A/N: Thanks to all of you who reviewed, hahah even though it just one
*sigh* I thank you very much. ^_^ Oh. FYI, I rewrote the fourth chapter.
Hehe. Just a few FEW changes. Nothing really
-From last chapter:
Haruko jumped out of her Vespa with her guitar. She raised her guitar over her head for a direct attack on the robot. CLANG. Gone. During that time, Ninamori let go of Naota, going back to the river to get her shoes, crying her eyes out. Unknowingly to her, Haruko's vespa was still running at fast speed, towards Ninamori. Naota noticed this and ran towards her.
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"Ugghh."
"Are you okay?"
"Yea"
"Hey little bro."
"Haruko? What are you doing here in the hospital?"
"To see you of course.
"Yeah right. You should be more careful with your Vespa!"
"Chill down."
"umm, excuse me, I think its supposed to me chill out."
"OoO well I'm sorry."
"No need to be sarcastic."
(A/N: Confused? Yes, I would be too. Three people are talking, if you haven't noticed. Who got hurt???? Let's have a flash back shall we?)
-------------Flashback--------------
"Ninamori! Watch out!"
"Huh?"
Ninamori (A.K.A. Ninamo) turned around, shocked to see a bright, yellow motor scooter zooming towards her with incredible speed.
"Aaaahhh!"
She looked towards Naota, surprised to see him running towards her. When he reached her, he pushed her out of harm's way and placed himself in front of the oncoming vespa.
"Naota!"
CRASH
With horror-filled eyes, Ninamori saw the Vespa crash into him, sending him flying, making him land with a loud THUD on the ground about 10 Meters away ( I think that's far, but not too far.) She ran towards him, with even more tears in her eyes. When she got to him, she wrapped her arms around him and brought him to a position where she was sitting on her knees, legs on the bottom, and he was on her lap. She was still hugging him, hoping for any sudden movement, when miraculously, he moved. (I guess you wouldn't be surprised, since he was always being hit by Haruko's Vespa.)
"uugghh."
"Naota! Are you okay? Why did you do that? Y-you really didn't need to. I'd rather be hurt than seeing you get hurt."
"N-Ninamori, it-its okay. I'm fine."
He tried to sit up, but he quickly lied back down on Ninamori's lap with a look of pain on his face.
"Oh Naota! Please, sit still, I'll take you to the hospital."
Meanwhile, Haruko's been looking at her Vespa, seeing if it's damaged in any way. Ninamori noticed this.
"How could you be so much interested if your Vespa is damaged when it was Naota who's been even more damaged!? He's more important than that!" She hissed at her.
"It's okay Ninamo. Naota's always been getting hurt, and he's always been through it without any serious damage." She snapped back. Haruko showed no sign of emotion towards the incident.
"How could you not care? Well, Naota needs a doctor right now! Don't you think you should take him there????"
"Yeah yeah yeah. Just put him on my bike."
Naota wasn't unconscious, so he heard everything they said
*Haruko doesn't care. Not surprising*
As Ninamori got ready to pick up Naota to put him on the bike, he grabbed her hand and turned looked up into her eyes. She blushed at the sudden contact.
"Thank you Ninamori, but I don't need medical attention right now. I'm fine. Really."
"Don't be so hard-headed Naota. Please, just go the doctor." She looked back at him with pleading eyes.
*Aw, who could resist those?*
So, Ninamori helped Naota climb onto the Vespa, right in front of a very bored looking Haruko. Ninamori was going to climb on, right behind Naota, who was lending out his hand to her, when Haruko quickly zoomed away, leaving Ninamori in her trail of dust, with her own hand still stretched out.
--------------End of Flashback------------------
"Naota, Naota, are you okay?"
"Uggghhhh"
"Are you okay?"
"Yea"
"Hey little bro."
"Haruko? What are you doing here in the hospital?"
"To see you of course.
"Yeah right. You should be more careful with your Vespa!"
"Chill down."
"umm, excuse me, I think its supposed to me chill out."
"oOo well I'm sorry."
"No need to be sarcastic Haruko."
"Whatever."
Haruko walked out of the room. Ninamori paced around the room, watching Naota, who was sitting up in a hospital bed, making sure he's ok.
*sigh* "Ninamori, I'm ok."
She walked up to him, and bent over to look at his face close up. She stared into his eyes.
"Naota. You don't understand. I was really concerned when you.when you."
She broke down into tears.
He sat up to hug her. She hugged back.
"Shh. Ninamori its okay. Please stop crying."
She turned her face to stare at him. They let go and she sat on the bed right next to him, her eyes still filled with tears.
"Thank you Naota."
She stood up and started walking towards the door.
"Wait. Ninamori, where are you going?"
"Haruko wants to talk to you. I'll head on home now since she's probably going to stay at your house again. See you tomorrow at school Naota."
Naota stayed silent as he watched Ninamori walk out of the room.
