Well here is the next chapter. Hope you like it! I'm going to change the
way I write my story so it will be easier to read and understand the other
way was to complicated.
(The plan comes to play) Number one led me to a room that was empty. The smell of wood and dust
was in the air. "Do whatever you want to this room it's all yours!" He smiled
and left the room. I sat and thought for a while. Images passed my mind of
what could I do with the room. After a while I had the idea stuck in my
mind. I got up and concentrated hard. Encircled with fire she stretched out
her hand and her room began to take shape. The fire disappeared and she
smiled at what she had made. Her room had walls like a rock climbing wall
all the way up to the ceiling (Mind you this is a BIG room) and the rest was
like the rainforest with a tree house in the center hidden by vegetation.
Stomach growling she headed to the kitchen to grab something to eat. She
walked down the flights of stairs and eventually found the door that led to
the kitchen. There was a white fridge, table and chairs, and wooden
cupboards. She opened the fridge and cool air flew into her face. She
grabbed a Jones Soda and headed back upstairs. There at her door was
Number four. "So what's your room look like?" I looked at him with no
emotion. "Nothing special." He smiled. "Well then can I look?" I thought for
a moment. "I guess." I opened the door and he walked inside. Instantly his
face was full of shock. "WOW! WAY COOL!" I blushed then remembered
that it was time for bed. "Ok now get out I'm going to bed." He glared and
walked out.
I can't think What else to do. Please give me some suggestions. ~Demon91~
(The plan comes to play) Number one led me to a room that was empty. The smell of wood and dust
was in the air. "Do whatever you want to this room it's all yours!" He smiled
and left the room. I sat and thought for a while. Images passed my mind of
what could I do with the room. After a while I had the idea stuck in my
mind. I got up and concentrated hard. Encircled with fire she stretched out
her hand and her room began to take shape. The fire disappeared and she
smiled at what she had made. Her room had walls like a rock climbing wall
all the way up to the ceiling (Mind you this is a BIG room) and the rest was
like the rainforest with a tree house in the center hidden by vegetation.
Stomach growling she headed to the kitchen to grab something to eat. She
walked down the flights of stairs and eventually found the door that led to
the kitchen. There was a white fridge, table and chairs, and wooden
cupboards. She opened the fridge and cool air flew into her face. She
grabbed a Jones Soda and headed back upstairs. There at her door was
Number four. "So what's your room look like?" I looked at him with no
emotion. "Nothing special." He smiled. "Well then can I look?" I thought for
a moment. "I guess." I opened the door and he walked inside. Instantly his
face was full of shock. "WOW! WAY COOL!" I blushed then remembered
that it was time for bed. "Ok now get out I'm going to bed." He glared and
walked out.
I can't think What else to do. Please give me some suggestions. ~Demon91~
