AUTHOR'S NOTES------ hey guys! Here is the next chapter! Thanks for reading and giving me all ur reviews. Any questions please leave in commentary or email me at ateensdiva_marie@yahoo.com If you ask any questions I will answer them in the author's notes;)
Now I had one question from Black Rose9 they asked if I have a ship planned for this. Ummmmmm I don't honestly know right now I am just winging it off the top of my head.
I will need some opinions about that, tell me what YOU would like to see in this story. Ok not only relationship wise but I would like to hear a few ideas of what you might like to see happen in theis story!! Please don't be afraid to say anything. And I need some opinions on what kinda ship I should make this or even make it a ship at all.
Tell me what ya think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks
Love ya
NATASHA
Max's eyes slowly flickered open. All she saw was stars twinkling in the sky spooked of not knowing where she was she turned her head to see Alec, his hands covered his eyes and his knees up to his chest. Max relaxed and sat up snapping Alec out of his day dreaming.
"Alec?" she asked confused.
"Thought you were never going to wake up, it's almost 11:30." Alec replied, his breath visible as he talked.
Max clutched his shoulder.
"Krit! Where's Krit? What happened to Pryce?" Max asked suddenly scared.
"MAX! Calm down ok, Pryce is gone. But Ames and Pryce dragged Krit off back to happy Manticore, I tried to save him but he insisted on me getting you outta there, quickly. Max, I am sorry." Alec explained.
Max let go off him slowly and looked blankly at nothing, in shock.
"What… what do we do?" Max asked depressingly.
"Dunno Max, but all I know is that I don't want to be NEAR that guy. That man freaks me out and Pryce is NEVER good news." Alec said also getting a little scared.
"Well what are we suppose to do? Let them have Krit!?" Max asked getting upset.
"NO! Max, I dunno!" Alec shouted at her.
Max sighed helplessly then stood up ad looked over the building.
"Well, there's nothing we can do, I don't even know where Manticore is now." Max admitted sadly.
"We can get Logan to pinpoint it, we'll get Krit out." Alec proposed standing up.
"He said that he has Jondy and Tinga and………Zack." Max added sadly.
Alec looked at her startled.
"Do you think he's lying?" Alec asked her.
Max hesitated as she looked left then right quickly.
"I don't know, maybe. But I never known Pryce to lie, especially if it is something that will 'weaken' his enemy." Max said nervously.
A long pause fell between the two.
"Yeah, that's true, I never remember him lying to me either." Alec agreed breaking the awkward silence between them.
"Come on, let's go over to Logan's place and see what's up." Alec suggested.
Max nodded sadly and followed him off the rooftop.
Pryce walked down the Manticore halls. White walls, white ceiling, and silver tiles. He passed may people in white trench coats, soldiers and people in business suits. Him in his blue jeans and black t-shirt, blood on his face, mixed with sweat and blood coming from his middle and index finger, he was the only one who dressed informal.
He moved through the people, some pushing chained transgenic. He passed the psy ops room and he looked in through the glass, watching some transgenic getting the torture of his life. He smiled to himself and continued walking. He came up to a large blue door and opened it. He saw Renfro sitting behind the desk, Ames in a chair and Krit in another chair, his hands, naturally, handcuffed behind his back. Pryce walked in and closed the door behind him.
"Pryce Martin, nice to see you may join us." Renfro said standing up behind her desk, in her gray blouse and skirt.
Pryce smiled evilly at her.
"If your hinting me to why I am late, I'm sorry I got held up with some transgenic, who was being very naughty for my replacement for the day. I had to take care of him." Pryce said walking to the right of the room and opening her filing cabinets.
"And did you get those injuries from 'taking care of him'?" Renfro asked.
Ames looked at him with a raised eyebrow and Krit just looked.
"Oh, these, no, no, no the bastard never touched me, he's weak. Very weak, no I got these somewhere else." Pryce said grabbing a bottle, and some gauze.
Pryce closed the door with his foot and walked back to the desk, placed the objects on the side of Renfro's desk and looked at her. She just looked at him.
