Authors Note- Chapter Three, alright guys here is the third chapter and I have written from another characters Point of View, I'll let you read and figure out which one. I have another question for you guys to give me some input on what you want...So as usual just scroll down to the bottom of the page and the question should be there. I also plan to pick the story up a little... Abby's coma is just the a part of what this family will have to deal with. Not all bad things though. Just keep reading to figure it out.
Chapter Three
"Neater printing," My teacher said as he walked by my desk. I rubbed the words off the paper and tried again. I hated school, I beg dad every day to not make me go but he says it will make me smarter. I don't believe him. I'm smart enough. I see a piece of paper being pushed in front of my face. I look over to see Carl the boy who sits next to me throwing the paper in my face. I open it and read it.
Logan
Will you be my bofrnd
yes or no
Charly.
Ew, I don't like her. I can't be seen with this note from her. Girls are gross, dad tells me I won't think so when I'm older but I don't believe him. I put my pencil down and walk to the garbage can to throw out my note just as the bell rings, I think twice and shove the note into my pocket running to get my back pack. "Jeremy, Logan, Your not taking the bus home your mom is coming to get you." Our teacher announced.
"YES!" Jeremy celebrated. I kicked the ground then pushed the desk into the wall.
"Logan, stop it now, get your stuff and go meet your mom at the front of the school." Our teacher told me. I grabbed my jacket and put my black snow hat on walking out the door ahead of Jeremy. "Jeremy hurry." I shouted at him. He ran out and stood next to me.
"Mommy is coming." he said as we walked through the hall.
"I don't care." I grumbled. Jeremy just kept walking in silence, I was mad at mom for sleeping all those years, I am happy she's awake, but why did she leave us? I missed her, and we got picked on and Jeremy was sad, and Daddy he would cry at night when he thought no one could hear. He would go into her room and cry and beg her to wake up but she never would. She would just keep sleeping like the rest of us didn't matter.
We made it to the front of the school and Jeremy pushed the door open, the harsh winds hitting us in the face, I winced, then I saw Mommy waiting for us, she didn't have the triplets with her, they must be with Kelly. "Hey mom." Jeremy said running towards her and hugging her tightly. "Hey baby, come here." She said picking him up just like she use to when we were little and then way she would rub our hair out of our faces, and kiss us on the head. She hasn't done that in three years. A real mom would have. "Hey Logan." She says trying to put her hand on my shoulder. I flinch knocking it away. I don't want her hand near me. I see her frown, she takes Jeremy's hand and we start to walk. Jeremy starts telling mom about gym class and how he got to be it in tag and he caught the fastest kid in the class Benji Mullen. Mom said she was proud of him and that we could stop and get a chocolate bar if we wanted. Jeremy piped up that he wanted a chocolate bar. I don't want chocolate, daddy can give me chocolate, at least he doesn't leave us.
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We talk all the time. I think
we understand each other in
a way that most people can't
understand either of us."
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"How was school?"
"As bad as always."
"Logan..."
"I guess it was okay."
"Why don't you like school?"
"The kids are stupid."
"Yeah, well your dad told me your going to a new school soon, you think you could try to like that school?"
I shrug my shoulders not wanting to go to any school. "I guess."
"Yeah, well I also think your smart."
"I know."
"You know?" He laughs.
"Yup!"
"How?"
"My dad, he says I'm smart besides I get perfect on everything."
"Everything?" He questions.
"Yeah, like spelling tests and stuff. I'm the best speller in the class."
"So you are a pro speller."
"That's right."
"Hard words?"
"Yes."
"Okay. Logan why don't you tell me how you feel about your mom."
"I think she is my mom."
"Logan..."
"Why do you always have to do that?" I questioned, bringing my eyes from the floor onto his face.
"Do what?"
"Say Loooooooogan." I imitate.
"I'm sorry." He apologizes, I don't even care. "How do you feel about your mom."
"I don't know. I'm mad."
"Yeah?"
"Yes." I nod.
"Why?"
"Cause she left us, to sleep for a long time."
