If my writing isn't too good in this story gomen. I kinda in a sad mood b/c like I found out today that one of my internet frenz lied to me. I don't want to say n e more just in case she happens to read this. You guys prob think I weird. But I the kinda person who has to b accepted by everyone. I mean like I not frenz with everyone but they all are ok to me, they don't lie to me. Even the people I don't like that much we all on good terms. I don't think I've really met n e one who's totally disliked me other than cousins and siblings but those don't count. And moreover I think of frenz on internet kinda like real frenz cuz we all talk and joke around just like real, just it's on the internet. Almost like real except instead of talking you type and you don't get to hang out with the other person like you would a friend you know. I know I a weird person, not everyone in the world will like me, but I try. I don't like people not liking me. I have the plot planned out already so it shouldn't b that bad, just the flow of writing is kinda interrupted sorta I think, cuz I keep thinking about that person and then my thoughts get interrupted that's why I trying to write to help me forget cuz when I write I lose all perspective to everything else around me, I get lost in the story. I tried tv and it didn't work so… o and just to warn u if there's anything after this and I sound all genki it's cuz I working on the story at another time. That's why some parts of this thing about me don't correspond. Sometimes I don't finish writing the entire story at one time. Sorry to interrupt u with my sorry life I just like getting it out of me, so I load it onto u readers out there. It's kinda interesting tho I think cuz u get to see how the author lives sorta. Well standard disclaimers apply yada yada yada. O and as I said before ages are messed cuz I dunno their ages so they might be off.
"Get off me you little brat!" Nakago exclaimed as Karin pulled on his long hair again. She tugged harder. "Go faster. Go faster." She said. Nakago brought her to a pond on the road and bent down. "Ahhhh!!" Karin yelled as she fell from her riding place. "Na-chan!" Kimiko exclaimed as she picked a sopping wet Karin-chan from the pond. "Nakago-niichan is mean!" Karin exclaimed. Nakago turned his back to them. "Can you two quit acting like children." Kimiko said tiredly as she rummaged through the packs for clean clothes. It had been like this for a month. Karin would get on Nakago's nerves and they'd fight. "But I am a kid." Karin protested. "I was mainly talking to Na-chan." Kimiko said looking purposefully at Nakago. He averted his eyes. "Kimiko-neechan, make him apologize." Karin said. "No way." Nakago said adamantly. "He's right Karin-chan. You shouldn't pull on Na-chan's hair like that." Kimiko admonished. "Here ride on Su-kun's shoulders for now." Kimiko said, sliding the last article of wet clothes off of Karin and putting on a clean, dry article. She lifted her up and put her on Suboshi's shoulders.
Nakago tiredly walked out of Karin's tent and saw Kimiko, sitting on a stump, sharpening a knife. "Nice blade. Where'd you get it?" he asked as he took it and examined it. "In the last town. It's called a butterfly knife. It's really cool because the blade goes in the handle and you can swing it out. I'm learning how to do more tricks with it." She said proudly. She scooted over on her stump. Nakago sat down. "Does she remind you of anybody?" Kimiko asked with a grin. "Who? O Karin-chan. Yeah she reminds me of you when you were little. Always wanting to be tucked in, always wanting piggy back rides, etc etc." Nakago said giving Kimiko a gentle shove. "Hey!" She protested. Her voice turned serious again. "Is that why your being so nice to her?" she asked. "I'm doing it for you, Kimi-chan." Nakago said. "But we can't keep her with us all the time, from what I see you're a dangerous man with lots of enemies." She said seriously. "Where did you here that?" he asked. "Just the fact that everyone calls you Nakago-sama. I also heard you're the Shogun of Kutou and that means that you killed the emperor." She said. Nakago got off the stump and sat on the ground, leaning his back against the brown stump. "You're right." He said. "Do you know anyone who can take care of Karin-chan?" Kimiko asked. "Iie. I don't think you'd want to leave her with the people I know." Nakago said. "I think you've got attached to her Na-chan." Kimiko said with a grin, "You've never shown the slightest bit of caring for anyone except me and her." Nakago looked up at her. "I knew it." She crooned. "You don't want her to go. I bet out of all the people you know, there has to be some one who can take care of her." She said pointing and grinning sillily at him, Nakago said nothing. "Well that was the purpose for talking to you." She said standing up. "I just wanted to see if you really wanted to make her leave since you two are always fighting and always saying how much you dislike each other." She said. "Ch-chotto." Nakago said. "I don't care for anyone, much less that brat." He said. "See you're doing it again. You're just like siblings." Kimiko said with a wide smile and then left. Nakago sat down on the ground again. Am I going soft? He wondered.