"Ok, anyway, I wanted to thank you for getting this X5 back for me. Slowly but surly we are rebuilding this Manticore." Renfro said happily.
"It'll never work, Max will find it and will destroy it yet again! She is smarter than all of you put together, she'll find a way to bring it down!" Krit told her.
Renfro glared at him.
Pryce just looked at him with a raised eyebrow as he unscrewed the cap off the bottle and poured it all over the gauze and threw the empty bottle to the side. With that he cleaned the cut between his middle and index finger and then wiped the blood away from the gash on his cheek.
"I understand that you were almost close to capturing another transgenic." Renfro said then stopped seeming to struggle with the name.
"452." she added softly.
Pryce nodded.
"And how did that go sideways?" Renfro asked Ames.
"I'm not sure, once I got there she was no where to be found." Ames said defending himself.
Renfro's accusing eyes moved to Pryce.
"Pryce, an explanation please." Renfro said sternly.
"Hey don't look at me." Pryce began throwing the dirty gauze in the trash can.
"I had her down and out with that solution you gave me. She was lying right there behind me. I don't know how she got away. She couldn't have got away, she was out, someone must have picked up on her and rescued her. Very lucky she got away from me to that little whore." Pryce said getting mad at her clenching his teeth as he talked.
"Ok, ok, ok, relax, are you SURE that the solution was injected into her?" Renfro said clarifying it.
"Damn sure!" Pryce said.
"Ok then someone must have got her out of there." Renfro said sitting down finally.
All of them were silent.
Pryce looked at Ames then to Renfro.
"Ok, we could sit here until we get old and try to think of THOUSANDS who would probably help Max." Pryce said.
"OR we could find out from someone who was there and knows." Pryce said circling Krit's chair.
Suddenly Pryce grabbed Krit's hair and yanked his head back so he was looking into Pryce's cold, blue eyes.
"YOU saw her, I KNOW you saw her lying there, who was it!" Pryce shouted at him.
Krit swallowed hard and just stared at Pryce.
"Tell me who took her Krit, and if you don't I'm gonna make you life a living hell on the training field." Pryce said clenching his teeth and tightening his grip on his scalp, causing Krit to wince.
Ames raised and eyebrow and glanced at Renfro.
"I don't know! I wasn't paying attention!" Krit yelled.
Pryce shoved Krit forward out of his chair so he landed chest first on the ground.
"Stop lying to me Krit, TELL ME!" Pryce shouted at him.
"I am telling you the truth, I DID see someone take her but I didn't see WHO it was, he made sure that the darkness hid his face! I SWEAR!!" Krit shouted, lying again.
"I'll BREAK YOUR OTHER WRIST KRIT!" Pryce warned at him, still yelling.
"NO! DON'T! THAT'S THE TRUTH I SWEAR!!!" Krit shouted back.
Pryce sighed and then kicked him hard in the stomach and walked back over the Renfro's desk, leaning on it.
"Yep, I got nothing'" Pryce complained.
"IT DOESN'T MATTER. Just hunt her down and get her in there, I would like to see her again and to speak with her again!" Ames said standing up, grabbing Krit and yanking him off the floor.
"Besides, I have some surprises for her." Ames added.
"Please, just leave Max alone!" Krit said breathless, trying to regain breath that was lost thanks to Pryce's kick.
"Look take all your anger on Max out on me please! I don't want you hurting her! Please…..just……just leave my baby sister alone!" Krit pleaded.
Pryce chuckled.
"No kicking her pretty little ass is fun. And I'm gonna kick it, hard next time I see her." Pryce said clenching his fists together until his knuckles were white.
Krit gave a sad look as Ames yanked him out of the room.
"MAX GET OUT OF HERE!!!! HE'S COMING FOR YOU!!! PLEASE RUN!!!!!!!!" Krit screamed as loud as he could thinking she would be able to hear him, this caused Pryce to laugh loudly.
Max's head snapped toward the sky as they walked down the street to Logan's apartment.
"Did you hear that?" Max asked stopping and looking at the sky, the clouds floating eerily over the moon.
