Note: In this chapter, some may be confused by the *to audience* and the
change in time for each Point of view change. This note was written by
Kagome in attempt to clear up this misunderstanding.
First of all, I would like to state that this was my idea to use the characters to narrate to the audience and to go back in time each time the point of view is changed. So, if you have any questions after reading this about this chapter, please feel free to email me at xXKagomeHigurashiXx@hotmail.com. Thank You!
*To Audience*: The *to audience* has nothing really to do with the story. It is used to convey what the character thinks about a person or situation. For example, when at the beginning, Kagome shows how she feels about Kouga and how she hopes for Inu Yasha to come rescue her. She isn't really saying this. This is how she feels. Again, I must state that this does not have anything to with what is going on in the chapter. It is just telling the reader how the character feels. (There are only two times when this is used in this chapter)
Time Change After POV change: This was the only way that I could think of to resolve the issue of how to show what was happening in three different places at one given time (The beginning of one day). In order to understand what is going on, you must read previous chapters! In the previous chapter, Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru spent the day trying to find Kagome and Rin. In this chapter, it is supposed to be the same day, but different Points of view. In this chapter, we have to go back in time to the beginning of the day twice. The first time, we went back in time from Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru's POV (Point of view) to the beginning of the day to see Rin and Jaken's POV. The second time, we went back in time from Rin and Jaken's POV to the beginning of the day to see Kagome's POV. If you read closely, you'll notice that all off the POVs fit together. Everything that happens in one POV will fit into the other POV.
I Hope that this has helped solve some of your questions, however, if you still don't understand, please email me at the email address listed above and I'll try to answer any questions that you have. Thank you and enjoy the chapter! Don't forget to leave feedback! ~END NOTE~
-------Kagome-------
Kagome: *to audience* I never truly liked Kouga in that way...though he thought I did. Instead, I tend to think of him as Geometry, an evil that must be overcome and destroyed. Well, maybe not that bad---or maybe so. Never mind that. I just hope my honey Inu Yasha comes to rescue us....after all..I have Ramen!
-------Rin------
Rin: *to audience* I hate wolves. They're so mean. They attacked my village and killed everyone there, including me. That's when Sesshoumaru-sama saved me. And yesterday....I was captured by the same wolf tribe that attacked my village. Now, I'm in what seems to be a dungeon...and Jaken-sama is here too. Maybe Sesshoumaru-sama will come and rescue us....
~In Dungeon (Beginning of day)~
Rin: *sees Jaken lying on the floor* Jaken-sama! *pokes him* Wake up!
Jaken: Uhh...wee...world...spinning.....
Rin: Jaken-sama, where's Kagome? Where are we? What's going on? *eyes get all watery*
Jaken: *looks around* I don't know. I think...we're in a dungeon.....
Rin: What's a dungeon? Why are we here? How do we get out? I want to get out!
Jaken: WILL YOU SHUT UP?!
Rin: *cries*
Jaken: DON'T DO THAT!!! They might hear us.....
Rin: *sniff* But...but...WE'RE TRAPPED!!!
Jaken: Well...we just have to escape!
Rin: how?
Jaken: We have to break the wall somehow.....
Rin: how?
Jaken: *slightly agitated* Throw things at it!
Rin: Ok. *Throws Jaken at the wall*
Jaken: AAAAAAAAAAH!!! NOT ME!!!!! *hits wall with a splat*
Rin: *goes over to Jaken* Jaken-sama...it didn't work.....
Jaken: *swirly eyes*
Rin: *hears someone talking*
Kouga: *off in the distance* Now, you all stay here and guard the lair. I'm taking MY woman on a picnic!
~End Rin POV~
~Kagome in Kouga's Quarters (To the beginning of the day again)~
Kagome: *wakes up*
Kagome: *sleepy* YAWN.... Where am... I?
Kagome: *looks around*
Kagome: Oh MY GOSH!
Kagome: I'm in Kouga's lair!!
Kagome: RIN!
Kagome: IMP--- I mean Jaken!
Kagome: Where are you all!?
Kagome: *tries to move, but has been tied down*
Kagome: What the hell?
Kagome: *tries to free self*
Kouga: *comes in*
Kouga: Think you can escape... don't you?
Kagome: WHAT DO YOU WANT?
Kouga: What do you think?
Kagome: WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH RIN AND JAKEN?
Kouga: Oh nothing.....they are just in the dungeon.....
Kagome: You b'st'rd!
Kouga: *laughs* There is nothing you can do about it.....
Kagome: Where am I.....AND WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?
Kagome: *thinks: What does he really want*
Kouga: You should know already but I love a woman who plays dumb.
Kouga: You are in my lair.....in case you have forgotten
Kouga: .....What I really want is.....your hand in marriage
Kagome: NEVER!
