( ) thoughts. Thank you for the reviews. I might have the pairing
Kurama/Hiei? If you think I should review and tell me?
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" Kurama what is Yomi capable of? " Botan asked.
" Almost anything." Kurama answered.
" Great." Yusuke said.
" Dose Hiei have any chance to making it out of there alive? " Yukina asked worriedly.
" Yukina I'm sorry to tell you this but the chance of that is very slim." Kurama said.
" Yusuke." Kuwabara said.
" What? " Yusuke said.
" We're in trouble." Kuwabara said.
" Got to go Botan " Yusuke said and hung up.
Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Kurama turned to face Yomi's portal group, which was made of about ten low class demons. Yusuke raised his arm and aimed his spirit gun. The demons looked at the three detectives and attacked. Yusuke fired his spirit gun and that was the end of the demons.
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(Kurama what is he doing here. Oh no what are they going to do. MY JAGAN they're going to cut my jagan. Oh this is going to hurt!) Yukina walked over to Hiei Youko following her. The ice maiden held an ice dagger in her hand well Youko held a leaf sword. Vines slowly warped themselves around Hiei pinning him to the floor. Hiei thrashed and struggled against the vines that held him painfully to the ground. Youko leaded over the frightened fire demon and put his sword to Hiei's jagan cutting an X sharply into the highly sanative skin on and around the jagan. Hiei screamed in agony and pain. Yukina then lowered her dagger and made a cross over Youko X mark on the jagan. Hiei screamed again with that the two demons turned and left Hiei lying on the floor shivering with cold and screaming in pain and agony.
The pain was overwhelming and the cold was unbearable. Hiei knew then that he was as good as dead. There was next to no hope that anyone would find him. He had made a deal with Yomi that if he went with him then Yomi would leave Yukina alone, but Yukina had been working with Yomi all along and now so was Kurama. Hiei couldn't stand it, his sister his only family left, the person he got the jagan implanted for, the person he had sacrificed so much for, was going to be the one who killed him. He had always thought he would die in battle not die tied to the floor freezing and in unbearable pain. He just couldn't stand it any more the pain, the cold, being rejected again he cried, tear gems, black tear gem rolled down his checks to come to rest on the floor that cold ho so cold stone floor.
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Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Kurama were almost to Yomi's castle when Kuwabara felt Hiei life energy it was slowly fading." Yusuke I think Hiei is in big trouble."
" Why? " Yusuke asked.
" His life energy is fading and fast." Kuwabara said.
" How low is it?" Kurama asked worriedly.
" Very low" Kuwabara said.
" We better hurry, we don't have time to waste talking." Kurama said.
" Then lets go" Yusuke said.
With that said they left traveling as fast as they could. Killing the demons that did dare get in their way. Kurama took the lead as they reach the castle. Inside was a twisting maze of hallways, rooms, and staircases. The group made their way through with great care. " How is Hiei life energy? " Kurama asked.
" Lower then it was when I first sensed it and still lowering. " Kuwabara said.
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I know this chapter took me awhile but it has a lot happening in it has you can see now that you finished reading it. The next chapter may be the last chapter in this story. If you think I should make 2 or 3 more chapters please tell me so I can make more.
Woodsmaster
Woodsmaster
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" Kurama what is Yomi capable of? " Botan asked.
" Almost anything." Kurama answered.
" Great." Yusuke said.
" Dose Hiei have any chance to making it out of there alive? " Yukina asked worriedly.
" Yukina I'm sorry to tell you this but the chance of that is very slim." Kurama said.
" Yusuke." Kuwabara said.
" What? " Yusuke said.
" We're in trouble." Kuwabara said.
" Got to go Botan " Yusuke said and hung up.
Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Kurama turned to face Yomi's portal group, which was made of about ten low class demons. Yusuke raised his arm and aimed his spirit gun. The demons looked at the three detectives and attacked. Yusuke fired his spirit gun and that was the end of the demons.
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(Kurama what is he doing here. Oh no what are they going to do. MY JAGAN they're going to cut my jagan. Oh this is going to hurt!) Yukina walked over to Hiei Youko following her. The ice maiden held an ice dagger in her hand well Youko held a leaf sword. Vines slowly warped themselves around Hiei pinning him to the floor. Hiei thrashed and struggled against the vines that held him painfully to the ground. Youko leaded over the frightened fire demon and put his sword to Hiei's jagan cutting an X sharply into the highly sanative skin on and around the jagan. Hiei screamed in agony and pain. Yukina then lowered her dagger and made a cross over Youko X mark on the jagan. Hiei screamed again with that the two demons turned and left Hiei lying on the floor shivering with cold and screaming in pain and agony.
The pain was overwhelming and the cold was unbearable. Hiei knew then that he was as good as dead. There was next to no hope that anyone would find him. He had made a deal with Yomi that if he went with him then Yomi would leave Yukina alone, but Yukina had been working with Yomi all along and now so was Kurama. Hiei couldn't stand it, his sister his only family left, the person he got the jagan implanted for, the person he had sacrificed so much for, was going to be the one who killed him. He had always thought he would die in battle not die tied to the floor freezing and in unbearable pain. He just couldn't stand it any more the pain, the cold, being rejected again he cried, tear gems, black tear gem rolled down his checks to come to rest on the floor that cold ho so cold stone floor.
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Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Kurama were almost to Yomi's castle when Kuwabara felt Hiei life energy it was slowly fading." Yusuke I think Hiei is in big trouble."
" Why? " Yusuke asked.
" His life energy is fading and fast." Kuwabara said.
" How low is it?" Kurama asked worriedly.
" Very low" Kuwabara said.
" We better hurry, we don't have time to waste talking." Kurama said.
" Then lets go" Yusuke said.
With that said they left traveling as fast as they could. Killing the demons that did dare get in their way. Kurama took the lead as they reach the castle. Inside was a twisting maze of hallways, rooms, and staircases. The group made their way through with great care. " How is Hiei life energy? " Kurama asked.
" Lower then it was when I first sensed it and still lowering. " Kuwabara said.
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I know this chapter took me awhile but it has a lot happening in it has you can see now that you finished reading it. The next chapter may be the last chapter in this story. If you think I should make 2 or 3 more chapters please tell me so I can make more.
Woodsmaster