Hello,
all! Thank you for reviewing; I greatly appreciate it!
Trinity - Thank you for pointing
that out; I must've typed it wrong - oops. I'll fix that in a bit. I wanted to
leave Peter out, but I also wanted (and still do) to stay as true to the book
as possible, so he stays. Traitor brat. Him, not you, obviously. I'm very glad
you found it easy to read and hope you enjoy the second chapter, too. As for
writing it, most of it pretty much just came to me, but I had to fiddle to get
the exact mood I wanted.
Lil-Brat - What's your name, if you
don't mind? I don't like writing these things and having to use usernames if it
can be avoided... I'm glad you liked the beginning; I messed with it several times
to get the effect I wanted.
Sky - Thanks for the review! Glad
you like it!
Tessa - Thank you for both of the
reviews, especially the first one! The first review's always special...
Now, on to the story; sorry this chapter's so short...
CHAPTER III - IN WHICH JAMES LOSES HIS TEMPER
(Weird title; oh well)
Immediately after lunch, James, Sirius, and Remus said goodbye to Mr. and Mrs.
Potter and Flooed to the Leaky Cauldron. Strolling down the lane that looked,
to James, at least, as though it had sprung to life from the pages of a
storybook, Sirius and Remus chatted animatedly to each other about who-
knows-what. James had drifted back into the usually vaguely familiar territory
that is human thought, though his thoughts had been trodden over many times.
First, he thought about Lily. Surprise, surprise. Then, to try and rid himself
of the memory of last June, he pulled out his book list and read it again...
And again... And again. Each time, however, something, from a book he'd seen
her read to the emerald ink, reminded him of Lily Evans, the first girl he'd
ever really liked and the only girl who wouldn't go out with him. Well, only
girl not in Slytherin that wouldn't go out with him, but they don't count.
As the three boys passed Florean Fortescue's ice cream parlor, James suggested,
in yet another attempt to distract himself from thoughts of Lily, that they
stop for ice cream. It was the perfect day for one of Fortescue's sundaes (not
that there ever was a bad day for ice cream), so the other two hurriedly
agreed, and they all marched inside. James ordered three hot fudge sundaes and
paid, while Sirius and Remus picked a table by the window to "satisfy
Sirius's inner child." As he passed out the ice creams, James cast around
for something to talk about. Remus, the perceptive one, picked up on this and
began finalizing pranks. As much so as you can a few weeks to several months
ahead of time, anyway.
About twenty minutes later, just as James had temporarily forgotten about Lily,
Sirius got one of his ideas. "You know, if she still won't go out with
you..." Here he lowered his voice conspiratorially. "... you could
prank her. I have some ideas that won't-"
"NO!" James cut him off sharply. "I WILL NOT!" Everyone in
the ice cream parlor was staring at the boy now on his feet; some of the girls
didn't seem to notice the fact that he was angry and were staring with hearts
in their eyes.
"Fine, fine," Sirius said, seeming shocked at his friend's outburst.
"It was just a suggestion."
"Yeah, well," James told him, still with his voice slightly raised.
"It wasn't a very good one." And with that he stormed out, leaving a
half-finished sundae and a stunned silence behind him.
Storming down the alleyway, James turned many heads, some glaring at him,
others looking sympathetic, but he was oblivious to them all. How DARE Sirius
even suggest it! He knew how James felt, and he still had the nerve... Stopping
for just a moment, James decided to start shopping for his school things. After
all, he had nothing better to do, and as he was outside Flourish and Blotts',
he decided to start there. Pulling out his booklist and marched into the store,
starting off on another furious tirade about Sirius as he went.
