Disclaimer: Same as always.
There's not really any excuse for why I didn't finish double demons, I'm just the queen of Lazyness... Sorry!
Ok, I was rushed when I wrote that last chapter... Wow I was suprised you reveiwed so soon Kitsune-chan! Thanks! Unfortunatly I am one of the girls in black... I was sooo sure they'd be in it too! However I was overjoyed that the merovingian survived, granted that his appearance was a little ahem Breif. Persephone only got one line. ONE!
So here's the re-write.... I'm really happy with the 'sad' scene at the end.
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Dedacated to Kitsune-chan (the eighth) You totally rock!
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"The mistress is coming!" giggled Salix, she was in hysterics now... this was definatly NOT like her. Jeuneun shuddered slightly, why did she know what the voices were saying to him? HOW did she know?
After afew frantic circles of a neighbour hood that Jeuneun found familiar they found the HQ, it was a large skyscraper, shining metalically in the sunlight. One of the first things that was noticed was a large shining light coming from the top floors. All thoughts of the argument forgotten, everyone proceeded to get out of the car. The Merovingian held back his twin girls, along with Cypress "I want you to stay in the car." A large unified groan made him cringe slightly. He thought for a second an then: " I didn't finish, I want you to watch ze light up zere and if anything odd 'appens call me." He handed Imi his spare cell phone; a small silver device that was obviously very valuble. "And if anything 'appens to zhat phone..." he left the threat unfinished and ran to catch up with the twins, Jeuneun and Persephone.
They had (perhaps unwisely) left the grils with Salix.
When they entered they found out that what looked like a busy office building from the outside was completely deserted, weapons strewn across the floor along with debris from the walls and blood from God knew where.
The elevator wasn't working that was clear, so Jeune'un, the twins and the merovingian ran up the stairs, persephone following as quickly as she could in her akward heels. Salix was looking after the girls in the car. They all knew that this was a bad descision but they couldn't do anything else.
After the tense, silent journey up the stairs the group reached the source of the light, what they then saw was the greatest shock of all.
What they all expected to see was the portal and Eris bringing something out of it. What they got was not so different but totally at the same time. It wasn't Eris bringing something out of the portal... it was Salix.
"What ze hell is going on here?" asked the merovingian.
"I'm bringing the mother back here!" smiled Salix, she was insane...
"What?"
"The mistress..." whispered Jeuneun "I should've known that THING wasn't the mistress... she's the mistress, Salix! She was your mistress!"
The last part was directed at the merovingian but Persephone answered "One of them at least!"
"What ze hell is ze mother zhen?"
"THAT!" yelled One pointing at the portal... something was fighting it's way out, as though it had been buried alive and was clawing through heavy earth.
It had long greasy black hair that dripped blood , it's skin was rotted and it's features groatesque... it was even worse in real life than in the dream but in a strange way it resembled...
"'SEPHONE?"
Persephone who had recoiled in horror at the sight of the thing once agin took that as in insult and her feature twisted into frown. She looked straight into the yes of the thing and growled. She was unique... an original, when she was in a room all eyes were on her, it had always been that way...
"RIGHT!" she screamed grabbing the thing forcefully by the hair. It recoiled from the angry woman, obviously outmatched. Jeuneun and the twins watched from the sidelines speechlessly, while the Merovingian rolled his eyes and Salix just stood open mouthed..
"I'm persephone... not some rotting corpse from another matrix... ME. You have this all wrong... your hair needs a serious wash and blow dry, and have you ever even HEARD of shoes? And where did you get that dress from? A garage sale maybe? It looks like it's been dragged through a marsh!"
The poor demon just stood helplessly until she regained her composure and wrigged out of persephone's grasp, backing back into the portal. Then she whispered to Salix, in a voice lisping and strange, sounding as if it was made by a mouth not adapted to human language:
"I'm sorry but I... I must go... I wanted to make this matrix my second home... it seems that that... monster i..is more powerful than I am... I am beaten..."
The thing took one look at persephone and stepped back into the portal, closing it at once.