Kouga: Think not?.....Well your little dog-faced buddy ain't here to rescue you this time!
Kagome: HIS NAME IS INU YASHA!!
Kagome: AND WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!
Kagome: You weren't like this before...
Kouga: Well......after all of those fights with Inu Baka.....I finally realized that I couldn't get you that way......so I have to take you by force.
Kouga: Your little hanyou should be dead right about now.....those zombies should have dealt with them.
Kagome: NOO!!
Kagome: What's happened to you Kouga?! It's like you have been possessed by Naraku...
Kouga: May be so......but the only way to fix it is for you to become my wife. *unties Kagome*
Kagome: *runs* *thinks: Kouga has been possessed by Naraku.....I HAVE TO GET INUYASHA......WE MUST HELP HIM!!*
Kouga: GET HER!
Ginta: *grabs Kagome*
Kagome: *thinks: They have all gone mad.....Naraku must be behind this*
Kouga: We are going on a little picnic, Kagome.....
Kagome: NEVER! KOUGA, I CAN HELP YOU! DON'T LET NARAKU USE YOU! HE IS USING YOU TO GET INUYASHA----
Kouga: Silence! If you won't go on your own free will.....then you leave me no choice.....Ginta.....DRUG HER!!
Kagome: NOOO!!
Ginta: Yes, sir! *drugs Kagome*
Kouga: Now, Kagome.....will you go with me?
Kagome: Anything you say Kouga, sweetie. *winks*
Kouga: AHA! IT WORKS!
Kouga: *smirks*
Kouga: Now, you all stay here and guard the lair. I'm taking MY woman on a picnic!
~In a Field~
Kouga: It's a lovely day for a picnic Kagome?
Kagome: Yes, it is!
Kagome: Let's eat some ramen...that baka hanyou Inu Yasha didn't know how to treat a woman.....but you do!
Kagome: *hands Kouga ramen*
Kouga: *eats* Let's go back to my place... I'm sure we can find ~something~ to do
Kagome: okay!
Kouga: *thinks: SUCCESS! Soon I'll have Kagome as my bride!*
Kouga: *thinks: heh heh.....That's something, getting married.....in this state Kagome will say yes to anything! When dogface gets here we will be so ANGRY and there will be nothing he can do about it. After all, Kagome DID agree to it--- PERFECT, smirks*
Kouga and the Drugged Kagome: *go back inside, arm in arm, to plan for the wedding*
~End Kagome POV~
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First of all, I would like to state that this was my idea to use the characters to narrate to the audience and to go back in time each time the point of view is changed. So, if you have any questions after reading this about this chapter, please feel free to email me at xXKagomeHigurashiXx@hotmail.com. Thank You!
*To Audience*: The *to audience* has nothing really to do with the story. It is used to convey what the character thinks about a person or situation. For example, when at the beginning, Kagome shows how she feels about Kouga and how she hopes for Inu Yasha to come rescue her. She isn't really saying this. This is how she feels. Again, I must state that this does not have anything to with what is going on in the chapter. It is just telling the reader how the character feels. (There are only two times when this is used in this chapter)
Time Change After POV change: This was the only way that I could think of to resolve the issue of how to show what was happening in three different places at one given time (The beginning of one day). In order to understand what is going on, you must read previous chapters! In the previous chapter, Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru spent the day trying to find Kagome and Rin. In this chapter, it is supposed to be the same day, but different Points of view. In this chapter, we have to go back in time to the beginning of the day twice. The first time, we went back in time from Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru's POV (Point of view) to the beginning of the day to see Rin and Jaken's POV. The second time, we went back in time from Rin and Jaken's POV to the beginning of the day to see Kagome's POV. If you read closely, you'll notice that all off the POVs fit together. Everything that happens in one POV will fit into the other POV.
I Hope that this has helped solve some of your questions, however, if you still don't understand, please email me at the email address listed above and I'll try to answer any questions that you have. Thank you and enjoy the chapter! Don't forget to leave feedback! ~END NOTE~
-------Kagome-------
Kagome: *to audience* I never truly liked Kouga in that way...though he thought I did. Instead, I tend to think of him as Geometry, an evil that must be overcome and destroyed. Well, maybe not that bad---or maybe so. Never mind that. I just hope my honey Inu Yasha comes to rescue us....after all..I have Ramen!
-------Rin------
Rin: *to audience* I hate wolves. They're so mean. They attacked my village and killed everyone there, including me. That's when Sesshoumaru-sama saved me. And yesterday....I was captured by the same wolf tribe that attacked my village. Now, I'm in what seems to be a dungeon...and Jaken-sama is here too. Maybe Sesshoumaru-sama will come and rescue us....
