The Legend of the Neophalie
Copyright- Copyright- Dragonabll Z and its characters in no way at all belong to me in any sence of the word. Suiceene and most of the characters in this are mine though and can only be used in others works if I am asked first.
Two large battle cruisers loomed in front of me. They were a little way from the atmosphere of the planet, which I could see behind them. It was amazing to look at them; they were so much bigger than any of the ships I had seen before. These were battle ships, the main protection this planet had. I stared at them as they moved apart to give me passage. Though much more powerful than the ship I was currently in, I knew I couldn't steal one of them. They were just too big. I was a small fighter and I felt ill at ease in even something as small as this police craft. As I glided past the battleships a message was sent. It seemed the chief was waiting for me. I grinned to myself as I read this. Whatever he was waiting for it certainly wasn't me. The ship started to shake as it cut downwards through the atmosphere. As the watched the bright flames lit up on the window and the nose of ship, which I could see through the window, my brain sent me information about what I was seeing. Every so often the ship would shake uncontrollably like somebody having seizures. It was so strange. I only half listened to the facts my brain had stolen as I watched the flames lick around the nose of the ship. It was strange because it didn't seem we were going through anything, it just looked like normal. Unconsciously my body started to push different buttons and different switches to prepare our land while I sunk into the recesses of my brain to concentrate. I was going into another fight but it wasn't anything as simple as just a fight. This time I wasn't outnumbered by six or so but by a hundred or so. It would be a completely different style of fighting, one my brain told me I was going to be forced to use again. Individual duels didn't matter, rather it was as if I was fighting the planet itself. I would have to kill quickly- not draw out the deaths as I would normally. For a second I wondered how I knew all this- it was as if someone was telling me….
But before I could follow this thought I noticed that we were nearing the ground. There was a large circular landing pad which we were descending towards. According to my brain part of this descended and left the ship in some deep underground parking area. This pad stood high off the ground and there was a large concrete pathway leading from it into the middle of a nearby building. Buildings stretched in a large half circle around us. Pathways high off the ground linked these buildings with each other. The deep throbbing engine cut out as we neared the ground and was replaced my a high whirring noise as we sank down vertically. By the time the ships legs had made contact with the ground with a loud thud I finally noticed the figure standing a little away from my ship. Turning off the power I hurried over toward the docking already feeling excited. As the door slid down toward the ground I heard the figure speak. He was still mumbling about something as I shot out from the opening, slamming into his body. By the time his back had hit the ground my tail had already spiked into his neck. As I leapt from his body into the air my eyes had already picked out the nearest person- at the other end of the walkway. I shot towards him my body shaped in a straight line to avoid air resistance. After a moment of startled surprise he just had time to rise his gun before my foot smashed it out of his hands. My body kept turning clockwise, one paw stuck out which ripped through his throat. For a second I held that position, my arm sticking out, one foot half raised, feeling the joy running through my system. This felt right, it was amazing how much I seemed to enjoy every kill. And then I was moving again, through the large automatic double glass doors into the main building. I was in the main reception, a desk stood by a protective wall and beside this was a door. Opposite the desk behind the wall was a seating area in which a number of different aliens were sitting. My legs moving across the floor in a blur, I shot out my paw as I passed the aliens shooting a Ki blast at them. As the explosion ripped through the room I was already kicking through the door to the main police building. Though this door was a corridor leading to a large stairway and a lift. The stairs curved ahead of me as I bounced up toward this two things happened. Three officers hurried round the corner and from somewhere deep in the building a loud klaxon alarm started to sound. The three paused for a second staring at me before reaching for t heir guns. Using my momentum I threw myself at the nearest officer, my foot catching him in the face throwing him up the steps. As I landed on the steps I heard a click from behind me. Bouncing off the ground I flipped backwards over the policemen landing just behind the second. Arching my tail behind me for a second I sent it spiking deep into his back. Even as he screamed my tail was already throwing him to the side. Leaping forward as the third officer spun round I kicked him in the chest sending him crashing against the wall. Before he slipped to the ground my paw was deeply embedded into his face, bone crunching beneath my paw. Dropping him to the ground I turned back the first officer who was rising hesitantly to his feet. He was sent flying up into the air but I flew up faster than him and was able to meet him up in the air, my foot shooting into his gut throwing him back down into the ground, my foot still in his gut- his body cushioning the fall. When I removed my foot his chest was broken and soft with destroyed muscle and blood. Without even thinking I bent down to his neck and bit down. But as I pulled back, my mouth filled with flesh I sensed movement and something exploded into me throwing me back down the stairs.
