Please read and review my short, poor attempt at a song fic. Also, please
read the paragraph below and let me know what you think of the plot for a
new story that I had in mind.
Harry is the heir of the Phoenix and disappears over the summer and no knows where he went (he goes off to do training with his parents and the founders and Merlin-he is the heir to all of them). He returns to school and won't tell anyone where he went. A while into the school year, a student is killed and all the evidence points to Harry. Dumbledore snaps Harry's wand. Harry looks up at him and tells him that he just destroyed the 'only' way to destroy Voldemort. As they are about to take Harry away (this is all taking place in the Great Hall) Harry calls to his pet phoenix(Ariel) that he got during his training(no knows that he has one). The phoenix arrives growing in size. Harry jumps on and says to take him 'home'. His last words to everyone are that they would never see Harry Potter again. Quite a few months later, the wizarding world is a mess. There is a major attack on Hogwarts, but a mysterious figure wearing a black cloak with silver flames appears and starts battling with the death eaters and eventually Voldemort(Harry has his hood on) He yells for everyone to go inside while he takes care of all the death eaters and Voldemort. After Harry battles and defeats the death eaters, he moves on to Voldemort. While he is battling Voldemort, his hood falls and he is revealed. His eyes are a bright vibrant green without glasses. He has long hair tied on a ponytail. He has a silver fang ear ring in one ear. He finally defeats Voldemort and goes into the castle, where everyone he once knew and cared for had betrayed him stood watching. He has a solid strong look in his eyes while waiting for everyone's reaction. They notice that he isn't the same as he used to be. They thank him and apologize for what they did. He nods his head saying that he accepts, but he will never trust them as he once did. Saying that he will return for the beginning of 6th year(it is now the end of the school year) Harry calls to Ariel to take him 'home'. With a final swish of his cloak, he was gone.
Please email and let me know what you think. Or you could leave it in a review.
THANKS!!
Lady Lily3
Harry is the heir of the Phoenix and disappears over the summer and no knows where he went (he goes off to do training with his parents and the founders and Merlin-he is the heir to all of them). He returns to school and won't tell anyone where he went. A while into the school year, a student is killed and all the evidence points to Harry. Dumbledore snaps Harry's wand. Harry looks up at him and tells him that he just destroyed the 'only' way to destroy Voldemort. As they are about to take Harry away (this is all taking place in the Great Hall) Harry calls to his pet phoenix(Ariel) that he got during his training(no knows that he has one). The phoenix arrives growing in size. Harry jumps on and says to take him 'home'. His last words to everyone are that they would never see Harry Potter again. Quite a few months later, the wizarding world is a mess. There is a major attack on Hogwarts, but a mysterious figure wearing a black cloak with silver flames appears and starts battling with the death eaters and eventually Voldemort(Harry has his hood on) He yells for everyone to go inside while he takes care of all the death eaters and Voldemort. After Harry battles and defeats the death eaters, he moves on to Voldemort. While he is battling Voldemort, his hood falls and he is revealed. His eyes are a bright vibrant green without glasses. He has long hair tied on a ponytail. He has a silver fang ear ring in one ear. He finally defeats Voldemort and goes into the castle, where everyone he once knew and cared for had betrayed him stood watching. He has a solid strong look in his eyes while waiting for everyone's reaction. They notice that he isn't the same as he used to be. They thank him and apologize for what they did. He nods his head saying that he accepts, but he will never trust them as he once did. Saying that he will return for the beginning of 6th year(it is now the end of the school year) Harry calls to Ariel to take him 'home'. With a final swish of his cloak, he was gone.
Please email and let me know what you think. Or you could leave it in a review.
THANKS!!
Lady Lily3