's it, but it's not the end!!! ::silences the applause the readers:: I still have to get the other pairings together...you know...Shirayuki and Sesshoumaru-
Flamer: -BOOO! Get off the stage!!
ME: Inuyasha?! I have a little favour to ask of you...::Inuyasha walks out onto the stage::
Inuyasha: yeah what? Hurry up, I got a date with Kagome.
ME: ::whispers into Inuyasha's soft fuzzy doggie ears and points at the glaring flamer::
Inuyasha: Okay whatever. ::takes out tetsusaiga:: KAZE NO KIZU!!!
POOF!! No more flamers!! ^__^
ME: Thanks, Inuyasha. Anyway, as I was saying, I have to get the other pairings together before I can really end the story...you know...Shirayuki and Sesshoumaru...Miroku and Sango...Jaken and Myouga-jiji...WHAT?!?! OKAY!! WHO MESSED UP MY SCRIPT?! Anyway, don't worry because I WON'T be having Jaken and Myouga together!! ::shudders:: anyway, it won't hurt to drop a review!! Ja!!
Hello minna!! ::dodges tomatoes and everything else:: ;) EHEHE!!! I'll explain my absence okay? Just give me a minute to explain ::dodges a golf shoe:: ACK!! NO GOLF SHOES!! Those hurt!! Anyway...GOMEN NASAI!!! I know I haven't updated this fic for a long time because I had the writer's block...SO FORGIVE ME!!! ;__; I know that some people flamed me because...it's not that I didn't make Kikyou die in the first place ;) (HEHE neko enchantress), it's because I made Shirayuki kill Kikyou and yeah...stuff happened LOL!! I will show you the flames that the flamers sent. Here they are:
ginger
2002-09-13
1
Anonymous
No offence or anything, but this is a really LAME and STUPID fanfiction. In fact, it's one of the worst fic I've ever seen. And who's that pathetic bitchy Shirayuki character? Why won't she just go and mind her own business? What right does she have to SLAP my poor inuyasha?!?!
Seriously, this is one LOUSY fic... why don't you just stop writing?
girl_in_fumes
2002-09-03
5
Anonymous
Okay, just what the fucking hell are you writing about?! First Inuyasha and Kikyou were kissing each other, and then this bitchy idoitic little "Shirayuki" girl appeared out of nowhere and defend for Kagome! Get a life, will you? Like Kagome does not have ANYONE to defend her. You know what your problem is? Every single character in your story is a TOTAL FAILURE!
Kagome WILL NOT SLAP INUYASHA AND CALL KIKYOU A WENCH OR "A BALL OF MUD"!!!
SESSHOUMARU WILL NEVER FALL FOR SOME BITCHY DISGUSTING GIRL YOU CREATED!!!
INUYASHA WILL NEVER BE SO LOST IT AND HE WILL NEVER SAY HE HATE KAGOME ( i wish he would, but he will never)!!!
AND KIKYOU IS NEVER UNWANTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the worst fanfiction I've met in my entire life. Please do not write anymore and torture others' eyes.
Hai...so these people were the only two people who flamed me and yeah...causing me to stop writing for a while, wondering if I even put the story right!! CAN THEY EVEN READ!?! THIS WAS MY FIRST FIC FOR CHRIST'S SAKE!!! Anyway, I just want to tell you guys that I'm back and kicking with energy!! HEHE!! To make up for my absence, I will make this chap really, really, really, long...or try to LOL!! ^___^ enjoy!!
Inuyasha smirked, "It means that we have more time for ourselves." he said, as he pulled Kagome into his arms, and closed his mouth around hers. Kagome widened her eyes, but then loosened up to the kiss. A tongue battle broke out amongst the couple. Little did they know, that a pale blue-eyed someone was peeking at them through the bushes.
"I knew that you always loved him more than me, Kagome...I'll get you dog-turd...just you wait...then I'll claim what's rightfully mine..."
