Loooooong time since I last posted. You thought I was death? Well, no. Anyways, how was your Halloween. A friend and I did a party and it sucked, cause they just talked about music, clothes and gossiped about others. I just wanted to go, but the problem was that the party was held on my house Y_Y. And another thing passed that made me NEVER, but NEVER have another halloween with non-anime girls, which means, no more halloween(since no one likes anime except for me, Yuura and Brenda T-T). SORRY for the delay, but I had some projects to turn in, auditions for drama, a language fair coming, my Japanese exam coming, three projects which I'm just missing one, and a contest of writing. I think it is enough torture for you guys, Ah, one last thing I almost forgot, expect a Jak/Kag fic of mine appearing soon, it is almost done (the first chapter). Please review to let me know if anyone is reading this story and also review and talk of whatever you like, I like to hear people and what they think.
And now, with the story:
Disclaimer: You SERIOUSLY think that if I owned Inuyasha I will be writing in a public-fanfiction page? If you do, then let me give you the presentation-card of a friend who can help you with your problems.
Chapter 8
Kagome, Final Target
Kagome and Jakotsu where in the village's garden playing with some children.
"I'm so happy with you and Bankotsu, Jakotsu. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to know you better."
"I think the same, lady Kagome."
It was when the wind started to blow, dark clouds over the village. Kagome as well as Jakotsu stopped playing.
"Lady Kagome, take the children to their respective homes and wait in our house."
"But, Jakotsu, I sense dark energies. You will need my help."
Jakotsu stood in-front of Kagome and neglected with his head, he withdrew his snake-like sword (A.N. I'm so sorry, but I can't remember the name right now).
"Go!" he shouted coldly without looking back.
'He most be serious, I better take the children to a safe place.' Kagome thought as she gathered the children. "Lets go." She took the children of the hands and started to run towards the village.
"Kagome-chan, why is everything so dark? And why Jako-kun got out his odd appearance sword?" a child asked while they neared the village.
"I will later explain you." they arrived to the village and she released the children hands. "Go to your houses, do not go out until the Sun shows again, it's a order." she said in a serious tone.
The children nodded "Yes, Ma'am."
With that said the children spread on the village going to their respective houses. Some villagers went to Kagome.
"Lady Kagome, where is Jakotsu-sama?" a man asked.
"What is happening, Kagome-sama?" a woman of old age asked.
"Evil auras are getting near, I will later explain. Now, go to your houses, tell the other villagers and don't come out until the Sun shows again."
"As you say, Kagome-sama."
The villagers went to spread the news as fast as possible and soon all the villagers where in their houses. Kagome glared back, to where they were playing just some minutes ago, it was far, so she couldn't see Jakotsu; she could just see the dark clouds concentrating over that spot. "I'm not going to leave you alone, Jakotsu." with that said, Kagome returned her gaze to the front and started running towards the house where they were staying. "I'm sure I saw some arrows and a bow hanging in the wall, I just hope they aren't too old." Kagome thought as she ran towards the house. Mean-while, Jakotsu was still alone in the plain, until he saw a dark figure starting to approach, then it became more figures; it was a group of demons; which appeared to be very hungry.
"Want to eat me? Then come and try me!" he said as he prepared his sword.
Then, in unison the demons said "We came for the miko. Give us the miko, we want the miko." they said as they approached each second a meter more.
"Oh, I'm so sorry, but I'm her protector and I'm not going to let you touch a hair of her; if you want her, you will need to pass my beautiful body." he said and then winked.
Some demons stopped death in their tracks, while other didn't care. "Just a weak gay. They say they taste better than men and women, cause they are of both." one of the demons said.
Now they where just few meters dividing them, that was when the demons noticed the confident-evil smirk Jakotsu had on his lips. "Playtime." he said as some demons launched towards him. Jakotsu fought and defeated 5 or more at a time. After some time, they were just left 5 demons of the 1,000 there were. The five started to walk slowly towards Jakotsu, who tried hardly to maintain balance, now he had several injuries on all his body and had lost his vision of the left eye which was now closed. "When we are finish with you we will go for the miko."
"Damn it, they are too much for me. I just wish Kagome is far from here." Jakotsu thought as he felt on his knees to the floor.
"Now, devour him!" one demons shouted.