Salix let out a horrified shreik and advanced on persephone, but was quickly shot by the Merovingian who seemed to be the only person who was able to move.
"I don't know why the hell you created me... persephone could've taken out Neo in a second!" smiled Jeuneun. Persephone nodded, acknowledging the compiliment.
"That 'performance' will haunt my nightmares for a long time..." whispered one "Agreed. Let's never ever get on her bad side." replied Two.
At that moment the merovingian's phone rang, making them all jump. He answered it quickly.
"Imi?"
"It's gone out and Salix is just... gone..."
"I know ze light's gone out, it's ok. And Salix IS gone. Please don't come up yet, wait till I come back down."
"ok. But why?"
"I don't want you to see zhis mess..."
"Ok. Au revoir papa!"
"Au revoir."
The merovingian went to sit with the girls when salix's body was carried out on a stretcher.
Cypress gasped and her eyes filled with tears. She let out a choked sob and hid her face. The merovingian pulled her close "Shhh..."
Her thin frame shook "Salix..."
"Shhh..."
"But she... she's..."
"I know..."
"How?"
He didn't have the heart to tell her the truth, for a start she had no idea what her 'sister' had done and still obviously considered her an angel and she would never trust him again...
"It was quick, she was helping us and she was shot."
"What killed her? What killed her?"
"Shh... never mind that now..."
He rocked her, for the first time in his life feeling incredibly guilty... but he'd had to do it... she was evil...
"I'll kill whatever killed her I sware!" came the muffled voice of Cypress.
The merovingian closed his eyes and replied simply:
"Whatever killed her is now gone and nothing is ever going to bring it back."
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This is the original plan, I wrote the other one and wasn't really happy with it... and I wanted to keep Cy. Poor little Cy So... at the end was he lying or reffering to himself? The first Story was based on birth, this on death and if I ever do another one It'll be based on re-birth. IF.
Will Cypress ever find out?
Will she get her revenge on the mero?
Will I ever write another one of these?
Will anyone ever think of 'sephone being that kickass ever again?
Like it? Hate it? Was it better than the last one?
There's not really any excuse for why I didn't finish double demons, I'm just the queen of Lazyness... Sorry!
Ok, I was rushed when I wrote that last chapter... Wow I was suprised you reveiwed so soon Kitsune-chan! Thanks! Unfortunatly I am one of the girls in black... I was sooo sure they'd be in it too! However I was overjoyed that the merovingian survived, granted that his appearance was a little ahem Breif. Persephone only got one line. ONE!
So here's the re-write.... I'm really happy with the 'sad' scene at the end.
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Dedacated to Kitsune-chan (the eighth) You totally rock!
-----------------------------
"The mistress is coming!" giggled Salix, she was in hysterics now... this was definatly NOT like her. Jeuneun shuddered slightly, why did she know what the voices were saying to him? HOW did she know?
After afew frantic circles of a neighbour hood that Jeuneun found familiar they found the HQ, it was a large skyscraper, shining metalically in the sunlight. One of the first things that was noticed was a large shining light coming from the top floors. All thoughts of the argument forgotten, everyone proceeded to get out of the car. The Merovingian held back his twin girls, along with Cypress "I want you to stay in the car." A large unified groan made him cringe slightly. He thought for a second an then: " I didn't finish, I want you to watch ze light up zere and if anything odd 'appens call me." He handed Imi his spare cell phone; a small silver device that was obviously very valuble. "And if anything 'appens to zhat phone..." he left the threat unfinished and ran to catch up with the twins, Jeuneun and Persephone.
They had (perhaps unwisely) left the grils with Salix.
When they entered they found out that what looked like a busy office building from the outside was completely deserted, weapons strewn across the floor along with debris from the walls and blood from God knew where.
The elevator wasn't working that was clear, so Jeune'un, the twins and the merovingian ran up the stairs, persephone following as quickly as she could in her akward heels. Salix was looking after the girls in the car. They all knew that this was a bad descision but they couldn't do anything else.
After the tense, silent journey up the stairs the group reached the source of the light, what they then saw was the greatest shock of all.
