Achilles Last Stand: Dear Lord. So many things wrong. Angst idiotic pseudo-intellectual sounding crap is all this is.
"Look at me, I'm so totally going to kill myself!" God.
OrlisGurl: Oh please do. *rolls eyes*
Achilles Last Stand: You need to stop using the //I heard that Blitz//, too. There is this thing called the English language, when people speak it has quotation marks for that purpose.
OrlisGurl: Well for your information I know that, and if you even bothered to read the notes that I add in before the beginning of most chapters then you know that //...// is not talking therefore you wouldn't use quotation marks you moron! And the English language does not have marks for thinking, and this is my fic so I can do what the fuck
I want with it and if you don't like, I DON'T GIVE A DAMN! There is really no use in flaming me.
Achilles Last Stand: And it's a Mary Sue story.
OrlisGurl: Like I said before my fic.
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Anyways thanks for reviewing ^^. Well continuing on with the story ENJOY ^^. And I still need some more votes on if you want Kit to be Kai's relative or sister. And I also need a vote for pairings.
1: Ray/Kit
2: Kit/Alex
3: Ray/Mariah
So tell me which pairing you like best :D
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"..." Talking
//...// Thinking or talking to bitbeast.
(...) Authors note
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"Ah, Kit I've found you." Said the man with a sick twisted smirk. Kit turned pale.
"W-who are you and what do you want!" Kit yelled at the man.
"Don't you remember me?" The man asked. Kit gulped.
"I'm disappointed in you I thought that you would at least remember your creator."
Said the man. Everyone was silent. Kit was aware that everyone was staring at her, but she was frozen solid, and scared. She felt like an animal caught in a trap and there was no hope.
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Kit's heart was beating faster by the second. She glared at the man trying to remember who he was. She could tell everyone was staring at her and were worried and scared what was going to happen.
"Who the hell are you?" asked Kit as calmly as possible. The man laughed the gun still in his hand pointed at Kit.
"Like I said your creator." He repeated. Kit looked confused.
"What the hell is that supposed to mean?" she snapped totally losing her patients. The man clicked his tongue. Kit glared.
"I'll explain later, but right now your coming with me." The man ordered. Behind her back Kit put her blade into her launcher and thought of a perfect angle to fire her blade.
"Fat chance!" Kit snarled launching her blade to the door, which bounced off and smashed into the gun. The gun slid to Kit's feet. Kit's blade returned to her spinning by her side. Kit picked up the gun swiftly and pointed it sharply at the man. Kit growled and moved towards the man who was backing away slowly. Kit charged at the man who moved out of the way, but grabbed Kit's ankle. Kit grunted as she hit the tiled floor. She kicked the man with her free leg and ran as fast as she could away from the school. The man stood there cursing. The class had locked themselves in their classroom. The man got out his cell phone.
"I lost the girl. She's running north get her and don't fail me again!" he snapped and hung up. He went to his car and started to drive to the direction Kit had took off in.
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Kit was in pain from when she had fallen, but she kept on going. She knew that, that man was looking for her and that he probably had some 'friends' of his looking for her too. She turned and walked deeper into an alley. A boy was hidden in shadows, as soon as Kit walked past the patch of shadow by a step the boy wrapped an arm around Kit and with his other hand he covered her mouth. Kit struggled to get away from whoever had trapped her.
"Calm down." He whispered in her ear. Kit gulped; she had never, but once felt fear in her life. Kit took deep breaths and eventually calmed down. He led her deeper into the alleys then released her. She immediately turned around and took a couple steps back.
"You!" Kit said surprised.
"Me?" he asked confused.
"What do you want Alex." Kit growled dangerously.
"To talk." He answered simply.
"To talk? HA" Kit said in disbelief.
"I'm serious Kitty." He said kindly. Kit gulped.
//How did he know her old nickname?// Kit asked herself. Alex smiled.
"So you do remember me." He said.
"What makes you say that?" Kit asked bitterly. "You were going to beat to death a couple days ago and now..."
"And now what?" he asked.
"Now you're just standing there." Kit said
"Listen I can explain." He said. Kit looked hesitant.
"Fine, shoot." Kit said.
"Ok, a couple years ago I joined this gang, who I found out was after you. And well I acted loyal to them and I was made on of their high leaders. And when I told my gang to leave you that night, I was put in a lower class-" Alex started.