The demons jumped towards Jakotsu, one or two meters before they touched, a pink-light-flash passed right through the five demons bodies, purifying them in the instant. Transforming the bodies to just piles of dust. Jakotsu turned back and saw Kagome standing there with a broken vow. Kagome turned her eyes toward Jakotsu who had a grateful-confused expression. Kagome shrugged "I guess it was old, after all I found it hanging in the dojo's room for decoration." it was when she noticed the several injuries of Jakotsu, "Oh, my! Jakotsu, lets take you fast to the village." Kagome started to run towards Jakotsu when she felt cold iron crossing through her back, she felt flat in the ground. Jakotsu's expression instantly changed to one of shock, he gazed up of Kagome's body and saw a boy, he had a short pony-tail and an exterminator's outfit. The boy threw his weapon to a side, then he kneeled next to Kagome and he hold his head with both of his hands as he started crying and shouting. Jakotsu stood up and ran towards Kagome, not mattering all the pain that it caused him. "Kagome!" he finally reached where Kagome was, but in that instant, something knocked him off; some feet away from Kagome. He blinked and looked up just to see Naraku holding an unconscious Kagome close to his body, and Kohaku (we all now it was him, right?) was being carried away by a demon.
"Naraku, you bastard, let go of lady Kagome!" Jakotsu shouted as he stood up with difficulty.
"You are not in the place to give me orders, in fact, I am going to get my shard now."
In less than a blank of an eye, Naraku was behind Jakotsu, his hand ready to rip the shard off, when, "Poisonous Claws!" Naraku had just time to dodge Sesshomaru's attack. A cloud of miasma formed around Naraku, Bankotsu jumped towards Jakotsu, grabbed him and jumped back, Sesshomaru also jumped away; he was a powerful demon, but still, he had a better scent and if that miasma could kill a human; imagine what it will do with a demon. When the miasma disappeared, Naraku, the demon, Kohaku or Kagome were not visible anymore, but Naraku laugh could be heard, while he said "I have now my three pieces, the ones that you want, Sesshomaru, Miroku and lastly but not less, Bankotsu. I will be waiting you in my castle, come if you have the courage." with that, any trace of Naraku disappeared. Jakotsu was kneeling on the floor breathing heavily, Bankotsu went to a side of him. "Are you okay?"
Jakotsu nodded and then turned towards Bankotsu, desperation and guilt all written on his face. "Lady Kagome I couldn't protect her, Bankotsu! I broke my vow to you!"
"Don't worry, we will go rescue her and the others, you stay here to recover yourself, with monk Miroku, lord Sesshomaru and me will be just enough."
"I'm sorry, leader." with that said, he felt to the ground unconscious. Bankotsu kneeled besides Jakotsu's body and grabbed him. Kirara then went to him and he place Jakotsu on top of her.
"What about me jerk?!" he heard Inuyasha's voice.
Bankotsu shrugged without looking towards him, "Oh, I forgot about you, I always tend to forget little things."
"You son of bitch."
Bankotsu turned to Inuyasha, an returned the death-glare he was receiving, "I can't imagine how Kagome was able to stand to be by your side."
Sensing a death-confront was nearing, Miroku stood in the middle; breaking the death-glares. "Shippo, Rin and Kirara will stay here with Jakotsu while he recovers; meanwhile we go to rescue the ladies."
Without another word said; the demon lord, the hanyou, the monk and the death-warrior went running with all their might towards Naraku's castle.
Mean while, Kohaku had been given to Kanna. Kagome had awaken some time ago, but she wasn't able to get free of Naraku's grasp, but still she didn't stop trying.
"Could you stop struggling, bitch?" Naraku asked, trying not to act pissed; but the fact was that he was more than pissed.
"First of all, I'm NOT a bitch. Second, my back hurts as hell! Third, I'm kidnaped by a murderous, crazy, gross guy that wears a baboon pelt and in top of that I'm carried by him. Soooo, I'm in my total right to make it hard for you, so HELP ME, LET ME DOWN YOU DAMMN (A.N. I know that Kagome doesn't cuss, but who wouldn't if they are being carried by a sick man that has being trying to kill you for the past year or so?) BASTA-" Kagome was cut off by a strip of clothe that Naraku tied on her mouth. "Mhhmmhh!" was Kagome's attempt to shout.
