Before we get to the story Id like to thank Zedd/ Mike for my best review
EVER! And giving me a real challenge in finding and fixing a flaw in my
story. As Ive said Phoenixes are good judges of characters because they can
read people, but then why was Fawks with Dumbledore since he was evil? A
question he proposed that I am having a difficult time solving. But never
fear readers, I will answer this qustion, hopefully soon. I just wanted to
let Zedd/Mike know that I appreciate his thought process while reading my
fanfiction, and I encourage anyone else who finds major flaws in my story
to tell me so. I can only hope it turns out as constructively as his. THANK
YOU!!!!! -jess
"Right, now as you know I was 'taken' from my house, Well on that morning my uncle showed up and removed me not before the death eaters were let threw the ward dumbledor had around my house. We flew to Romania, where he explained that he couldn't explain anything, If I had a problem with this I could fly off to Charlie but I was curious and he'd mentioned that he knew my parents, We landed on the high guard Tower of the Island, now it has no real name, but the muggles that have seen it call it Atlantis. It moves, floating all over the Atlantic."
He pulled up his sleeve revealing a patch on his arm
"That marking leads me to the island where ever it might be. Where was I oh, the first day! I met Merlin and he introduced me to the heads of Hogwarts, Queen mab, the first magical being ever, Lady Dracula, Lord Draculas first wife, and I met Lily and James Potter and Sirius at the bottom over the stairs of the tower."
Remus began to comment but found he couldn't
"I know mooney, He is not technically dead but is unable to leave the island till we find a way to push him back threw the veil which has proved difficult for Merlin. You'll see him when I take you there tomorrow, Now that day they led me down to the council of magic meeting assembly. They told me I was a direct descendant to each and every one of them and destined to destroy Voldemort and Dumbledor. They taught me to fight, and use wandless magic, control the elements talk to the animals, any form of magic, I can do it, any language I can speak it, write it, put it to use fluently, I know past, present and future, when its necessary. I can read minds, you name it I am capable of it. No Ron I'm not gonna do demonstrations"
He said smiling because He had just read Rons mind since they couldn't speak there by doing a demonstration,
Ron shut his mouth quick
"Right, So for the last three years that's all Ive done, train. Ive enjoyed the company and memories of my mother and father, mutely generation experience, family, I got my first birthday 'party' after 2 years I was an acclaimed elementalist, being able to control all the elements of earth and was given these markings,"
He pulled off his shirt
"To show I was accomplished in elemental magic"
Chloe tried to say something
"I will get to that later Cleo but your right when I'm finished" She looked thunder shocked and clung to Isis
"Its not going to hurt her, she's perfectly fine, infact she enjoys it.back to my story, so I came here, toyed with Dumbledor, so He would run to Voldemort, If one more of you shoulder at the name I am going to hex you, and tell him I was back and powerful, which He did. I left and went to Fudge's office to interrupt the meeting he was having with Voldemorts messenger boys, I. castrated.malfoy if you will, and as you saw on the t.v put him up in front of the media to admit his loyalties to Voldemort and renounce the title of mister to me, who would be replaced by someone else at a later date, tomorrow, when I accompany your father to work, straighten out this business and take a portion of you to Atlantis."
"If you simply must know who, Bill Cleo Isis, Gin, Hermione, if you must come Ron and Remus." Now after Fudges press meeting I aperated to the English mores where I had owled Voldemort to meet me, we faced of, firing elemental magic at him till Dumbledor back, They fired killing curses at me I fired a bonded killing curse and protection spell, pushed it back at Voldemort and toasted him. After that I apparently called the phoenixes to me because we fought him and overpowered the bastard. After he was ash, I collected some for Merlin because I know he'd love to have some of their magical essence, its sort of a hobby of his. I came back to Hogwarts, set wards around the school this morning and that leads us practically to here, you can speak now but one at a time"
This didn't sink in because they all burst out and Harry had to mute them again
"All right, Bill and Cleo first about Isis's make"
"What's it mean?" Bill asked
"It means your daughter is somewhat similar to me, powerful, elemental, her first power is the fire, shown by her mark, but in time and training she'll learn the others"
"What if we don't want her to learn?" Cleo asked
"Then you would be doing a very dangerous think, you daughter at her young aged as already peaked her magic to a point, deny her the out let and it will become uncontrollable and I garentee you'll lose a house a week from the burn outs. I'm sure after maybe a month of beginners training with Merlin, I can teach her the rest in the comfort of your home, so don't worry"
"How do you know that's not just a mark?" Bill asked he obviously believed but was curious
"Here" He held out a hand of fire to the baby. Mrs. Weasly shrieked but found she couldn't move
"Go on Isis, its all right, show mummy, make it grow" She laughed and the fire flared as it had earlier that night and she put her hand in it dinging her sleeve and she laughed hysterically
"Any questions"
"Not about her, but what was your first element, I mean were you also a fire thingy majig?" Ron asked. Harry laughed
"No, I was a natural at controlling the weather, my mum had a glamour charm on my birth mark because it was a lighting bolt on my fore head see, when Voldemort cursed me the power fluxed there. Some weird thing." Harry mumbled
"Right next you herm about you seeing my mum when she was here. I'll explain more when I take you to Atlantis, yes there are incredible amounts of knowledge you'll be able to get your fingers on, but you are a mage. A seer of all worlds. In other words, you see dead people."