WIMPY WOLF'S REVENGE
Tears welded up in Kouga's eyes as he watched the loving couple kiss in the middle of a plain open field near a well. 'Kagome,' he thought, 'you have made a big mistake...it's me who really loves you, not some dog-turd...' he growled at the thought of his enemy who had taken his love away from him.
"I will take Kagome back...even if it means KILLING him..." Kouga smiled insanely at the thought of having the hanyou's head on a pike.
Kagome smiled against Inuyasha's warm lips, but something didn't feel right. Something felt out of place. She felt a sense of foreboding, telling that she and Inuyasha should go straight back to the village right away.
"Err...Inuyasha?" Kagome asked timidly, breaking off the passionate embrace, "I think that we should go back to the village now...I have a really bad sense that something's going to happen if we don't go...don't you feel it?"
Inuyasha stared at Kagome for a second before taking a deep sniff of fresh air. 'Hmm...' he thought, 'the air smells of Kagome...grass...trees...flowers...wolves...WOLVES?!?' Inuyasha's eyes bugged out at the smell of wolves.
"You're right, "he said solemnly, "let's go, I have a bad feeling about this too. Get on my back!!"
The dog demon bent down as Kagome jumped onto his back, both blushing slightly at the position they were in. Then Inuyasha ran with inhuman speed towards the village.
"Kagome, I smell wolves...a LOT of them!! Will you be able to get to the village by yourself? I'll fend him off, Kagome!! RUN!!" Inuyasha yelled, tossing Kagome off his back, as a pack of wolves were visible from over the hill.
"D-demo...Inuyasha...I can't leave y-," Kagome started, but was cut off by Inuyasha's words.
"-GO," he said, taking out tetsusaiga, "I can handle a bunch of wimpy wolves."
Kagome pursed her lips tightly and turned around, ready to sprint as soon as she heard the words "KAZE NO KIZU!!" come out from her lover's mouth. She ran like the wind until she saw what was ahead of her, and fell clumsily to the ground.
"KYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!" she screamed, as she felt the skin on her wrist being scraped away when she hit the cold hard ground.
"Kagome..." Kouga smiled lustfully, "it's good to see my woman again..." he grinned and pounced onto Kagome, trapping her between his legs.
"KYAAA!! Kouga-kun!! Let me go!! LET ME GO!!!" she yelled, twisting around trying to break free from his grasp.
"Kagome..." he whispered huskily, "I want you..." and with that, he closed his mouth around Kagome's as his rough hands stroke her soft cheek.
Kagome's eyes widened with terror as Kouga advanced on her. Her tiny fists beat upon his chest like raindrops splattering against the ground, but Kouga did not feel a thing. He forced his tongue into her mouth and thrashed it against hers violently. 'Inuyasha...' she thought as tears streamed down her face, 'help me...'
* * *
"DIE!!! YOU IDIOT WOLVES!!" Inuyasha yelled as he sliced through them with his mighty sword.
Something didn't feel right though...the wolves were actually letting Inuyasha hit them and knock them away. It felt like as if it was a diversion to keep him busy from...
"KAGOME!!" he shouted, and froze as he heard her scream, "I'M COMING!! HANG ON!!" he yelled, as he turned around, knocking away more wolves.
He ran faster than he did before, not stopping once to look back. His anger boiled up inside him as he skidded to a stop in front of the horror-filled scene. Kouga was on top of Kagome, half naked, trying to undress her as well. Kagome was throwing up a fit, flailing her arms and legs everywhere, trying her hardest to get Kouga off her.
"BASTARD!!" Inuyasha yelled, rushing forward as he whack Kouga on the face with his sword, "STAY AWAY FROM HER!!!"
Kouga was thrown off away from Kagome when he felt the sword hit smack his face. A bruise immediately appeared on the side of his face, as he felt his own blood dripping out from his cheek. Kagome scrambled up and ran behind Inuyasha, shaking with fear.
"Kagome," he said, putting an arm around her, "go to Miroku and Sango at once...and stay there...I can kill this piece of shit..." he glared at Kouga, who glared back.
"But, I can't leave you here-," Kagome started again.