"Hear what?" Alec asked stopping with her.
"Nothing." she said softly and continued walking.
Now I had one question from Black Rose9 they asked if I have a ship planned for this. Ummmmmm I don't honestly know right now I am just winging it off the top of my head.
I will need some opinions about that, tell me what YOU would like to see in this story. Ok not only relationship wise but I would like to hear a few ideas of what you might like to see happen in theis story!! Please don't be afraid to say anything. And I need some opinions on what kinda ship I should make this or even make it a ship at all.
Tell me what ya think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks
Love ya
NATASHA
Max's eyes slowly flickered open. All she saw was stars twinkling in the sky spooked of not knowing where she was she turned her head to see Alec, his hands covered his eyes and his knees up to his chest. Max relaxed and sat up snapping Alec out of his day dreaming.
"Alec?" she asked confused.
"Thought you were never going to wake up, it's almost 11:30." Alec replied, his breath visible as he talked.
Max clutched his shoulder.
"Krit! Where's Krit? What happened to Pryce?" Max asked suddenly scared.
"MAX! Calm down ok, Pryce is gone. But Ames and Pryce dragged Krit off back to happy Manticore, I tried to save him but he insisted on me getting you outta there, quickly. Max, I am sorry." Alec explained.
Max let go off him slowly and looked blankly at nothing, in shock.
"What… what do we do?" Max asked depressingly.
"Dunno Max, but all I know is that I don't want to be NEAR that guy. That man freaks me out and Pryce is NEVER good news." Alec said also getting a little scared.
"Well what are we suppose to do? Let them have Krit!?" Max asked getting upset.
"NO! Max, I dunno!" Alec shouted at her.
Max sighed helplessly then stood up ad looked over the building.
"Well, there's nothing we can do, I don't even know where Manticore is now." Max admitted sadly.
"We can get Logan to pinpoint it, we'll get Krit out." Alec proposed standing up.
"He said that he has Jondy and Tinga and………Zack." Max added sadly.
Alec looked at her startled.
"Do you think he's lying?" Alec asked her.
Max hesitated as she looked left then right quickly.
"I don't know, maybe. But I never known Pryce to lie, especially if it is something that will 'weaken' his enemy." Max said nervously.
A long pause fell between the two.
"Yeah, that's true, I never remember him lying to me either." Alec agreed breaking the awkward silence between them.
"Come on, let's go over to Logan's place and see what's up." Alec suggested.
Max nodded sadly and followed him off the rooftop.
Pryce walked down the Manticore halls. White walls, white ceiling, and silver tiles. He passed may people in white trench coats, soldiers and people in business suits. Him in his blue jeans and black t-shirt, blood on his face, mixed with sweat and blood coming from his middle and index finger, he was the only one who dressed informal.
He moved through the people, some pushing chained transgenic. He passed the psy ops room and he looked in through the glass, watching some transgenic getting the torture of his life. He smiled to himself and continued walking. He came up to a large blue door and opened it. He saw Renfro sitting behind the desk, Ames in a chair and Krit in another chair, his hands, naturally, handcuffed behind his back. Pryce walked in and closed the door behind him.
"Pryce Martin, nice to see you may join us." Renfro said standing up behind her desk, in her gray blouse and skirt.
Pryce smiled evilly at her.
"If your hinting me to why I am late, I'm sorry I got held up with some transgenic, who was being very naughty for my replacement for the day. I had to take care of him." Pryce said walking to the right of the room and opening her filing cabinets.
"And did you get those injuries from 'taking care of him'?" Renfro asked.
Ames looked at him with a raised eyebrow and Krit just looked.
"Oh, these, no, no, no the bastard never touched me, he's weak. Very weak, no I got these somewhere else." Pryce said grabbing a bottle, and some gauze.
Pryce closed the door with his foot and walked back to the desk, placed the objects on the side of Renfro's desk and looked at her. She just looked at him.
"Ok, anyway, I wanted to thank you for getting this X5 back for me. Slowly but surly we are rebuilding this Manticore." Renfro said happily.
