Here we go, I am so sorry 2 every1 that this took so long 2 do I have a few
comments 2 make b4 I begin:
Draco_fan: thx, this is the update (
The Critical Reviewer: first of all, it mite help if u actually read the whole fic, before judging it! I know that I have read decent fanfics, but I am not the author of those fanfics, so I do not intend 2 write the same as them, have u ever tried to write a fic? Its is harder then it seems, so y don't u write Ur own, post it and let others judge. I have read some excellent songfics, so obviously they do work and I am seriously not about 2 give up because one person says I should! And can I ask what is that stuff about the shift key? I so don't get that.
Claudia Malfoy: hey thx, I luv Ur fics as well! I hope u update them soon! (
Ok, on with the fic!
*** Hermione collapsed to the ground, the evil laughing that surrounded her, rang loudly in her ears. There we about 20 of them, and with only their eyes visible, the rest was covered in long black cloaks.
* Long lost words whisper slowly to me Still cant find what keeps me here*
"Now Mudblood scum, the dark lord requests your presence" said a death eater and stepped into the circle.
Hermione curled up into a ball and stared at him with pleading eyes, she couldn't take this.
* But all this time I've been so hollow inside I know your still there*
"Get up you filthy bitch" yelled the same death eater. But still Hermione did not move. The death eater bent down and clasped his hand around her upper arm. He pulled and she saw a lock of blonde hair fall over his eyes. She recognized it at once.
*Watching me, wanting me I can feel u pull me down*
"Draco?" she whispered and she clambered to her feet, she tried to stand straight but instead toppled into the man she assumed to be Draco.
*Fearing you, loving you I know if I knew some how*
"Draco? My son? No no you silly girl, Draco is not here, he does not want you, the dark lord does." he whispered and shoved her back up, but she stumbled backwards into one of the other death eaters. Hermione muttered something inaudible.
"Bellatrix, take her back, put her in something... Decent" Lucious said clearly with his eyes glinting mischievously.
Hunting u, I can smell u, alive Ur heart pounding in my head
Hermione struggled and Bellatrix grabbed her. There was a sudden jerk behind her navel, and the world started swimming. The rush of wind was loud on her ears, but there was dead silence when she the cold stone floor. Hermione opened her eyes, only to see red ones staring back at her. She gulped and turned away.
"Face me bitch" said the strong voice in her ear. Hermione looked back at him, but her eyes were blurred with tears so she couldn't see him properly.
"don't cry, im not going to hurt you, no not at all, u might even..like it" there was a certain glint in his eye that Hermione didn't like.
*Calling me, killing me I won't let u pull me down*
"What do you want with me?" Hermione whispered softly.
"Ah, smart question mudblood, I need a heir, since potter has gone, I will not live much longer. And being a Gryffindor, you will be the perfect match" Voldermort whispered and started pacing around.
"I will not be your heir" said Hermione simply, if she had to die, she would not do it in shame.
"Oh of course not! I could not have mudblood scum messing up my death reign, no, definitely not, but u will produce the heir for me, I will fuck you long and hard till u become pregnant, thus the heir will be formed. Once you give birth, you will be killed and death eaters will be left to raise it" Hermione wished she was dead. There were so many thoughts running threw her head right now, he was going to rape her, going to kill her, going to use her.
"Emoveray othclay" he muttered and instantly Hermione found herself naked, trembling, and one again curled into a ball.
"Bellatrix, kindly leave us" he said and started undoing his robe.
Bellatrix, walked to the door, no sooner had she reached it, when it burst open. Dressed in a black cloak, the same as the death eater's ones, his blonde hair contrasted beautifully with it. Hermione wondered if she had ever seen a better site.
"Draco, I am sure your father is expecting you in chamber 4, go now, I am busy cant you see?" Voldermort seemed aggravated as her said that.
*Saving me, raping me Watching me*
"I have not come for my father" Draco said and swiftly walked closer. Draco pulled out his wand.
"Stupefy" he yelled. Voldermort had no time to pull out his wand as it was stuck in the pocket of his robe which was currently on the floor. Voldermort fell, he landed on his back, and there was a sickening crash as his head hit the floor.
*Watching me, wanting me I can feel u pull me down*
It was over; there was a trickle of blood coming from the back of his head.
"Opstay emoveray othclay" whispered Draco and Hermione's clothes appeared on her again.
Draco ran over to here, and pulled her close, she would be safe now, he would protect her, and he would not let her go. Never.