Naraku chuckled "Much better." he took a corner and arrived at a room, he pulled the door open and entered. He then tied Kagome down to a column of wood that was in the middle of the room. He took Kagome's chin, she tried to get free; but all in vain, she was getting weaker because of the lost of blood. "Wmny dmhid ya bmhring mhe" was Kagome's attempt to talk, but since Naraku knew what was she wondering, he knew exactly was she asked.
"Why did I brought you here?"
Kagome nodded, Naraku had loose his grab on her chin. "First, to recover this jewel shards." as he said this, he showed Kagome her shards which he had taken when she was unconscious. "You know, I'm just missing five: one in Sesshomaru's possession, Bankotsu's and Jakotsu's and two of monk Miroku. When they finally arrive here, I will take their shards and make my wishes. And the most important is..."he took hold of her chin again. "Since the real one denied, I can always have the reincarnation." he chuckled, then stood up and went towards the door, in which he stopped and turned to Kagome. "As soon as I get rid of something, I will return to show you what your work will be." he then turned and went to the hall, closing the door behind him. His footsteps faded, and Kagome had a shocked, fearful, gross expression on her face. Kagome turned towards the window that was behind her and saw that the Sun was setting. "Please, let them arrive in time."
Mean while,
"Kohaku, you know what to do. As soon as the moon appears on the sky, we will start our plan." an emotionless female-voices said towards Kohaku, who was in front of her.
"Yes."
Nearing Naraku's castle, Sesshomaru, Bankotsu and Miroku had been to busy thinking they didn't realize...
"Where's Inuyasha?" Miroku asked as he didn't saw the hanyou running at a side of them.
Sesshomaru shrugged but didn't turn around, "I smelled the miko some minutes ago, maybe he is with her. But, we need to focus on saving Kagura, Kagome and Sango."
"Kagura?" both of Miroku and Bankotsu asked.
"Isn't she the off-spring of Naraku?" Bankotsu asked.
Sesshomaru barely nodded, "Yes, but we will get her free."
Miroku and Bankotsu nodded, not being disturbed or bothered by the idea of having another one to save.
Mean while, Inuyasha was standing alone in a clearing, when some hands went around his shoulders and a female head rested on her shoulder. "I thought you were going to save my reincarnation. What happened?" Kikyo asked.
Inuyasha took her hands in his as he watched the Sun disappear. "I don't care about her anymore, she is just a brat."
"Then, why did you said you loved her?"
"Cause I got confused, I liked being around that brat because when I turned to see her face; I would always see your lovely face." he turned to face Kikyo and grabbed her chin. "You are the only one, and now you and I can do whatever we want, let them get kill by Naraku, let them do whatever they want with the damned jewel, I just want you, my dearest Kikyo."
With that said they sealed each other's mouth in a kiss.
The Moon was rising in the horizon, and Naraku's castle was beginning to appear on the distance.
"Hang on, Kagome, just hang on. I'm coming to rescue you. I can't lose you when I just found you." Bankotsu thought as they ran with all their might to where one of the major battles of their lives will take place.
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How was it? I hope it was good, sorry for not being able to write more but I have to study for a quiz of biology, memorize my Japanese parts, study Kanjis, study for my Japanese test that is nearing with every day it passes and in top of that I need to finish a real-size human-skeleton for Monday(that's my last project, for now -_-). Thanks for the patience, and just in case you didn't read the beginning of the note, wait soon for a Kag/Jak fic. The first chapter is turning out great, and I hope that this story will last another 5 chapters, it all depends on you. Next chapter, The final battle with Naraku.
Like always, please review, you can put in your reviews whatever you want, just don't be too rude; you can talk of the story, what you think (this are just examples), how was your day, etc.
Now, Review Responses:
Forest Wolf: Thank-you for the compliment, sorry for the delay and thanks for reviewing.
Itadakimasu: Thank-you, you are always reviewing, I think that in this chapter I gave most of the plot; but after Naraku there will happen something else, since I placed the goal to write more than 12 chapters in this story (and if the Jak/Kag has reviews, maybe I can make it longer ^_^) Another thing of the Jak/Kag, expect it in less than five days (probably less, it all depends on the projects, tests, evil teachers, etc.)
Kagira: Thanks for reviewing, and sure I will (making one), the first chapter is on the road to go, like I said before, expect it in less than five days; I haven't decided the title yet, but next chapter I will tell you all.
kOKORI: Thanks for reviewing. I see that there are A LOT of Jakotsu fans out there, like you said in your review, who can't resists him? Expect the story out in less than five days; next chapter I will say the title, like that it could be easier to find it or the easiest way is to check on my bio.