What they all expected to see was the portal and Eris bringing something out of it. What they got was not so different but totally at the same time. It wasn't Eris bringing something out of the portal... it was Salix.
"What ze hell is going on here?" asked the merovingian.
"I'm bringing the mother back here!" smiled Salix, she was insane...
"What?"
"The mistress..." whispered Jeuneun "I should've known that THING wasn't the mistress... she's the mistress, Salix! She was your mistress!"
The last part was directed at the merovingian but Persephone answered "One of them at least!"
"What ze hell is ze mother zhen?"
"THAT!" yelled One pointing at the portal... something was fighting it's way out, as though it had been buried alive and was clawing through heavy earth.
It had long greasy black hair that dripped blood , it's skin was rotted and it's features groatesque... it was even worse in real life than in the dream but in a strange way it resembled...
"'SEPHONE?"
Persephone who had recoiled in horror at the sight of the thing once agin took that as in insult and her feature twisted into frown. She looked straight into the yes of the thing and growled. She was unique... an original, when she was in a room all eyes were on her, it had always been that way...
"RIGHT!" she screamed grabbing the thing forcefully by the hair. It recoiled from the angry woman, obviously outmatched. Jeuneun and the twins watched from the sidelines speechlessly, while the Merovingian rolled his eyes and Salix just stood open mouthed..
"I'm persephone... not some rotting corpse from another matrix... ME. You have this all wrong... your hair needs a serious wash and blow dry, and have you ever even HEARD of shoes? And where did you get that dress from? A garage sale maybe? It looks like it's been dragged through a marsh!"
The poor demon just stood helplessly until she regained her composure and wrigged out of persephone's grasp, backing back into the portal. Then she whispered to Salix, in a voice lisping and strange, sounding as if it was made by a mouth not adapted to human language:
"I'm sorry but I... I must go... I wanted to make this matrix my second home... it seems that that... monster i..is more powerful than I am... I am beaten..."
The thing took one look at persephone and stepped back into the portal, closing it at once.
Salix let out a horrified shreik and advanced on persephone, but was quickly shot by the Merovingian who seemed to be the only person who was able to move.
"I don't know why the hell you created me... persephone could've taken out Neo in a second!" smiled Jeuneun. Persephone nodded, acknowledging the compiliment.
"That 'performance' will haunt my nightmares for a long time..." whispered one "Agreed. Let's never ever get on her bad side." replied Two.
At that moment the merovingian's phone rang, making them all jump. He answered it quickly.
"Imi?"
"It's gone out and Salix is just... gone..."
"I know ze light's gone out, it's ok. And Salix IS gone. Please don't come up yet, wait till I come back down."
"ok. But why?"
"I don't want you to see zhis mess..."
"Ok. Au revoir papa!"
"Au revoir."
The merovingian went to sit with the girls when salix's body was carried out on a stretcher.
Cypress gasped and her eyes filled with tears. She let out a choked sob and hid her face. The merovingian pulled her close "Shhh..."
Her thin frame shook "Salix..."
"Shhh..."
"But she... she's..."
"I know..."
"How?"
He didn't have the heart to tell her the truth, for a start she had no idea what her 'sister' had done and still obviously considered her an angel and she would never trust him again...
"It was quick, she was helping us and she was shot."
"What killed her? What killed her?"
"Shh... never mind that now..."
He rocked her, for the first time in his life feeling incredibly guilty... but he'd had to do it... she was evil...
"I'll kill whatever killed her I sware!" came the muffled voice of Cypress.
The merovingian closed his eyes and replied simply:
"Whatever killed her is now gone and nothing is ever going to bring it back."
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This is the original plan, I wrote the other one and wasn't really happy with it... and I wanted to keep Cy. Poor little Cy So... at the end was he lying or reffering to himself? The first Story was based on birth, this on death and if I ever do another one It'll be based on re-birth. IF.
Will Cypress ever find out?
Will she get her revenge on the mero?
Will I ever write another one of these?
Will anyone ever think of 'sephone being that kickass ever again?
Like it? Hate it? Was it better than the last one?