"Ron your questions are just silly. He skipped over Ginny because she already knew everything, except why he was taking her to Atlantis.
"Ah Remus, yes, well Padfoot and Prongs and I got bored over a weeks time and decided to invent a cure for your.condition. Our boredom, and determination and an OOPS thank to Sirius, vwala, cure! But its still in Atlantis which is why you are coming with me"
"Fred George, again with silly childish questions, Percy you seemed to comprehend very well. Impressive your skill for absorbing information and adapting. Odd still. Charlie, I'm not answering that out loud." Charlie laughed and nodded at harry.
"Yes I will make time to come see that dragon. On.um.lets make it Tuesday, three days from now"
"Right now, last issue needing to be dealt with is your money. Fudge was an only heir with not relatives of any sort, and no will. He had a considerable fortune that had built up in his family for centuries. I devised it equally between each of you and 2/3s went to charities. Leaving each of you with a pile of rufly 67,000 galleons each, your parents have more though Bill I had no idea you had a family so you only have one pile instead of three, my apologies. This money is free and clear and completely yours, I'll have it delivered to your personally vaults when I conduct my business in Diagon ally tomorrow morning, if you'll give me your vault numbers" Harry said. They all numbly stared
"Here, my trusty notepad, write them down with your names." He pass it around
"Guys snap out of it!" Harry yelled the looked as if they'd just been woken up
"67 Thousand galleons!?" Fred asked
"each!?" George asked
"that's right, your all rich and you deserve it." Harry said
"Now I suggest sleep, the journey to Atlantis is fairly long, and you Arthur want to look your best for your first day as Minster" He winked and with a swish of his cloak aperated to Hogwarts. ( The ward are specifically tuned to his magical signature since he set them up)
"Right, now as you know I was 'taken' from my house, Well on that morning my uncle showed up and removed me not before the death eaters were let threw the ward dumbledor had around my house. We flew to Romania, where he explained that he couldn't explain anything, If I had a problem with this I could fly off to Charlie but I was curious and he'd mentioned that he knew my parents, We landed on the high guard Tower of the Island, now it has no real name, but the muggles that have seen it call it Atlantis. It moves, floating all over the Atlantic."
He pulled up his sleeve revealing a patch on his arm
"That marking leads me to the island where ever it might be. Where was I oh, the first day! I met Merlin and he introduced me to the heads of Hogwarts, Queen mab, the first magical being ever, Lady Dracula, Lord Draculas first wife, and I met Lily and James Potter and Sirius at the bottom over the stairs of the tower."
Remus began to comment but found he couldn't
"I know mooney, He is not technically dead but is unable to leave the island till we find a way to push him back threw the veil which has proved difficult for Merlin. You'll see him when I take you there tomorrow, Now that day they led me down to the council of magic meeting assembly. They told me I was a direct descendant to each and every one of them and destined to destroy Voldemort and Dumbledor. They taught me to fight, and use wandless magic, control the elements talk to the animals, any form of magic, I can do it, any language I can speak it, write it, put it to use fluently, I know past, present and future, when its necessary. I can read minds, you name it I am capable of it. No Ron I'm not gonna do demonstrations"
He said smiling because He had just read Rons mind since they couldn't speak there by doing a demonstration,
Ron shut his mouth quick
"Right, So for the last three years that's all Ive done, train. Ive enjoyed the company and memories of my mother and father, mutely generation experience, family, I got my first birthday 'party' after 2 years I was an acclaimed elementalist, being able to control all the elements of earth and was given these markings,"
He pulled off his shirt
"To show I was accomplished in elemental magic"
Chloe tried to say something
"I will get to that later Cleo but your right when I'm finished" She looked thunder shocked and clung to Isis
"Its not going to hurt her, she's perfectly fine, infact she enjoys it.back to my story, so I came here, toyed with Dumbledor, so He would run to Voldemort, If one more of you shoulder at the name I am going to hex you, and tell him I was back and powerful, which He did. I left and went to Fudge's office to interrupt the meeting he was having with Voldemorts messenger boys, I. castrated.malfoy if you will, and as you saw on the t.v put him up in front of the media to admit his loyalties to Voldemort and renounce the title of mister to me, who would be replaced by someone else at a later date, tomorrow, when I accompany your father to work, straighten out this business and take a portion of you to Atlantis."
