So how did you guys like my story so far? Please give me reviews. I want to
know my errors.
************************************************************************
Chapter 3- Starbucks
As I got out of the classroom I went to my locker to meet my friends.
"Hey come on let's go to our favorite coffee house Starbucks!"
"Okay okay hold your panties on." Merryl said.
"I do believe we have a test on geography tomorrow. So I'm not staying for long." Mel said.
"Okay then can we just go? If we keep delaying the coffeehouse would be crammed with people already."
Then we went walking down the street towards Starbucks. When we got inside I was right it was crammed with people. We went to the counter to buy our coffee.
I bought my fave coffee Caramel Machiatto, Mel ordered her usual Mocha chino and Merryl ordered a Cappuchino. After that we kept looking for a table but cant find one.
Then we saw Walter signaling us to sit with him. He was alone. Then we guessed there was nothing else to do but to sit there. Much better than standing. We all said "Hey."
"Hey good to see you too." Walter said. "What coffee are you drinking Walter?" Merryl said questionably.
"Oh this, this is my favorite coffee, Caramel Machiatto."
I suddenly blurted out "Hey that's my favorite."
"No way!"
"Yes way!"
"Well never mind people do have the same taste." Then he winked at me.
What was that suppose to mean. Was that a wink as in he likes me or a wink just for teasing me? Why am I a boy hater! This is so hard.
Then we talked for what felt like forever. Then we were about to go when he asked me where I lived. I said "I live in 1201 Crownpoint Xavier."
"Hey I live near there. Can I walk you home?" he said.
"Sure! Let me talk to my friends for a while.in private."
"Okay I'll just wait outside." Then he walked out of Starbucks.
"Oh my god! Did you hear that you guys! He asked me if he could walk me home!" I said excitingly.
"Yeah yeah.big whoop. It's as if your wearing a mini skirt. Your that excited." Merryl said.
"I don't care come on Merryl let's go home. I still need to study." Mel said.
"Okay! You think you can help me? You know I suck at Geography." Merryl said.
"Okay okay can we just go then?" Mel said irritated.
"Okay thanks Mel."
Mel then went out of Starbucks first. Before Merryl left she said "Good Luck with Walter." Then she gave me a thumbs up then she left.
So do you know what will happen. I bet you guys do. Well give me reviews. Plzzz. Thanks.
************************************************************************
Chapter 3- Starbucks
As I got out of the classroom I went to my locker to meet my friends.
"Hey come on let's go to our favorite coffee house Starbucks!"
"Okay okay hold your panties on." Merryl said.
"I do believe we have a test on geography tomorrow. So I'm not staying for long." Mel said.
"Okay then can we just go? If we keep delaying the coffeehouse would be crammed with people already."
Then we went walking down the street towards Starbucks. When we got inside I was right it was crammed with people. We went to the counter to buy our coffee.
I bought my fave coffee Caramel Machiatto, Mel ordered her usual Mocha chino and Merryl ordered a Cappuchino. After that we kept looking for a table but cant find one.
Then we saw Walter signaling us to sit with him. He was alone. Then we guessed there was nothing else to do but to sit there. Much better than standing. We all said "Hey."
"Hey good to see you too." Walter said. "What coffee are you drinking Walter?" Merryl said questionably.
"Oh this, this is my favorite coffee, Caramel Machiatto."
I suddenly blurted out "Hey that's my favorite."
"No way!"
"Yes way!"
"Well never mind people do have the same taste." Then he winked at me.
What was that suppose to mean. Was that a wink as in he likes me or a wink just for teasing me? Why am I a boy hater! This is so hard.
Then we talked for what felt like forever. Then we were about to go when he asked me where I lived. I said "I live in 1201 Crownpoint Xavier."
"Hey I live near there. Can I walk you home?" he said.
"Sure! Let me talk to my friends for a while.in private."
"Okay I'll just wait outside." Then he walked out of Starbucks.
"Oh my god! Did you hear that you guys! He asked me if he could walk me home!" I said excitingly.
"Yeah yeah.big whoop. It's as if your wearing a mini skirt. Your that excited." Merryl said.
"I don't care come on Merryl let's go home. I still need to study." Mel said.
"Okay! You think you can help me? You know I suck at Geography." Merryl said.
"Okay okay can we just go then?" Mel said irritated.
"Okay thanks Mel."
Mel then went out of Starbucks first. Before Merryl left she said "Good Luck with Walter." Then she gave me a thumbs up then she left.
So do you know what will happen. I bet you guys do. Well give me reviews. Plzzz. Thanks.