She just managed to stifle a yawn with her hand and tired to concentrate on what the conversation around her. At first she had been interested by the idea of the official dinner, seeing it as a chance to see some of the races which lived in this sector. But though they looked and spoke different the diplomats and their families seemed distressingly similar to official people she had left back on her home planet. Everything was just too well ordered, as if they were just reading out lines. All excitement and interest had seemed to have been squeezed out of their words. There was no one here even close to her own age, no one who she could hope to even have anything close to a conversation with. Suddenly deciding, she rose to her feet. Murmuring something about a walk, moved past the different shaped and coloured bodies out toward the garden, unaware of the eyes that were following her. As she passed out of the door the cold air struck her finally pushing away the feelings of sleep created by the thick heavy scented air inside the room. All the females seemed to be carrying some heavy scent and even some of the males. The garden was dark and silent- well it was only like this in some places. Large gravel and stone paths led to different features in the garden and these paths were lit. A wave of disgust suddenly filled her as she looked at the garden. It was hardly better than inside, ornately decorated and not one thing out of place. Feeling a need for some freedom, she hastily glanced around to see than no one was looking and then took off into air moving as quick as she could up into the sky. For the first time she saw the city clearly, the governors palace hung high over it. Moving away from the lights she flew down toward the darker areas of the city. This was what she had come for, to see a true view of an alien city. Earlier on in the day she had been shown the highlights of the city in a special transport. In all she had perhaps only seen about four buildings in all. and all the people she had seen were remarkably similar to those in the palace who she had just left. In fact she thought as they landed, they probably were the same. The street she had landed on was dark and empty. As she walked slowly up it, she noted the empty hulks of broken buildings, this area was obviously deserted. She smiled as she thought, that they were obviously not as rich as they had wanted her to believe. She had never seen a street like this when walking through her home city. As she continued forward she noticed more and more the dirt and grime of the area she was in. Broken down vehicles littered the streets and the buildings were covered in brightly coloured messages in an alien print. There were also a number of holes in the road she was walking along, large man sized holes. And they were not just creators- when she walked over to look down at one she couldn't see the bottom of them. Shrugging she walked on looking for some life. Hearing a noise she spun round to find heads poking out from the holes. In a couple of seconds she found that was surrounded by twenty or more different aliens. And she could see that they were different aliens, blue, green, purple and red skins were scattered among them. Their anatomies were vaguely similar to hers, give an arm or a leg, though she could see that one had what looked like two heads, one that resembled a bird of prey and the other was so hairy that she was unable to see more than his bright red eyes. Though they all looked vaguely different they were similar in their smell and in the dark black clothing that they wore. It was the bird head which spoke first, "What do we seem to have here?" Dark laughter sounded from most of the group who surrounded her. After swinging her head round to look at them all, she felt excited. She knew exactly what they were planning to do and felt slightly insulted that they thought she was an easy target but this was soon forgotten as she called up in her head the different techniques she had been taught. They didn't stand a chance against her- she was a Changeling after all but still it was a fight, her first real fight. Her first challengers that might try to kill her. "You have a choice" she replied her voice cold, "move out of the way or I'll hurt you." This time there was no laughter but a grim muttering and she heard the unsheathing of weapons around her. Their leader, two head, stepped forward until he was about a pace away from her. Leaning his furry face in close to her he asked with a growl, "what did you say you were going to do?". Her reply was swift and hard. His knee's buckled and he slipped to the ground his red eyes wide with shock. Her knee cracked into his face and as he fell back she heard the roar around her. Spinning easily she ducked as a blade came for her, her fist stopping his charge. Grabbing his body she threw it at the others to her right, ducking beneath another stab as she threw the body. It seemed so absurdly easy to her as if her enemies were faking a weakness. They were so incredibly slow, as if in slow motion. They also seemed incapable of taking weak hits at them. Simple kicks sent them flying back threw the air while a punch to the gut seemed to take all the fight out of them. The battle had barely started before it had ended. Their bodies lying around me, and inside nearby buildings where they had smashed through the wall. Below her their leader had managed to crawl to his knee's. Reaching down with her tail she looped it around his neck and lifted him off the ground. He started to struggle but she tightened my grip and his struggles grew weaker. "Drop him" Turning she saw some of my bodyguards lining the street. Kurith was the speaker. Sighing she dropped his quivering body to the dusty ground. She had only been free for less than half an hour and already she was being dragged back. As she flew back she mused to herself. Perhaps when she was older she might have more freedom. But thinking over this reminded her that she had felt the same when she was younger. The older she got the more rules started to creep into her life. They were the most powerful force in the galaxy and yet she still had to be polite and learn a multitude of different rules. Basically it meant she could never do what she wanted. She had thought that this trip would make her more independent, she could go where-ever she wanted with just her and her bodyguards. But since they had arrived her two days previous she had noticed that they were being constantly protected by the police and every day seemed to have been planned out by the Ambassador here. But perhaps something might happen. Something had better happen, she thought, before she would die of boredom from being led around being shown very similar parts of planets, the rich parts of course.
Please leave your comments and reviews.What do you think of it so far? I did a bit more with the Changeling today, what do you think of her compared to Suiceene?
Copyright- Copyright- Dragonabll Z and its characters in no way at all belong to me in any sence of the word. Suiceene and most of the characters in this are mine though and can only be used in others works if I am asked first.
Two large battle cruisers loomed in front of me. They were a little way from the atmosphere of the planet, which I could see behind them. It was amazing to look at them; they were so much bigger than any of the ships I had seen before. These were battle ships, the main protection this planet had. I stared at them as they moved apart to give me passage. Though much more powerful than the ship I was currently in, I knew I couldn't steal one of them. They were just too big. I was a small fighter and I felt ill at ease in even something as small as this police craft. As I glided past the battleships a message was sent. It seemed the chief was waiting for me. I grinned to myself as I read this. Whatever he was waiting for it certainly wasn't me. The ship started to shake as it cut downwards through the atmosphere. As the watched the bright flames lit up on the window and the nose of ship, which I could see through the window, my brain sent me information about what I was seeing. Every so often the ship would shake uncontrollably like somebody having seizures. It was so strange. I only half listened to the facts my brain had stolen as I watched the flames lick around the nose of the ship. It was strange because it didn't seem we were going through anything, it just looked like normal. Unconsciously my body started to push different buttons and different switches to prepare our land while I sunk into the recesses of my brain to concentrate. I was going into another fight but it wasn't anything as simple as just a fight. This time I wasn't outnumbered by six or so but by a hundred or so. It would be a completely different style of fighting, one my brain told me I was going to be forced to use again. Individual duels didn't matter, rather it was as if I was fighting the planet itself. I would have to kill quickly- not draw out the deaths as I would normally. For a second I wondered how I knew all this- it was as if someone was telling me….
But before I could follow this thought I noticed that we were nearing the ground. There was a large circular landing pad which we were descending towards. According to my brain part of this descended and left the ship in some deep underground parking area. This pad stood high off the ground and there was a large concrete pathway leading from it into the middle of a nearby building. Buildings stretched in a large half circle around us. Pathways high off the ground linked these buildings with each other. The deep throbbing engine cut out as we neared the ground and was replaced my a high whirring noise as we sank down vertically. By the time the ships legs had made contact with the ground with a loud thud I finally noticed the figure standing a little away from my ship. Turning off the power I hurried over toward the docking already feeling excited. As the door slid down toward the ground I heard the figure speak. He was still mumbling about something as I shot out from the opening, slamming into his body. By the time his back had hit the ground my tail had already spiked into his neck. As I leapt from his body into the air my eyes had already picked out the nearest person- at the other end of the walkway. I shot towards him my body shaped in a straight line to avoid air resistance. After a moment of startled surprise he just had time to rise his gun before my foot smashed it out of his hands. My body kept turning clockwise, one paw stuck out which ripped through his throat. For a second I held that position, my arm sticking out, one foot half raised, feeling the joy running through my system. This felt right, it was amazing how much I seemed to enjoy every kill. And then I was moving again, through the large automatic double glass doors into the main building. I was in the main reception, a desk stood by a protective wall and beside this was a door. Opposite the desk behind the wall was a seating area in which a number of different aliens were sitting. My legs moving across the floor in a blur, I shot out my paw as I passed the aliens shooting a Ki blast at them. As the explosion ripped through the room I was already kicking through the door to the main police building. Though this door was a corridor leading to a large stairway and a lift. The stairs curved ahead of me as I bounced up toward this two things happened. Three officers hurried round the corner and from somewhere deep in the building a loud klaxon alarm started to sound. The three paused for a second staring at me before reaching for t heir guns. Using my momentum I threw myself at the nearest officer, my foot catching him in the face throwing him up the steps. As I landed on the steps I heard a click from behind me. Bouncing off the ground I flipped backwards over the policemen landing just behind the second. Arching my tail behind me for a second I sent it spiking deep into his back. Even as he screamed my tail was already throwing him to the side. Leaping forward as the third officer spun round I kicked him in the chest sending him crashing against the wall. Before he slipped to the ground my paw was deeply embedded into his face, bone crunching beneath my paw. Dropping him to the ground I turned back the first officer who was rising hesitantly to his feet. He was sent flying up into the air but I flew up faster than him and was able to meet him up in the air, my foot shooting into his gut throwing him back down into the ground, my foot still in his gut- his body cushioning the fall. When I removed my foot his chest was broken and soft with destroyed muscle and blood. Without even thinking I bent down to his neck and bit down. But as I pulled back, my mouth filled with flesh I sensed movement and something exploded into me throwing me back down the stairs.
She just managed to stifle a yawn with her hand and tired to concentrate on what the conversation around her. At first she had been interested by the idea of the official dinner, seeing it as a chance to see some of the races which lived in this sector. But though they looked and spoke different the diplomats and their families seemed distressingly similar to official people she had left back on her home planet. Everything was just too well ordered, as if they were just reading out lines. All excitement and interest had seemed to have been squeezed out of their words. There was no one here even close to her own age, no one who she could hope to even have anything close to a conversation with. Suddenly deciding, she rose to her feet. Murmuring something about a walk, moved past the different shaped and coloured bodies out toward the garden, unaware of the eyes that were following her. As she passed out of the door the cold air struck her finally pushing away the feelings of sleep created by the thick heavy scented air inside the room. All the females seemed to be carrying some heavy scent and even some of the males. The garden was dark and silent- well it was only like this in some places. Large gravel and stone paths led to different features in the garden and these paths were lit. A wave of disgust suddenly filled her as she looked at the garden. It was hardly better than inside, ornately decorated and not one thing out of place. Feeling a need for some freedom, she hastily glanced around to see than no one was looking and then took off into air moving as quick as she could up