"If you simply must know who, Bill Cleo Isis, Gin, Hermione, if you must come Ron and Remus." Now after Fudges press meeting I aperated to the English mores where I had owled Voldemort to meet me, we faced of, firing elemental magic at him till Dumbledor back, They fired killing curses at me I fired a bonded killing curse and protection spell, pushed it back at Voldemort and toasted him. After that I apparently called the phoenixes to me because we fought him and overpowered the bastard. After he was ash, I collected some for Merlin because I know he'd love to have some of their magical essence, its sort of a hobby of his. I came back to Hogwarts, set wards around the school this morning and that leads us practically to here, you can speak now but one at a time"
This didn't sink in because they all burst out and Harry had to mute them again
"All right, Bill and Cleo first about Isis's make"
"What's it mean?" Bill asked
"It means your daughter is somewhat similar to me, powerful, elemental, her first power is the fire, shown by her mark, but in time and training she'll learn the others"
"What if we don't want her to learn?" Cleo asked
"Then you would be doing a very dangerous think, you daughter at her young aged as already peaked her magic to a point, deny her the out let and it will become uncontrollable and I garentee you'll lose a house a week from the burn outs. I'm sure after maybe a month of beginners training with Merlin, I can teach her the rest in the comfort of your home, so don't worry"
"How do you know that's not just a mark?" Bill asked he obviously believed but was curious
"Here" He held out a hand of fire to the baby. Mrs. Weasly shrieked but found she couldn't move
"Go on Isis, its all right, show mummy, make it grow" She laughed and the fire flared as it had earlier that night and she put her hand in it dinging her sleeve and she laughed hysterically
"Any questions"
"Not about her, but what was your first element, I mean were you also a fire thingy majig?" Ron asked. Harry laughed
"No, I was a natural at controlling the weather, my mum had a glamour charm on my birth mark because it was a lighting bolt on my fore head see, when Voldemort cursed me the power fluxed there. Some weird thing." Harry mumbled
"Right next you herm about you seeing my mum when she was here. I'll explain more when I take you to Atlantis, yes there are incredible amounts of knowledge you'll be able to get your fingers on, but you are a mage. A seer of all worlds. In other words, you see dead people."
"Ron your questions are just silly. He skipped over Ginny because she already knew everything, except why he was taking her to Atlantis.
"Ah Remus, yes, well Padfoot and Prongs and I got bored over a weeks time and decided to invent a cure for your.condition. Our boredom, and determination and an OOPS thank to Sirius, vwala, cure! But its still in Atlantis which is why you are coming with me"
"Fred George, again with silly childish questions, Percy you seemed to comprehend very well. Impressive your skill for absorbing information and adapting. Odd still. Charlie, I'm not answering that out loud." Charlie laughed and nodded at harry.
"Yes I will make time to come see that dragon. On.um.lets make it Tuesday, three days from now"
"Right now, last issue needing to be dealt with is your money. Fudge was an only heir with not relatives of any sort, and no will. He had a considerable fortune that had built up in his family for centuries. I devised it equally between each of you and 2/3s went to charities. Leaving each of you with a pile of rufly 67,000 galleons each, your parents have more though Bill I had no idea you had a family so you only have one pile instead of three, my apologies. This money is free and clear and completely yours, I'll have it delivered to your personally vaults when I conduct my business in Diagon ally tomorrow morning, if you'll give me your vault numbers" Harry said. They all numbly stared
"Here, my trusty notepad, write them down with your names." He pass it around
"Guys snap out of it!" Harry yelled the looked as if they'd just been woken up
"67 Thousand galleons!?" Fred asked
"each!?" George asked
"that's right, your all rich and you deserve it." Harry said
"Now I suggest sleep, the journey to Atlantis is fairly long, and you Arthur want to look your best for your first day as Minster" He winked and with a swish of his cloak aperated to Hogwarts. ( The ward are specifically tuned to his magical signature since he set them up)