Hello people!! I am so sorry I havent updated in like forever.
We are like right in the middle of packing things up to move, so I wont be
able to update much, but I promise that I will post a nice, long chapter
when we finally get over there to the new house. If we ever get there. No
really, I will post asap. I have the next chapter written, I just have to
type it all up. Please read and review, flames are welcome as long as they
are helpful, ya know dont just say "You suck!" and leave it at that, I
really would appreciate ways to improve my writing. So thanksies to every
one who reviewed! You guys keep me goin!:)
Any ways since you had to wait so long here is a preview, hope you like
it.
You inhale the fresh night air. It's so peaceful and quiet.
You look up at the stars and then you suddenly hear footsteps behind you. You just stand very still and quiet in hopes that whoever it was that was outside went back in without noticing you, you really didnt feel that sociable at the moment.
"Hello, (your name)." The vioce was very quiet, almost a whisper, but it was right in your ear and it made you jump slightly. You spun around and found yourself like three inches away from none other than, Jack. 'This can be either very good or very bad.' You think to yourself.
"Why do you always do that to me?" you ask, startled. "What?" He asked, with a look that was pure Jack. He grinned and casually put his hands on your waist. God, he was such a flirt.
"Hmm?" He asked. "You always sneak up on me like that! And Jack, stop someone will see us out here. I really dont need a bad reputation." "Love," he said with a sigh, "It will be fine. You worry to much, anybody ever told you that?"
Whelps, there 'tis. Hope you like. The chapter is kinda short, but hey, I told you I would write you guys a long one soon, Savvy? Okay... I think that this is long enough. Soooo......tell me what you think!
Lotsa love and Jack dolls, (corny?)
Amber~Sue
You inhale the fresh night air. It's so peaceful and quiet.
You look up at the stars and then you suddenly hear footsteps behind you. You just stand very still and quiet in hopes that whoever it was that was outside went back in without noticing you, you really didnt feel that sociable at the moment.
"Hello, (your name)." The vioce was very quiet, almost a whisper, but it was right in your ear and it made you jump slightly. You spun around and found yourself like three inches away from none other than, Jack. 'This can be either very good or very bad.' You think to yourself.
"Why do you always do that to me?" you ask, startled. "What?" He asked, with a look that was pure Jack. He grinned and casually put his hands on your waist. God, he was such a flirt.
"Hmm?" He asked. "You always sneak up on me like that! And Jack, stop someone will see us out here. I really dont need a bad reputation." "Love," he said with a sigh, "It will be fine. You worry to much, anybody ever told you that?"
Whelps, there 'tis. Hope you like. The chapter is kinda short, but hey, I told you I would write you guys a long one soon, Savvy? Okay... I think that this is long enough. Soooo......tell me what you think!
Lotsa love and Jack dolls, (corny?)
Amber~Sue