Inuyasha001: Thanks again
I Don't Review: Thanks, it would be cool to get this published, but it will never happen. It's defiantly a happy thought though.
Dan: Thanks. About the whole rating thing, I was kind of iffy myself when I started on this story about weather I should make it an R or not. I even put the question out to everyone. No one seemed particularly interested in changing the rating, so I didn't even bother. Now the further I get into this story, I have come to a purely personal conclusion, this is a PG-13, at least to me. Yes there is violence, but I tried to keep it in short intense bursts and not go overboard with describing it. I tried to put just enough description into it that people could evoke the same mental image I had when I conceived the scene.
The Son of Logan and Ororo: Thanks, glad to hear you enjoyed it. And while I would like to take full credit for the invasion, yes I did pull inspiration from the movie. Oh well, I can't always be original.
The reviewer known as Me: I admit, there was more.I guess you would call it graphic violence in the last chapter, and it did start suddenly. This was my intention from the beginning. I wanted to kinda the story a little, which is why I started the attack in the middle of the chapter. I wanted to convey a feeling of events spinning out of control in an instant and I hope that feeling crossed over to you readers. Oh, on the 'roar' thing, I was thinking the same thing when I was writing it, but no one I asked could come up with another word that accurately conveyed the feeling I was trying to evoke. I see 'howl' as something one does while standing still or before an action, and 'roar' as something that can be done during an action. And to the whole telepathy-blocking, there is a hint in chapter 1. By the way, what the heck does 'angus' mean?
IMPORTANT QUESTION:
Due to a few incredibly angry e-mails I have received, I'd like to put the question out to you guys. Should I;
Rewrite chapters 1, 4, 5, and 12 so they are candy-coated balls of fluff.
Change the rating to an R and cast this fic into the dark halls of obscurity.
Just keep going to way I've been going.
Or as one angry e-mailer said "Get this piece of crap off the net."
Send me an e-mail or a review letting me know your opinion. I'll hold off posting the next chapter until I get enough responses to make a firm decision. On a side note.
To those who decided to scream bloody murder in my inbox about this fic and me personally without suggesting something to fix it, get a Prozac, a Valium, or heck, I think a shot of Thorazine would do ya good. Constructive criticism I welcome, it only helps me get better. Unreasoning and hate- filled drivel I can do without.
I Don't Review: Thanks, it would be cool to get this published, but it will never happen. It's defiantly a happy thought though.
Dan: Thanks. About the whole rating thing, I was kind of iffy myself when I started on this story about weather I should make it an R or not. I even put the question out to everyone. No one seemed particularly interested in changing the rating, so I didn't even bother. Now the further I get into this story, I have come to a purely personal conclusion, this is a PG-13, at least to me. Yes there is violence, but I tried to keep it in short intense bursts and not go overboard with describing it. I tried to put just enough description into it that people could evoke the same mental image I had when I conceived the scene.
The Son of Logan and Ororo: Thanks, glad to hear you enjoyed it. And while I would like to take full credit for the invasion, yes I did pull inspiration from the movie. Oh well, I can't always be original.
The reviewer known as Me: I admit, there was more.I guess you would call it graphic violence in the last chapter, and it did start suddenly. This was my intention from the beginning. I wanted to kinda the story a little, which is why I started the attack in the middle of the chapter. I wanted to convey a feeling of events spinning out of control in an instant and I hope that feeling crossed over to you readers. Oh, on the 'roar' thing, I was thinking the same thing when I was writing it, but no one I asked could come up with another word that accurately conveyed the feeling I was trying to evoke. I see 'howl' as something one does while standing still or before an action, and 'roar' as something that can be done during an action. And to the whole telepathy-blocking, there is a hint in chapter 1. By the way, what the heck does 'angus' mean?
IMPORTANT QUESTION:
Due to a few incredibly angry e-mails I have received, I'd like to put the question out to you guys. Should I;
Rewrite chapters 1, 4, 5, and 12 so they are candy-coated balls of fluff.
Change the rating to an R and cast this fic into the dark halls of obscurity.
Just keep going to way I've been going.
Or as one angry e-mailer said "Get this piece of crap off the net."
Send me an e-mail or a review letting me know your opinion. I'll hold off posting the next chapter until I get enough responses to make a firm decision. On a side note.
To those who decided to scream bloody murder in my inbox about this fic and me personally without suggesting something to fix it, get a Prozac, a Valium, or heck, I think a shot of Thorazine would do ya good. Constructive criticism I welcome, it only helps me get better. Unreasoning and hate- filled drivel I can do without.