"It'll never work, Max will find it and will destroy it yet again! She is smarter than all of you put together, she'll find a way to bring it down!" Krit told her.
Renfro glared at him.
Pryce just looked at him with a raised eyebrow as he unscrewed the cap off the bottle and poured it all over the gauze and threw the empty bottle to the side. With that he cleaned the cut between his middle and index finger and then wiped the blood away from the gash on his cheek.
"I understand that you were almost close to capturing another transgenic." Renfro said then stopped seeming to struggle with the name.
"452." she added softly.
Pryce nodded.
"And how did that go sideways?" Renfro asked Ames.
"I'm not sure, once I got there she was no where to be found." Ames said defending himself.
Renfro's accusing eyes moved to Pryce.
"Pryce, an explanation please." Renfro said sternly.
"Hey don't look at me." Pryce began throwing the dirty gauze in the trash can.
"I had her down and out with that solution you gave me. She was lying right there behind me. I don't know how she got away. She couldn't have got away, she was out, someone must have picked up on her and rescued her. Very lucky she got away from me to that little whore." Pryce said getting mad at her clenching his teeth as he talked.
"Ok, ok, ok, relax, are you SURE that the solution was injected into her?" Renfro said clarifying it.
"Damn sure!" Pryce said.
"Ok then someone must have got her out of there." Renfro said sitting down finally.
All of them were silent.
Pryce looked at Ames then to Renfro.
"Ok, we could sit here until we get old and try to think of THOUSANDS who would probably help Max." Pryce said.
"OR we could find out from someone who was there and knows." Pryce said circling Krit's chair.
Suddenly Pryce grabbed Krit's hair and yanked his head back so he was looking into Pryce's cold, blue eyes.
"YOU saw her, I KNOW you saw her lying there, who was it!" Pryce shouted at him.
Krit swallowed hard and just stared at Pryce.
"Tell me who took her Krit, and if you don't I'm gonna make you life a living hell on the training field." Pryce said clenching his teeth and tightening his grip on his scalp, causing Krit to wince.
Ames raised and eyebrow and glanced at Renfro.
"I don't know! I wasn't paying attention!" Krit yelled.
Pryce shoved Krit forward out of his chair so he landed chest first on the ground.
"Stop lying to me Krit, TELL ME!" Pryce shouted at him.
"I am telling you the truth, I DID see someone take her but I didn't see WHO it was, he made sure that the darkness hid his face! I SWEAR!!" Krit shouted, lying again.
"I'll BREAK YOUR OTHER WRIST KRIT!" Pryce warned at him, still yelling.
"NO! DON'T! THAT'S THE TRUTH I SWEAR!!!" Krit shouted back.
Pryce sighed and then kicked him hard in the stomach and walked back over the Renfro's desk, leaning on it.
"Yep, I got nothing'" Pryce complained.
"IT DOESN'T MATTER. Just hunt her down and get her in there, I would like to see her again and to speak with her again!" Ames said standing up, grabbing Krit and yanking him off the floor.
"Besides, I have some surprises for her." Ames added.
"Please, just leave Max alone!" Krit said breathless, trying to regain breath that was lost thanks to Pryce's kick.
"Look take all your anger on Max out on me please! I don't want you hurting her! Please…..just……just leave my baby sister alone!" Krit pleaded.
Pryce chuckled.
"No kicking her pretty little ass is fun. And I'm gonna kick it, hard next time I see her." Pryce said clenching his fists together until his knuckles were white.
Krit gave a sad look as Ames yanked him out of the room.
"MAX GET OUT OF HERE!!!! HE'S COMING FOR YOU!!! PLEASE RUN!!!!!!!!" Krit screamed as loud as he could thinking she would be able to hear him, this caused Pryce to laugh loudly.
Max's head snapped toward the sky as they walked down the street to Logan's apartment.
"Did you hear that?" Max asked stopping and looking at the sky, the clouds floating eerily over the moon.
"Hear what?" Alec asked stopping with her.
"Nothing." she said softly and continued walking.