To Moonlily:
I didn't know my character was a Mary-sue. I'm sorry if it seems to offended you but as I'm sure you have noticed my story is not finished and as I'm sure you know teenagers tend to change in personality. I do value you your opinon. Whether it is good or bad if people do not like Mary-sues then they only have to say so. So if anyone else thinks my character is Mary-sue and you don't like please tell me and I'll fix it. And moonlily i would not abuse you because you don't like my story everyone is entitled to their opinon. Just that everyone else seems to like it. But anyone who doesn't like my story please tell what is wrong with it Thank you.
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'So what should we do now? I didn't know holidays were so boring" Lillth said complaining.
"Dunno. We could ask if we could go see a movie. With Bobby and Rogue if you like. Or we could go for a drive. We could show some fun in New York." John replied.
They were still sitting in the mess hall after they finished eating.
"How bout we go clubbing tonight? We could ask Storm to come." John said
"Sounds great. Should we ask now?"
"Yeah. Let's go find Bobby and Rogue. There will properly be more students going." He said as they got up to go look for Bobby and Rogue.
"So doesn't matter."
"It might. Jess will want to go I'm sure"
Lillth laughed "So. It's not we're going out. We just kissed. People get so paranoid around here." She laughed again
"Yeah true. So it won't bother you?"
Lillth put her arms around him and said "No but you seem worried that we'll get into a fight or something. If that happens I think I'll win with or without powers." She smiled and kissed him on the cheek and walked off towards the recreation room and walked through the wall. "Their not in the rec room. Where else would they be?"
"Umm I really don't know. It's not like they can make out or anything. So I haven't got a clue."
"I'm sure we can ask Professor X without them"
"Yeah I guess. Come then." He took her hand.
Lillth decided to try a different power. So she focused on John's mind trying to read it. *The professor isn't gonna let me go clubbing I need Bobby to convince him. Especially if Scott's there.*
"Why wouldn't the Professor let you go?"
John stopped walking and turned around and looked at her funny. Then he narrowed his eyes. "You read my mind" He stated
"Umm yeah I just wanted to try and find out why you need Bobby. I'm sorry" She didn't like the look in John's eyes. She was a little scared
"You could of asked me."
"I doubt you would of told me. You have lot of secrets. So now why wouldn't Scott let you go or the Professor? And don't try to change the subject or lie"
"Fine. Because I know they don't like me that much. Cyclops thinks I'm arrogant and a show off. They don't trust me"
Lillth smiled "See that wasn't so hard. Well let's go find Bobby." She closed her eyes and focused on Rogue.
"What are you doing?" John asked
"Shhh" was all she said. After about five minutes of looking for them. Lillth found them eating ice-cream in the kitchen. "Got em. So where is the kitchen?"
"Umm that way" pointing to the left.
When they reached the kitchen they found Bobby and Rogue sitting very close to each other. They both looked up a bit guilty. Lillth and John smiled.
"Wanna go clubbing tonight? Show Lillth how fun New York is?" John asked
"Sure. I suppose you want me to ask if we can go." Bobby stated and John smiled.
"Only cause you volunteered" John smirked.
"You guys go and ask. Us girls will wait for you here." Rogue said smiling at Bobby and he smiled back at her knowingly.
"Why what are you girls going to talk about?" John asked suspiciously.
"None of your business" Lillth said smiling sweetly. "Don't be too long"
The boys left. "So where are the spoons?" Lillth asked Rogue pointed to a draw and Lillth got one out and started eating out the tub like Bobby was doing. "So how did the 'chat' with Bobby go?"
"Good. He's properly talking to John about it now." Rogue said smiling. "I told him to tell John that we're going to the movies tomorrow. So he can ask you to that. We already asked the Professor."
"Cool. Thanks. So I should I but the matchmaker a gift?" Lillth asked.
"Nah. The present is John not being around us all the time. We kind of leave him out when we go to movies and stuff. Plus I'm sure he'll be glad to be able to bitch about us to someone" She smiled. I can bet we get pretty annoying"
"Yeah I know how that feels. Whenever my friend Rosa went out with a guy she would leave me out of it. She's a hopeless romantic." Lillth felt homesick all of a sound and really missed Rosa.