"Logan, your mother was in a coma. She couldn't wake up, no matter how much she wanted to and trust me she wanted to. She loves you and your brothers and sister."
I just stare at him. I don't like it here but dad told me it would be best if I talked to someone other then him, he calls him a doctor but Uncle Eric calls them shrinks. That's what I heard Luka call them once too. Jeremy goes to the shrink too. Not at the same time though. "I know. I don't think she loves daddy though." I say wiping my face.
"Yeah? Does this upset you?"
"Yeah."
"Well I'm going to talk to your mommy and see if maybe next week she wants to talk with us too okay."
"Okay." I hop out of the chair and open the big door, there is dad standing there in his work clothes waiting for me. "Hey Logan how was it?" He asks as I struggle to zip up my coat. "He wants mommy to come next week." I say making a face that he does not approve of.
"Logan," He says kneeling down and zipping up my jacket. "Mommy has been awake for 2 weeks and you have barely talked to her since the first couple of days. She misses you. She's sad with out you."
"Your sad with out her." I say placing my hand on his shoulder. I look behind me too see the doctor or shrink whatever you want to call him standing over us and watching daddy and I talking. He wraps his arm around my back and picks me up. "Hi." The shrink says to dad. "I was wondering if next week maybe Logan's mom and even yourself if you wouldn't mind could all come in for a session. I think it would be in his best interest." I lean my head on dad's shoulder and he looks down at me, I can tell he doesn't want to do this. "Uh- yeah sure." He says anyways.
"Okay thanks Dr. Carter." They shake hands and daddy carries me out in one arm and has my back pack in the other. "You were giving mom a hard time picking you up from school, on Tuesday." Dad says as we walk into the elevator.
"Its Friday now that's in the past." I say leaning on him.
"Okay Logan." He doesn't want to talk about this now, he just feels upset with me. I love him though. "I love you daddy." I tell him. He kisses my forehead, still carrying me.
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Good judgement comes
from experience.
Sometimes, experience
comes from bad judgement
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Authors Note- From which Characters point of view should I write about next?
Options- Carter, Abby, Mason, Zachary, Lexie, Luka, Susan, Jeremy, Logan, the nurse Carrie or the Nanny Kelly.
Chapter Three
"Neater printing," My teacher said as he walked by my desk. I rubbed the words off the paper and tried again. I hated school, I beg dad every day to not make me go but he says it will make me smarter. I don't believe him. I'm smart enough. I see a piece of paper being pushed in front of my face. I look over to see Carl the boy who sits next to me throwing the paper in my face. I open it and read it.
Logan
Will you be my bofrnd
yes or no
Charly.
Ew, I don't like her. I can't be seen with this note from her. Girls are gross, dad tells me I won't think so when I'm older but I don't believe him. I put my pencil down and walk to the garbage can to throw out my note just as the bell rings, I think twice and shove the note into my pocket running to get my back pack. "Jeremy, Logan, Your not taking the bus home your mom is coming to get you." Our teacher announced.
"YES!" Jeremy celebrated. I kicked the ground then pushed the desk into the wall.
"Logan, stop it now, get your stuff and go meet your mom at the front of the school." Our teacher told me. I grabbed my jacket and put my black snow hat on walking out the door ahead of Jeremy. "Jeremy hurry." I shouted at him. He ran out and stood next to me.
"Mommy is coming." he said as we walked through the hall.
"I don't care." I grumbled. Jeremy just kept walking in silence, I was mad at mom for sleeping all those years, I am happy she's awake, but why did she leave us? I missed her, and we got picked on and Jeremy was sad, and Daddy he would cry at night when he thought no one could hear. He would go into her room and cry and beg her to wake up but she never would. She would just keep sleeping like the rest of us didn't matter.