"So what if you were put in lower class! And who the fuck are they and what do they want with me?" Kit asked impatiently.
"I'm getting there." He said. "They threatened to kill me if I disobeyed them again or left the gang. But I couldn't let them kill you Kit, I've known you forever." He said looking down. Kit looked away from Alex in deep thought. Kit sighed.
"Your not telling me something." Said Kit. Alex blushed lightly, which wasn't visible in the lack of light.
"You're right, but I won't tell until the day I die." Alex said mysteriously.
"Just because I listened to your problem doesn't mean that I trust you." Said Kit looking at Alex's face, but avoiding his eyes.
"I can live with that, but if you want to live until tomorrow I suggest that you stay at my place tonight." Said Alex unemotionally. Kit frowned.
"I'll make it back safe and sound before you even know it." Said Kit not trusting her old so-called-friend.
"You won't make it back." Alex said in a don't-bother-arguing-with-me voice.
"How do you know?" Kit asked suspiciously.
"There are more than a hundred men looking for you and this is a small city. Besides every single man knows what you look like in your cat form." Alex said plainly. Kit's eyes widened.
"Where's your place?" Kit asked.
"Down the alley." Said Alex pointing towards a back entrance door. Kit frowned.
"Fine!" she snapped and followed Alex who was smirking.
//Can I trust him Blitz?// Kit asked her bitbeast uneasily.
//Yes you can mistress.// answered Blitz. Kit sighed and walked in through the door, which Alex was holding open for her.
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Kai was looking out the window of his classroom. The police had come and his class was being held back for questioning. Kai sighed.
//Who was that man and what did he want with Kit?// Kai asked himself.
//Why do you care master?// asked Dranzer suspiciously.
//That man reminds me of Voltaire and Kit, well I remember her from my past.// said Kai.
//Don't worry master Kit is probably safe and sound.// Dranzer said.
"Ya sure." Kai muttered
"What was that Kai?" Ray asked, who was sitting next to Kai.
"Nothing." Said Kai.
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What kind of trick does Alex have up his sleeve? Or is he as trustworthy as he claims? R&R plz. And I still need some more votes on if you want Kit to be Kai's relative or sister. And I also need a vote for pairings.
1: Ray/Kit
2: Kit/Alex
3: Ray/Mariah
So tell me which pairing you like best ^.~
"Look at me, I'm so totally going to kill myself!" God.
OrlisGurl: Oh please do. *rolls eyes*
Achilles Last Stand: You need to stop using the //I heard that Blitz//, too. There is this thing called the English language, when people speak it has quotation marks for that purpose.
OrlisGurl: Well for your information I know that, and if you even bothered to read the notes that I add in before the beginning of most chapters then you know that //...// is not talking therefore you wouldn't use quotation marks you moron! And the English language does not have marks for thinking, and this is my fic so I can do what the fuck
I want with it and if you don't like, I DON'T GIVE A DAMN! There is really no use in flaming me.
Achilles Last Stand: And it's a Mary Sue story.
OrlisGurl: Like I said before my fic.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Anyways thanks for reviewing ^^. Well continuing on with the story ENJOY ^^. And I still need some more votes on if you want Kit to be Kai's relative or sister. And I also need a vote for pairings.
1: Ray/Kit
2: Kit/Alex
3: Ray/Mariah
So tell me which pairing you like best :D
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"..." Talking
//...// Thinking or talking to bitbeast.
(...) Authors note
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"Ah, Kit I've found you." Said the man with a sick twisted smirk. Kit turned pale.
"W-who are you and what do you want!" Kit yelled at the man.
"Don't you remember me?" The man asked. Kit gulped.
"I'm disappointed in you I thought that you would at least remember your creator."
Said the man. Everyone was silent. Kit was aware that everyone was staring at her, but she was frozen solid, and scared. She felt like an animal caught in a trap and there was no hope.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Kit's heart was beating faster by the second. She glared at the man trying to remember who he was. She could tell everyone was staring at her and were worried and scared what was going to happen.
"Who the hell are you?" asked Kit as calmly as possible. The man laughed the gun still in his hand pointed at Kit.
"Like I said your creator." He repeated. Kit looked confused.
"What the hell is that supposed to mean?" she snapped totally losing her patients. The man clicked his tongue. Kit glared.
"I'll explain later, but right now your coming with me." The man ordered. Behind her back Kit put her blade into her launcher and thought of a perfect angle to fire her blade.
