Please review because this is my first story I've ever posted and I want to
know if I'm good or not.
Please no flames though. In case no one noticed there is a big difference
between constructive criticism and flaming.
Now on with the story.
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They were just sitting there watching the sun set when Gordo suddenly looked over. He watched the colors of the sky dance across her face, and the smile stretching across her pink glossed lips. Then she looked over.
"What do I have something on my face?"
"No your perfect, always have been, always will be." 'Did I just say that?' he thought.
Then he turned his attention back to the sky but Lizzie's attention stayed focused on him. Then a wave of emotions took her by surprise, emotions she'd been trying to avoid for the whole year. She noticed the twinkle in his eyes as he intently stared upwards, and she noticed how perfect his hair really was-even if he didn't gel it and blow dry it like every other boy she knew.
*Animated Lizzie* What is wrong with me? I'm sitting next to my best friend for my whole life and just now realizing how perfect we are for each other.* Then without even realizing it she spoke,
"Gordo"
"Yeah?" Then they both started leaning in with similar thoughts in mind,
'Is this really happening?'
Sure enough it was and their lips met in a short, but soft and perfect kiss.
"So.." Gordo began.
"Yeah, I'm sorry"
"For what?"
"For kissing you, I shouldn't be going around kissing my best friend."
"Lizzie don't apologize. I don't know if that kiss meant anything to you, but it meant everything to me."
"R-Really?"
"Yeah" he said with a smile.
"Yeah, well we've never really kissed anyone and practice does make perfect, right?"
"Well if practice makes perfect, care to be and expert?"
"You know it" and their lips met again this time with more passion.
"I love you" Gordo whispered.
"Seriously?"
"Would I lie to you?"
"I love you too."
Then Gordo and Lizzie sat side by side falling asleep against his house.
2 hours later
"Jo, I think they'll be fine"
"I know but I've been calling for two hours"
"Calm down, they're probably being kids, watching T.V. or listening to music too loud to hear the phone."
"Yeah your most likely right but" She said stopping on the pathway to the Gordon's house.
"Why'd you stop?"
"Something tells me they'll be alright until the Gordon's get home." She said looking up onto the roof where the two teenagers sat in each other's arms, and Gordo with Lizzie's pink lip gloss smeared around his lips.
"Whatever you say Jo" Sam said still oblivious to his daughter and her new boyfriend.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Yeah, I finished it! I know it was kind of rushed but give me a break.. Oh well review or email me* Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, *.*SugarBabii*.* =)
They were just sitting there watching the sun set when Gordo suddenly looked over. He watched the colors of the sky dance across her face, and the smile stretching across her pink glossed lips. Then she looked over.
"What do I have something on my face?"
"No your perfect, always have been, always will be." 'Did I just say that?' he thought.
Then he turned his attention back to the sky but Lizzie's attention stayed focused on him. Then a wave of emotions took her by surprise, emotions she'd been trying to avoid for the whole year. She noticed the twinkle in his eyes as he intently stared upwards, and she noticed how perfect his hair really was-even if he didn't gel it and blow dry it like every other boy she knew.
*Animated Lizzie* What is wrong with me? I'm sitting next to my best friend for my whole life and just now realizing how perfect we are for each other.* Then without even realizing it she spoke,
"Gordo"
"Yeah?" Then they both started leaning in with similar thoughts in mind,
'Is this really happening?'
Sure enough it was and their lips met in a short, but soft and perfect kiss.
"So.." Gordo began.
"Yeah, I'm sorry"
"For what?"
"For kissing you, I shouldn't be going around kissing my best friend."
"Lizzie don't apologize. I don't know if that kiss meant anything to you, but it meant everything to me."
"R-Really?"
"Yeah" he said with a smile.
"Yeah, well we've never really kissed anyone and practice does make perfect, right?"
"Well if practice makes perfect, care to be and expert?"
"You know it" and their lips met again this time with more passion.
"I love you" Gordo whispered.
"Seriously?"
"Would I lie to you?"
"I love you too."
Then Gordo and Lizzie sat side by side falling asleep against his house.
2 hours later
"Jo, I think they'll be fine"
"I know but I've been calling for two hours"
"Calm down, they're probably being kids, watching T.V. or listening to music too loud to hear the phone."
"Yeah your most likely right but" She said stopping on the pathway to the Gordon's house.
"Why'd you stop?"
"Something tells me they'll be alright until the Gordon's get home." She said looking up onto the roof where the two teenagers sat in each other's arms, and Gordo with Lizzie's pink lip gloss smeared around his lips.
"Whatever you say Jo" Sam said still oblivious to his daughter and her new boyfriend.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Yeah, I finished it! I know it was kind of rushed but give me a break.. Oh well review or email me* Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, *.*SugarBabii*.* =)