Hey guys. I'm the biggest writer's block ever! Ugh Well I'm thinking of
whether to keep her alive to stay in the past or die and go to the future
It's so not fair I can't think! I want her to be with Danny but then again
wouldn't she have to return? And if Danny DOES live what about the baby?
Ugh this is NOT funny...LOL
Yet I'm laughing. Well I came up with this. It might not be my best work
but I hope you like it either way.
And as always thanks for reviewing!
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Lia Fuentes
We kept flying.
Raymond touched himself.
"I'm alive.I'm breathing.no am I alive?"
Rafe smiled. "you're alive..how everyone else."
"Oh shit Jap patrols!!!"
There was shooting and they hide behind the plane as Rafe kept shooting with his gun with perfect aim.
He didn't now if he'd get out of here alive him, his friends and his sister.
I was struggling with the plane.
"Danny come here!"
He tries to add throttle, the engines sputter out.
We see Jap patrols hitting them with perfect aim.
We were already low flying. When I see that we start real fast as the nose of the plane is about to hit the floor.
I'm trembling. It happens so fast as if I see the world and my life pass me.
It hits. The glass jumps out scratching me. I cry in pain still holding on to the control stick. I fell the jump of the explosion. The oil spills in my face. It burns my eyes causing tears. I couldn't open my eyes, every time I did...the pain was agony. I wipe my eye with one and still holding on to the control stick not letting it go.
I feel as we're been dragged and pushed. I try to turn in hopping that it will. But then the plane flips over. So do we. I hit my head with the ceiling and we're all shouting and screaming not knowing if we'll come out alive. When we crash completely.
I'm tied up, cut and very pale. I feel cold..nervous.and weak.
I'm trembling..I feel life's coming away from me. I taught I would have died. I close my eyes because the pain in my eyes of the oil is too much too bear.
I start crying for some much pain as my body continues to tremble and it gets colder.
When I feel someone's face touch mine. I open my eyes and sees Rafe.
Ramón came and took the knife cutting what I was tied around and it was nearly strangling.
I coughed a bit.I started to cough up blood.
Rafe took out a cloth and cleaned my eyes and face.
"There I'm here..Ramon take care of her.I gotta get Danny."
Ramón looked at me. "you're real cold.and Bravlio's dead.."
"He is." I croaked. I didn't have any strength.
Ramón touched my face smiling. "you're going to make it.just gotta wipe this blood all over you.but about Bravlio I really think he's just uncounicess."
Ramón ripped some of his cloths to stop the bleeding.
I smiled. "I guess I owe you."
"Naw it's a friendship thing."
He smiled. I felt bad that I never really gave him a chance. But it wasn't time to think about that.
When I widened my eyes and a Japanese came knocking out Ramón and looked at me. They all started to shout real loud.
They all had guns pointing it at us.
I was already weak. I bursted in tears. The gun was right at my temple.
I knew I was going to die but I was in so much pain.
Danny who right beside was been threatened. Rafe was knocked to the floor.
Red had his hands up.
When I felt that they dragged to pick me up. I screamed in pain. I had metal cuts in my leg and couldn't manage to get up.
The leader of the patrols kept barking a bunch of orders.
The man picked me up again tying a wire around my leg. I start screaming and cry out.
The man hits me with the gun to the floor.
I drop on my knees with my eyes close.
He pulls me up by the hair and puts a wood in my back pulling my arms back to hold in like a type of crucifixion holding my wrists tied to the wood.
They tie another wire around my neck.
I start coughing out blood again and drop to my knees I can't handle it.
I knew I would die.
I saw Ramón and Bravlio unconscious or dead. I couldn't tell.
The Japanese check him. He's breathing.
The leader shouts a command and the Japanese takes out a gun and shoots Bravlio. His body jumps. The tears keep flowing down. The pain the misery. I saw Rafe as well. I taught they were going to do the same to him.
They grab Ramón who doesn't react and they start kicking him to see if he'd respond.
The others wire Rafe's ankles together... Rafe is emotionless. Rafe's consciousness fades in and out. he hears Danny choking, and his mind sees Danny as a boy those long years ago, being carried by the neck across the field by his father ... then Rafe sees the present: Danny being half- carried, half- dragged by the neck
He sees the way Lia was been treated. No mercy on her as they kept hitting her back harshly. She cried. He remembers her smiling and not now he sees her suffer after so many years he'd seen her go through bad times had he ever seen her go through so much pain.
I was so pale compare to my usual brown skin. My bangs flowed down to my eyes covering them as I dropped again. The man hit me again with the gun but I just fell more not handling it.
I turned and saw Danny they were doing the same to him. I saw the pain in his eyes.
Little did I know that Rafe was reacting. They had tied him with wire as well but on his feet only.
the officer is pulling red along, hands bound behind him.
Rafe starts moving, being dragged on his back, pulled by his feet along the rocky sand. His hand slides by the pistol he tossed behind the rock.
Suddenly everything starts to slow down for me. When the man hits me one more time this time on my head.
I had flashes of the movie. Suddenly I knew who I was. I wasn't Lia McCawley. I was in the future. I real name was Lia Fuentes. All the images came to my mind..
Flashback.
I'm running through the street not even knowing what I'm doing.
The light was for me and I knew it. I didn't know that a car was running like crazy been chased by the police. I was daydreaming like anyone does when they alone in the street but when I turned my heart jumped. The screech and I got hit. I was dead before I hit the floor...and now..I'm back here.."