Again, THANK-YOU very much for your reviews I really appreciate them! If you have an idea, you didn't like something, ideas to improve the story; anything, just post in in your review, I will really appreciate it. Just don't be too hard on me.
How have all of you been doing?
Matta Ne! =^.^=
And now, with the story:
Disclaimer: You SERIOUSLY think that if I owned Inuyasha I will be writing in a public-fanfiction page? If you do, then let me give you the presentation-card of a friend who can help you with your problems.
Chapter 8
Kagome, Final Target
Kagome and Jakotsu where in the village's garden playing with some children.
"I'm so happy with you and Bankotsu, Jakotsu. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to know you better."
"I think the same, lady Kagome."
It was when the wind started to blow, dark clouds over the village. Kagome as well as Jakotsu stopped playing.
"Lady Kagome, take the children to their respective homes and wait in our house."
"But, Jakotsu, I sense dark energies. You will need my help."
Jakotsu stood in-front of Kagome and neglected with his head, he withdrew his snake-like sword (A.N. I'm so sorry, but I can't remember the name right now).
"Go!" he shouted coldly without looking back.
'He most be serious, I better take the children to a safe place.' Kagome thought as she gathered the children. "Lets go." She took the children of the hands and started to run towards the village.
"Kagome-chan, why is everything so dark? And why Jako-kun got out his odd appearance sword?" a child asked while they neared the village.
"I will later explain you." they arrived to the village and she released the children hands. "Go to your houses, do not go out until the Sun shows again, it's a order." she said in a serious tone.
The children nodded "Yes, Ma'am."
With that said the children spread on the village going to their respective houses. Some villagers went to Kagome.
"Lady Kagome, where is Jakotsu-sama?" a man asked.
"What is happening, Kagome-sama?" a woman of old age asked.
"Evil auras are getting near, I will later explain. Now, go to your houses, tell the other villagers and don't come out until the Sun shows again."
"As you say, Kagome-sama."
The villagers went to spread the news as fast as possible and soon all the villagers where in their houses. Kagome glared back, to where they were playing just some minutes ago, it was far, so she couldn't see Jakotsu; she could just see the dark clouds concentrating over that spot. "I'm not going to leave you alone, Jakotsu." with that said, Kagome returned her gaze to the front and started running towards the house where they were staying. "I'm sure I saw some arrows and a bow hanging in the wall, I just hope they aren't too old." Kagome thought as she ran towards the house. Mean-while, Jakotsu was still alone in the plain, until he saw a dark figure starting to approach, then it became more figures; it was a group of demons; which appeared to be very hungry.
"Want to eat me? Then come and try me!" he said as he prepared his sword.
Then, in unison the demons said "We came for the miko. Give us the miko, we want the miko." they said as they approached each second a meter more.
"Oh, I'm so sorry, but I'm her protector and I'm not going to let you touch a hair of her; if you want her, you will need to pass my beautiful body." he said and then winked.
Some demons stopped death in their tracks, while other didn't care. "Just a weak gay. They say they taste better than men and women, cause they are of both." one of the demons said.
Now they where just few meters dividing them, that was when the demons noticed the confident-evil smirk Jakotsu had on his lips. "Playtime." he said as some demons launched towards him. Jakotsu fought and defeated 5 or more at a time. After some time, they were just left 5 demons of the 1,000 there were. The five started to walk slowly towards Jakotsu, who tried hardly to maintain balance, now he had several injuries on all his body and had lost his vision of the left eye which was now closed. "When we are finish with you we will go for the miko."
"Damn it, they are too much for me. I just wish Kagome is far from here." Jakotsu thought as he felt on his knees to the floor.
"Now, devour him!" one demons shouted.
