A/N: As I read all my reviews, I noticed a comment that said to (not in
these exact words) "get away from the movie" and "the characters confused
me"
Here are my responses: The later I can understand. My fault. I did mix up some character's lines, and it the way worded Gabbie & Bianca's scene, it sounded A LOT like "The one where it's the other way around." I didn't mean to. I just meant to show off what a POPULAR person's pov of "the beautiful people" of Padua high might seem like. Just a bit of fun. As for the first comment, if you look at MY characters and Ten Things' ORIGINAL characters. you'll notice one BIG difference. ::Hint:: in this case, it would be W-R-O-N-G for Bianca to like "Joey Donner" character.
You readers have figured that out, right? The whole who's-who, right?? If not, go to www.imdb.com or some other place where you can find a list of the actors and the character's they played in Ten Things I Hate About You. (Patrick's is his middle name) So as you see, I HAVE to "get away from the movie." But if you read the summary, the whole point of what I'm writing is that a lot can be changed, but some things are destined to happen. Have a nice day.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and I am a non-profit writer.
The next period, Art, Joey leaned over to David, who was sitting next to him. "Look at her." He motioned to Bianca, who sat a desk in front of him. "Is she always so-"
Bianca was putting on her makeup. David searched for the right word. "Vapid?"
Joey lowered her voice, but the intensity heightened. "How can u say that? She's-"
David interrupted "Conceded."
Joey moved his head so that he could see Bianca's face in her compact. He smiled shyly. "There's more to her than you think, David. I mean look at the way she smiles. her eyes. man, she's totally pure. Your' missing what's there."
David waved in front of Joey's face. "What's there is just another of Gabbie's click who within a month will have nothing going on upstairs."
In front of them, Bianca was dying as she looked over she schedule. "French?!" Bianca gapped at her schedule. She looked at Gabbie hopelessly. "I didn't sign up for French!"
Gabbie, a bit too unconcerned asked, "Ju' ever take a foreign language?" Bianca shook her head and felt like she was going to cry. Gabbie was busy applying lipgloss. "That's why then. Here, it's required to take 3 years of a foreign language."
Now Bianca was fixing her hair, trying to ignore the wrinkles her furrowed eyebrows were creating. "But then how am I going to pass-"
Gabbie rolled her eyes. "Look at your schedule. Ms. Devereaux is giving you French I and II this semester."
"It doesn't matter. Gabbie, I'm going to fail!"
Joey took a deep breath, closed his eyes for a second, and crossed his fingers. He opened his eyes and interrupted. "I'll tutor you." I'm a knight in shining armor. I'm a knight in shining armor.I'm a knight in shining armor.
Bianca turned around, delighted. "Really? Oh, you're so sweet!" Joey shrugged it off, but was positively glowing, he was so happy. He turned back around to David.
"I thought you were taking Latin.You speak French, too?" David asked
Joey couldn't stop grinning like the fool he was. "No-but I will!"
* * *
A girl ran out of the girls' bathroom as she heard a loud bang up against the wall. "Don't you EVER treat my sister like that again." Kat growled as she held Ella pinned against the wall.
"You're going to give me a bruise!" Ella wailed. "I do a swimsuit ad tomorrow!"
"I don't give a s---." Kat continued. Then she grinned. "I have a reputation back at Padua. You REALLY don't want to know what it is, but murder is one of them. Do you want me to begin a new reputation HERE.beginning with you?"
Ella was stunned. "I - uh, um."
"You won't ever do anything again." Kat demanded. It wasn't even a question.
Ella shook her head.
"Good." Kat gave Ella a shove before she left the bathroom.
Ella fumed before checking her back and shoulders for any marks. There was a handprint on her left shoulder. "Oh, they will pay," Ella swore.
* * *
Later that evening, Sharon and Brad were discussing what to do after Ella told them what had happened. "Honey," Sharon told Brad. "I don't understand it. Kat was such a sweet little girl when I left. I don't think that she would-"
"Sharon! Kat tore up Ella's shoulder without any reason! That can't go unpunished." Brad countered.
"Then what should we do?"
"I think I have an idea if your daughters are anything like mine."
* * *
"So, after discussing, Your mother and I have come up with a fit punishment." Brad sternly looked at Kat and Bianca.
Bianca stood up, appalled. "You mean Ella isn't in trouble?"
"Sit down young lady." Brad demanded.
Bianca was going to pull the 'you are not my father' saying, but thought better of it. Instead she sat down in a huff.
"What I have decided to do is what I would do if there were two of Ella and they were in trouble."
Bianca rolled her eyes. "Thank God there aren't." She muttered under her breath.
"Until school is out, a new rule is in: Bianca may date, if Kat doesn't. One girl out of the two may date. It's between the two of you to work out who gets to date when." Then Brad left the room.
Bianca smiled and stood up. "This is great! You're a mutant, you'll never date!" And with that Bianca walked out of the room. Kat followed with a half smile, unsure whether this was a good thing or not.