"Fat chance!" Kit snarled launching her blade to the door, which bounced off and smashed into the gun. The gun slid to Kit's feet. Kit's blade returned to her spinning by her side. Kit picked up the gun swiftly and pointed it sharply at the man. Kit growled and moved towards the man who was backing away slowly. Kit charged at the man who moved out of the way, but grabbed Kit's ankle. Kit grunted as she hit the tiled floor. She kicked the man with her free leg and ran as fast as she could away from the school. The man stood there cursing. The class had locked themselves in their classroom. The man got out his cell phone.
"I lost the girl. She's running north get her and don't fail me again!" he snapped and hung up. He went to his car and started to drive to the direction Kit had took off in.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Kit was in pain from when she had fallen, but she kept on going. She knew that, that man was looking for her and that he probably had some 'friends' of his looking for her too. She turned and walked deeper into an alley. A boy was hidden in shadows, as soon as Kit walked past the patch of shadow by a step the boy wrapped an arm around Kit and with his other hand he covered her mouth. Kit struggled to get away from whoever had trapped her.
"Calm down." He whispered in her ear. Kit gulped; she had never, but once felt fear in her life. Kit took deep breaths and eventually calmed down. He led her deeper into the alleys then released her. She immediately turned around and took a couple steps back.
"You!" Kit said surprised.
"Me?" he asked confused.
"What do you want Alex." Kit growled dangerously.
"To talk." He answered simply.
"To talk? HA" Kit said in disbelief.
"I'm serious Kitty." He said kindly. Kit gulped.
//How did he know her old nickname?// Kit asked herself. Alex smiled.
"So you do remember me." He said.
"What makes you say that?" Kit asked bitterly. "You were going to beat to death a couple days ago and now..."
"And now what?" he asked.
"Now you're just standing there." Kit said
"Listen I can explain." He said. Kit looked hesitant.
"Fine, shoot." Kit said.
"Ok, a couple years ago I joined this gang, who I found out was after you. And well I acted loyal to them and I was made on of their high leaders. And when I told my gang to leave you that night, I was put in a lower class-" Alex started.
"So what if you were put in lower class! And who the fuck are they and what do they want with me?" Kit asked impatiently.
"I'm getting there." He said. "They threatened to kill me if I disobeyed them again or left the gang. But I couldn't let them kill you Kit, I've known you forever." He said looking down. Kit looked away from Alex in deep thought. Kit sighed.
"Your not telling me something." Said Kit. Alex blushed lightly, which wasn't visible in the lack of light.
"You're right, but I won't tell until the day I die." Alex said mysteriously.
"Just because I listened to your problem doesn't mean that I trust you." Said Kit looking at Alex's face, but avoiding his eyes.
"I can live with that, but if you want to live until tomorrow I suggest that you stay at my place tonight." Said Alex unemotionally. Kit frowned.
"I'll make it back safe and sound before you even know it." Said Kit not trusting her old so-called-friend.
"You won't make it back." Alex said in a don't-bother-arguing-with-me voice.
"How do you know?" Kit asked suspiciously.
"There are more than a hundred men looking for you and this is a small city. Besides every single man knows what you look like in your cat form." Alex said plainly. Kit's eyes widened.
"Where's your place?" Kit asked.
"Down the alley." Said Alex pointing towards a back entrance door. Kit frowned.
"Fine!" she snapped and followed Alex who was smirking.
//Can I trust him Blitz?// Kit asked her bitbeast uneasily.
//Yes you can mistress.// answered Blitz. Kit sighed and walked in through the door, which Alex was holding open for her.
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Kai was looking out the window of his classroom. The police had come and his class was being held back for questioning. Kai sighed.
//Who was that man and what did he want with Kit?// Kai asked himself.
//Why do you care master?// asked Dranzer suspiciously.
//That man reminds me of Voltaire and Kit, well I remember her from my past.// said Kai.
//Don't worry master Kit is probably safe and sound.// Dranzer said.
"Ya sure." Kai muttered
"What was that Kai?" Ray asked, who was sitting next to Kai.
"Nothing." Said Kai.
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What kind of trick does Alex have up his sleeve? Or is he as trustworthy as he claims? R&R plz. And I still need some more votes on if you want Kit to be Kai's relative or sister. And I also need a vote for pairings.
1: Ray/Kit
2: Kit/Alex
3: Ray/Mariah
So tell me which pairing you like best ^.~