~In Dungeon (Beginning of day)~
Rin: *sees Jaken lying on the floor* Jaken-sama! *pokes him* Wake up!
Jaken: Uhh...wee...world...spinning.....
Rin: Jaken-sama, where's Kagome? Where are we? What's going on? *eyes get all watery*
Jaken: *looks around* I don't know. I think...we're in a dungeon.....
Rin: What's a dungeon? Why are we here? How do we get out? I want to get out!
Jaken: WILL YOU SHUT UP?!
Rin: *cries*
Jaken: DON'T DO THAT!!! They might hear us.....
Rin: *sniff* But...but...WE'RE TRAPPED!!!
Jaken: Well...we just have to escape!
Rin: how?
Jaken: We have to break the wall somehow.....
Rin: how?
Jaken: *slightly agitated* Throw things at it!
Rin: Ok. *Throws Jaken at the wall*
Jaken: AAAAAAAAAAH!!! NOT ME!!!!! *hits wall with a splat*
Rin: *goes over to Jaken* Jaken-sama...it didn't work.....
Jaken: *swirly eyes*
Rin: *hears someone talking*
Kouga: *off in the distance* Now, you all stay here and guard the lair. I'm taking MY woman on a picnic!
~End Rin POV~
~Kagome in Kouga's Quarters (To the beginning of the day again)~
Kagome: *wakes up*
Kagome: *sleepy* YAWN.... Where am... I?
Kagome: *looks around*
Kagome: Oh MY GOSH!
Kagome: I'm in Kouga's lair!!
Kagome: RIN!
Kagome: IMP--- I mean Jaken!
Kagome: Where are you all!?
Kagome: *tries to move, but has been tied down*
Kagome: What the hell?
Kagome: *tries to free self*
Kouga: *comes in*
Kouga: Think you can escape... don't you?
Kagome: WHAT DO YOU WANT?
Kouga: What do you think?
Kagome: WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH RIN AND JAKEN?
Kouga: Oh nothing.....they are just in the dungeon.....
Kagome: You b'st'rd!
Kouga: *laughs* There is nothing you can do about it.....
Kagome: Where am I.....AND WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?
Kagome: *thinks: What does he really want*
Kouga: You should know already but I love a woman who plays dumb.
Kouga: You are in my lair.....in case you have forgotten
Kouga: .....What I really want is.....your hand in marriage
Kagome: NEVER!
Kouga: Think not?.....Well your little dog-faced buddy ain't here to rescue you this time!
Kagome: HIS NAME IS INU YASHA!!
Kagome: AND WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!
Kagome: You weren't like this before...
Kouga: Well......after all of those fights with Inu Baka.....I finally realized that I couldn't get you that way......so I have to take you by force.
Kouga: Your little hanyou should be dead right about now.....those zombies should have dealt with them.
Kagome: NOO!!
Kagome: What's happened to you Kouga?! It's like you have been possessed by Naraku...
Kouga: May be so......but the only way to fix it is for you to become my wife. *unties Kagome*
Kagome: *runs* *thinks: Kouga has been possessed by Naraku.....I HAVE TO GET INUYASHA......WE MUST HELP HIM!!*
Kouga: GET HER!
Ginta: *grabs Kagome*
Kagome: *thinks: They have all gone mad.....Naraku must be behind this*
Kouga: We are going on a little picnic, Kagome.....
Kagome: NEVER! KOUGA, I CAN HELP YOU! DON'T LET NARAKU USE YOU! HE IS USING YOU TO GET INUYASHA----
Kouga: Silence! If you won't go on your own free will.....then you leave me no choice.....Ginta.....DRUG HER!!
Kagome: NOOO!!
Ginta: Yes, sir! *drugs Kagome*
Kouga: Now, Kagome.....will you go with me?
Kagome: Anything you say Kouga, sweetie. *winks*
Kouga: AHA! IT WORKS!
Kouga: *smirks*
Kouga: Now, you all stay here and guard the lair. I'm taking MY woman on a picnic!
~In a Field~
Kouga: It's a lovely day for a picnic Kagome?
Kagome: Yes, it is!
Kagome: Let's eat some ramen...that baka hanyou Inu Yasha didn't know how to treat a woman.....but you do!
Kagome: *hands Kouga ramen*
Kouga: *eats* Let's go back to my place... I'm sure we can find ~something~ to do
Kagome: okay!
Kouga: *thinks: SUCCESS! Soon I'll have Kagome as my bride!*
Kouga: *thinks: heh heh.....That's something, getting married.....in this state Kagome will say yes to anything! When dogface gets here we will be so ANGRY and there will be nothing he can do about it. After all, Kagome DID agree to it--- PERFECT, smirks*
Kouga and the Drugged Kagome: *go back inside, arm in arm, to plan for the wedding*
~End Kagome POV~
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