A/N: woot! Kewl! I got reviews! That's awesome. um, since I did get more
than I normally do, I've decided to write another poem, only from
Inuyasha's point of view. sorry if its ooc. ENJOY!
"Bleeding Heart"
Chapter II - His Point of View
As I look into your eyes,
I see what lies,
What lies in your bleeding heart.
And I see your hurt.
But can you see my heart?
Can you see my hurt?
I don't want to go.
This is what I want you to know.
I want you to know how I feel
The pain, so unreal.
I don't want to be with her there.
I only want to be fair.
I owe her my life.
She's been through more strife
Than you can even imagine.
But she will never even begin
To try and feel love.
You are different and it is you I love.
You think I don't see
The pain you feel, vast as the sea.
But I feel it, too.
I swear, I love you.
I would rather spend
The rest of time, if it ends,
With you and only you.
But I owe a due
To the priestess I thought I loved before
But I never loved her before.
It was a mere friendship
An understanding, an agreement.
I wish you could know,
How this hurts me so.
But I have no choice,
I have to heed to her voice.
It is not my fault.
I wish she were locked up in a vault.
A vault with no lock,
So she could not get out, even with luck.
I wish to spend eternity with you forever,
And leave your side never.
I see your bleeding heart
And I see your hurt.
But can you see my own heart?
And how much I hurt?
A/N: ok, um, I don't think its as good as the first. my teacher liked the
first one so thanx to all who reviewed b4, both on mediaminer.org and on
fanfiction.net!!!! Hope you all review this one too. anyways, next chapter
will be from kikyou's point of view (maybe). or I might just make a poem
that tells a story, from a narrator's point of view instead of a characters
and make it where the jewel puts an end to it... maybe I'll do ppl's p.o.v.
then that for the end.. I don't know... how 'bout you all decide? Review
and tell me what you think!! Ja mata!!!
~*!*~ThE fOoTlOoSe ChIcHIbEaN~*!*~
than I normally do, I've decided to write another poem, only from
Inuyasha's point of view. sorry if its ooc. ENJOY!
"Bleeding Heart"
Chapter II - His Point of View
As I look into your eyes,
I see what lies,
What lies in your bleeding heart.
And I see your hurt.
But can you see my heart?
Can you see my hurt?
I don't want to go.
This is what I want you to know.
I want you to know how I feel
The pain, so unreal.
I don't want to be with her there.
I only want to be fair.
I owe her my life.
She's been through more strife
Than you can even imagine.
But she will never even begin
To try and feel love.
You are different and it is you I love.
You think I don't see
The pain you feel, vast as the sea.
But I feel it, too.
I swear, I love you.
I would rather spend
The rest of time, if it ends,
With you and only you.
But I owe a due
To the priestess I thought I loved before
But I never loved her before.
It was a mere friendship
An understanding, an agreement.
I wish you could know,
How this hurts me so.
But I have no choice,
I have to heed to her voice.
It is not my fault.
I wish she were locked up in a vault.
A vault with no lock,
So she could not get out, even with luck.
I wish to spend eternity with you forever,
And leave your side never.
I see your bleeding heart
And I see your hurt.
But can you see my own heart?
And how much I hurt?
A/N: ok, um, I don't think its as good as the first. my teacher liked the
first one so thanx to all who reviewed b4, both on mediaminer.org and on
fanfiction.net!!!! Hope you all review this one too. anyways, next chapter
will be from kikyou's point of view (maybe). or I might just make a poem
that tells a story, from a narrator's point of view instead of a characters
and make it where the jewel puts an end to it... maybe I'll do ppl's p.o.v.
then that for the end.. I don't know... how 'bout you all decide? Review
and tell me what you think!! Ja mata!!!
~*!*~ThE fOoTlOoSe ChIcHIbEaN~*!*~