"Su-kun!" Kimiko shouted as she brushed aside branches. She came to a clearing and saw a lake. "Su-kun!" she shouted, as she saw him lying by the lake, looking up at the sky. He turned his head to her. "Nani?" he asked. She lay down beside him. "Nothing. Just I think that Na-chan has gotten attached to Karin-chan. He doesn't seem to want her to leave." She said with a silly grin. "You happy that they're getting along?" he asked. "Yup. He did the same things to me when we were little. Always calling me a brat and everything, but that shows that he likes you, because he usually doesn't come out with his feelings very much." She said. "Well I don't know why you're worried. He tucks Karin-chan in every night." Suboshi replied. "I just wanted to make sure that he didn't really mean everything he says to Karin-chan." Kimiko said looking up into the sky also. "So Su-kun what are you thinking about. You're staring really hard at the sky and there's nothing up there but the stars and the moon." Kimiko asked curiously. "I was thinking about Yui-sama and my aniki." He replied. "You have a brother? I didn't know that. Tell me about him." Kimiko said enthusiastically. Suboshi turned to her. "You want to know about my aniki?" he asked. "I want to know about your past." Kimiko replied.
"Well I
don't know how to start, but me and my brother are twins. His name's Amiboshi, and he's older than
me." Suboshi said with a wistful smile,
as he thought about his twin. "Our parents
were killed by soldiers in a small village when we were very young." His smile darkened. "We were very young. I can't remember the name of it, but I'm
sure aniki remembers. He always
remembers things like that." Suboshi
said, making his ryuseisui rise into
the air and spin lazily. "Me and aniki
had to struggle to stay alive. We had
to work hard, steal, humble ourselves before others to ask them if we could
stay in their barn or shed, and many other things just to get enough food to
eat and a shelter to stay in. Half the
time the villagers kicked us out with nothing, and beat us, sometimes even sent
dogs after us, saying we were no good beggars." Suboshi said a bit angrily and jerked his hand, making his
ryuseisui drill through a tree. "Nakago-sama
found us sometime later. He told us
that are parents were killed by Konan soldiers and that he would help us get
revenge for them. Aniki didn't trust
him but went along with him probably because it was probably the only chance we
would have to have decent meals and shelter. Aniki didn't like him very much though." Suboshi said, making his ryuseisui come back to him and spin
right over his head. He gazed at it,
and continued his story. "Yui-sama,
Seiryuu no miko, came to this world and we fought with the Suzaku seishi. My aniki was presumed killed by the seishi,
but we later found him living with this old couple that had taken him in. He's pretty happy there so I let him
stay. That's about it. Nakago-sama leads the Seiryuu seishi, and
basically rules Kutou also." Suboshi
said, motioning with his hand for the ryuseisui to stop, and making it come
down gently beside him.
"That's so sad, Su-kun." Kimiko
said sadly in a soft voice. Suboshi
looked at her with what looked like a forced smile, "It's ok now really." He said. Kimiko through her arms around him, Suboshi froze in surprise. "If you want to cry, scream, yell, go out of
control, whatever. Go ahead." She said. Suboshi felt wet drops hit his body and brought a shaky hand to Kimiko's
cheek. "You're crying. You're crying for me." He asked wondrously. "Of course Su-kun. And if you ever want to cry come to me." She said hugging him tighter. Suboshi felt tears start streaming down his
cheek. "Tears?" he questioned himself. "Just let it go." Kimiko said. Suboshi lost
control and started sobbing, something he hadn't done in a very long time.
Kimiko felt tired, looked down at Suboshi and saw he had fallen
asleep. She carefully laid him on the
ground and got up to walk away. A hand
grabbed her ankle and she looked down. "Don't leave me. Onegai." Suboshi asked with vulnerable eyes. Kimiko froze, she didn't know what to
do. She had never seen Suboshi look
like this before. He always seemed to
have a barrier between him and the rest of the world. Sometimes it didn't seem like it was there, but it always was,
never letting anybody get to close. She
contemplated this for a second and thought of Nakago. He was one who also had a barrier, never letting it down, even
for a second. She had weakened his
barrier but it was still there, and still very strong. She sat down again. "Tell me something about you." Suboshi said, rising to a sitting
position. "There isn't much to tell
about my life." She replied. Suboshi tried to think of something,
anything. "Tell me about your
past." He said. "That's a lot to tell." she replied, drawing
her knees toward her as a cool breeze past them. "We have time." Suboshi
said. Kimiko looked down. "Bad memories, well—" "Iie, it's okay, you told me about a part of
your life, and it's my turn to tell you about mine." Kimiko said.
Okie finally done. I don't know if my fic is very good or not since I not getting a lot of reviews. I don't usually do this but if you guys want to know about her past quicker review more. Maybe I'll put it up in a day or a week or a month I dunno. If I see that this fic is worth continuing I'll post it soon. If not. I got a lot of other fics to work on so I might put this aside for a little bit. So please please review and tell me if I should like keep doing this one or not. Reviews are mostly encouragement and correcting for me so that I can write better fics based on u guys's opinions.