* Fearing u, loving u I won't let u pull me down*
THE END
*** Ok, that so badly sucked ass! Soz, I have no idea where that shite came from!, I like writing shortish stories, so I mite make a sequel 2 it if I get a good response! (
Draco_fan: thx, this is the update (
The Critical Reviewer: first of all, it mite help if u actually read the whole fic, before judging it! I know that I have read decent fanfics, but I am not the author of those fanfics, so I do not intend 2 write the same as them, have u ever tried to write a fic? Its is harder then it seems, so y don't u write Ur own, post it and let others judge. I have read some excellent songfics, so obviously they do work and I am seriously not about 2 give up because one person says I should! And can I ask what is that stuff about the shift key? I so don't get that.
Claudia Malfoy: hey thx, I luv Ur fics as well! I hope u update them soon! (
Ok, on with the fic!
*** Hermione collapsed to the ground, the evil laughing that surrounded her, rang loudly in her ears. There we about 20 of them, and with only their eyes visible, the rest was covered in long black cloaks.
* Long lost words whisper slowly to me Still cant find what keeps me here*
"Now Mudblood scum, the dark lord requests your presence" said a death eater and stepped into the circle.
Hermione curled up into a ball and stared at him with pleading eyes, she couldn't take this.
* But all this time I've been so hollow inside I know your still there*
"Get up you filthy bitch" yelled the same death eater. But still Hermione did not move. The death eater bent down and clasped his hand around her upper arm. He pulled and she saw a lock of blonde hair fall over his eyes. She recognized it at once.
*Watching me, wanting me I can feel u pull me down*
"Draco?" she whispered and she clambered to her feet, she tried to stand straight but instead toppled into the man she assumed to be Draco.
*Fearing you, loving you I know if I knew some how*
"Draco? My son? No no you silly girl, Draco is not here, he does not want you, the dark lord does." he whispered and shoved her back up, but she stumbled backwards into one of the other death eaters. Hermione muttered something inaudible.
"Bellatrix, take her back, put her in something... Decent" Lucious said clearly with his eyes glinting mischievously.
Hunting u, I can smell u, alive Ur heart pounding in my head
Hermione struggled and Bellatrix grabbed her. There was a sudden jerk behind her navel, and the world started swimming. The rush of wind was loud on her ears, but there was dead silence when she the cold stone floor. Hermione opened her eyes, only to see red ones staring back at her. She gulped and turned away.
"Face me bitch" said the strong voice in her ear. Hermione looked back at him, but her eyes were blurred with tears so she couldn't see him properly.
"don't cry, im not going to hurt you, no not at all, u might even..like it" there was a certain glint in his eye that Hermione didn't like.
*Calling me, killing me I won't let u pull me down*
"What do you want with me?" Hermione whispered softly.
"Ah, smart question mudblood, I need a heir, since potter has gone, I will not live much longer. And being a Gryffindor, you will be the perfect match" Voldermort whispered and started pacing around.
"I will not be your heir" said Hermione simply, if she had to die, she would not do it in shame.
"Oh of course not! I could not have mudblood scum messing up my death reign, no, definitely not, but u will produce the heir for me, I will fuck you long and hard till u become pregnant, thus the heir will be formed. Once you give birth, you will be killed and death eaters will be left to raise it" Hermione wished she was dead. There were so many thoughts running threw her head right now, he was going to rape her, going to kill her, going to use her.
"Emoveray othclay" he muttered and instantly Hermione found herself naked, trembling, and one again curled into a ball.
"Bellatrix, kindly leave us" he said and started undoing his robe.
Bellatrix, walked to the door, no sooner had she reached it, when it burst open. Dressed in a black cloak, the same as the death eater's ones, his blonde hair contrasted beautifully with it. Hermione wondered if she had ever seen a better site.
"Draco, I am sure your father is expecting you in chamber 4, go now, I am busy cant you see?" Voldermort seemed aggravated as her said that.
*Saving me, raping me Watching me*
"I have not come for my father" Draco said and swiftly walked closer. Draco pulled out his wand.
"Stupefy" he yelled. Voldermort had no time to pull out his wand as it was stuck in the pocket of his robe which was currently on the floor. Voldermort fell, he landed on his back, and there was a sickening crash as his head hit the floor.
*Watching me, wanting me I can feel u pull me down*
It was over; there was a trickle of blood coming from the back of his head.
"Opstay emoveray othclay" whispered Draco and Hermione's clothes appeared on her again.
Draco ran over to here, and pulled her close, she would be safe now, he would protect her, and he would not let her go. Never.
* Fearing u, loving u I won't let u pull me down*
THE END
*** Ok, that so badly sucked ass! Soz, I have no idea where that shite came from!, I like writing shortish stories, so I mite make a sequel 2 it if I get a good response! (