We made it to the front of the school and Jeremy pushed the door open, the harsh winds hitting us in the face, I winced, then I saw Mommy waiting for us, she didn't have the triplets with her, they must be with Kelly. "Hey mom." Jeremy said running towards her and hugging her tightly. "Hey baby, come here." She said picking him up just like she use to when we were little and then way she would rub our hair out of our faces, and kiss us on the head. She hasn't done that in three years. A real mom would have. "Hey Logan." She says trying to put her hand on my shoulder. I flinch knocking it away. I don't want her hand near me. I see her frown, she takes Jeremy's hand and we start to walk. Jeremy starts telling mom about gym class and how he got to be it in tag and he caught the fastest kid in the class Benji Mullen. Mom said she was proud of him and that we could stop and get a chocolate bar if we wanted. Jeremy piped up that he wanted a chocolate bar. I don't want chocolate, daddy can give me chocolate, at least he doesn't leave us.
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We talk all the time. I think
we understand each other in
a way that most people can't
understand either of us."
---------------------------------
"How was school?"
"As bad as always."
"Logan..."
"I guess it was okay."
"Why don't you like school?"
"The kids are stupid."
"Yeah, well your dad told me your going to a new school soon, you think you could try to like that school?"
I shrug my shoulders not wanting to go to any school. "I guess."
"Yeah, well I also think your smart."
"I know."
"You know?" He laughs.
"Yup!"
"How?"
"My dad, he says I'm smart besides I get perfect on everything."
"Everything?" He questions.
"Yeah, like spelling tests and stuff. I'm the best speller in the class."
"So you are a pro speller."
"That's right."
"Hard words?"
"Yes."
"Okay. Logan why don't you tell me how you feel about your mom."
"I think she is my mom."
"Logan..."
"Why do you always have to do that?" I questioned, bringing my eyes from the floor onto his face.
"Do what?"
"Say Loooooooogan." I imitate.
"I'm sorry." He apologizes, I don't even care. "How do you feel about your mom."
"I don't know. I'm mad."
"Yeah?"
"Yes." I nod.
"Why?"
"Cause she left us, to sleep for a long time."
"Logan, your mother was in a coma. She couldn't wake up, no matter how much she wanted to and trust me she wanted to. She loves you and your brothers and sister."
I just stare at him. I don't like it here but dad told me it would be best if I talked to someone other then him, he calls him a doctor but Uncle Eric calls them shrinks. That's what I heard Luka call them once too. Jeremy goes to the shrink too. Not at the same time though. "I know. I don't think she loves daddy though." I say wiping my face.
"Yeah? Does this upset you?"
"Yeah."
"Well I'm going to talk to your mommy and see if maybe next week she wants to talk with us too okay."
"Okay." I hop out of the chair and open the big door, there is dad standing there in his work clothes waiting for me. "Hey Logan how was it?" He asks as I struggle to zip up my coat. "He wants mommy to come next week." I say making a face that he does not approve of.
"Logan," He says kneeling down and zipping up my jacket. "Mommy has been awake for 2 weeks and you have barely talked to her since the first couple of days. She misses you. She's sad with out you."
"Your sad with out her." I say placing my hand on his shoulder. I look behind me too see the doctor or shrink whatever you want to call him standing over us and watching daddy and I talking. He wraps his arm around my back and picks me up. "Hi." The shrink says to dad. "I was wondering if next week maybe Logan's mom and even yourself if you wouldn't mind could all come in for a session. I think it would be in his best interest." I lean my head on dad's shoulder and he looks down at me, I can tell he doesn't want to do this. "Uh- yeah sure." He says anyways.
"Okay thanks Dr. Carter." They shake hands and daddy carries me out in one arm and has my back pack in the other. "You were giving mom a hard time picking you up from school, on Tuesday." Dad says as we walk into the elevator.
"Its Friday now that's in the past." I say leaning on him.
"Okay Logan." He doesn't want to talk about this now, he just feels upset with me. I love him though. "I love you daddy." I tell him. He kisses my forehead, still carrying me.
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Good judgement comes
from experience.
Sometimes, experience
comes from bad judgement
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Authors Note- From which Characters point of view should I write about next?
Options- Carter, Abby, Mason, Zachary, Lexie, Luka, Susan, Jeremy, Logan, the nurse Carrie or the Nanny Kelly.