The demons jumped towards Jakotsu, one or two meters before they touched, a pink-light-flash passed right through the five demons bodies, purifying them in the instant. Transforming the bodies to just piles of dust. Jakotsu turned back and saw Kagome standing there with a broken vow. Kagome turned her eyes toward Jakotsu who had a grateful-confused expression. Kagome shrugged "I guess it was old, after all I found it hanging in the dojo's room for decoration." it was when she noticed the several injuries of Jakotsu, "Oh, my! Jakotsu, lets take you fast to the village." Kagome started to run towards Jakotsu when she felt cold iron crossing through her back, she felt flat in the ground. Jakotsu's expression instantly changed to one of shock, he gazed up of Kagome's body and saw a boy, he had a short pony-tail and an exterminator's outfit. The boy threw his weapon to a side, then he kneeled next to Kagome and he hold his head with both of his hands as he started crying and shouting. Jakotsu stood up and ran towards Kagome, not mattering all the pain that it caused him. "Kagome!" he finally reached where Kagome was, but in that instant, something knocked him off; some feet away from Kagome. He blinked and looked up just to see Naraku holding an unconscious Kagome close to his body, and Kohaku (we all now it was him, right?) was being carried away by a demon.
"Naraku, you bastard, let go of lady Kagome!" Jakotsu shouted as he stood up with difficulty.
"You are not in the place to give me orders, in fact, I am going to get my shard now."
In less than a blank of an eye, Naraku was behind Jakotsu, his hand ready to rip the shard off, when, "Poisonous Claws!" Naraku had just time to dodge Sesshomaru's attack. A cloud of miasma formed around Naraku, Bankotsu jumped towards Jakotsu, grabbed him and jumped back, Sesshomaru also jumped away; he was a powerful demon, but still, he had a better scent and if that miasma could kill a human; imagine what it will do with a demon. When the miasma disappeared, Naraku, the demon, Kohaku or Kagome were not visible anymore, but Naraku laugh could be heard, while he said "I have now my three pieces, the ones that you want, Sesshomaru, Miroku and lastly but not less, Bankotsu. I will be waiting you in my castle, come if you have the courage." with that, any trace of Naraku disappeared. Jakotsu was kneeling on the floor breathing heavily, Bankotsu went to a side of him. "Are you okay?"
Jakotsu nodded and then turned towards Bankotsu, desperation and guilt all written on his face. "Lady Kagome I couldn't protect her, Bankotsu! I broke my vow to you!"
"Don't worry, we will go rescue her and the others, you stay here to recover yourself, with monk Miroku, lord Sesshomaru and me will be just enough."
"I'm sorry, leader." with that said, he felt to the ground unconscious. Bankotsu kneeled besides Jakotsu's body and grabbed him. Kirara then went to him and he place Jakotsu on top of her.
"What about me jerk?!" he heard Inuyasha's voice.
Bankotsu shrugged without looking towards him, "Oh, I forgot about you, I always tend to forget little things."
"You son of bitch."
Bankotsu turned to Inuyasha, an returned the death-glare he was receiving, "I can't imagine how Kagome was able to stand to be by your side."
Sensing a death-confront was nearing, Miroku stood in the middle; breaking the death-glares. "Shippo, Rin and Kirara will stay here with Jakotsu while he recovers; meanwhile we go to rescue the ladies."
Without another word said; the demon lord, the hanyou, the monk and the death-warrior went running with all their might towards Naraku's castle.
Mean while, Kohaku had been given to Kanna. Kagome had awaken some time ago, but she wasn't able to get free of Naraku's grasp, but still she didn't stop trying.
"Could you stop struggling, bitch?" Naraku asked, trying not to act pissed; but the fact was that he was more than pissed.
"First of all, I'm NOT a bitch. Second, my back hurts as hell! Third, I'm kidnaped by a murderous, crazy, gross guy that wears a baboon pelt and in top of that I'm carried by him. Soooo, I'm in my total right to make it hard for you, so HELP ME, LET ME DOWN YOU DAMMN (A.N. I know that Kagome doesn't cuss, but who wouldn't if they are being carried by a sick man that has being trying to kill you for the past year or so?) BASTA-" Kagome was cut off by a strip of clothe that Naraku tied on her mouth. "Mhhmmhh!" was Kagome's attempt to shout.
Naraku chuckled "Much better." he took a corner and arrived at a room, he pulled the door open and entered. He then tied Kagome down to a column of wood that was in the middle of the room. He took Kagome's chin, she tried to get free; but all in vain, she was getting weaker because of the lost of blood. "Wmny dmhid ya bmhring mhe" was Kagome's attempt to talk, but since Naraku knew what was she wondering, he knew exactly was she asked.
"Why did I brought you here?"