A/N: oooo! U weren't expecting THAT, were u? Re-read it! Not, Kat dates, Bianca dates. It's Kat dates, Bianca DOESN'T date. (
Here are my responses: The later I can understand. My fault. I did mix up some character's lines, and it the way worded Gabbie & Bianca's scene, it sounded A LOT like "The one where it's the other way around." I didn't mean to. I just meant to show off what a POPULAR person's pov of "the beautiful people" of Padua high might seem like. Just a bit of fun. As for the first comment, if you look at MY characters and Ten Things' ORIGINAL characters. you'll notice one BIG difference. ::Hint:: in this case, it would be W-R-O-N-G for Bianca to like "Joey Donner" character.
You readers have figured that out, right? The whole who's-who, right?? If not, go to www.imdb.com or some other place where you can find a list of the actors and the character's they played in Ten Things I Hate About You. (Patrick's is his middle name) So as you see, I HAVE to "get away from the movie." But if you read the summary, the whole point of what I'm writing is that a lot can be changed, but some things are destined to happen. Have a nice day.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and I am a non-profit writer.
The next period, Art, Joey leaned over to David, who was sitting next to him. "Look at her." He motioned to Bianca, who sat a desk in front of him. "Is she always so-"
Bianca was putting on her makeup. David searched for the right word. "Vapid?"
Joey lowered her voice, but the intensity heightened. "How can u say that? She's-"
David interrupted "Conceded."
Joey moved his head so that he could see Bianca's face in her compact. He smiled shyly. "There's more to her than you think, David. I mean look at the way she smiles. her eyes. man, she's totally pure. Your' missing what's there."
David waved in front of Joey's face. "What's there is just another of Gabbie's click who within a month will have nothing going on upstairs."
In front of them, Bianca was dying as she looked over she schedule. "French?!" Bianca gapped at her schedule. She looked at Gabbie hopelessly. "I didn't sign up for French!"
Gabbie, a bit too unconcerned asked, "Ju' ever take a foreign language?" Bianca shook her head and felt like she was going to cry. Gabbie was busy applying lipgloss. "That's why then. Here, it's required to take 3 years of a foreign language."
Now Bianca was fixing her hair, trying to ignore the wrinkles her furrowed eyebrows were creating. "But then how am I going to pass-"
Gabbie rolled her eyes. "Look at your schedule. Ms. Devereaux is giving you French I and II this semester."
"It doesn't matter. Gabbie, I'm going to fail!"
Joey took a deep breath, closed his eyes for a second, and crossed his fingers. He opened his eyes and interrupted. "I'll tutor you." I'm a knight in shining armor. I'm a knight in shining armor.I'm a knight in shining armor.
Bianca turned around, delighted. "Really? Oh, you're so sweet!" Joey shrugged it off, but was positively glowing, he was so happy. He turned back around to David.
"I thought you were taking Latin.You speak French, too?" David asked
Joey couldn't stop grinning like the fool he was. "No-but I will!"
* * *
A girl ran out of the girls' bathroom as she heard a loud bang up against the wall. "Don't you EVER treat my sister like that again." Kat growled as she held Ella pinned against the wall.
"You're going to give me a bruise!" Ella wailed. "I do a swimsuit ad tomorrow!"
"I don't give a s---." Kat continued. Then she grinned. "I have a reputation back at Padua. You REALLY don't want to know what it is, but murder is one of them. Do you want me to begin a new reputation HERE.beginning with you?"
Ella was stunned. "I - uh, um."
"You won't ever do anything again." Kat demanded. It wasn't even a question.
Ella shook her head.
"Good." Kat gave Ella a shove before she left the bathroom.
Ella fumed before checking her back and shoulders for any marks. There was a handprint on her left shoulder. "Oh, they will pay," Ella swore.
* * *
Later that evening, Sharon and Brad were discussing what to do after Ella told them what had happened. "Honey," Sharon told Brad. "I don't understand it. Kat was such a sweet little girl when I left. I don't think that she would-"
"Sharon! Kat tore up Ella's shoulder without any reason! That can't go unpunished." Brad countered.
"Then what should we do?"
"I think I have an idea if your daughters are anything like mine."
* * *
"So, after discussing, Your mother and I have come up with a fit punishment." Brad sternly looked at Kat and Bianca.
Bianca stood up, appalled. "You mean Ella isn't in trouble?"
"Sit down young lady." Brad demanded.
Bianca was going to pull the 'you are not my father' saying, but thought better of it. Instead she sat down in a huff.
"What I have decided to do is what I would do if there were two of Ella and they were in trouble."
Bianca rolled her eyes. "Thank God there aren't." She muttered under her breath.
"Until school is out, a new rule is in: Bianca may date, if Kat doesn't. One girl out of the two may date. It's between the two of you to work out who gets to date when." Then Brad left the room.
Bianca smiled and stood up. "This is great! You're a mutant, you'll never date!" And with that Bianca walked out of the room. Kat followed with a half smile, unsure whether this was a good thing or not.
A/N: oooo! U weren't expecting THAT, were u? Re-read it! Not, Kat dates, Bianca dates. It's Kat dates, Bianca DOESN'T date. (