*Ninamori.she acts different towards me now. When Haruko's Vespa came running towards her, I didn't know what I was doing at that time, but the only thing on my mind was to keep Ninamori safe. I felt so comfortable when I'm around her, and when she was crying, I feel so scared. I don't like to see her cry. I remembered the moment when I said I love Haruko, but he didn't feel this way around her. Maybe, just maybe he loved,*
"Hey Takkun."
Naota turned his attention towards Haruko, who was looking straight into his face.
"Aah! Haruko! Don't scare me like that!"
He barely even got to finishing his sentence when she leaned forward to give a kiss on the lips. He mumbled something, but ya kno, you couldn't tell.
"Naota, I forgot my."*gasp*
Naota looked up to see Ninamori, standing in the doorway, obviously shocked at the scene in front of her. Her eyes welled up with tears as she ran out of the room.
"Ninamori wait!" Naota jumped out of his hospital bed, ripped off his tube- like things attached to his body, and started to run after her, when Haruko grabbed his arm.
"Naota. I've missed you! Let's spend time together like we did before!"
She gave him a smile. Naota responded with an 'evil look' on his face, noticed the object Ninamori was looking for, grabbed it, and ran out the door in one fast motion. He spotted Ninamori walking out of the hospital, and ran towards her. He held Ninamori's locket, (which she was looking for) opened it and saw a picture of her and on the other side, a picture of him in his Puss In Boots costume.
He finally reached her, took her hands in his own, and placed her locket in her hands. She wouldn't look at him; actually, she refused to look at him.
"Look. It was Haruko. I didn't do anything. I swear"
She still wouldn't look at him. Still not looking at him, she said,
"Naota, you don't know how much this hurts me. I thought things were going well until she came. It only proves that you care more for her than for me."
He saw tears form in her eyes. He let go of her hands and placed them on the sides of her face, making her face him. He tipie toed and gave her a kiss.
SMACK.
She had slapped him.
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A/N: hahah she slapped him. I decided to change the plot of the story, cuz I'm just typing as I go along, ideas popping into my mind, so the summary will change too. BTW, Ninamo is a nickname her two other guy friends call her. This chapter took me like an hour. I'm surprised how long I can type. Heheh hope you enjoy! Yea, ok, I just noticed how off my story is from my summary. LOL so ima change the whole concept ok?
Please tell me if you want me to keep this the same plot from the summary (ill work on a more dramatic plot after this chapter) or to keep going on with this plot in my recently changed summary. Practically what I'm asking
you is to tell me: Drama, or some creative plot with twists?
-From last chapter:
Haruko jumped out of her Vespa with her guitar. She raised her guitar over her head for a direct attack on the robot. CLANG. Gone. During that time, Ninamori let go of Naota, going back to the river to get her shoes, crying her eyes out. Unknowingly to her, Haruko's vespa was still running at fast speed, towards Ninamori. Naota noticed this and ran towards her.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++
"Ugghh."
"Are you okay?"
"Yea"
"Hey little bro."
"Haruko? What are you doing here in the hospital?"
"To see you of course.
"Yeah right. You should be more careful with your Vespa!"
"Chill down."
"umm, excuse me, I think its supposed to me chill out."
"OoO well I'm sorry."
"No need to be sarcastic."
(A/N: Confused? Yes, I would be too. Three people are talking, if you haven't noticed. Who got hurt???? Let's have a flash back shall we?)
-------------Flashback--------------
"Ninamori! Watch out!"
"Huh?"
Ninamori (A.K.A. Ninamo) turned around, shocked to see a bright, yellow motor scooter zooming towards her with incredible speed.
"Aaaahhh!"
She looked towards Naota, surprised to see him running towards her. When he reached her, he pushed her out of harm's way and placed himself in front of the oncoming vespa.
"Naota!"
CRASH
With horror-filled eyes, Ninamori saw the Vespa crash into him, sending him flying, making him land with a loud THUD on the ground about 10 Meters away ( I think that's far, but not too far.) She ran towards him, with even more tears in her eyes. When she got to him, she wrapped her arms around him and brought him to a position where she was sitting on her knees, legs on the bottom, and he was on her lap. She was still hugging him, hoping for any sudden movement, when miraculously, he moved. (I guess you wouldn't be surprised, since he was always being hit by Haruko's Vespa.)
"uugghh."
"Naota! Are you okay? Why did you do that? Y-you really didn't need to. I'd rather be hurt than seeing you get hurt."
"N-Ninamori, it-its okay. I'm fine."
He tried to sit up, but he quickly lied back down on Ninamori's lap with a look of pain on his face.
"Oh Naota! Please, sit still, I'll take you to the hospital."
Meanwhile, Haruko's been looking at her Vespa, seeing if it's damaged in any way. Ninamori noticed this.
"How could you be so much interested if your Vespa is damaged when it was Naota who's been even more damaged!? He's more important than that!" She hissed at her.