"You're homesick aren't you?"
"Yeah Rosa was like my sister."
"Does she know?"
"No she's properly just finding out her brother is a mutant then her best friend is one too. I'm not sure how she'll take it." They sat in silence for a bit not sure what to say to each other.
"Eat some more ice-cream. Sugar makes you happy. Plus it's not like you can't see her. You can go see her tomorrow or something"
"She's in Hawaii at the moment. But when she gets back I plan on going over." Lillth said sadly. The boys burst into the kitchen with Bobby in a head lock.
"Come on say I have a better power then you and I'll let you go." John said smugly.
Both the girls looked shocked but they recovered enough to laugh. The boys looked at them.
"Let him go John." Rogue said. Lillth smiled. John was showing off again. The girls looked at each other and smiled.
Lillth read Rogue's mind. *Should I do something?* Lillth asked
*How bout you lift them into the air? Or freeze them? What else can you do?* Rogue said. Lillth thought for a second then she smiled evilly. She concentrated hard on both of the boys and all of a sound they both flew up into the air.
"Whoa!" they both said afraid.
"Put us down Lil" John said. "It isn't funny"
"Oh sure it is" Lillth said "Isn't it Rogue?"
"Oh yeah very funny." They smiled at each other "So are you to going to behave or does Lillth have to stick you two in a wall?" Rogue asked
Lillth walked up to them and push them near a wall with her mind then she touched both of them and half of them went through the wall.
"We'll be good!" Bobby said.
"Yeah promise" John agreed. Lillth took them out of the wall and stood them back on the ground carefully.
"Now that wasn't so bad." Lillth said evilly.
"What did the Professor say?" Rogue asked.
"We can go tonight and Storm will come with us" Bobby replied
"Good. Now me and Lillth will have to go and see what we're going to wear tonight. We'll see you boys at dinner" Rogue ushered Lillth out the door and waved at the boys. Lillth smiled at John and waved too.
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To everyone: I still need a code-name for Lillth please help. From auther:
I didn't know my character was a Mary-sue. I'm sorry if it seems to offended you but as I'm sure you have noticed my story is not finished and as I'm sure you know teenagers tend to change in personality. I do value you your opinon. Whether it is good or bad if people do not like Mary-sues then they only have to say so. So if anyone else thinks my character is Mary-sue and you don't like please tell me and I'll fix it. And moonlily i would not abuse you because you don't like my story everyone is entitled to their opinon. Just that everyone else seems to like it. But anyone who doesn't like my story please tell what is wrong with it Thank you.
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'So what should we do now? I didn't know holidays were so boring" Lillth said complaining.
"Dunno. We could ask if we could go see a movie. With Bobby and Rogue if you like. Or we could go for a drive. We could show some fun in New York." John replied.
They were still sitting in the mess hall after they finished eating.
"How bout we go clubbing tonight? We could ask Storm to come." John said
"Sounds great. Should we ask now?"
"Yeah. Let's go find Bobby and Rogue. There will properly be more students going." He said as they got up to go look for Bobby and Rogue.
"So doesn't matter."
"It might. Jess will want to go I'm sure"
Lillth laughed "So. It's not we're going out. We just kissed. People get so paranoid around here." She laughed again
"Yeah true. So it won't bother you?"
Lillth put her arms around him and said "No but you seem worried that we'll get into a fight or something. If that happens I think I'll win with or without powers." She smiled and kissed him on the cheek and walked off towards the recreation room and walked through the wall. "Their not in the rec room. Where else would they be?"
"Umm I really don't know. It's not like they can make out or anything. So I haven't got a clue."
"I'm sure we can ask Professor X without them"
"Yeah I guess. Come then." He took her hand.
Lillth decided to try a different power. So she focused on John's mind trying to read it. *The professor isn't gonna let me go clubbing I need Bobby to convince him. Especially if Scott's there.*
"Why wouldn't the Professor let you go?"
John stopped walking and turned around and looked at her funny. Then he narrowed his eyes. "You read my mind" He stated
"Umm yeah I just wanted to try and find out why you need Bobby. I'm sorry" She didn't like the look in John's eyes. She was a little scared
"You could of asked me."