Danny would die. I couldn't take it. As I saw the action coming before my eyes I had to do something..and I had to do it fast..
And as always thanks for reviewing!
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Lia Fuentes
We kept flying.
Raymond touched himself.
"I'm alive.I'm breathing.no am I alive?"
Rafe smiled. "you're alive..how everyone else."
"Oh shit Jap patrols!!!"
There was shooting and they hide behind the plane as Rafe kept shooting with his gun with perfect aim.
He didn't now if he'd get out of here alive him, his friends and his sister.
I was struggling with the plane.
"Danny come here!"
He tries to add throttle, the engines sputter out.
We see Jap patrols hitting them with perfect aim.
We were already low flying. When I see that we start real fast as the nose of the plane is about to hit the floor.
I'm trembling. It happens so fast as if I see the world and my life pass me.
It hits. The glass jumps out scratching me. I cry in pain still holding on to the control stick. I fell the jump of the explosion. The oil spills in my face. It burns my eyes causing tears. I couldn't open my eyes, every time I did...the pain was agony. I wipe my eye with one and still holding on to the control stick not letting it go.
I feel as we're been dragged and pushed. I try to turn in hopping that it will. But then the plane flips over. So do we. I hit my head with the ceiling and we're all shouting and screaming not knowing if we'll come out alive. When we crash completely.
I'm tied up, cut and very pale. I feel cold..nervous.and weak.
I'm trembling..I feel life's coming away from me. I taught I would have died. I close my eyes because the pain in my eyes of the oil is too much too bear.
I start crying for some much pain as my body continues to tremble and it gets colder.
When I feel someone's face touch mine. I open my eyes and sees Rafe.
Ramón came and took the knife cutting what I was tied around and it was nearly strangling.
I coughed a bit.I started to cough up blood.
Rafe took out a cloth and cleaned my eyes and face.
"There I'm here..Ramon take care of her.I gotta get Danny."
Ramón looked at me. "you're real cold.and Bravlio's dead.."
"He is." I croaked. I didn't have any strength.
Ramón touched my face smiling. "you're going to make it.just gotta wipe this blood all over you.but about Bravlio I really think he's just uncounicess."
Ramón ripped some of his cloths to stop the bleeding.
I smiled. "I guess I owe you."
"Naw it's a friendship thing."
He smiled. I felt bad that I never really gave him a chance. But it wasn't time to think about that.
When I widened my eyes and a Japanese came knocking out Ramón and looked at me. They all started to shout real loud.
They all had guns pointing it at us.
I was already weak. I bursted in tears. The gun was right at my temple.
I knew I was going to die but I was in so much pain.
Danny who right beside was been threatened. Rafe was knocked to the floor.
Red had his hands up.
When I felt that they dragged to pick me up. I screamed in pain. I had metal cuts in my leg and couldn't manage to get up.
The leader of the patrols kept barking a bunch of orders.
The man picked me up again tying a wire around my leg. I start screaming and cry out.
The man hits me with the gun to the floor.
I drop on my knees with my eyes close.
He pulls me up by the hair and puts a wood in my back pulling my arms back to hold in like a type of crucifixion holding my wrists tied to the wood.
They tie another wire around my neck.
I start coughing out blood again and drop to my knees I can't handle it.
I knew I would die.
I saw Ramón and Bravlio unconscious or dead. I couldn't tell.
The Japanese check him. He's breathing.
The leader shouts a command and the Japanese takes out a gun and shoots Bravlio. His body jumps. The tears keep flowing down. The pain the misery. I saw Rafe as well. I taught they were going to do the same to him.
They grab Ramón who doesn't react and they start kicking him to see if he'd respond.
The others wire Rafe's ankles together... Rafe is emotionless. Rafe's consciousness fades in and out. he hears Danny choking, and his mind sees Danny as a boy those long years ago, being carried by the neck across the field by his father ... then Rafe sees the present: Danny being half- carried, half- dragged by the neck
He sees the way Lia was been treated. No mercy on her as they kept hitting her back harshly. She cried. He remembers her smiling and not now he sees her suffer after so many years he'd seen her go through bad times had he ever seen her go through so much pain.
I was so pale compare to my usual brown skin. My bangs flowed down to my eyes covering them as I dropped again. The man hit me again with the gun but I just fell more not handling it.
I turned and saw Danny they were doing the same to him. I saw the pain in his eyes.
Little did I know that Rafe was reacting. They had tied him with wire as well but on his feet only.
the officer is pulling red along, hands bound behind him.
Rafe starts moving, being dragged on his back, pulled by his feet along the rocky sand. His hand slides by the pistol he tossed behind the rock.
Suddenly everything starts to slow down for me. When the man hits me one more time this time on my head.
I had flashes of the movie. Suddenly I knew who I was. I wasn't Lia McCawley. I was in the future. I real name was Lia Fuentes. All the images came to my mind..
Flashback.
I'm running through the street not even knowing what I'm doing.
The light was for me and I knew it. I didn't know that a car was running like crazy been chased by the police. I was daydreaming like anyone does when they alone in the street but when I turned my heart jumped. The screech and I got hit. I was dead before I hit the floor...and now..I'm back here.."
Danny would die. I couldn't take it. As I saw the action coming before my eyes I had to do something..and I had to do it fast..