Wow. I had no idea that this fic would spark such an intense review debate. In any case, here's my response to what everyone is saying.
Look; there are holes and inconsistencies throughout this story. I admit that freely, because originally, it wasn't intended to grow into a complete story. It was written in response to a challenge a friend thought up, and I took it from there. I had no intention to elaborate into an actual story, but I found that I enjoyed writing it. The entire challenge was based upon combining story lines and experimenting with personalities and emotional relationships that aren't often seen in Tenchi fics.
It's not at all a story that will appeal to everyone. Jazz-chan and maria like it, archangel37 and some guy don't. That's fine. I haven't read the Tenchi novels that people have mentioned; any suggestions for where to find them? I can't take something into account, even the creator's own opinions, if I haven't even heard of it.
All in all, I consider it a compliment that people are involved enough to actually get into a debate over a simple fic. I hope people will keep reading; maybe I'll change some minds. As I've said, I'm trying to go back and fix some of the plot holes (there are some I'll be tying up in later chapters) to make the overall plot better and more coherent.
But remember this one thing, please. Ultimately, it's just a story, for heaven's sake! I don't need to receive rude emails full of insults and ridiculous accusations. You want to say something personal about me or my writing, use a review, and don't sign it (I'd prefer to be able to remove personal insults from my review page). I'm not naming any names, but Your behavior has been childish and unacceptable. Do it again, and I'll track you down and report you to FF.net.
In any case, I hope to have a new chapter up in a week or so. Thanks for sticking around.