"I doubt you would of told me. You have lot of secrets. So now why wouldn't Scott let you go or the Professor? And don't try to change the subject or lie"
"Fine. Because I know they don't like me that much. Cyclops thinks I'm arrogant and a show off. They don't trust me"
Lillth smiled "See that wasn't so hard. Well let's go find Bobby." She closed her eyes and focused on Rogue.
"What are you doing?" John asked
"Shhh" was all she said. After about five minutes of looking for them. Lillth found them eating ice-cream in the kitchen. "Got em. So where is the kitchen?"
"Umm that way" pointing to the left.
When they reached the kitchen they found Bobby and Rogue sitting very close to each other. They both looked up a bit guilty. Lillth and John smiled.
"Wanna go clubbing tonight? Show Lillth how fun New York is?" John asked
"Sure. I suppose you want me to ask if we can go." Bobby stated and John smiled.
"Only cause you volunteered" John smirked.
"You guys go and ask. Us girls will wait for you here." Rogue said smiling at Bobby and he smiled back at her knowingly.
"Why what are you girls going to talk about?" John asked suspiciously.
"None of your business" Lillth said smiling sweetly. "Don't be too long"
The boys left. "So where are the spoons?" Lillth asked Rogue pointed to a draw and Lillth got one out and started eating out the tub like Bobby was doing. "So how did the 'chat' with Bobby go?"
"Good. He's properly talking to John about it now." Rogue said smiling. "I told him to tell John that we're going to the movies tomorrow. So he can ask you to that. We already asked the Professor."
"Cool. Thanks. So I should I but the matchmaker a gift?" Lillth asked.
"Nah. The present is John not being around us all the time. We kind of leave him out when we go to movies and stuff. Plus I'm sure he'll be glad to be able to bitch about us to someone" She smiled. I can bet we get pretty annoying"
"Yeah I know how that feels. Whenever my friend Rosa went out with a guy she would leave me out of it. She's a hopeless romantic." Lillth felt homesick all of a sound and really missed Rosa.
"You're homesick aren't you?"
"Yeah Rosa was like my sister."
"Does she know?"
"No she's properly just finding out her brother is a mutant then her best friend is one too. I'm not sure how she'll take it." They sat in silence for a bit not sure what to say to each other.
"Eat some more ice-cream. Sugar makes you happy. Plus it's not like you can't see her. You can go see her tomorrow or something"
"She's in Hawaii at the moment. But when she gets back I plan on going over." Lillth said sadly. The boys burst into the kitchen with Bobby in a head lock.
"Come on say I have a better power then you and I'll let you go." John said smugly.
Both the girls looked shocked but they recovered enough to laugh. The boys looked at them.
"Let him go John." Rogue said. Lillth smiled. John was showing off again. The girls looked at each other and smiled.
Lillth read Rogue's mind. *Should I do something?* Lillth asked
*How bout you lift them into the air? Or freeze them? What else can you do?* Rogue said. Lillth thought for a second then she smiled evilly. She concentrated hard on both of the boys and all of a sound they both flew up into the air.
"Whoa!" they both said afraid.
"Put us down Lil" John said. "It isn't funny"
"Oh sure it is" Lillth said "Isn't it Rogue?"
"Oh yeah very funny." They smiled at each other "So are you to going to behave or does Lillth have to stick you two in a wall?" Rogue asked
Lillth walked up to them and push them near a wall with her mind then she touched both of them and half of them went through the wall.
"We'll be good!" Bobby said.
"Yeah promise" John agreed. Lillth took them out of the wall and stood them back on the ground carefully.
"Now that wasn't so bad." Lillth said evilly.
"What did the Professor say?" Rogue asked.
"We can go tonight and Storm will come with us" Bobby replied
"Good. Now me and Lillth will have to go and see what we're going to wear tonight. We'll see you boys at dinner" Rogue ushered Lillth out the door and waved at the boys. Lillth smiled at John and waved too.
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To everyone: I still need a code-name for Lillth please help. From auther: