OK! I have one review from a weirdo and another review from someone who actually likes it! I know the chapters are short, but that's why I update so often. Now, on with the show!
Last time, we left Malon on her way to Hyrule Castle's library. What would she want in a library over the rest of the castle, you ask? Who says she's not going to see the rest of the castle?
Note: ' marks mean that someone is thinking, if you haven't figured it out yet. You wouldn't have noticed, since nobody has talked yet, but " means verbal dialog.
The Switch
Chapter 4
Day One: Afternoon
Malon
Malon meant to go straight to the library after breakfast, but she never made it very far before getting lost or running into somebody who had some important decision to make or document to sign. 'Thank the goddesses for this necklace,' she said to herself, not knowing how correct she was. In this way, Malon actually saw every other part of the castle before the necklace gave her enough information to make a map of Hyrule Castle, allowing her to reach the library.
Malon wanted to go to the library to do some research to see if anything like this has happened before, and to look up the star phenomenon and the mysterious letter signed only with the Triforce symbol. When she had her right arm loaded down with books, she reached to grab one more with her left hand and noticed that it had a Triforce mark on it as well. 'Another thing to look up, I guess.'
Malon had discovered that the stars were a sign that the goddesses were about to do something, and the phenomenon could only be seen by those it affected; that on the rare occasion that the goddesses had to give a message to someone in Hyrule, a letter such as the one she had received would appear while one was sleeping; and that the Triforce mark on the back of her hand meant that she held the Triforce of Wisdom, something she must have received from Zelda. Malon just barely had time to look up this last fact before a castle servant came and told her that her father requested that she oversee a shipment of milk from Lon Lon Ranch. How ironic that she should be asked by her new father to receive something from her old father. However, Malon was too worried to think about this. What if whoever was in her old life came along? Malon used to accompany her father to castle town all the time, and would help bring the milk up to the castle once she was old enough. She wasn't sure that she wanted to meet whoever was now who she used to be. Malon did the best she could to shrug off this feeling and proceeded to the door that connected the kitchen to the outside...
I hope I'm doing all right. I decided, what could be more interesting than defying the will of the goddesses and bringing the two life-switchers together? Malon and Zelda will meet in the chapter after next, and what happens after is anyone's guess. Will Malon and Zelda be able to obey their letters? Read the next chapters and find out! Oh, and if you didn't know, the door to which I am referring at the end is the door you can't open when you have to push the milk crates around in the game. Yeah, I know It's probably supposed to go to the courtyard, but if Nintendo made Talon deliver milk to that same spot, I can provide for a way for it to make sense. Review and tell me what you think!
Last time, we left Malon on her way to Hyrule Castle's library. What would she want in a library over the rest of the castle, you ask? Who says she's not going to see the rest of the castle?
Note: ' marks mean that someone is thinking, if you haven't figured it out yet. You wouldn't have noticed, since nobody has talked yet, but " means verbal dialog.
The Switch
Chapter 4
Day One: Afternoon
Malon
Malon meant to go straight to the library after breakfast, but she never made it very far before getting lost or running into somebody who had some important decision to make or document to sign. 'Thank the goddesses for this necklace,' she said to herself, not knowing how correct she was. In this way, Malon actually saw every other part of the castle before the necklace gave her enough information to make a map of Hyrule Castle, allowing her to reach the library.
Malon wanted to go to the library to do some research to see if anything like this has happened before, and to look up the star phenomenon and the mysterious letter signed only with the Triforce symbol. When she had her right arm loaded down with books, she reached to grab one more with her left hand and noticed that it had a Triforce mark on it as well. 'Another thing to look up, I guess.'
Malon had discovered that the stars were a sign that the goddesses were about to do something, and the phenomenon could only be seen by those it affected; that on the rare occasion that the goddesses had to give a message to someone in Hyrule, a letter such as the one she had received would appear while one was sleeping; and that the Triforce mark on the back of her hand meant that she held the Triforce of Wisdom, something she must have received from Zelda. Malon just barely had time to look up this last fact before a castle servant came and told her that her father requested that she oversee a shipment of milk from Lon Lon Ranch. How ironic that she should be asked by her new father to receive something from her old father. However, Malon was too worried to think about this. What if whoever was in her old life came along? Malon used to accompany her father to castle town all the time, and would help bring the milk up to the castle once she was old enough. She wasn't sure that she wanted to meet whoever was now who she used to be. Malon did the best she could to shrug off this feeling and proceeded to the door that connected the kitchen to the outside...
I hope I'm doing all right. I decided, what could be more interesting than defying the will of the goddesses and bringing the two life-switchers together? Malon and Zelda will meet in the chapter after next, and what happens after is anyone's guess. Will Malon and Zelda be able to obey their letters? Read the next chapters and find out! Oh, and if you didn't know, the door to which I am referring at the end is the door you can't open when you have to push the milk crates around in the game. Yeah, I know It's probably supposed to go to the courtyard, but if Nintendo made Talon deliver milk to that same spot, I can provide for a way for it to make sense. Review and tell me what you think!