"-JUST GO." Inuyasha said, fixing his eyes on the target in front of him.
Kagome nodded once, before scampering away like a rabbit.
"Heh. Dog-turd...always has to go after what he wants, eh? Just like a dog! HAHAHA!!" Kouga laughed heartlessly.
Inuyasha growled and gripped tetsusaiga tightly, "at least I know that Kagome loves me more than she'll ever love you..."
"SHUDDUP!!" Kouga snapped, baring his fangs at Inuyasha, "at least I didn't love some dirt bag! I get that if that scum was still here, Kagome would ever so willingly be seeking comfort in my BED!!" he seethed.
"SHUDDUP WIMPY WOLF!!" Inuyasha turned red at the thought of Kagome and Kouga in a passionate position and shuddered.
Kouga smirked at Inuyasha's reaction, "well, are you going to let me kill you or not?"
"Heh, why won't you just run home with your tail between your legs, wimpy wolf!!" Inuyasha snarled., brandishing tetsusaiga in front of his face, "or would you prefer to have me kill you?"
"We'll see about that..." Kouga said calmly, before jumping high up in the air, preparing to kick Inuyasha a kick in the head to clear his mind.
Inuyasha jumped away and Kouga's foot smashed into the ground, leaving nothing but a huge hole.
"Keh, getting a bit careless now, eh wimpy wolf?" Inuyasha smirked as he slugged Kouga in the face with his free hand as they passed each other.
Inuyasha laughed at Kouga, but what he didn't expect was that Kouga immediately turned around after Inuyasha's assault and smashed his foot into his face. Inuyasha dropped his sword and clutched at his face in agony. He was sure that one of his teeth had fallen out.
"Heh. Who's getting a bit careless now, Dog-turd? Me or you?" Kouga sneered at the hanyou, kicking him in the gut, "well, it just looks like that I would have to finish you off with that ruddy sword of yours...imagine that...killed by your own sword..."
Kouga smiled evilly and wrenched Inuyasha's sword away from his hands, but was met by a burning sensation that flooded through his hands.
"AGH!!" he yelled, clutching his hand, as he dropped the sword immediately.
Inuyasha smirked as he saw the red blisters forming on Kouga's hand. He picked up his sword and brought it down swishing over his head.
"KAZE NO KIZU!!!"
A large gust of wind could be felt, but then after a moment all was well again.
"You put up too much fuss, wimpy wolf. Rest in peace." Inuyasha said solemnly, and gave a respectful nod to the spot where Kouga once stood, nothing but dust.
* * *
"INUYASHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!" Kagome screamed with happiness, running towards the dog demon.
"Kagome!!" Inuyasha called happily, opening his arms to envelope her in a big hug.
Kagome ran into them eagerly, hugging her friend and lover tightly.
"I love you..." Inuyasha whispered quietly to her.
Kagome responded by hugging him tighter, "I love you too..."
Both were surrounded with love and high hopes for the future, promising to never let go.
ME: YUP!! That's it, but it's not the end!!! ::silences the applause the readers:: I still have to get the other pairings together...you know...Shirayuki and Sesshoumaru-
Flamer: -BOOO! Get off the stage!!
ME: Inuyasha?! I have a little favour to ask of you...::Inuyasha walks out onto the stage::
Inuyasha: yeah what? Hurry up, I got a date with Kagome.
ME: ::whispers into Inuyasha's soft fuzzy doggie ears and points at the glaring flamer::
Inuyasha: Okay whatever. ::takes out tetsusaiga:: KAZE NO KIZU!!!
POOF!! No more flamers!! ^__^
ME: Thanks, Inuyasha. Anyway, as I was saying, I have to get the other pairings together before I can really end the story...you know...Shirayuki and Sesshoumaru...Miroku and Sango...Jaken and Myouga-jiji...WHAT?!?! OKAY!! WHO MESSED UP MY SCRIPT?! Anyway, don't worry because I WON'T be having Jaken and Myouga together!! ::shudders:: anyway, it won't hurt to drop a review!! Ja!!