into the sky. For the first time she saw the city clearly, the governors palace hung high over it. Moving away from the lights she flew down toward the darker areas of the city. This was what she had come for, to see a true view of an alien city. Earlier on in the day she had been shown the highlights of the city in a special transport. In all she had perhaps only seen about four buildings in all. and all the people she had seen were remarkably similar to those in the palace who she had just left. In fact she thought as they landed, they probably were the same. The street she had landed on was dark and empty. As she walked slowly up it, she noted the empty hulks of broken buildings, this area was obviously deserted. She smiled as she thought, that they were obviously not as rich as they had wanted her to believe. She had never seen a street like this when walking through her home city. As she continued forward she noticed more and more the dirt and grime of the area she was in. Broken down vehicles littered the streets and the buildings were covered in brightly coloured messages in an alien print. There were also a number of holes in the road she was walking along, large man sized holes. And they were not just creators- when she walked over to look down at one she couldn't see the bottom of them. Shrugging she walked on looking for some life. Hearing a noise she spun round to find heads poking out from the holes. In a couple of seconds she found that was surrounded by twenty or more different aliens. And she could see that they were different aliens, blue, green, purple and red skins were scattered among them. Their anatomies were vaguely similar to hers, give an arm or a leg, though she could see that one had what looked like two heads, one that resembled a bird of prey and the other was so hairy that she was unable to see more than his bright red eyes. Though they all looked vaguely different they were similar in their smell and in the dark black clothing that they wore. It was the bird head which spoke first, "What do we seem to have here?" Dark laughter sounded from most of the group who surrounded her. After swinging her head round to look at them all, she felt excited. She knew exactly what they were planning to do and felt slightly insulted that they thought she was an easy target but this was soon forgotten as she called up in her head the different techniques she had been taught. They didn't stand a chance against her- she was a Changeling after all but still it was a fight, her first real fight. Her first challengers that might try to kill her. "You have a choice" she replied her voice cold, "move out of the way or I'll hurt you." This time there was no laughter but a grim muttering and she heard the unsheathing of weapons around her. Their leader, two head, stepped forward until he was about a pace away from her. Leaning his furry face in close to her he asked with a growl, "what did you say you were going to do?". Her reply was swift and hard. His knee's buckled and he slipped to the ground his red eyes wide with shock. Her knee cracked into his face and as he fell back she heard the roar around her. Spinning easily she ducked as a blade came for her, her fist stopping his charge. Grabbing his body she threw it at the others to her right, ducking beneath another stab as she threw the body. It seemed so absurdly easy to her as if her enemies were faking a weakness. They were so incredibly slow, as if in slow motion. They also seemed incapable of taking weak hits at them. Simple kicks sent them flying back threw the air while a punch to the gut seemed to take all the fight out of them. The battle had barely started before it had ended. Their bodies lying around me, and inside nearby buildings where they had smashed through the wall. Below her their leader had managed to crawl to his knee's. Reaching down with her tail she looped it around his neck and lifted him off the ground. He started to struggle but she tightened my grip and his struggles grew weaker. "Drop him" Turning she saw some of my bodyguards lining the street. Kurith was the speaker. Sighing she dropped his quivering body to the dusty ground. She had only been free for less than half an hour and already she was being dragged back. As she flew back she mused to herself. Perhaps when she was older she might have more freedom. But thinking over this reminded her that she had felt the same when she was younger. The older she got the more rules started to creep into her life. They were the most powerful force in the galaxy and yet she still had to be polite and learn a multitude of different rules. Basically it meant she could never do what she wanted. She had thought that this trip would make her more independent, she could go where-ever she wanted with just her and her bodyguards. But since they had arrived her two days previous she had noticed that they were being constantly protected by the police and every day seemed to have been planned out by the Ambassador here. But perhaps something might happen. Something had better happen, she thought, before she would die of boredom from being led around being shown very similar parts of planets, the rich parts of course.
Please leave your comments and reviews.What do you think of it so far? I did a bit more with the Changeling today, what do you think of her compared to Suiceene?