Kagome nodded, Naraku had loose his grab on her chin. "First, to recover this jewel shards." as he said this, he showed Kagome her shards which he had taken when she was unconscious. "You know, I'm just missing five: one in Sesshomaru's possession, Bankotsu's and Jakotsu's and two of monk Miroku. When they finally arrive here, I will take their shards and make my wishes. And the most important is..."he took hold of her chin again. "Since the real one denied, I can always have the reincarnation." he chuckled, then stood up and went towards the door, in which he stopped and turned to Kagome. "As soon as I get rid of something, I will return to show you what your work will be." he then turned and went to the hall, closing the door behind him. His footsteps faded, and Kagome had a shocked, fearful, gross expression on her face. Kagome turned towards the window that was behind her and saw that the Sun was setting. "Please, let them arrive in time."
Mean while,
"Kohaku, you know what to do. As soon as the moon appears on the sky, we will start our plan." an emotionless female-voices said towards Kohaku, who was in front of her.
"Yes."
Nearing Naraku's castle, Sesshomaru, Bankotsu and Miroku had been to busy thinking they didn't realize...
"Where's Inuyasha?" Miroku asked as he didn't saw the hanyou running at a side of them.
Sesshomaru shrugged but didn't turn around, "I smelled the miko some minutes ago, maybe he is with her. But, we need to focus on saving Kagura, Kagome and Sango."
"Kagura?" both of Miroku and Bankotsu asked.
"Isn't she the off-spring of Naraku?" Bankotsu asked.
Sesshomaru barely nodded, "Yes, but we will get her free."
Miroku and Bankotsu nodded, not being disturbed or bothered by the idea of having another one to save.
Mean while, Inuyasha was standing alone in a clearing, when some hands went around his shoulders and a female head rested on her shoulder. "I thought you were going to save my reincarnation. What happened?" Kikyo asked.
Inuyasha took her hands in his as he watched the Sun disappear. "I don't care about her anymore, she is just a brat."
"Then, why did you said you loved her?"
"Cause I got confused, I liked being around that brat because when I turned to see her face; I would always see your lovely face." he turned to face Kikyo and grabbed her chin. "You are the only one, and now you and I can do whatever we want, let them get kill by Naraku, let them do whatever they want with the damned jewel, I just want you, my dearest Kikyo."
With that said they sealed each other's mouth in a kiss.
The Moon was rising in the horizon, and Naraku's castle was beginning to appear on the distance.
"Hang on, Kagome, just hang on. I'm coming to rescue you. I can't lose you when I just found you." Bankotsu thought as they ran with all their might to where one of the major battles of their lives will take place.
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How was it? I hope it was good, sorry for not being able to write more but I have to study for a quiz of biology, memorize my Japanese parts, study Kanjis, study for my Japanese test that is nearing with every day it passes and in top of that I need to finish a real-size human-skeleton for Monday(that's my last project, for now -_-). Thanks for the patience, and just in case you didn't read the beginning of the note, wait soon for a Kag/Jak fic. The first chapter is turning out great, and I hope that this story will last another 5 chapters, it all depends on you. Next chapter, The final battle with Naraku.
Like always, please review, you can put in your reviews whatever you want, just don't be too rude; you can talk of the story, what you think (this are just examples), how was your day, etc.
Now, Review Responses:
Forest Wolf: Thank-you for the compliment, sorry for the delay and thanks for reviewing.
Itadakimasu: Thank-you, you are always reviewing, I think that in this chapter I gave most of the plot; but after Naraku there will happen something else, since I placed the goal to write more than 12 chapters in this story (and if the Jak/Kag has reviews, maybe I can make it longer ^_^) Another thing of the Jak/Kag, expect it in less than five days (probably less, it all depends on the projects, tests, evil teachers, etc.)
Kagira: Thanks for reviewing, and sure I will (making one), the first chapter is on the road to go, like I said before, expect it in less than five days; I haven't decided the title yet, but next chapter I will tell you all.
kOKORI: Thanks for reviewing. I see that there are A LOT of Jakotsu fans out there, like you said in your review, who can't resists him? Expect the story out in less than five days; next chapter I will say the title, like that it could be easier to find it or the easiest way is to check on my bio.
Again, THANK-YOU very much for your reviews I really appreciate them! If you have an idea, you didn't like something, ideas to improve the story; anything, just post in in your review, I will really appreciate it. Just don't be too hard on me.
How have all of you been doing?
Matta Ne! =^.^=