"It's okay Ninamo. Naota's always been getting hurt, and he's always been through it without any serious damage." She snapped back. Haruko showed no sign of emotion towards the incident.
"How could you not care? Well, Naota needs a doctor right now! Don't you think you should take him there????"
"Yeah yeah yeah. Just put him on my bike."
Naota wasn't unconscious, so he heard everything they said
*Haruko doesn't care. Not surprising*
As Ninamori got ready to pick up Naota to put him on the bike, he grabbed her hand and turned looked up into her eyes. She blushed at the sudden contact.
"Thank you Ninamori, but I don't need medical attention right now. I'm fine. Really."
"Don't be so hard-headed Naota. Please, just go the doctor." She looked back at him with pleading eyes.
*Aw, who could resist those?*
So, Ninamori helped Naota climb onto the Vespa, right in front of a very bored looking Haruko. Ninamori was going to climb on, right behind Naota, who was lending out his hand to her, when Haruko quickly zoomed away, leaving Ninamori in her trail of dust, with her own hand still stretched out.
--------------End of Flashback------------------
"Naota, Naota, are you okay?"
"Uggghhhh"
"Are you okay?"
"Yea"
"Hey little bro."
"Haruko? What are you doing here in the hospital?"
"To see you of course.
"Yeah right. You should be more careful with your Vespa!"
"Chill down."
"umm, excuse me, I think its supposed to me chill out."
"oOo well I'm sorry."
"No need to be sarcastic Haruko."
"Whatever."
Haruko walked out of the room. Ninamori paced around the room, watching Naota, who was sitting up in a hospital bed, making sure he's ok.
*sigh* "Ninamori, I'm ok."
She walked up to him, and bent over to look at his face close up. She stared into his eyes.
"Naota. You don't understand. I was really concerned when you.when you."
She broke down into tears.
He sat up to hug her. She hugged back.
"Shh. Ninamori its okay. Please stop crying."
She turned her face to stare at him. They let go and she sat on the bed right next to him, her eyes still filled with tears.
"Thank you Naota."
She stood up and started walking towards the door.
"Wait. Ninamori, where are you going?"
"Haruko wants to talk to you. I'll head on home now since she's probably going to stay at your house again. See you tomorrow at school Naota."
Naota stayed silent as he watched Ninamori walk out of the room.
*Ninamori.she acts different towards me now. When Haruko's Vespa came running towards her, I didn't know what I was doing at that time, but the only thing on my mind was to keep Ninamori safe. I felt so comfortable when I'm around her, and when she was crying, I feel so scared. I don't like to see her cry. I remembered the moment when I said I love Haruko, but he didn't feel this way around her. Maybe, just maybe he loved,*
"Hey Takkun."
Naota turned his attention towards Haruko, who was looking straight into his face.
"Aah! Haruko! Don't scare me like that!"
He barely even got to finishing his sentence when she leaned forward to give a kiss on the lips. He mumbled something, but ya kno, you couldn't tell.
"Naota, I forgot my."*gasp*
Naota looked up to see Ninamori, standing in the doorway, obviously shocked at the scene in front of her. Her eyes welled up with tears as she ran out of the room.
"Ninamori wait!" Naota jumped out of his hospital bed, ripped off his tube- like things attached to his body, and started to run after her, when Haruko grabbed his arm.
"Naota. I've missed you! Let's spend time together like we did before!"
She gave him a smile. Naota responded with an 'evil look' on his face, noticed the object Ninamori was looking for, grabbed it, and ran out the door in one fast motion. He spotted Ninamori walking out of the hospital, and ran towards her. He held Ninamori's locket, (which she was looking for) opened it and saw a picture of her and on the other side, a picture of him in his Puss In Boots costume.
He finally reached her, took her hands in his own, and placed her locket in her hands. She wouldn't look at him; actually, she refused to look at him.
"Look. It was Haruko. I didn't do anything. I swear"
She still wouldn't look at him. Still not looking at him, she said,
"Naota, you don't know how much this hurts me. I thought things were going well until she came. It only proves that you care more for her than for me."
He saw tears form in her eyes. He let go of her hands and placed them on the sides of her face, making her face him. He tipie toed and gave her a kiss.
SMACK.
She had slapped him.
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A/N: hahah she slapped him. I decided to change the plot of the story, cuz I'm just typing as I go along, ideas popping into my mind, so the summary will change too. BTW, Ninamo is a nickname her two other guy friends call her. This chapter took me like an hour. I'm surprised how long I can type. Heheh hope you enjoy! Yea, ok, I just noticed how off my story is from my summary. LOL so ima change the whole concept ok?
Please tell me if you want me to keep this the same plot from the summary (ill work on a more dramatic plot after this chapter) or to keep going on with this plot in my recently changed summary. Practically what I'm asking
you is to tell me: Drama, or some creative plot with twists?